Ice Cream...U Scream - TS Series_You complete me - Completed

Thank you so much for putting it out... it needs a wider audience for appreciating how beautiful this is. 🤗

Trult heartbreaking.... reading it again and couldnt shake off the feeling.

You are a master of expressing emotions through your beautiful words.

I cry for Sai... Please make her better and bring back the V we know 😔

This was very emotional. I am so angry.

So sad for Sai. How much she tried? It’s so unfair

Can’t wait for the next part. I want Sai to be happy atleast in fanfictions, she deserves the best. Her last outburst got me very emotional.

I want a reformed Virat , the Virat now in this part doesn’t deserve her. But she leaving now is the best for her, it’s so painful and cruel to see what she has to see when she isn’t equally included. How can makers be this cruel even for drama after all they make Sai go through

I still want to see a reformed Virat with Sai atleast in fanfiction, even if they are separate for some time .

The pain u convey through the words! Amazing👏

This is not the Sai we wished for ..this was not the way by which she leaves CN! This is really heart wrenching... 💔

Thank u for the tag! Will be glad to get an update on this soon!

Sherry!! What a beautiful story. I had to grab tissue as I could not stop my tears.

Why oh why did Sai bring Pakhi back? And doesn't Virat get it? Why is he sharing thing with Pakhi and hugging her? Why he is hurting his wife that he loves a lot? I truly hope he is a logical reason for It and he share it with Sai. And also he acknowledges that he was being aloof with her and should make heaven and earth together to reassure her she Is the one he loves. And please make him stay aloof from Pakhi..and keep him and Sai miles and miles away from Pakhi. I want to see Virat actually showing his love and showering lot of attention to Sai and being with her in sharing her pain. ❤️

Your choice of words for conveying the emotions of the characters is excellent.

Eagerly waiting for the next part

It's very emotional. I can't imagine sai going all this pain. I can't stop crying. Very heart touching. Want to know what is going in virat's mind?This will definitely will happen in ghum.

Very well written sherry

Waiting for next update.

Thanks for the tag.

Heart breaking but your build up was very good. So it feels like the right decision.

Waiting for the next part..

Oh! That was sad

But Virat's maun vrat and social distancing was testing Sai's patience

As usual I will comment when I read the complete story... I can't handke heartbreak... eagerly waiting for next part...