Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 37|Page 88) - Page 5

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Nice start. Geet as detective, interesting. Finally she got her first case after 6 months. 

Waiting to know how MSG came to know about Geet and his reason behind choosing her for the work.

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Posted: 1 years ago

part 1

Geet is a detective with her own agency. Sweet. Hope she gets some clients.

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who was that man? And who is the girl to him?

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part 2

One girl found, now he wants to find another girl. Of course that looks weird to Geet.

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Thanks for the pm Di. 

Part 2 

What's MSG upto? 

He scolds Geet, even after she did her job properly and when he is not satisfied with the work she has done he assigned her to search another girl!

Geet is right, he is rich and can get anyone to complete the work. Then why is he behind her? Something's definitely not right. Geet senses that she may be working for a guy with wrong intentions which leads her to investigate MSG as well along with the girl. Hope that doesn't land her in any trouble!

That's interesting! 

Eagerly waiting for next part.

Please continue soon❤

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Part 3

 

 

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'Photos dikhaiye'

 

She hands over the photos to him

 

He skims through them and & points at one

 

She nods

 

'Iska matlab isko ladkiyan kaise dikhti hai pata hai' Geet observes

 

G- Kal tak aapko Meenakshi ki information mil jaayegi

 

He nods

 

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As promised Geet provides the information about the girl he pointed on

 

He again gives her an envelop

 

Upar aake Geett envelop kholti hai toh wohi paise milte hain aur ek note

 

She starts reading

 

'Name: Gagan

Age: 13-14 years

Gender:Male

Info: Uses crutches to walk because of his disabled left leg

 

She wonders

 

‘Gagan? Ye toh ladka hai’

 

‘Gagan, Meenakshi, Shalini’

 

‘Meenakshi, Shalini, Gagan’

 

‘MSG’

 

‘MSG! Matlab uska asli naam MSG nahi hai. Ye toh inn teenon ke naam ke acronyms hai’

 

‘Matlab isne kabhi apna asli naam mujhe bataya hi nahi’

 

This information rings an alarm in her head

 

She starts to find on her mission to find information about this unknown suspicious man

 

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Geet jaati hai Shalini keg har inquire karne whether she is fine or not

 

Jaake dekhti hai ghar pe taala laga hua hai

 

Aas-paas ke logon se puchti hai

 

Geet- Yahan ek ladki rehti thi, Shalini…aap jaante hain who log kahan hai. Uska parivaar kahan hai

 

‘Arre suna hai Shalu toh achanak kahin chali gai, aur agle din sharam se uske parivaar wale bhi raaton raat ye ghar chodke yahan se chale gaye’

 

Geet is shocked

 

G-Kya? Unka koi contact

 

The person shakes their head in no

 

G-Acha. Thank you

 

Geet ka concern aur badh gaya

 

She goes straight to Meenakshi’s tuition class

 

Wahan jaake  pata chalta hai ki Meenakshi to huss din ke baad se classes hi nahi aayi hai

 

Geet is extremely worried now

 

Kahin usne anjaane mein inn ladkiyon ke saath galat toh nahi hone diya

 

She has to do something

 

‘Mujhe iss aadmi ki sachchai ka pata lagana hi padega’

 

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Geet’s guilt laden self starts to search for information about the suspicious man

 

Who din raat nikaal deti hai kuch information dhundne mein

 

Phone ka number track karke address pata karne ki koshish karti hai toh pata chalta hai ki address kisi five-star hotel ka hai

 

Car ke number se pata chalta hai ki car rented hai aur ussi five-star hotel se li gayi hai

 

Geet’s next step were now clear as a day now

 

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Geet is disguises herself as a high society socialite and walks into the five-star’s hotel reception

 

‘Hello Mam, how can I help you?’

 

Greets the receptionist

 

Geet gets a room in the hotel

 

Once she finds herself inside the hotel corridor, she quickly disguises herself into the Housewarming staff

 

She was stealthily keeping an eye on the hotel entrance and when the suspicious man enters, she follows him cautiously and finds out his room number

 

Now she must wait for him to leave the room

 

Then she can search his room and investigate about the suspicious man

 

Subah se Raat ho jaati hai inn sab mein

 

Finally, he walks out of the room

 

Housekeeping ka bahana banaake she procures the keeps of his room and enters into the man’s room

 

It’s not a room but a suite

 

She starts to frantically search around the room about anything and everything’

Initially she just finds some clothes & stuff

 

But searching minutely she starts finding information

 

‘Toh ye Dubai se hai’

 

‘Toh yahan kya kar raha hai?’

 

Dhundte dhundte things start becoming clearer but murkier to her

 

Some of the information almost pulls the rug off under her feet

 

She loses track of time

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This content was originally posted by: heycookie

me too suspicious now

why is he asking for girls only

what is he upto

n why MSG?

cant wait to read more


Sab pata chalega dheere dheere. Keep reading❤️

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Very interesting part dear

Just loved it 🤗🤗  Thanks

Hmm 🙄🙄 Maan here seems mysterious & Geet is spying for him & he gave her 2 cases to find information for ☺ 

But what is the entire buzz around about these girls investigation & hopefully this moves to something more interesting Read on & see how it moves & how you like it or not

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗 Thanks for your comment

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Part 2 


Curious and Intriguing Update Thanks


Why is Geet's client after all the young ladies 

I just hope he has no bad intentions Keep reading new information would unfold


Thanks for the comment

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Intriguing,what is his motive,is he testing her capabilities


Looking forward to further...


Keep reading, new info would unfold. Thanks for the comment