Junoon vs Sukoon

Here's a little sequence I would love to see. Wasn't sure where to post it hence making a separate post.

Whenever Karan's misunderstanding gets cleared and he is back home. Family might be okay with Preeta and Karan's re-marriage coz Rishabh and Preeta's marriage will be null and void.

Family anyway is so dumb that they won't even notice Rishabh's pain and suffering.

Preeta in the meantime should feel distant from Karan, she feels a void, a certain restlessness around Karan.

Plus her wedding preparations begin but her heart isn't in all this. Karan is sensing the same.

Rishabh has started avoiding Preeta and maintaining his distance from her. This bothers Preeta. Rishabh announces that he is leaving India and settling down abroad as he has to set up a new business. All are shocked but eventually make peace with it.

On the day of the wedding Rishabh leaves and we get a monologue that he will always love Preeta but it is for her happiness and sake that he is leaving. This time he will go far away and never to return coz every time he has returned all he has got is pain and heartbreak. (He leaves)

Wedding rituals start and while the mantras are going on Preeta gets flashes of the time she spent with Rishabh. Then the pheras start and with each phera Preeta gets reminded that actually Rishabh is the one who kept and fulfilled every promise mentioned in each phera (eg. ; Main humesha tumhari hifazat karunga cut to flashes of Rishabh protecting Preeta). Before the last phera, she stops. Realisation has struck her hard that she has fallen irrevocably in love with Rishabh). Rishabh is the one who fulfilled each vachan, while she kept sacrificing for Karan, it was Rishabh who kept sacrificing for her. He kept loving him selflessly. She can't take the last phera and now tears are flowing from her eyes. Karan notices this, realises, a tear rolls down his eyes. He has realized that he has lost her, lost her but to the man who was more derserving of her ! He lets go of her hand and gives her a nod. Preeta rushes from the mandap.

Rishabh who was heading for the airport also was remembering the time he had spent with Preeta. He notices Preeta's call. He wipes his tears and picks up the call. Before Preeta can say anything, Rishabh's car meets collides with an approaching truck. It's a massive collision, the car has turned upside down. Rishabh is bleed profusely, in his bloodied hand lies the phone and Preeta's frantic voice can be heard..Rishabh? Rishabh? Rishabh.....................................

This one I want from Day 1 after leap .....

Waise leap ko jyada din hue nahi 😕

Par fir bhi . i want to see this track in future .

I just want one modification in this , Preeta rishabh ko call na kare, last fere ke tym Rishabh ka accident ho nd she should feel it like she feels For Karan in recent episode .

Then she stop the fera at last and say ki mujhe yeh ghabrahat kyu ho rahi hai then , kisi ka fon aata hai ki Rishabh ka accident .

uske bad aage ke episodes .

Originally posted by: Kriti_1

This one I want from Day 1 after leap .....

Waise leap ko jyada din hue nahi 😕

Par fir bhi . i want to see this track in future .

I just want one modification in this , Preeta rishabh ko call na kare, last fere ke tym Rishabh ka accident ho nd she should feel it like she feels For Karan in recent episode .

Then she stop the fera at last and say ki mujhe yeh ghabrahat kyu ho rahi hai then , kisi ka fon aata hai ki Rishabh ka accident .

uske bad aage ke episodes .

Her choosing Rishabh and leaving the mandap and running to stop him, her eagerness to stop him and confess that she has fallen for him cut to her kind of witnessing the accident even if it's via phone is what makes it interesting and angsty for me. Her hearing the collision, Rishabh's scream and then her frantic cries on phone will make it more angsty.

But what u said is also interesting.

Originally posted by: anshvi

Her choosing Rishabh and leaving the mandap and running to stop him, her eagerness to stop him and confess that she has fallen for him cut to her kind of witnessing the accident even if it's via phone is what makes it interesting and angsty for me. Her hearing the collision, Rishabh's scream and then her frantic cries on phone will make it more angsty.

But what u said is also interesting.

chahe kisi bhi tarike se laye , bs yeh track le aaye 😭

Originally posted by: Kriti_1

chahe kisi bhi tarike se laye , bs yeh track le aaye 😭

Hhaha this toh we can't be sure about tbh. Baki let's see. Would love to see something like this.

Originally posted by: anshvi

Here's a little sequence I would love to see. Wasn't sure where to post it hence making a separate post.

Whenever Karan's misunderstanding gets cleared and he is back home. Family might be okay with Preeta and Karan's re-marriage coz Rishabh and Preeta's marriage will be null and void.

Family anyway is so dumb that they won't even notice Rishabh's pain and suffering.

Preeta in the meantime should feel distant from Karan, she feels a void, a certain restlessness around Karan.

Plus her wedding preparations begin but her heart isn't in all this. Karan is sensing the same.

Rishabh has started avoiding Preeta and maintaining his distance from her. This bothers Preeta. Rishabh announces that he is leaving India and settling down abroad as he has to set up a new business. All are shocked but eventually make peace with it.

On the day of the wedding Rishabh leaves and we get a monologue that he will always love Preeta but it is for her happiness and sake that he is leaving. This time he will go far away and never to return coz every time he has returned all he has got is pain and heartbreak. (He leaves)

Wedding rituals start and while the mantras are going on Preeta gets flashes of the time she spent with Rishabh. Then the pheras start and with each phera Preeta gets reminded that actually Rishabh is the one who kept and fulfilled every promise mentioned in each phera (eg. ; Main humesha tumhari hifazat karunga cut to flashes of Rishabh protecting Preeta). Before the last phera, she stops. Realisation has struck her hard that she has fallen irrevocably in love with Rishabh). Rishabh is the one who fulfilled each vachan, while she kept sacrificing for Karan, it was Rishabh who kept sacrificing for her. He kept loving him selflessly. She can't take the last phera and now tears are flowing from her eyes. Karan notices this, realises, a tear rolls down his eyes. He has realized that he has lost her, lost her but to the man who was more derserving of her ! He lets go of her hand and gives her a nod. Preeta rushes from the mandap.

Rishabh who was heading for the airport also was remembering the time he had spent with Preeta. He notices Preeta's call. He wipes his tears and picks up the call. Before Preeta can say anything, Rishabh's car meets collides with an approaching truck. It's a massive collision, the car has turned upside down. Rishabh is bleed profusely, in his bloodied hand lies the phone and Preeta's frantic voice can be heard..Rishabh? Rishabh? Rishabh.....................................

Hindi movie wala style.

Hero goes to airport. Heroin comes running behind.

Send the plot to nagpal. Tell him cooy paste since he doesn't know what to write apart from kidnapping and jail sessions. Count in hospital as well.

Originally posted by: Aniash

Hindi movie wala style.

Hero goes to airport. Heroin comes running behind.

Send the plot to nagpal. Tell him cooy paste since he doesn't know what to write apart from kidnapping and jail sessions. Count in hospital as well.

Sometimes certain cliches can be beautiful but writers doosre cliches dikhane mein lage hain 😆

Originally posted by: anshvi

Here's a little sequence I would love to see. Wasn't sure where to post it hence making a separate post.

Whenever Karan's misunderstanding gets cleared and he is back home. Family might be okay with Preeta and Karan's re-marriage coz Rishabh and Preeta's marriage will be null and void.

Family anyway is so dumb that they won't even notice Rishabh's pain and suffering.

Preeta in the meantime should feel distant from Karan, she feels a void, a certain restlessness around Karan.

Plus her wedding preparations begin but her heart isn't in all this. Karan is sensing the same.

Rishabh has started avoiding Preeta and maintaining his distance from her. This bothers Preeta. Rishabh announces that he is leaving India and settling down abroad as he has to set up a new business. All are shocked but eventually make peace with it.

On the day of the wedding Rishabh leaves and we get a monologue that he will always love Preeta but it is for her happiness and sake that he is leaving. This time he will go far away and never to return coz every time he has returned all he has got is pain and heartbreak. (He leaves)

Wedding rituals start and while the mantras are going on Preeta gets flashes of the time she spent with Rishabh. Then the pheras start and with each phera Preeta gets reminded that actually Rishabh is the one who kept and fulfilled every promise mentioned in each phera (eg. ; Main humesha tumhari hifazat karunga cut to flashes of Rishabh protecting Preeta). Before the last phera, she stops. Realisation has struck her hard that she has fallen irrevocably in love with Rishabh). Rishabh is the one who fulfilled each vachan, while she kept sacrificing for Karan, it was Rishabh who kept sacrificing for her. He kept loving him selflessly. She can't take the last phera and now tears are flowing from her eyes. Karan notices this, realises, a tear rolls down his eyes. He has realized that he has lost her, lost her but to the man who was more derserving of her ! He lets go of her hand and gives her a nod. Preeta rushes from the mandap.

Rishabh who was heading for the airport also was remembering the time he had spent with Preeta. He notices Preeta's call. He wipes his tears and picks up the call. Before Preeta can say anything, Rishabh's car meets collides with an approaching truck. It's a massive collision, the car has turned upside down. Rishabh is bleed profusely, in his bloodied hand lies the phone and Preeta's frantic voice can be heard..Rishabh? Rishabh? Rishabh.....................................

Wowwww. 👏 I am hoping Rishabh ussay pehlay ICU say discharge hokar aa Gaya ho Tabhi Preeta’s why do I care for him more than a friend confusion will start. A small change that I will like to see is Rishabh is indeed leaving and as the pheras begin he is watching holding Kavya. Throughout the marriage ceremony she keeps looking at him though he is trying his best not to look at her. But when their eyes meet, she is reminded of the great memories and she is unsure looking at him. Rishabh sensing her uncertainty tries to smile in a reassuring way but neither of them are fooled. Ultimately Preeta dumps Karan at the mandap, full circle.

Originally posted by: ws_loki

Wowwww. 👏 I am hoping Rishabh ussay pehlay ICU say discharge hokar aa Gaya ho Tabhi Preeta’s why do I care for him more than a friend confusion will start. A small change that I will like to see is Rishabh is indeed leaving and as the pheras begin he is watching holding Kavya. Throughout the marriage ceremony she keeps looking at him though he is trying his best not to look at her. But when their eyes meet, she is reminded of the great memories and she is unsure looking at him. Rishabh sensing her uncertainty tries to smile in a reassuring way but neither of them are fooled. Ultimately Preeta dumps Karan at the mandap, full circle.

I actually want it to be very difficult for Preeta to confess. She would want to but Rishabh won't be in a condition to listen to her as he will be in ICU.

Preeta should also experience na what Rishabh was going through. The pain, the angst, the desperation to tell him that she loves and he is the one jisne usse Pyar nibhana sikhaya, Pyar mein unconditionally sirf dena sikhaya hai.

And when he does wake up, something like Hum Dil De chuke Sanam should happen. Preeta asking him to choose one mutthi, Rishabh perplexed chooses one and she opens it and it has the mangalsutra. Post that she should confess that she wants to stay Preeta Rishabh Luthra forever.

But what u have said is also interesting.

Originally posted by: anshvi

Here's a little sequence I would love to see. Wasn't sure where to post it hence making a separate post.

Whenever Karan's misunderstanding gets cleared and he is back home. Family might be okay with Preeta and Karan's re-marriage coz Rishabh and Preeta's marriage will be null and void.

Family anyway is so dumb that they won't even notice Rishabh's pain and suffering.

Preeta in the meantime should feel distant from Karan, she feels a void, a certain restlessness around Karan.

Plus her wedding preparations begin but her heart isn't in all this. Karan is sensing the same.

Rishabh has started avoiding Preeta and maintaining his distance from her. This bothers Preeta. Rishabh announces that he is leaving India and settling down abroad as he has to set up a new business. All are shocked but eventually make peace with it.

On the day of the wedding Rishabh leaves and we get a monologue that he will always love Preeta but it is for her happiness and sake that he is leaving. This time he will go far away and never to return coz every time he has returned all he has got is pain and heartbreak. (He leaves)

Wedding rituals start and while the mantras are going on Preeta gets flashes of the time she spent with Rishabh. Then the pheras start and with each phera Preeta gets reminded that actually Rishabh is the one who kept and fulfilled every promise mentioned in each phera (eg. ; Main humesha tumhari hifazat karunga cut to flashes of Rishabh protecting Preeta). Before the last phera, she stops. Realisation has struck her hard that she has fallen irrevocably in love with Rishabh). Rishabh is the one who fulfilled each vachan, while she kept sacrificing for Karan, it was Rishabh who kept sacrificing for her. He kept loving him selflessly. She can't take the last phera and now tears are flowing from her eyes. Karan notices this, realises, a tear rolls down his eyes. He has realized that he has lost her, lost her but to the man who was more derserving of her ! He lets go of her hand and gives her a nod. Preeta rushes from the mandap.

Rishabh who was heading for the airport also was remembering the time he had spent with Preeta. He notices Preeta's call. He wipes his tears and picks up the call. Before Preeta can say anything, Rishabh's car meets collides with an approaching truck. It's a massive collision, the car has turned upside down. Rishabh is bleed profusely, in his bloodied hand lies the phone and Preeta's frantic voice can be heard..Rishabh? Rishabh? Rishabh.....................................

This is better than Ekta's script. I loved every bit of it ❤️. Though I had expected a different ending, the actual ending made me laugh. His ICU situation is inevitable. 🤣