Suvika,
It's really heart touching.
Thank you for writing os.
(* Aapka dev bhi HP se bahot Pyar karta hai, sorry bol Raha unko π€£)
Suvika,
It's really heart touching.
Thank you for writing os.
(* Aapka dev bhi HP se bahot Pyar karta hai, sorry bol Raha unko π€£)
Originally posted by: RevuttyRula diya yaar. I can't even tell you what I am feeling now after reading this emotional piece. It was so apt portrayal of Dev's feelings to its purity at the level best. There could not be a conclusion regarding the barriers which Dev is gonna face, his fear, his deeper desires, his worries over Vidhi , his guilt feeling that he is not a teenager all were showcased so well by you . Much much much better than the faaltu things which I used to write here. Believe me I am not good in words and without thinking much I started writing here and it's because of the love and trust this forum people are giving I am trying at least a little. You are so professional writer and the wordings which you execute shows the skill of your writing talent. Thanks a lot for showing the realistic Dev here and very much thank you that you fullfilled my wish to read an OS from you. Love you dear β£οΈ
Thank you so very much, Revutty. π€
And please don't put your writing down. Because that's how I started my journey too. You just keep writing. It will change and get even better. Your ideas and concepts are really good. It's only language that needs a bit of polishing and that will automatically happen with time.
So very glad you found this Dev realistic.
Originally posted by: Telly_Addictgalat telly addict ko tag kiya... i am in a meeting.. will be back to read in somw time
Oops. Sorry, Telly. I'll be careful next time. π
Originally posted by: Scissor
I hate crying....u made me cry....I just hate u 1000000
And love u devβ€οΈ
Happy to have your hatred because you love this Dev ππ
Thanks for reading, Scissor
Originally posted by: Telly_Addictyaar itna dard bhara likhne ko kisne kaha tha... dil tut gaya dev ki ue halat dekh ke...πππππ
how beautifully you summed his emotions... and how painfully i read it all in one breath (may be 3 or 4)
but ek happy wala likhna please... show bhi rula raha and tum bhi... ek happy wala please next time
Thank you.
Happy wala - you want me to continue this one and take it fwd, get them to be happy or start a fresh one?
Which would you guys prefer?
Originally posted by: DreamzzSuvika,
It's really heart touching.
Thank you for writing os.
(* Aapka dev bhi HP se bahot Pyar karta hai, sorry bol Raha unko π€£)
Thank YOU for reading.
Didn't you notice... he got more hugs from HP than from Vidhi. π€£π€£ This OS has the same Dev na π€£
Originally posted by: Suvika.
Thank you.
Happy wala - you want me to continue this one and take it fwd, get them to be happy or start a fresh one?
Which would you guys prefer?
Continue this one...get them some happy moments
Upto your wish, it's your decision. I am ready to read it
It means a lot. Thanks a lot π
OK. Will post it sometime over the weekend then. Sochna padega - how to bring these two together under the circumstances.
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