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Posted: 1 years ago

I Think Shirin Is Totally Misjudging The Situation Of Her Only Daughter's Death Due To Brutal Murder Of Shanaya's

And She Thinks Azka Is Selfish And All I wanna Say Is

​​Look Shanaya Ki Death Azka Ki Bevkoofi Se Hui I Agree But It Is The Character Trait Of Azka

Azka Street Smart Bilkul Nahi Dikhai Gayi Hai Vo Uska Character Hee Hai Vo Bhooli aur Masum Bacho Type Ladki Hee Hai

aur Kafi Had Tak Thodi Bewkoof Aur Pagal Bhi Hai Azka Usko Cheezen Samajh Mein Kaam Aur Late Aati Hai

ACTUALLY AZKA KA CHARACTER PYAR KE SADQEY KI MEHJABEEN JAISA HAI BILKUL

WAY TO INNOCENT AND DUNIYA DARI KA KUCH PATA NAHI ...

aur Tubelight Bhi Hai Azka Usi Duniya Dari Jyada Samajh Mein Nahi Aati

Toh Jo Hua Vo Azka Ki Masumiyat Aur Bevkoofi Se Hua

Selfishness Aur Kuch Galat ya Evil Intention Mein Aake Nahi

Azka Kabhi Nahi Chahti Thi Ki Shanaya Mar Jaye Uska Murder Hoo Jaye

Uske Leads Ko Follow KarKe Aliha Ke Kidnappers Ko Follow Karte Hue trap Karke

Azka Ke Intention Galat Nahi the Kabhi Bhi Bas Usme Dimag Kaam Hai

Jo Ki Kai Moments Pe Prominently Dikh Bhi Raha Hai Ishq E Laa Mein Hee

Smart Toh Vaise Jyada Shanaya Bhi Nahi Thi Kafi Had Tak

I Think Azlan Ka Character Phir Bhi Kafi Had Tak Logical aur Street Smart Hai Like Uske Ways Jaise Ko Taisa and No Nonsense Type Character Jo Azlan Ka Bataya Gaya Hai

And Azlan Kafi Soochke aur Samajhke Decisions Leta Hai aur Koi Bhi Kaam Karta Tha

Teeno Mein Toh Sabse Jayada Duniya Dari Mein Theek Azlan Hee Tha

Phir Shanaya and Then The Lowest On Scale Was Azka

Azka Was The Most Innocent and Pagli One Out Of The 3...


And I Also Think Azka Khud Bhi Apne Aapko abhi Tak Shanaya Aur Toh Aur Ab Azka Ko Shanaya Aur Azlan Ke Unborn Baby Ka Bhi Pata Hai Toh Guilt Double Hai

Toh Azka Ab Khud Ko Shanaya aur Shanaya - Azlan Ke Baby ke Murder Ka Doshi Manti Hai

Azka Khud Bhi Abhi Tak Shanaya aur Uske Baby Ke Murder Ke Guilt Se Nikal Nahi Pa Rahi Hai

Aur Phir Ab Azka Ko Ye Bhi Lagne Laga Hai Ki She Made A Crime To Totally Falling In Love With Shanaya's Husband That Is Azlan

Azka Ko Apna Pyar Bhi Jurm Lag Raha Hai Abhi

Kyoki Vo Abhi Bhi Azlan Ko Shanaya Ka Husband Manti Hai ..

Situation Is Too Overwhelming For Azka Lets See Kya Hota Hai Aage ..




Soo Much Pain Can't Take It

Literally Read With My Eyes Full Of Tears Believe Me

Ab Azkaan Ki Dori Bardasht Se Bahar Hoo Rahi Hai Didu Inka Confession Kara Dijiye Please Dii 😭😭😭🙏

Bechare Dono Kitna Dukh Dard Aur Takliff Mein Hai Taras aa Raha Hai Azka aur Azlan Pe

God Hee Inka Bhala Kare 💔❤️‍🩹

Anyways Nice and Really Painful Update Yar Rula Diya Dii🥺😭


Please Don't End This Fanfiction After Azkaan's Love Confession Please Diiii 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Please Don't Do This To Us Your Readers

Fans and Lovers Na Didu Please

Please Please Dii Aisa Na Kare Confession Ke Baad End Na Kare Dii

It's a Humble Request🙏🙏😭

Kyoki Because That's The Main Thing Azkaan's What Would Have Happen Life After Their Confession

That Makers and Directors Didn't Show That At All

and Thats The Thing We All Viewers Wanted To See

as We all Viewers Have The Full Right To See Our Favourite One True Pair Azkaan Happy And Totally In Love Living A Wonderful

Blissful Married Life And Also To See Satisfied and Beautiful Married Life Of Azkaan

Kyoki Poore Ishq E Laa Mein Dono

Azka Aur Azlan Ko Bas Roote Hue aur Bilakhte Hue Hee Dekha Hai

Azka aur Azlan Ki Khush o Khuraam Married Life Bitate Hue Dono Ko Saath Saath Dekhne Ki Toh Hum Viewers Ki Hasrat Hee Reh Gayi Jaise Khush Azlan aur Shanaya The


Hamari Hasrat Poori Kar Dijiye Na Dii please 🙏

Please Don't Mayus Us Na Dii

By Ending The Fanfiction After Confession Uske Baad Kafi Bahut Aage Ka Bhi Dikhaye Na Dii Please

Ok Didi Take Care Thanks For This Wonderful and Emotional Update

So Miltey Hai Didu Next Update Pe

Eagerly Waiting For the Next One

Post It Soon Love you ♥️💖😘😘


Lots Of Love and Best Wishes 💖🥺

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Sana Sis Kaisi ho aap❤️

Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw


Yaar thoda wait karo love confession ho gaya to FF khatam ho jayega ..bas ab kuch parts bache hai.

Har baar romance to nhi aa sakta na..😆kabhi khushi kabhi gum bhi hota hai.

Umair bura hua kab hai waise..usne abhi tak to koi villain wala kaam nhi kiya 🤣karega phir kya bologi tum

Confession ke baad bhi to story ho sakti hai😆 bohat kuch ho sakta hai😆

Umair bura nahi hai kya?? Itne ajeeb ajeeb kaam to kiye hain usne Azlaan ke against🤔

Posted: 1 years ago

Poor azka...really hope she reunites with her hubby soon...she should call him and ask to pick her...phir dono long drive pe jaye

Hope shirin also apologisses to Azka in next part

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Hayee Apni Azka Ki Masumiyat Aur Sadgi ❣️🥺😞😘


AZKA KA CHARACTER PYAR KE SADQEY KI MEHJABEEN JAISA HAI BILKUL

WAY TO INNOCENT AND DUNIYA DARI SE PARE 😇

GOD AZKA KO BAHUT PYAR AUR KHUSHIYAN AUR SUKOON DE JO VO DESERVE KARTI HAI BECHARI



Please Please Didu Aap Toh Inn Dono Love Birds Our One True Pair Azkaan Ka Milan Karva Dijiye 🙏🙏❤️‍🩹🥺

Really Wanna See Ops Sorry Read

Full Fledged Proper Romance Between Our One True Pair Azkaan 💗❤️♥️

U Know Their Blissful Happy nd Beautiful Married Life in Real Sense And True Sense

Azkaan in Lovey Dovey Mode

Nd Their Life As Newly Married Young Couple Totally In Love

Because Drame Mein Bhi Yahi Dekhne Ko Nahi Mila 😞☹️🥺

Which Ishq E Laa Lovers And Specially

"Azkaan Lovers "Are Literally Really Craving Hard For

From Since The Starting Of Drama Only ...

Didu Hope nd Really Want To See That In Your Lovely

Beautiful and

Awesome Fanfiction 💘❤️‍🩹🥺😭

And Didu Please U Don't Worry At All

If By Any Chance This Thread Ended

Don't Worry I Would Create The New Thread

U Just Please 🙏 Don't End This Azkaan Fanfiction..

💗♥️🤍

Peace Out

Lots and Lots Of Love, Positive Vibes and Blessings From The Bottom Of My Heart

Take Very Good Care Of Yourself

And Mein Aapke Liye God Se Dua Karungi

Ki Aapko Jeevan Ke Har Intehan Mein Khush Rakhe

Himmat De

Aur Hamesha Pass Karaye God Aapko

God Bless You Sana Dii💞💝

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Nice update…

Poor Azka and Azlaan.. both are in pain..

Kinda liked the silence between them.. Azka can now rethink about what she wants..

Good that Shireen aunty is also feeling bad for what she did.. hoping for a Azlaan and Shireen talk..

Umair is a lil confusing though..

Wonder what Azka and Azlaan are going to do now.

Please continue soon..

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Vaise Sana Didi Ek Important Baat Poochu

Azka Ka Barish Ka Mausam Aur Azlan Ka Thand Ka Mausam Kab Aayega????

I Was About To Ask That 😄😘

Aapne 7 Ya 8th Chapter Mein Kaha Tha Na Ki Dono Ke Pasand Ka Mausam Aane Wala Hai Ab Tak Aaya Nahi Yar Azkaan Ka Favourite Mausam

Hum Wait Kar Rahe Hai Dono Ke Favourite Mausam Ke Aane Ka 🌹😉😜

Please Jaldi Le Aaye Na Didu Hamare Azkaan Ka Favourite Favourite Mausam Taki Unn Dono Ke Saath Hum Bhi Kuch Enjoy Kar Sake 😍🌹😄😜😉


Although I Think Azlan Ko Asal Mohabbat Azka Se Hui Hai Jo Ek Aadmi Ko Ek Aurat Se Hoti Hai

Shanaya Azlan Ki Aadat Thi Kyonki Vo Uski Sachi Dost Thi ❤️💞💗

God Ki Grace Se aur God Ke Hee Intervention Se

Azlan Transformed Into A Kind Humble Innocent And Pure Soul

Ya Acha Insan Banne Ke Baad Azlan Ko Azka Jaisi Pure and Innocent Ladki Se Mohabbat Hui Hai Isliye Ye Mohabbat Shanaya Se Mohabbat Se Bhi Zayada Sachi Hai Azlan Ki

Kyoki Now Azlan Is a Spiritual Awakened Soul By God Grace...

And After Awakening Azlan Fall In Love With Azka.. That's The Thing❤️💟🌹



i Think Jaise Kuch Chapters Pehle Azlan Ko Bahut Bada Jhatka Laga Tha In Abid Case

to Realise Azlan Literally Loves Azka Quite Very Much Nd Unconditionally

Vaise Hee Ek Bahut Zordar Jhatke Ki Zaroorat Ab Azka Ko Hai

To Realise That She Fell Hard In Love With Her Hubby Azlan To Accept Ki Azka Ko Shadid Mohabbat Hoo Gayi Hai Apne Husband Azlan Se

Tab Hee Kuch Hoo Sakta Hai Azka aur Azlan Ka

Aur Azkaan Ki Love Life Aur Married Life Ka Bhi

Varna Toh Hone Se Raha Kuch Bhi Azlan Aur Azka Ke Beech 🥺♥️♥️


And Also Wanna See Azka Interaction With Her Beloved Bhatiji Aliha

And Other 2 New Step Sisters Of Aliha as Azka Love Her Bhatiji Quite Very Much More Than Anything In This World As Shown In The Drama ...


Shayad Aliha Hee Kuch Madad Kar Paye Apni Pyari Sii ,Masum Sii, Seedhi Sadi, Bhooli

Bacho Jaisi aur Bewakoof, Pagal Bua Azka Ki

Ab Apni Bua Azka Ki Aur Fufaji Azlan Ke Patch Up Mein Kuch 😄🤣😜


Wish Kuch Dhamakedar Sa Hoon for Azka To Realise and Accept Her Unconditional Love For Azlan..💟❣️



I Have Full Faith On U Sana Dii whatever U Will Write Would Definitely Be Amazing As Always


Anyways Let's See Ab Aage Kya Hota Hai

Waiting Eagerly , Anxiously And Desperately For the Next Chapter 🧿👼🤍♥️💟

Update It Soon Didu ♥️💗

All The Very Very Best 🙏

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Didu Your Dialogue In Previous Chapter ..

Azlan:agar me purana wala Azlan hota na to is baat ke liye me tumhe jaan se maar deta.par nahi me ab wo nhi Raha Azka ke pyaar ne mujhe badal diya hai.par Iska matlab ye nahi hai ke tum meri biwi ke bare me ye sab bakwas baate Karo...

This Dialogue Is Awesome 👌👌No Doubt On That Aur Kafi Had Tak Sahi Bhi Hai

But Still Sorry To Say But I Think My Perspective On this Line Only My Prescriptive As Mujhe Jo Lagta Hai Mein Vo Keh Rahi Hoon U Can Disagree With Me As Mein Galat Ya Alag Bhi Hoo Sakti Hoon

So Coming To the Main Point My Prescriptive On This Line Is That

Azka Ne Azlan Ko Change Nahi Kiya Hai Zara Sa Bhi Azlan Ko Acha Aur Pure Hearted

Sirf Aur Sirf God Ne Banaya Hai Sirf God Ne


Aur Azlan Ko Badla Khud Azlan Ke Self Realisation And Self Acceptance Ne

Azlan Ko Khud Hee Mein BeSukooni Aur Dukh aur Mainly Ashanti

Mehsoos Hua Azlan Ko Self Realisation Hua Usne Apni BeSukooni aur Ashanti Se Ubharne Ka Upay Dhoondha Aur Phir Azlan Khud God Ke Pass Gaya

Spirituality Mein Jisko Hum Specifically "Surrendering To God Kehte Hai"




Hense Azka Ko Credit Dena Is Somewhat Not Right Credit God Ko Aur Khud Azlan Ko Milna Chahiye


But But The Thing Is U are Also Very Very Right🙏👍👍🙏

Azka Ne Azlan Ko Self Realisation Ki Taraf Moda Zaroor Tha Vo Aise Ki

Without Azka Azlan God Ke Pass Jata Hee Nahi

So Azka Was The Reason And Like The Connecting Link Between Azlan and God

Azka Azlan Ki Helper Zaroor Thi In Azlan's Spiritual Journey Towards God

Azka Hee Azlan Ko God Ki Taraf Layi But

Azlan Ahmed Badla Sirf Sirf God Ke Kard

God Ki Intervention Se

Aur God Ke Love Ki Wajah Se Hai ...


Azka Only Act As A Link Between Azlan and God Kyoki Azka Nahi Hoti Toh Azlan God Ke Pass Shayad Jata Hee Nahi

Azka Act As Helper For Turning Azlan Towards God

But The Credit And Reason For Azlan's Total Change Of Heart Is One And Only God

And Azlan's Own Self Realisation And Self Acceptance...

And After The Change of Heart By God's Grace Azlan Fell Totally In Love With Azka

As God Ne Azlan Ka Heart Pure And Clean Kar Diya

And Ab Now Azlan Is Able To See Right And Gud Things In Others

God Ne Azlan Ka Nazariya Hee Badal Diya After Azlan's Heart Becomes Clear and Pure

Tab Azlan Ko Acha Aur Sahi Dikhna Shuru Hua

And Then Azlan Ko Change Of Heart Ke Baad Dikha Ki

Azka Kitni Masum, Bholi aur Saaf Dil Achi Hai And Then Azlan Fell Hard In Love With Azka


Isliye Azlan Ko God Ke Karad and God Ke Pass Jane Ke Kard Clear ,Clean and Pure Hearted Banne Ke Baad Azka Se Pyar Hua

Uske Pehle Azlan Azka Se Nafrat Hee Karta Raha

Because Azlan Ko Pure and Innocent Hearted Banne Ke Baad Sahi aur Acha Dikhna Shuru Hua Tha

Kyonki Jab Tak Hum Khud Ache Nahi Hote Hume Dusron Ki Achai Dikhai Nahi Deti

EK BAAR INSAN ANDAR SE SHANT HO JAYE TOH USSE SUNAI BHI DETA HAI AUR DIKHAI BHI AUR VO SHANTI AUR SUKOON AZLAN KO SIRF AUR SIRF GOD NE DIYA AZKA NE NAHI..


Toh Jab Tak Azlan Khud

Pure Clean and Innocent Hearted Nahi Banna Usko Azka Ki Tab Tak Achai Dikhna Shuru Nahi Hui

Jab Azlan Khud Acha Hoa Tab Usse Azka Ki Sachai aur Achai Dikhai Dee

Kyoki Achai Dekhne Ke Liye Vo Aankhen Chahiye Hoti Hai Aur Vo Aankhen Azlan Ko Sirf Aur Sirf God Ne Dee ...


And Then Azlan Finally Choose Azka To Spend The Rest of His Life With As Life Partner or Spouse

The Most Important Sign Of An SPIRITUAL AWAKENED Or GOD LOVER PERSON Is

SPIRITUALLY AWAKENED PERSON Or GOD LOVER PERSON Ki ENERGY Or VIBE Hamesha HALKI and LIGHT hoti Hai

Because In SPIRITUAL SCIENCE Hum Kehte Hai GOD Means SHUNYA Means 0

AS In Na BUDDHI

NA AHANKAR

Na EGO

Na DAR

Na MAJBURI

Na ZAROORAT

KUCH BHI NAHI

BAS Sirf aur Sirf AATMA Or CHETNA

SO Jitna INSAN HALKA HOTA HAI Utna hee GOD Ka PYARA and GOD Ke NAZDEEK Hota hai

Aapke OPINIONS

PERCEPTIONS

BELIEF

DIFFERENCES

JEALOUSY

HATRED

ANGER

Ye Sab GANDI Cheezen Hai Jo Aapko GOD Se DUR KARTI Hai..

Aapko HAMESHA BHARI Banate Hai

Aapko Weigh Down Karte Hai

Aapki EXISTENCE ko MEANS Aapki ENERGY And VIBES Ko BOJHIL Karte Hai

Inn Sab CHEEZON ko SHED Karke Ya CHODKE Hee AAP Apni SPIRITUAL JOURNEY Ko EMBARK Kar Sakte Hai

And Once U SHED OFF OR JAB Aap Inn Sab KO Hamesha KE Liye CHOD DOGE Ya Hamesha Ke Liye Inn CHEEZON YA GUDO Ko CHOD DOGE Ya TYAG DOGE Aur

Vo Cheezen Hai-

Your BELIEFS

PERCEPTIONS

OPINIONS

EGO

DIFFERENCES

HATRED

ANGER

JEALOUSY

THINKING

Then U GO IN TOTAL Terms With GOD

And Becomes GOD'S MOST FAVOURITE And FAVOURED CHILD And GOD LOVER And Aap GOD KO PAA LETE HAI Means Ultimately U Finally ATTAIN GOD Then

KYOKI Jeetna AAP SHUNYA And 0 KE NAZDEEK Or PASS Hoge

UTNA Hee PROPORTION MEIN Aap GOD Ke PASS JATE JAOGE

Because GOD is Shunya And 0

And Then FINALLY

" NIRVANA " Stage PA LOGE AAP

NIRVANA Means STAGE Of 0 And SHUNYA

Means Total Union And ULTIMATE Union With GOD .🙏🙏❤️❣️



With Lots Of Love and Respect Sana Didu ❤️🙏❣️

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Confession ke baad bhi to story ho sakti hai😆 bohat kuch ho sakta hai😆

Umair bura nahi hai kya?? Itne ajeeb ajeeb kaam to kiye hain usne Azlaan ke against🤔


Bahot kuch ho sakta hai se kya matlab hai tumhra 🤣

Mene ek story line sochi hui hai ye FF ko lekar from day one and ab main usko change nhi kar sakti so jaisa socha hai waisa hone do lol


Umair totally negative nahi hai.usne abhi tak azlan ko harm nhi Kiya na azka ko wo bas Jo chahta hai wo kar raha hai.

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Part 1 51

Part 2 52

Part 3 55

Part 4 63

Part 5 69

Part 6 72

Part 7 75

Part 8 77

Part 9 78

Part 10 79

Par 11 80

Part 12 81

Part 13 83

Part 14 84

Part 15 85

Part 16 86

Part 17 87

Part 18 89

Part 19 93

Part 20 97

Part 21 98






Part 22


After one week

Sitwat and Azlan are on the dining table.

Sitwat:Azlan Azka ka koi phone aaya?

Azlan:nahi

Sitwat:tumne bhi phone nhi kiya usko?

Azlan:nahi

Sitwat:Azlan beta wo to nasamjh hai tum to koi akkal ka kaam lo,tum dono me se koi pehal nahi karega to kaise sab sahi hoga.

Azlan:mom relax i know me kya kar Raha hu just trust on me.

Sitwat stops while speaking

Azlan:Shirin aunty ne breakfast kar liya?

Sitwat:abhi tak to nhi.

Azlan: unki ki tabiyat thik hai?

Sitwat:pata nhi wo kal dinner pe bhi bahot disturb lag rahi thi.khaas taur pe tab jab usne dinner table pe tumhe nhi dekha.

Azlan:koi baat ki unhone aapse?

Sitwat:nahi..aur me bhi nhi kar saki sirf tumhri wajah se tumne kyu roka mujhe azlan.

Azlan:kyu ke yahi sahi tha mom

Sitwat:par azlan Jo kuch usne Azka se bola kya wo sahi tha?

Before Azlan can say anything, he sees that Shirin is coming towards them

Azlan:mom hum is topic pe akele me baat karege,abhi wo aa rahi hai so leave it.

Sitwat also sees that Shirin is coming to them.

Sitwat:aao Shirin Aaj late ho gayi tabiyat sahi hai tumhri?

Shirin:ha..bas aise hi

Azlan: Asalamualaikum aunty

Shirin hesitantly sits on the chair.

Shirin: walekum assalam.

Azlan:aaye nashta kare.

Sitwat:Samina..chalo naashta le aao jaldi.

Samina brings breakfast

Samina:begum sahiba ek minute rukiye ga aapka BP check karna hai.

Azlan:mene already kar diya hai

Samina:accha to phir Bibi jee chale aaye aap ka check kar lu phir.

Shirin: Mashaallah Samina tum bahot jayada dhyaan rakhti ho.tumhe pata hai sitwat me jab se yaha aayi hu ye ladki roz subah nashte se pehle aur raat ko dinner se pehle aakar mujhe zarur yaad dilati hai ke me apna BP check Karu..bhulne nhi deti mujhe ek din bhi.

Samina:Bibi jee mera is me koi kamaal nhi hai wo Azka Bibi hai jo mujhe roz aapke paas ye BP ki machine lekar bhejti thi,warna mujhe kaise pata ke aapko BP hai.unhone hi mujhe sikhaya tha ke ye kaise istemaal karte hai.

Shirin is very surprised to hear this. She looks at Azlan who is silently having breakfast without saying anything.

Sitwat:Azka hai hi aisi sabka khayal rakhne wali meri pyaari beti.

Azlan:Samina par phir bhi mom aur aunty ke khaane ka khaas khayaal rakhna,jaisa daily banta hai waisa hi bana na ok

Samina:Azlan saab mujhe Azka Bibi ne sab samjha Diya hai, wo to roz nashta bhi khud banati thi, wo nhi hai isliye thoda late ho jata hai mujhse Par aap fiqar na kare wo mujhe sab samjha ke gayi hai.aur bola bhi hai ke kuch smajh na aaye to me puch lu unse.

Azlan:ok good.accha mom main nikalta hu meri ek bahot zaruri meeting hai.aur me alredy late ho gaya hu,thik hai Allah hafiz.

Sitwat:Allah hafiz

Azlan leaves and Shirin finds it very strange that he has not talked to Shirin about that incident till now.

Sitwat:Shirin nashta suru Karo

Shirin:Huh..haa.

Sitwat:kya hua hai tabiyat thik hai tumhri?

Shirin:ha bas thoda sir dard hai aur kuch nhi.

Sitwat:accha chalo phir naashta karo aur rest karo tum.

Shirin:nahi mene abhi kuch der baad bahar Jana hai,thoda sa kaam hai.

Sitwat:shaam ko chali Jana agar tabiyat sahi nhi hai to.

Shirin:nahi abhi medicine lugi to thik ho jaugi.

Both start having breakfast.

Shirin:sitwat Azka kab aa rahi hai?

Sitwat:Azka…ahm..aa jayegi jaldi wo kya hai na bahot dino ke baad jo gayi hai na apni Amma ke ghar,meri wajah se wo jaa hi nhi paati thi.

Shirin: accha.

Sitwat:tum kyu puch rahi ho? Koi kaam tha azka se?

Shirin:nahi koi kaam nhi bas aise hi pucha

Sitwat wants Shirin to talk but she does not, and silently starts having breakfast.

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Amma:Azkaa…Azkaa beta tum abhi tak so rahi ho? Aaj hospital nhi jana?

Azka:nahi Amma mene Aaj off liya hai

Amma:kyu tabiyat to thik hai na?

Azka:ha bas aise hi.

Amma:accha chalo thik hai,ab jaldi se tayyar hokar neache aa jao phir saath me nashta karege.

Azka:jee me bas aayi.

Azka takes her phone and opens it. She keeps looking at the phone for some time and then puts it back.

Azka:main kyu har roz phone is umeed me dekhti hu ke sayad aaj Azlan saab ne koi call ya MSG Kiya hoga.jab ke main janti hu aisa kabhi nhi hoga.aur jis tarah Main wapas aayi hu uske baad to mera Aisa sochna Banta bhi nhi.ek dosti ka rishta jo ban Raha tha ab to wo bhi nhi raha

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Azlan:Danish saab ye file le jaye aur study kar ke iski report kal shaam tak ready kariye.

Danish:jee bilkul

Azlan: anything else

Danish:Sir Mr.Umair ki call aayi thi,wo aapse kuch baat karna chahte the

Azlan:thik hai aap jaye me baat kar luga unse.

Danish:ok sir.

Azlan calls Umair

Umair: Hello

Azlan:tumhri call aayi thi

Umair: ha wo kuch baat karni thi project ke hawaale se.

Azlan:thik hai lunch time ke baad office aa Jana.

Umair:tum lunch karne Jaa rahe ho?

Azlan: ofcourse lunch time pe log lunch hi karte hai.

Umair:Yaar, kabhi humare saath bhi lunch Karo kitne saal ho gaye.

Azlan took a long irritated breath

Azlan:tum nhi ho na yaha warna Aaj mauka de deta.

Umair:accha agar aisi baat hai to ye lo.

Umair enters Azlan's office.

Umair: TUMNE PUKAARA AUR HUM CHALE AAYE.

Azlan keeps his hand on his face seeing him like this in his room.

Umair:kya hua ,abhi tumne hi to bola tha ke main yaha hota to tum mujhe lunch pe le jate.

Azlan:mujhe nahi idea tha ke tum yahi ho.

Umair comes and sits on the chair

Umair:Yahi to problem hai tumhe abhi tak Mera idea hi nhi hua.

Azlan: ofcourse how can I forgot that days jab mujhe tumhra idea hua tha.

Umair gets very serious after hearing this.

Umair: Listen Azlan wo bahot purani baat thi and i m…

Azlan:Umair please I'm hungry and I don't want to listen to you right now.

Azlan gets up from his chair and walks to the door. Umair is sitting there, Azlan turns.

Azlan:kya khaoge lunch main?

Umair smiles hearing this but his face is not towards Azlan. He again make a serious face and turns his chair towards Azlan.

Umair:mene Aaj mutton karahi khaani hai.wo bhi shinwari se.

Azlan:R U mad ? Me waha nhi Jaa Raha.

Umair:phir yaha order kar lete hai.

Azlan:usse kya hoga time utna hi lagega,chalo aao yaha ek paas me accha restaurant hai waha se kha Lena tum apni mutton karahi.

Umair:great but look,tum har baar ki tarah apni marzi chala rahe ho.

Azlan:tumne aana hai ya main jau?

Umair:Aa raha hu yaar!!! but it's not right.

Azlan does not say anything and goes out and Umair also goes behind him smiling.

Next scene

Shirin:shukar main Aaj jaldi aa gayi.baat suno.

P:jee Bibi jee

Shirin:yaha tum hote ho din ke waqt?

P:Bibi jee hum to yahi rahte hai din me bhi aur raat main bhi.

Shirin:accha to ye saaf safai aur baki sab tum dekhte ho yaha?

P:jee Bibi hum log hi hai.

Shirin:accha ye paise rakh lo.

P:shukriya Bibi

Shirin:bahot acche se sambhala hua hai tumne.me pakistan se bahar rahti hu,mujhe bahot accha laga.peechle hafte hum main se koi aa nahi saka phir bhi tumne sab bahot acche se saaf kiya hua tha.

P:aap kaunsi Qabar ki baat kar rahi hai?

Shirin:ye samne wali ..meri beti ki hai.

P:Bibi jee ye me nhi karta yaha to roz subah ek baji aati hai wahi ye sab karti hai.

Shirin:nahi tumhe koi galatfehmi hui hai.yaha to Azlan aata hai na jinki Biwi ki ye qabar hai.aur kaun aayega.

P:wo bhi aate hai.par ek baji bhi aati hai Roz

Shirin:roz..,!!!!!!!

P:jee wo Roz sabse pehle aakar yaha ki safai karti hai,Qabar pe pani daalti hai phoolon ki chadar bicha kar Quraan ki Tilawat karti hai.

Hearing this, Shirin starts thinking who is the one who comes to Shanaya's grave.

P:wo dekhe wo aa gayi baji

Shirin sees that the girl is none other than Azka. Azka cannot see Shirin because Shirin is standing a little far away.

Shirin:ye wo ladki hai jo yaha Roz aati hai?

P:jee

Shirin:ye Azlan ke saath aati hai?

P:nahi ye to hamesha se akeli aati hai.Azlan saab ne to mana bhi kiya tha inko jab yaha dekha tha to.par phir bhi ye aati hai.

Shirin:mana kiya tha??

P:Ha Bibi jee mene dekha tha wo inko gusse se bol rahe the.

Shirin: ye kab ki baat hai?

P:ab sahi se to mujhe yaad nhi par sayad 6 mahine purani baat hai.par ye baji peechle 6 mahino se yaha Roz aati hai.

Shirin:Azka yaha roz aati hai par kyu ? Wo bhi Azlan se shadi karne se pehle se??

Shirin is looking at Azka, who is cleaning Shanaya's grave and putting flowers on it. Shirin is shocked to see all this.She doesn't understand why Azka comes here, that too since she and Azlan were not even married. She stands for a while,She doesn't have the guts to go and talk to Azka, so she goes back

Next scene

Umair:not bad haa..yaha ki mutton karahi bhi bahot mazaydar hai.

Umair sees that Azlan is not responding and quietly having lunch.

Umair:Yar lunch pe laaye ho mujhe atlist banda thodi si baat hi kar leta hai

Azlan again does not respond.

Umair:helloo main tumse baat kar raha hu..sunayi de raha hai ya nhi?

azlan still says nothing

Umair:Accha chodo ye sab,tumhe pata hai kal me Azka se mila tha.

Azlan looks at Umair after hearing Azka's name.

Umair:look ab kaise kaan khade hue hai.

Azlan:tum meri biwi ke bare me baat kar rahe ho.

Umair:wo biwi jo ab tumhre ghar se jaa chuki hai.

Azlan:par zindagi se nahi.

Umair:waha se bhi chali jayegi.

Azlan:shut up.

Umair:Maine kya galat kaha..jab tum use apne ghar se jate hue nhi rok sake to zindagi se bhi jate hue nhi rok paoge.

Azlan:wo me manage kar luga tum apni mutton karahi pe concentrate karo

Umair:u know Azka bhi bahot acchi mutton karahi banati hai.

Azlan looks at Umair

Umair:don't say ke tumne nhi khaayi,Are main to bhul gaya tumko wo kyu khilayegi ye blessing to mere naseeb me hai.

Azlan:mere naseeb main Azka hai isliye wo aaj….

Umair:wo aaj tumhre ghar se chali gayi hai.

Azlan becomes silent after listening to Umair

Umair:Sach sun ke zubaan ke alfaaz ruk Gaye na?

Azlan:ye sach nhi hai.

Umair:accha to phir batao aakhri baar kab Azka se baat ki thi?

Azlan:it's none of your business Umair.

Umair:Ohh really??

Azlan does not give any response and starts having lunch, Umair smiles and dials the number on his phone and puts the phone on speaker.

Azka: Asalamualaikum

.Hearing Azka's voice, Azlan immediately turns his face towards the phone.Umair smrik seeing Azlan like this.

Azka: Hello …Umair…

Umair: Asalamualaikum Azka

Azka: walekum assalam

Umair:kaisi ho Azka ?

Azlan is hearing Azka's voice after so many days, he is feeling good, he also wants to know how is Azka.he is waiting for azka's reply

Azka:main…main thik hu.

Umair:accha awaaz se lag nhi raha..?sab thik hai.

Azka:jee sab thik hai,main bas bahar aayi Hui thi.

Azlan wonders why she is not in the hospital at this time. He gestures to Umair to ask why he is out.but umair ignores him

Umair:aaj to aapne leave lee hai na hospital se?

Azlan feels bad to hear that Umair knows that she is on leave today but Azlan does not know.

Azka:jee main Qabaristaan aayii Hui thi,bas ghar jaa rahi hu.aapko kuch kaam tha?

Umair:kuch khaas nhi bas wo aapko bolna tha mera bahot dil kar raha hai aapke haath ki bani hui mutton karahi khane ka.

Azlan gets more angry after hearing this, and Umair enjoying seeing him like this.

Azka:accha to koi baat nhi kal aap hospital aa rahe hai na aunty ke saath,main aapke liye bana ke le aaugi.

Umair:are that's so sweet of you Azka..tum sach main bahot acchi ho Thank you.

Azka:Thank you ki koi baat nhi.

Umair:ye to tumhri mohabbat hai Azka,warna i know tumhre haath ki mutton karahi sabke naseeb Main nhi hoti.

Azlan gets irritated seeing Umair. Then he hears Azka's laugh.

Azka:haha..Aisi koi baat nhi hai.

Azlan himself smiles hearing Azka laughing like this. After so many days he has heard Azka's laugh.

Umair:chalo phir kal milte hai.khayaal rakhna Allah hafiz

Azka:jee Inshaallah Allah hafiz.

Umair disconnects the call and looks at Azlan who is still thinking of Azka and is feeling happy.

Umair:Lagta hai koi apni biwi ki awaaz sunkar bahot khush hai.

Azlan comes out of his thoughts and looks at Umair

Azlan:ha Aaj pure ek hafte baad mene azka ki awaaz suni.all because of you.

Umair:don't look at me like this..ye favour mene sirf isliye ki kyu ke tumne mujhe lunch karwaya hai.otherwise u know me tumne uske aaspaas bhi na aane du.

Azlan:Ye tumhri galatfehmi hai umair.Is dunia main me hi wo waahid shakhs hu jo azka ke kareeb aa sakta hai.

Umair:accha agar ye baat hai to kyu nhi kar rahe usko calls ? kyu use khud se door kiya hua hai?

Azlan does not answer. And Umair keeps looking at him.

Azlan:i m done main bahar gaadi main tumhra wait kar raha hu.

Azlan gets up and puts his credit card on the table. He starts to leave. Then Umair calls him.

Umair:Azlan wait..

Umair comes to him

Azlan:now what??

Umair:nothing i m full ..aur waise bhi kal to phir se khana hai Mutton karahi Azka ke haatho ka bana hua.

Azlan controls his anger and walks towards the parking lot without saying anything and Umair is happy to see him like this.

IN THE NIGHT

Shirin is in her room and she is still thinking about Azka.

Shirin:Azka mujhse itna kuch sunkar bhi khamosh rahi.usne palat kar mujhe koi jawab nahi Diya,aur azlan ne mujhse koi sawaal nahi kiya, jab ke us din usne sabkuch dekha aur suna tha.main janti hu mera behaviour Azka ke saath sahi nhi tha aur phir bhi wo khamosh hai aur Shanaya ke qabar pe uska Roz aana..mujhe kuch samjh nhi aaraha,me kitna kuch keh gayi usko par wo phir bhi..wo ladki jab se gayi hai mujhe ek pal ke liye sukoon nahi hai dil pe ek bojh sa hai,mene galat kar diya uske saath.

Then there is a knock in Shirin's bedroom. She opens the door and sees Azlan standing in front of her.

Azlan:I m sorry mene is waqt aapko disturb kiya but mene aapse ek zaruri baat karni hai

Shirin has a feeling that Azlan will talk to her about Azka.

Shirin:nahi nahi…it's ok aao andar aao

Azlan enters the room and sits on the chair.

Shirin:Azlan beta main khud tumse baat karna chaah rahi thi,me yaha aayi aur phir jo kuch bhi us din..

Azlan stops Shirin before she can say anything.

Azlan:Aunty mene aapse aapke ghar ke baare main baat karni thi.

Shirin is very surprised to hear this, she did not think that Azlan has come here because of this.

Azlan:main janta hu aap ye ghar sell nahi karna chahti hai par aapko is waqt koi aur option nahi nazar aa rahi.

Shirin:Azlan dekho humari pehle bhi is topic pe baat hui hai.chahti to main bhi yahi thi ke ye ghar sell karne ki zarurat na pade but tum jante ho mere paas ek yahi ek property hai aur mujhe is waqt waha apna ghar lene ke liye paiso ki zarurat hai.dekho beta agar tum mujhe wahi sab bolne aaye ho to sorry beta me tumse kisi qisam ki koi help nhi le sakti.

Azlan:aunty main janta hu par ek tarika hai jisse aapki help bhi ho jayegi aur aapka Ghar bhi aapke paas hi rahega.

Shirin:kaise ?

Azlan:aap wo ghar mujhe sell kar de.

Shirin:tumhe?

Azlan:jee, aap mujhse kisi tarah ki help Lena nahi chahti i can understand but aunty aise wo ghar aap mujhe sell kar degi to aapki aur meri hum dono ki help ho jayegi.

Shirin:Azlan…ye tum..

Azlan:wo ghar aaj bhi waisa hi hai jaisa Shanaya chod ke gayi aur aage bhi waisa hi rahega

Shirin:Azlan beta main..main..how can I mean to say …ye baat ek tum hi soch sakte ...

Azlan:MAINE NAHI AZKA NE SOCHI THI YE BAAT AUTHOR'S NOTE (part 48 ke start me AZKAAN ki phone pe conversation ye thi)

Shirin looks at him in astonishment and he smiles

Azlan:jee aunty wo Azka hai jisne mujhe ye idea Diya tha,usne kaha tha ke.wo ghar main Shanaya ka bachpan aur sari zindagi guzari hai.wo nahi chahti thi ke us ghar ko koi aur khareede aur tod de.wo Shanaya ki yaade hai.wo yaade jo aapke saath thi mere saath thi,Aur azka nhi chahti thi ke hum dono ki Shanaya se Judi Hui kisi bhi yaad ko koi Tod de.ye Shanaya ka Haq hai aur wo ye Haq kabhi kisi aur ko lene nahi de sakti.

Shirin is very surprised and embarrassed to hear all this,she lowers her face

Azlan:bas ek yahi baat karni thi maine aapse.

Azlan looks at Shirin but Shirin doesn't make eye contact with him.What Azlan had come to explain to Shirin, he explained to Shirin without even speaking to her

Azlan:Chalta hu, aap aaram kare good night

Shirin is very embarrassed to hear all this, she remembers all the things she said to Azka.

Shirin:main…Maine itna kuch bol diya usko aur wo ..wo meri Shanaya ki yaado tak ko Sambhal ke bethi hui hai aur maine usse ye kaha ke wo meri beti ka Haq le rahi hai,Ya Allah Mene ye kya kar diya mene use uske aur Azlan Ke rishtey tak ko lekar kitna kuch bol diya.,wo ladki meri Mari Hui beti ke rishtey ko itni ahemiyat de rahi thi aur me use uske shohar uske kamre tak ka taana maar rahi thi.

Shirin is remembering all the things she said to Azka and crying.

Next Day

Azka comes to the hospital.and goes to the canteen area

Azka: Asalamualaikum Ayesha.

Ayesha: Walekum assalam Dr. Azka kaisi hai aap?

Azka:main bilkul thik.

Ayesha:aaj aap late ho gayi?

Azka:ha bas thoda sa kaam tha ghar pe.patient to nahi aaye na?

Ayesha:no no aapki appointments 12 baje ke baad ki hai saari.aur abhi 11 baje hai.

Azka:accha sune ye khana hai ye aap canteen me rakh le jab lunch time hoga to plzz garam kar ke mere room me le aaiyega.

Ayesha:aap fiqar na kare me lunch time pe le aaugi.

Azka:accha Dr.umar aa gaye round se?

Ayesha:nahi wo aaj round pe nahi gaye.

Azka:kyu?

Ayesha: emergency ward main ek case aaya hai to wo waha Gaye hue hai.

Azka:emergency ward main?par dr.umar kyu gaye?

Ayesha:wo Dr.Azka unke kisi janne wala ka case aaya hai.

Azka:accha kaun?

Ayesha:koi MR.AZLAN AHMED HAI.

Hearing this, Azka looks at Ayesha.

Azka:kya naam liya tumne?

Ayesha:AZLAN AHMED.

Azka gets worried after hearing Azlan's name and starts running towards the emergency ward. As soon as she reaches, she sees Dr.Umar

Azka:Dr.Umar wo..wo..AZLAN SAAB..yaha..wo…AZLAN SAAB.

Umar:Azka ye Azlan ki watch aur mobile…

Azka sees Dr. Umar has Azlan's watch and mobile with blood on it. Azka sees that and starts crying.

Azka:Dr.umar kaha hai wo?mene abhi unko dekhna hai.wo thik hai na..?

before Dr. Umar can say anything Azka hears Azlan's voice,She turns around and sees Azlan talking to someone in the corridor

Azlan: excuse me pharmacy kis jagah hai.

Azka:AZLAN SAAB!!!!!

Azlan hears Azka's voice and looks at her.Azka comes running towards Azlan and hugs him tightly



End of part 22

Edited by sanabmw - 1 years ago
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