Disappointed with ViDev narrative flow

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Posted: 1 months ago

Again a minority opinion... 

watching this weeks epi what i am feeling is to keep all the TRP magnet drama afloat... ViDev narrative is being ignored very very badly... matlab ek scene ka agle scene se koi link nahi, pichle scene ke emotions - feelings ko agle scene tak carry karne ke liye koi connectors nahi.... its like ViDev story is jumping on a trampoline of their chemistry bas khud se kud kud ke getting the love it deserves but makers arent supporting it with a well crafted narrative...

ViDev storyline ki continuity ki to band baja rakhi hai ekdum se...by god.

how much scope these last 2 weeks acutal plot line had.. if crafted well kitna kuch ho sakta tha, kitna kuch emotionally touching, heartwarming ho sakta tha...

for example...

before lockup we had whole Post Confession track... some moments together, conversations, imaginations, recalling....wo kuch nahi 

after lockup.. bas ek hand hold fir koi dhang ka emotional moment nahi.... again kitna kitna kuch ho sakta tha....

ek plot se dusre plot pe aise kudi mar rahe hai makers jaise Takishi's Castle ka game chal raha ho... ke kaise audience ko jhatke pe jhatke dene hai without letting them enjoy some ViDev moments in calmness... are ViDev ko khud to saans lene do... bechare dono ko khud heart attack aa jayega itna shock doge to.... 

thoda reham khao... taras karo.. ViDev pe aur unke liye tarasati humare dil aur najro pe...

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Edited by Telly_Addict - 1 months ago
Posted: 1 months ago

Shayad TRP ka Seema nahi ho to yeh ITV pe ek trend setter ban jatha. but kya kare sab TRP ka maya hain koi kuch nahi kar sakta. Makers tried to maintain the soul but channel valon ne dead line degi na TRP badhane keliye. Kam se kam ab thoda our time chalega varna kahi asli kahani shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho jaye.

Just my opinion ….

Posted: 1 months ago

Kya bolun Telly ? Mein toh sochti thi kee ek cabin talk honge , office mein jahan sirf ViDev honge aur kuch baatein... Office mein toh taaliyon kee appreciation wagera huye, Baalghar mein shayad kuch milenge kuch talks....Par woh bhi edit karke thoda hi denge humein ..... Baaki episode toh Bhoochaal dekhna hein 

Posted: 1 months ago
Originally posted by Shinika


Shayad TRP ka Seema nahi ho to yeh ITV pe ek trend setter ban jatha. but kya kare sab TRP ka maya hain koi kuch nahi kar sakta. Makers tried to maintain the soul but channel valon ne dead line degi na TRP badhane keliye. Kam se kam ab thoda our time chalega varna kahi asli kahani shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho jaye.

Just my opinion ….

i know yar and i can understand.. but there has to be a balance na.. i am missing that balance.. ya to pure ek episode me sirf ViDev bhar denge aur fir agle 10 episode me aise chhupa denge unke scenes ke secret santa chal raha ho.. dhundo to jaane...

TRP is the thing am not denying but agar story his dhang se nahi chalegi to drama pe TRP bhi kab tak milegi... just my 2 cents cause after confession i hvnt watched one whole episode shanti se baith ke 2-3 baar jaise maine pahle dekhti thi...ek ek episode ko 5 baar tak dekhe hai that was the impact.. emotional connect.. the feels but abhi to shatabdi bhag rahi hai chhote chhote emotions ko peehche chhod ke aisa lag raha hai

Posted: 1 months ago

Agree with this..

Dekha jaye toh serial ki time frame se sagayi tootna, confession, suicide, jail and next day hi heart attack.. ye sab 1 week ke ander hua hoga..

Sachhi mei characters ViDev ko fursat ni mili hogi chain ki saans lene ki.. itni rollercoaster kisi life ho toh nervous breakdown hi ho jaye normal insaan ka.😵🥴

Edited by Chakor07 - 1 months ago
Posted: 1 months ago

Editing toh kharab chal rahi hein, upar se BTS mein kuch moments dikhate hein, woh bhi cut karke dete hein.... Story progression samajh mein aati hein, par ViDev ke kuch yaadgar moments bhi denge , unke tukdon mein dekar baaki sab highlight karenge toh kaise hoga ? Kuch gine chune episodes in recent times acchi thi, Thaaba episodes, Vidhi's outburst of emotions, Dev's monologue, Letter part, Confession, Jail episode yeh sab mujhe acchi lagi. But Aaj aise toh jaise kuch cut edit karke de rahe hein maano editors cut paste kar raha ho , koyi profession nahi. 

Posted: 1 months ago

Exactly, Thode toh moments of togetherness nahi dikha sakte ek do episodes mein. Yeh bhoochaal kyun? 

Posted: 1 months ago
Originally posted by Revutty


Editing toh kharab chal rahi hein, upar se BTS mein kuch moments dikhate hein, woh bhi cut karke dete hein.... Story progression samajh mein aati hein, par ViDev ke kuch yaadgar moments bhi denge , unke tukdon mein dekar baaki sab highlight karenge toh kaise hoga ? Kuch gine chune episodes in recent times acchi thi, Thaaba episodes, Vidhi's outburst of emotions, Dev's monologue, Letter part, Confession, Jail episode yeh sab mujhe acchi lagi. But Aaj aise toh jaise kuch cut edit karke de rahe hein maano editors cut paste kar raha ho , koyi profession nahi. 

thats what i am saying dear... aise tukdo me cheeze ho rahi all you mentioned but are you feeling it all to be a part of ONE cohesive storyline.... ? at least i am not....

ye aisa lag raha hai tukdo me kaat kaat ke dikha rahe.... kitna sab bas bikhra hua hai not put together as one beautiful collectible...


Na Umra Ki Seema Ho 


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