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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

He is strange n scary man . Run geet run 

Why he wants information of girls hmmmmm


Right now 'strange n scary man' aptly describes him. But kuch parts ke baad lets see tumhe woh tabhi bhi 'strange n scary man' lagta hai ki nahi😉. Keep reading & commenting

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: akkub.92

Nice update

Is this maan or someone else and why getting girls information can't wait to read further

Update soon 


Good question. Ye Maan hai ki koi aur abhi tak toh pata hi nahi hai. Read on, ho sakta hai hamari detective kuch pata lage le😉. Keep reading & commenting

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi thanks for the pm and update Thanks for reading & commenting


Part 2

Superb update... greatly written Thanks

Geet seems to be an amazing detective

well she managed to find the girl with the scar aka Shalini

of cos she informs Maan?

I assume MSG is Maan??? Ho bhi sakta hai yaa nahi bhi. let the detective find out

so he did not want Geet to speak to Shalini

now he gave her another assignment to find Meenu

Geet was indeed intrigued and suspicious 

she wonders if she is doing something wrong by taking on this work

curious about Maan 

alas they are many girls named Meenu

great she decided to take pics and show Maan

liked how she responded to Maan

as expected she gets the information 

why does he want all information about girls? Read on & let all the info unfold


update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: ShashtiJMG

Congratulations for starting a new story Di🥳 Thanks❤️

Thanks for the pm. 

Part 1 

This is really different and new from the stories I have read so far. Glad that you found it different & interesting

Geet's dream is to become a detective! I love her here for standing firm of becoming what she dreamt, but still on T/C's of her dad. Finally after 6 months of opening her own agency she get's her first case from a person called MSG!?  

And this MSG has asked her to get the information about a girl? 

I guess MSG is Maan here! But what does G stand for? May be it is , may be not. Let the detective investigate on that😉

Not to forget loved the bond Geet and Chintu share. Yup. Chintu is her friend who kept her going for 6 months without work by providing her udhaari ki chai😊

Beautifully written❤️ Thanks for reading & commenting

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: aparna3011

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nice update Thanks for liking❤️

geet is doing her assignment for money she is getting but worried that she not the part of some wrong motive 

her concious is alerting her hope geet's worry is not true n no body is trapping her  Lets see how the fate would turn keep reading & commenting

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: kavya1994

Nice start. Thanks. Geet as detective, interesting. Finally she got her first case after 6 months. 

Waiting to know how MSG came to know about Geet and his reason behind choosing her for the work.

Thanks for the pm. Sure. Thanks for reading. You will get all these answers as the story unfolds

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: coderlady

part 1

Geet is a detective with her own agency. Sweet. Hope she gets some clients.


She hopes that too

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: coderlady

part 2

One girl found, now he wants to find another girl. Of course that looks weird to Geet.


Yup. super suspicious

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: ShashtiJMG

Thanks for the pm Di. Thanks for this wonderful comment❤️

Part 2 

What's MSG upto? 

He scolds Geet, even after she did her job properly and when he is not satisfied with the work she has done he assigned her to search another girl! Good catch

Geet is right, he is rich and can get anyone to complete the work. Then why is he behind her? Something's definitely not right. Geet senses that she may be working for a guy with wrong intentions which leads her to investigate MSG as well along with the girl. Hope that doesn't land her in any trouble! Hope so, or either she will land everybody in trouble

That's interesting! 

Eagerly waiting for next part.

Please continue soon❤ Sure. Keep reading & commenting

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Posted: 1 years ago

Great part 

Hope Geet is not in trouble 

Cont soon 

Thanks for pm