Waqt ne kiya kya haseen sitam-Anugun SS Chap 36 updated

Posted: 1 years ago

Disclaimer: not good in hindi so please forgive, i tried so tell me how it was

Waqt ne Kiya Kya haseen Sitam- Anugun SS

 Chapter 1: Payback 

I am going to start from where GG agrees with RV conditions about transferring the money. RV and family feeling happy goes from there and here GG faints and Bua takes her to the hospital where they come to know that she is pregnant (please dnt throw anything on me……. yet). Bua tells GG who is happy as well as sad because it is hers and Anubhav child but sad that she cannot share this happiness with Anubhav.

BG: “Bas bahut hua, tune teri manmaani kar li, ab wohi hihoga joh mein chahti hu and if you object then I swear on my brother I willleave you and go away too, Dnt think of anyone else, think about this life you going to bring in the world, that is very innocent and doesn’t deserve all of the helplessness and crying or sadness or torture who doing on everyone”. “Tum Ghar jao and pack your bags, I will be there in few hours.”

Bua goes to the Kulshreshtha’s house and Screams; her anger has no bounds. The whole family gathered around in the living room and seeing Garima Bua so angry, BP ask her what happened, to which she replies: “Aap sabne meri beti ko rulane ka theka le rakha hai, jab chahe use, jaise chahe usekoi kuch bhi suna de jata hai.” Charudutt thinks she is talking about Akriti and says: “Maaf kijiye, Garima ji hum toh apki beti ko ghar ki Lakshmi mante hai aur hum hamesha uska hi side lete hai, aap chahe toh ghar mein kisi se bhi puch lijiye?” to which everyone nods their heads.

“Mein iski nahi, meri beti GG ki baat kar rahi hu, iss toh aap apne pass hi rakhiye, yeh uske papa ki beti hai, meri nahi” BP gets angry and says “Naam mat lijiye uska, is ghar mein aur na Anu ki zindagi mein uska koi haq hai aur na hoga.” “Mein chahti bhi nahi hu, ki meri beti ek aise ghar se Rishta rakhe jisko uski qadar hi nahi hai. Aur tum, looking at Anu, tumne toh mujhse kaha tha na, ki mein GG ka haath kabhi nahi chooduga toh ab kya hua, vaade todne ke liye banate ho, aur use rakhne ke liye” Anubhav gives more attitude to GB. “bahut Attitude hai na tumhe or bahut garv hai tumhare parivaarwalo pe, abhi todtii hu, kyunki tum toh sach nahi jante na isliye aisa kar rahe ho” “ Mujhe kuch nahi jaanna hai, GG ka RV ke saath shaadi karna, uska Deecision hai, maine nahi kaha tha” “ Tumhe kya lagta hai ki who ladki joh tumse had se zyada pyaar karti hai, jisko apni nahi tumhari jaan ki parwa hai,woh kisi aise insaan se shaadi kareji, jise pasand bhi nahi karti hai, really that’s much is the trust you have on your so called pyaar, soch ke dekho, scienetist claim karte ho na toh soch ke dekho”

GB goes to BP and says: “lagta hai tumhare bete ko bahut garv hai aap pe, toh aap use sach batayege ya mein batau, chalo koi nahi mein hi bata deti hu, she reverts back and says, Apke BP aaye the hamare Ghar, jab tum log Lucknow vapas aaye the, usne GG se kaha ki woh uska Anu use louta de,aur Anu or Akriti is life se chali jaye, GG ne mana bhi kiya ki Anubhav se door nahi jaa sakti , phir Pran tyaag karne ki baat ki and unhne hi kaha tha, ki RV se shaddi karle and tumne maan liye ki GG ne sab publicity ke liye kiya hai.” BP’s action  shocked everyone and then  remembers GG told in café that she has given her word to someone but did not say the name. “Yeh, kya bakwaas kar rahi hai aap, Bade bhaiiya aisa nahi kar sakte, Goli Bua spoke, who GG ke ghar kyun jaege? “Acha, toh aapko agar mere baat pe vishwaas nahi hai, toh khud puch lo, aapke samne khade hai na? aur chahe toh CCTV footage bhi dikha sakti hu, hamare gharka.

“Haa, hum gaye the waha pe, humne hi yeh sab kiya Garima ji sach keh rahi hai, par humne joh bhi kiya hame koi regret nahi hai, joh bh kiyaus ghar ki shanti ke liye kiya, Akriti Anu ki patni hai aur yeh pura din sirfGG ka naam leta hai, toh humne wohi kiya joh hume us waqt sahi laga.

Everyone was shocked to the core, Anubhav could not believewhat he was hearing his own BP had gone to a level that separated his love fromhim, his life from him and believed everything he saw. “Us raat when you cameto meet GG, she saw you and so she functioned as if she did not care about. How hurtful was she, you have no idea? Maine use samjhaya ki yeh faisla sift uska nahi balki dono ka hona chahiye par kya kare, she knows how much BP means toyou.”

“Maine kaha tha na tuhje ki kuch toh hua hai warna GG aiseladki nahi hai ki, ek raat mein itna bada dhokha di, hum teeno ne dekha haiunhe tumhare liye ladte hue, bade bhaiy aur Akriti ko haath jod kar plead kartehue, who ladki aisa nahi kar sakti hai” GC cried looking at Anu. Anu stoodnumb, as to his surroundings.

“Yeh, aapki bahu bahutt naaz hai na uspe aap sab, Bua said looking at Badi maa, BP, Sargam, Chandru, divvya, Neeti and Khushi, chaavi,bahut maante hai na toh yeh bhi sun lijiye joh muhje kehna haai aur tum Pointing her finger at Anubhav, tum bhi suno shayad tumhe aur jhatka lage. Tumhari prewedding party mein jab Maya Bhabhi ne aapki insult ki thi aur aap logo ko lagaki GG ne kiya hai, who usne nahi Aapki laadli ne kiya tha. Usne aur maya Bhabhi ne milke yeh plan banaya tha, GG was pleading that she did not do anything but aap mein se kisine ne uski nahi suni”

Akriti was getting angrier and spoke “what nonsense, aisa kuch nahi hai, aap sirf mujhe jhoota sabit karna chahte hai aur GG ko bachana”

“Acha, toh Maya Bhabhi ko call karte hai, aur phir decision lete hai, ya phir who café mein jaake CCTV footage dekhte hai, aur phir Maya Bhabhi ne joh recording kiya that Jahan you said that you love Anubhav aur woh yeh shaadi majboori mein kar raha hai, etc… etc… who suna du.”

Flash back: GB calls maya Bhabhi and inform about RV shart for wedding and she gets angry and spills out all the truth and sent her the recording to GB.

Akriti got more scared because she knows how her Maya Mami isand out of anger spoke, “ha, maine kiya yeh sab taki Anubhav ki shaadi us kadkise tut jaaye aur who sirf mera aur mera hi rahe, Aur aap log kitne bewakoof hai,aapne us ladki ko thukra diya joh aap khud dhoondke laye the, aur uspe bharosakiya jise aap jante bhi nahi hai, Aaap logo ko bewakoof banana mein mujhe bahutmazaa aaya, itna hi nahi baaki ka bhi mein hi bata deti hu, meine maya mami sekaha tha, ki mein aapse pyaar kati hu, aur yeh shaadi ke samjota hai and maya mami aapko itna hate karti hai that she agreed to join hands with me”

Everyone gets more shocked, and thud comes a slap on her face by guess??????  Got too long will continue in next chapter

But do let me know how it was and any change which needs to be made or are interested in next chapter, but I swear its going be a good one


chapter 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161369234

Chapter 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161425564

chapter 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161435756

chapter 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161438993

chapter 6:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161443449

chapter 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161446124

chapter 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161448954

chapter 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161457234

chapter 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161464746

chapter 11: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161477254

chapter 12:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161484127

chapter 13: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161497513

chapter 14: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161510795

chapter 15: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161517449

chapter 16: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161529611

chapter 17: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161546021

chapter 18: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161553689

chapter 19: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161562999

chapter 20: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161572168

chapter 21: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161585176

chapter 22: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161592780

chapter 23: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161605873

chapter 24: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161624692

chapter 25: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161634536

chapter 26: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161652851

chapter 27: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161668883

chapter 28: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161680289

chapter 29: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161700406

chapter 30: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161736503

chapter 31: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161752018

chapter 32:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/16178232

Chapter 33: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161836203

chapter 34: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161921766

Chapter 35: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162170398

chapter 36: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162196443

Chapter 37: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162391198

Edited by Suhani2 - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago

Nice as I like it hamesha likhdo you have a lot of positivity than vanku writers 😆❤️

Posted: 1 years ago

Loved reading it!❤️ do continue!👍🏼 Is that GG or BP who slapped her?😲

Posted: 1 years ago

Thats the suspense keep guessing 

Posted: 1 years ago

Chapter 2: Heartache

Akriti looks up and see GC standing in front of her, in anger and then he turns towards Anubhav and slaps him too, but Anubhav knew he deserved this slap and looks down not meeting his eyes. “tumhari himmat kaise hui, yeh sab karne ki and abhi bhi besharamo ki tarah yaha khadi ho, aur tum looking towards Anubhav, tumse kaha tha, us din bhi aur aaj bhi aur hamesha se,ki GG is not wrong us din tumhari sangeet wale din, who kitna upset thi tumhe aur tumhari iss Akriti do dekh kar par tum mein toh sharam na ghum tha, us din bhi tuhje kaha tha ki she loves you but cant express in words, and you took it lightly. Maan nahi bhara ho toh bata du ki Mumbai mein jab hum sab tere liye Blood find kar rahe the tab GG ne hume solution diya and she was ready to donate her blood, despite being weak.” He goes to BP and says, “jab GG khoon donate karne jaa rahi thi na tab aapki ghar ki Lakshmi ne, GG ko roka tha Khoon dene se, who us din bhi use ladai ki aur khoon dene jayi, isliye aaj aapka ladla zinda hai, warna aapki bahu ne toh pura plan kiya tha ki kuch bhi ho jaaye, jaan kyun na jaaye par GG khoon nahi degi.”

Garima Bua looks at everyone and says, “bas ab bahut hua, my daughter will not cry for pity peasant like you and she will be strong and face all of you, she goes to Anubhav and says by the way Congrats, you are going to be a father, Anubhav listening to this get so happy but what ever GB says after this sadden him more, par afsoos tumhe ek pita hone ka sukh nahi milega, tum uske haqdaar nahi ho. Aapke ghar se koi bhi meri beti se nahi mileja sivai GC,Yug and Ankit, “aap log jab bhu chahe uski Khushi mein shamil hone aa sakte hai, I won’t stop you all.”

“chalti hu, yahi kehna tha, All the best aap logo ko sahi bahu mili hai, ab apko smaj mein aayeja ki Akriti cheez kya hai.” Everyone Isshocked with whatever is happening and what had happened and have a bit of regrets in their eyes except GC, yug and Ankit because they are happy for GG.“Anubhav aulad kya hoti hai, yeh tumhe abhi samaj mein nahi aayega, the journey of pregnancy which a father and mother shares, the joy, the happiness everything you are going to miss out and maybe everything is not your fault, it’s the wrongdoing of others which you are paying for, but youe own mistake was you didn’t trust your love, the blind trust you should have on your partner you missed. You could not see the sadness in her eyes, she was forced earlier to get married to RV for your safety coz RV extorted with the pictures of yours from the mandir,to save your reputation she was ready to marry, but misunderstood her then also now also.” Anubhav was crying so hard and pleading GB “aap mujhe itni badi sazaa kyun de rhe ho, mujhe please GG se milne do, please mein aapki samne haath jodta hu, ek baar mujhe use milna hai, please!!” he pleads had geniality in it and so GB says “fine, hum kal lucknow se hamesha ke liye dur jaa rahehai, tum aaj sham ko ghar aake mil sakte ho, hearing that they are going away from Lucknow he becomes so sad, but he knew he has to be strong for himself.Sham ko aa jaana par meri ek shart hai… everyone looks at GB and she speaks, you will meet GG only if GC, Yug Ankit, or I will be present for your meet with her, Deal?” Manzoor hai toh jaldi bolo window of opportunity   closes in 5, 4, 3,2 and………. Okay fine, he replies, and GB gives a slide wave to the GCgang and goes from there.

As soon as Garima Bua left Anu broke down sobbing coz he just couldn’t believe that his own family, his fav BP has done this, his scattered heart was so broken that it was the loudest quiet ever, he couldn’t explained his feelings in words, all he did is gave a good look at BP and his family members and left from there, he needed fresh air, breathing was becoming hard and eyes was so moist that even the bright sun outside was dulling  for his eyes. He remembered all the good times he had spent fading away like dust. he could not hear Ankit and yug calling his name, he was hurt, not physically but mentally and from inside he was broken, he collapsed on the side of the road because his feet had become heavy. Yug and Ankit reached on time and caught him, He saw their faces and broke down on the side of the road and Yug instantly hugged and tried to pacify him.

“Bhaiya, yeh sab mere hi saath kyun hota hai, mere apne nemujhe apne pyaar ke juda kiya. Kyun, kyun? It was more then a question for Anu,it was the Guilt and Anger he is carrying in him. Anger-for not keeping his words to GG or GB and Guilt- because he did not trust his love and now, he must accept a harsh reality. he broke the hug and stood up and made his way to the house again. all the family members sitting in a living room was waiting for him to return. as soon as he was near the door he looked up and saw the eagerness in everyone’s eyes, he went straight and stood in front of his “so called wife” and spoke, “whatever may have happened you are a victim and a part of my lie and so I am the going to release you today. You are free to go back and not stay here because I can’t even look t your face and imagine you as victim, and as a criminal so pack your bags and get lost, I will send the annulment papers and if you make or create a fuss while signing, I will submit your recording and file a complain and send you to jail, so decide what you want Jail or your house.” She goes up to pack her belongings and as soon as she is out if sight he turns towards GC, Yug and Ankit and says” sorry Chachu, mein aapki team ka woh player nikla jispe bharosa nahi kiya jaa sakta hai, I am sorry for everything and please give a chance to become the best layer of your team.” GC wraps his hand which was pleading and said, “dekh Anu, hum tumse naraaz nahi hai, par aaj se balki abhi se tu apni life khud decide kar, tujhekaya karna hai aur kya nahi, Apne faisle parivaarwalo ki kehne pe mat Kar, andwohi kar joh tuhje aacha lage, kyunki iss parivaar jispe tuhje bahut naaz hai,wohi parivaar ne tuhje aaj yaha la kar khada kar diya hai, Jahan ek taraf pyaaraur Aulad hai or dusri taraf sirf Andhera.” Everyone has a shame in their eyes,he said “Chachu, there is no two way, only one and that’s  the oath with darkness and I have to embrace it, whatsoever,” he wipes his tears and again speak with a glint of joy in his eyes,“but its good at least my child will stay with the family who will love her and not have to follow society rules while growing up, and I am sure GG will a better mother, then having to stay with a father who is not worth for her/his  mother, I  get to see GG today even thou it is for last time, I want to buy gifts for my baby and GG so that she can give them to my child when she/he grows up to remember me” GC nods at him and they leave from there. “humse bahut badi galti ho gayi hai ji, says Badi Maa, looking at her husband,hum apne beta ko dukh aur Khushi dekh hi nahi paye, humara beta itni baar kahe hum sab se ki who khush nahi hai Akriti ke saath aur use GG se pyaar hai, par humne uski ek bhi baat nahi mani” Sahi kaha apne Jiji, says sargam “ us raatbhi party mein GG ne hum sabko samjane ki koshish ki, par humne suna hi nahi, humari wajah se aaj humara khoon dukhi hai , aur hum GG se aur Anu dono se maafi maangne ka Haq kho chuke hai”. 


have not read proof it so let me know how it is 

Edited by Suhani2 - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by Suhani2


Chapter 2: Heartache

Akriti looks up and see GC standing in front of her, in anger and then he turns towards Anubhav and slaps him too, but Anubhav knew he deserved this slap and looks down not meeting his eyes. “tumhari himmat kaisehui, yeh sab karne ki and abhi bhi besharamo ki tarah yaha khadi ho, aur tum looking towards Anubhav, tumse kaha tha, us din bhi aur aaj bhi aur hamesha se,ki GG is not wrong us din tumhari sangeet wale din, who kitna upset thi tumhe aur tumhari iss Akriti do dekh kar par tum mein toh sharam na ghum tha, us din bhi tuhje kaha tha ki she loves you but cant express in words, and you took it lightly. Maan nahi bhara ho toh bata du ki Mumbai mein jab hum sab tere liye Blood find kar rahe the tab GG ne hume solution diya and she was ready to donate her blood, despite being weak.” He goes to BP and says, “jab GG khoon donate karne jaa rahi thi na tab aapki ghar ki Lakshmi ne, GG ko roka tha Khoon dene se, who us din bhi use ladai ki aur khoon dene jayi, isliye aaj aapka ladla zinda hai, warna aapki bahu ne toh pura plan kiya tha ki kuch bhi ho jaaye, jaan kyun na jaaye par GG khoon nahi degi.”

Garima Bua looks at everyone and says, “bas ab bahut hua, my daughter will not cry for pity peasant like you and she will be strong and face all of you, she goes to Anubhav and says by the way Congrats, you are going to be a father, Anubhav listening to this get so happy but what ever GB says after this sadden him more, par afsoos tumhe ek pita hone ka sukh nahi milega, tum uske haqdaar nahi ho. Aapke ghar se koi bhi meri beti se nahi mileja sivai GC,Yug and Ankit, “aap log jab bhu chahe uski Khushi mein shamil hone aa sakte hai, I won’t stop you all.”

“chalti hu, yahi kehna tha, All the best aap logo ko sahi bahu mili hai, ab apko smaj mein aayeja ki Akriti cheez kya hai.” Everyone Isshocked with whatever is happening and what had happened and have a bit of regrets in their eyes except GC, yug and Ankit because they are happy for GG.“Anubhav aulad kya hoti hai, yeh tumhe abhi samaj mein nahi aayega, the journey of pregnancy which a father and mother shares, the joy, the happiness everything you are going to miss out and maybe everything is not your fault, it’s the wrongdoing of others which you are paying for, but youe own mistake was you didn’t trust your love, the blind trust you should have on your partner you missed. You could not see the sadness in her eyes, she was forced earlier to get married to RV for your safety coz RV extorted with the pictures of yours from the mandir,to save your reputation she was ready to marry, but misunderstood her then also now also.” Anubhav was crying so hard and pleading GB “aap mujhe itni badi sazaa kyun de rhe ho, mujhe please GG se milne do, please mein aapki samne haath jodta hu, ek baar mujhe use milna hai, please!!” he pleads had geniality in it and so GB says “fine, hum kal lucknow se hamesha ke liye dur jaa rahehai, tum aaj sham ko ghar aake mil sakte ho, hearing that they are going away from Lucknow he becomes so sad, but he knew he has to be strong for himself.Sham ko aa jaana par meri ek shart hai… everyone looks at GB and she speaks, you will meet GG only if GC, Yug Ankit, or I will be present for your meet with her, Deal?” Manzoor hai toh jaldi bolo window of opportunity   closes in 5, 4, 3,2 and………. Okay fine, he replies, and GB gives a slide wave to the GCgang and goes from there.

As soon as Garima Bua left Anu broke down sobbing coz he just couldn’t believe that his own family, his fav BP has done this, his scattered heart was so broken that it was the loudest quiet ever, he couldn’t explained his feelings in words, all he did is gave a good look at BP and his family members and left from there, he needed fresh air, breathing was becoming hard and eyes was so moist that even the bright sun outside was dulling  for his eyes. He remembered all the good times he had spent fading away like dust. he could not hear Ankit and yug calling his name, he was hurt, not physically but mentally and from inside he was broken, he collapsed on the side of the road because his feet had become heavy. Yug and Ankit reached on time and caught him, He saw their faces and broke down on the side of the road and Yug instantly hugged and tried to pacify him.

“Bhaiya, yeh sab mere hi saath kyun hota hai, mere apne nemujhe apne pyaar ke juda kiya. Kyun, kyun? It was more then a question for Anu,it was the Guilt and Anger he is carrying in him. Anger-for not keeping his words to GG or GB and Guilt- because he did not trust his love and now, he must accept a harsh reality. he broke the hug and stood up and made his way to the house again. all the family members sitting in a living room was waiting for him to return. as soon as he was near the door he looked up and saw the eagerness in everyone’s eyes, he went straight and stood in front of his “so called wife” and spoke, “whatever may have happened you are a victim and a part of my lie and so I am the going to release you today. You are free to go back and not stay here because I can’t even look t your face and imagine you as victim, and as a criminal so pack your bags and get lost, I will send the annulment papers and if you make or create a fuss while signing, I will submit your recording and file a complain and send you to jail, so decide what you want Jail or your house.” She goes up to pack her belongings and as soon as she is out if sight he turns towards GC, Yug and Ankit and says” sorry Chachu, mein aapki team ka woh player nikla jispe bharosa nahi kiya jaa sakta hai, I am sorry for everything and please give a chance to become the best layer of your team.” GC wraps his hand which was pleading and said, “dekh Anu, hum tumse naraaz nahi hai, par aaj se balki abhi se tu apni life khud decide kar, tujhekaya karna hai aur kya nahi, Apne faisle parivaarwalo ki kehne pe mat Kar, andwohi kar joh tuhje aacha lage, kyunki iss parivaar jispe tuhje bahut naaz hai,wohi parivaar ne tuhje aaj yaha la kar khada kar diya hai, Jahan ek taraf pyaaraur Aulad hai or dusri taraf sirf Andhera.” Everyone has a shame in their eyes,he said “Chachu, there is no two way, only one and that’s  the oath with darkness and I have to embrace it, whatsoever,” he wipes his tears and again speak with a glint of joy in his eyes,“but its good at least my child will stay with the family who will love her and not have to follow society rules while growing up, and I am sure GG will a better mother, then having to stay with a father who is not worth for her/his  mother, I  get to see GG today even thou it is for last time, I want to buy gifts for my baby and GG so that she can give them to my child when she/he grows up to remember me” GC nods at him and they leave from there. “humse bahut badi galti ho gayi hai ji, says Badi Maa, looking at her husband,hum apne beta ko dukh aur Khushi dekh hi nahi paye, humara beta itni baar kahe hum sab se ki who khush nahi hai Akriti ke saath aur use GG se pyaar hai, par humne uski ek bhi baat nahi mani” Sahi kaha apne Jiji, says sargam “ us raatbhi party mein GG ne hum sabko samjane ki koshish ki, par humne suna hi nahi, humari wajah se aaj humara khoon dukhi hai , aur hum GG se aur Anu dono se maafi maangne ka Haq kho chuke hai”. 


have not read proof it so let me know how it is 


Don't make Anu forgive the K's so easily!!!! Btw loved the chapter❤️ Loved Garima Bua's stance!!! I wish we could see that in the show as well!!! 👍🏼

Posted: 1 years ago

Will keep that point in mind while writing the next chapter!!!!!!!!!

Posted: 1 years ago

CHAPTER 3: Phir Mulaqat hogi kabhie…….

 

The chapter starts from Anu, GC gang ready to go to Bhatnagar mansion.

BP: Anu, Beta joh bhi kehna hai use bol dena. Shayad phir kabhie mauka mile ya na mile.

Anubhav listens to him, but does not Answer and looks towards the other side and says,

Anu: “Chachu chale” GC nods his head, and they head out

Outside Bhatnagar mansion: Anu remembers the first time, hecame here for the wedding invitation and touches the gate, remembering it and pushes his gate a bit and enters inside, the security guard Gagan sees him and wishes him,

Gagan: Arey Anu bhaiya, bahut dino baad app yaha, ruko mein Garima Bua ko bata deta hu, ki aap aaye hai.

Anu nods his head and looks around the garden, the parking spot where he would hide his bike whenever he came to meet GG, he tries to Absorb everything and his eyes tears up, when Gagan speaks

Gagan: “Bhaiya aap andar jaaye, Bua aapka wait kar rahi hai,” Anu nods his head and walk towards the main door.

Au: Chachu mujhse nahi hoga yeh, mein nahi samna kar pauga.Yug Bhaiya, Ankit aap log aandhar jaake use manaye na ki who nahi jaaye, mein uske bina kaise jiyuga?

Yug: Dekh Anu, tujhe yeh karna hoga, tu himmat rakh sab kuch theek hoga, Abhi tu yeh soch ki tera exam hai aur tu usme zarur pass hoga.

Anu opens the door and he walks in along with the GC gang and GB sees them, welcomes them, and gives a sad look to Anu.

GB to herself: I know isme tumhari galti nahi hai Anu, tum sirf apne Family ki galtiyo ki sazaa bhugat rahe ho, par mein bhi majboor hu, kya karu ek Maa hu aur Apni Aulad ko dukhi nahi dekh sakti hu.

GB: mein Gungun ko bhula ke lati hu. She starts to walk when Anu stops her

Anu: Bua kya mein use 2 min Akele mein baat kar sakta huplease? I promise I will not do anything to upset her. Please? He said with pleading eyes.  GB nods her and ask her to be careful with her.

Anu opens the door to GG’s room and sees her sleeping, and her bags packed as he slowly approaches her and calls her softly

Anu: Gungun, she opens her eyes and sees Anu, she gets up witha jerk, but Anu reaches her side and says “Aaram se, please it’s not good to wake up with a jerk in these conditions.”

GG: tum yaha mujhe yeh batane aaye ho? Ya kuch aur baat hai?

Anu: how are you?

GG: I m good, tum batau tum yaha kaise?

Anu: woh…… woh…… mujhe……. Mujhe…..

GG losing her patience: yeh woh… woh… mujhe kya kar rahe hotheek so bolo mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai.

Anu takes a deep breath: I wanted to say that I am sorry,and I want to ask you a favor if that is okay with you.

GG: Sorry for what, not trusting our love, not trusting me, or not trusting our relationship or YOUR WIFE… Sorry for what????

Anu is looking down as he is unable to meet his eyes with her, she calms a bit down and walk towards him, and lift his chin up and wipes his and hers tears.

GG: look I am also sorry I should have trusted you also, we both are equally at fault, and I am not blaming you so dnt stay in that guilt that I am, but I am hurt who bhi bahut zyadawala hurt hu. So, whatever you have come to say, say and leave

Anubhav gets down on his knees and equals himself to her stomach and ask with his eyes to GG if he can touch the stomach, she nods in yes and he places his hand softly and speaks

Anu: Hi baby, this is your dad, I know aap abhi mujhe nahi sun sakte par mujhe aapse aur apki mumma se kuch kehna hai, please be strong and dnt fall weak, never think that your dad is not with you and whenever you will be and whatever you will be I will be proud of you and will always love youand your mumma. Agar papa ki yaad aaye toh mumma se mere bare mein puch lena and learn to respect and value your mumma, I have failed in it but you won’t fail and I am sure and confident that you will be better than me in all the ways. Always remember love cannot be always seen or heard but felt toh papa physically ho ya na ho, he will always love you. Take care of yourself and mumma when you grow up and be a better person who your father could not be.

GG has tears in her eyes when she hears his talks, but she also knows that she can’t forgive him that easily for breaking her trust, so she lets him says and stay strong while stopping the tears from falling from the eyes. Anu stays like this for few minutes and hugs her and cries his heart out.GG lifts him up and make him sit next to on the bed and she sits down next to him, he sides hugs her and cries and she lets him, because sometimes its good to cry your heart out rather then keeping it inside and becoming stone hearted.

The knock on the door disturbed their moment and they wipe the tears and its Bua standing at the door.

GB: Beta, its time I am sending shekhar bhaiya to get your bags, humari flight ka time ho raha hai.

GG nods at her Bua: Bua 2 min de do please mujhe Anu se kuch kehna hai please?

GB: theek hai jaldi karna but, we cannot be late hmmmmm. She smlies at them and leaves

GG: Maine Round chachu ko kuch diya hai tumhe dene ke liye,aur mein chachu ko baby ki updates deti rahugi, if you want to know then you can ask him. Bye take care

Anu: Tumhe mujhse baat nahi karni hai toh theek hai, mein tumhe force nahi karuga but thank you mujhse aaj milne ke liye aur main tumse is baat pe nazar nahi rahuga but mein aage badh bhi nahi pauga, mein tumahri maafi ka hamesha wait karta rahuga. Bye… take care and hope this mini version of us do not get you much trouble.

They smile and he departs from the room with a heavy heart but a rested soul and smiles a bit. GG breaks down in the room and wipes her tears and comes out and says bye to everyone and they all depart their ways from the garden. 

Posted: 1 years ago

i am bookmarking i..Will comment after reading all three parts. :)

Finally i can see #anugun stories here too

n it will be more interesting than Veku party team writer 😃😉

Posted: 1 years ago

Ek Gaana Vanku k naam- 

"Vanku serial production mein aayi, serial k bhatta baithaein,hai re bhatta baithaein 

Padh Gau naam Vanku hai bhar**,hai re Vanku hai bhar**,hai re Vanku hai bhar**

Vanku jab creative banelu,creation k ga*** maarelu,hai re ga*** maarelu

Padh Gau naam Chu**** hai Vanku,hai re Chu**** hai Vanku,hai re Chu**** hai Vanku 

Vanku new concept laayelu, audiences k bewakoof banayelu,hai re bewakoof banayelu

Padh Gau naam Har**** hai Vanku,hai re Har**** hai Vanku,hai re Har**** hai Vanku 

Vanku k show ko jab dekhelu, Maatha ko wall pe patkelu,hai re wall pe patkelu 

Padh Gau naam Pagal hai Janta,hai re Pagal hai Janta,hai re Pagal hai Janta

Isiliye ab request karelu,hai re request karelu,hai re request karelu

future mein koi kuch dekhna Jo chahe Vanku k serials se doori banaye, hai re doori banaye 

Nahi toh janta asylum ko jaaye,hai re asylum ko jaaye,hai re asylum ko jaaye" 

Sorry for some hard words but really feel this song is very much apt for Vanku nd his creative buddies.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 What a production team,What a creative team, Really What a team???💩💩💩💩💩💩💩🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣



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