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Posted: 2 years ago
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Manna as usual wakes up and wanders here and there...but feels low and dizzy...Her friend disha comes and takes her to the same hell ...Bar....There she notices a lady of 60 is looking at her curiously... She ignores...




She enters Bar and gulps more alcohol...but there was no one to check her...Harsh was fed up of her habbit but no one is there to stop ...


Nik on other hand is busy in his new restaurant... Nd Pallavi is busy in deciding the menu of night ceremony... They were alone for while..


Pallavi: So Manna is alcoholic, and Harsh is yet not treated of his disease Meningitis... This is how you are treating them after our divorce...sirf paise aur ladki ke piche bhagna band karo Nikhil !!! Sab barbaad ho hi gaya aur inn dono ko takleef mat do (chopping onion)


Nikhil: For god sake!! Ek hi baat kehna band karoge... Ladki ke piche bhagna band karo ...yeh mangalan baat tumhari hai, meri sacchai nahi...haan yeh sach hai ki I was too busy in making money...but not in women!!


Pallavi : Sacchai ...kon sachai..sacchai, I saw that day in your bedroom... And I still can't get out of it...isliye log acche dikhne wale log se door rehte hain... Nik J!!! And when are you suppose to say the great truth to them ....That they are!!!


Nik comes and shuts her mouth with hands over lips...


Nik: Ssssshhhh.....koi sense nahi tumhe...ki koi sun lega...have you lost your mind!!..I dont want that listening this truth both harsh and manna thinks that I have ignored them due to this reason...this is not the truth you know...rather I hard earned money just for the fact that they dont get deprived of anything because of the mystery ...


Pallavi: But this is not the way to make them happy, they need your concern, your touch, your care...and such care only a mother can give to her children....show them you earn for them and not ONLY YOU EARN ..


Nik goes to window at sunlight


Nik: After you left me...I was lost ..I got alone, I was left in sea of darkness, pain , suffering.. Pata nahi tha kya karun , kya nahi ...zimmedaari tha, kaam tha, bacche they par tum nahi they...akela tha..thought till kids are grown up I will make huge money so that they dont have to see any financial crisis, nor poverty any day... Par bacche kab bade ho gaye pata hi nahi chala... (Sobs)...Children thinks, I am a money lover ...but not that...you are that so for which I had to earn...

For kids I had to call Nandita

who just then lost her husband...

I couldnt trust any else a lady at that time....


They both wipes tears..


The workers came by 9:30 at morning...


They got mum of the talks...and get professional..


On the other hand Manna again drinks lot and vomits hugely... She was taken to nearby hospital...she was treated within time...


Just then, Manna notices 2nd time a lady stares at her ...but as she stares back she gets back to work...she goes to her and as she was about to leave, she grabs and ask ...


Manna : Listen !!who are you, and what you want !!! Money !!! Lo!!! (She takes a bundle of money) ...


By then, Nandita comes hearing of her condition....and the lady stares her more curiously and finally utters..Nandita mem!!!


Lady: yeh aapka koi lagta hai kya ??


Manna: Haa...kyun??? Tumhe kya ??Bua hai meri Nandita Jaisingh...


Lady was astonished...


Lady : To tum Nikhil Jaisingh ki beti ho???


Boo calls her to take her hotel...but doctor rejects her to send as she was under observation for 24 hrs...nd Boo ji argues...even tries to bribe...


On other hand Lady is annoyed and tells a truth..


Lady : Pata nahi...Yeh log agar beti yaa bete ko paal nahi sakte toh godh lete hi kyun hai...ise accha naa hi lete..bacche godh liye aur chor dete hai nashe ki gali mein...


Manna : What (crazily!!!)... Kon godh liye kisi ko...paagal ho tum!!!!Paise lo aur bhago!!


Boo comes and sees the lady in shock and snatch Manna from there..as soon as possible..


but!!


Lady screams while moping ...


Lady : Bacche ko godh liya mere mare hue bete aur bahu se aur ab padhaya kar rakhe ho...Nikhil Babu...sacchai se kaise bhagoge..

Biwi ko miscarriage, ilzaam lagaya aur bhaga diya naa in logo ne...yeh hai bade log...


Other sweeper comes and shut them..


Manna was shocked!!!


Manna: Bhai aur main adopted hai??? Boo...??say something... Did mamma ne miscarriage karwaya?? Ohh thats why are we ignored by dad??


She cries in cabin...


Nandita was shocked and randomly zipping lips..













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Posted: 2 years ago
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I loved it. 👏
well written

Me first woohoo. Nikvi

I loved the Nikvi conversation . I wish we can get real conversation between then in the show.

I loved it .
bechari Manna is adopted 😲

Pallavi miscarriage 😲

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Not only manna but harsh too..(according to my fiction)...🥰

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Posted: 2 years ago
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So both of them are adopted..is this has any link with Nikvi separation?

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Yes iny fanfic...or you can say as my assumption...🙌

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