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Since nothing like this will ever happen and I was imagining scenarios to keep myself away from disappointment, here it is..
Since nothing like this will ever happen and I was imagining scenarios to keep myself away from disappointment, here it is..
Part-1
It's my engagement day finally.. I have to go out, stand infront of everyone and commit to someone else.. I should be removing the ring he made me wear while promising himself to me.. Why didn't he do anything to stop it yet! Why didn't he go and say his parents that he won't divorce his wife, he won't let the girl he loves get engaged to any guy!
Did he ever love me or I just assumed it by myself? He said he loved me and made me wear the ring, maybe he was just pitying me! He said he loved me that morning but maybe he was just thanking me for being there for him.. If he loved me, my presence wouldn't have become so unbearable for him that he would have been trying multiple ways to send me away.. Maybe he will be actually happy when I go away!
I could hear the window panes being opened and knew it was him..
"Meet chalo mere saath.. Hume sab kuch jaldi solve karna hoga.. "
"Sab kuch already thik ho chuka hai.. Papaji dekh lenge.. Hume kuch karne ki jarurat nahi.. "
"Meet tum samajh rahi ho.. Aaj tumhari engagement.. Wo ladka.. Wo ladka tumhe aaj.."
"Angoothi pehnayega.. Yahi hota hai engagement mai.. Isme kya galat hai? "
"Meet kyu aisa kar rahi ho? Patni ho tum meri.. Hum pyaar karte hai ek dusre se.. Hum ek hai Meet.. Kaise tum kisi aur se sagai kar sakti ho?"
His words now seemed hollow like his multiple promises and declarations of love earlier to me.. The words which made me stronger during my lowest, made me feel belonged and cared for hurt my ears now.. They were just conditional and somewhat fake just like his attachment, adoration or love!
"Dekh manne in sab baato mai time waste nahi karna hai.. Abhi mujhe nahane jaana hai qki aadhe ghante mai parlour waali aane waali hai mujhe taiyaar karne.. Tu please jaa yahan se.. "
"Meet! Tumhe sach mai ye engagement karni hai? "
"Haan isiliye to haan bola tha maine is rishte ko! "
I may have started this as a plan to woo him back but the past few days have taught me what I will be in this house.. An unwanted guest forever who could be thrown out anytime.. I never really belonged to him after all this time.. He may pity me and say few words in my defence now and then according to his convenience but mostly I will be left alone to be abused by his mother and sister.. I didn't know where this new relationship would take me, but hopefully I won't be made to fight for my basic rights of food and shelter..
"Ab idhar khada q hai? Jaa.. Mujhe nahana hai phir taiyaar bhi hona hai.. "
" Abhi divorce hua nahi hai hamara.. Abhi bhi tum meri patni ho aur ye hamara kamra hai.. Nahi nikal sakti tum mujhe yahan se.. "
"Thik hai baitha rahe.. Mai jaa rahi hu bathroom agar tujhe use nahi karna ho.. "
"Aur agar mai bolu mujhe do ghanto ke liye bathroom use karna hai to? "
I knew my fiesty little wife was hidden somewhere inside.. She wouldn't be able to resist a challenge that too from me.. She would fight me for her rights in my life and our room.. Remind me of our vows and my duties.. I just needed to bring her out and then we would go talk to dad together.. Everything will be fine soon..
"Thik hai.. "
She just took her stuffs and went out of the room.. When did she become so amicable? Why did it seem like I just wasn't important anymore to argue! When did I stop existing for her!
Part-1
It's my engagement day finally.. I have to go out, stand infront of everyone and commit to someone else.. I should be removing the ring he made me wear while promising himself to me.. Why didn't he do anything to stop it yet! Why didn't he go and say his parents that he won't divorce his wife, he won't let the girl he loves get engaged to any guy!
Did he ever love me or I just assumed it by myself? He said he loved me and made me wear the ring, maybe he was just pitying me! He said he loved me that morning but maybe he was just thanking me for being there for him.. If he loved me, my presence wouldn't have become so unbearable for him that he would have been trying multiple ways to send me away.. Maybe he will be actually happy when I go away!
I could hear the window panes being opened and knew it was him..
"Meet chalo mere saath.. Hume sab kuch jaldi solve karna hoga.. "
"Sab kuch already thik ho chuka hai.. Papaji dekh lenge.. Hume kuch karne ki jarurat nahi.. "
"Meet tum samajh rahi ho.. Aaj tumhari engagement.. Wo ladka.. Wo ladka tumhe aaj.."
"Angoothi pehnayega.. Yahi hota hai engagement mai.. Isme kya galat hai? "
"Meet kyu aisa kar rahi ho? Patni ho tum meri.. Hum pyaar karte hai ek dusre se.. Hum ek hai Meet.. Kaise tum kisi aur se sagai kar sakti ho?"
His words now seemed hollow like his multiple promises and declarations of love earlier to me.. The words which made me stronger during my lowest, made me feel belonged and cared for hurt my ears now.. They were just conditional and somewhat fake just like his attachment, adoration or love!
"Dekh manne in sab baato mai time waste nahi karna hai.. Abhi mujhe nahane jaana hai qki aadhe ghante mai parlour waali aane waali hai mujhe taiyaar karne.. Tu please jaa yahan se.. "
"Meet! Tumhe sach mai ye engagement karni hai? "
"Haan isiliye to haan bola tha maine is rishte ko! "
I may have started this as a plan to woo him back but the past few days have taught me what I will be in this house.. An unwanted guest forever who could be thrown out anytime.. I never really belonged to him after all this time.. He may pity me and say few words in my defence now and then according to his convenience but mostly I will be left alone to be abused by his mother and sister.. I didn't know where this new relationship would take me, but hopefully I won't be made to fight for my basic rights of food and shelter..
"Ab idhar khada q hai? Jaa.. Mujhe nahana hai phir taiyaar bhi hona hai.. "
" Abhi divorce hua nahi hai hamara.. Abhi bhi tum meri patni ho aur ye hamara kamra hai.. Nahi nikal sakti tum mujhe yahan se.. "
"Thik hai baitha rahe.. Mai jaa rahi hu bathroom agar tujhe use nahi karna ho.. "
"Aur agar mai bolu mujhe do ghanto ke liye bathroom use karna hai to? "
I knew my fiesty little wife was hidden somewhere inside.. She wouldn't be able to resist a challenge that too from me.. She would fight me for her rights in my life and our room.. Remind me of our vows and my duties.. I just needed to bring her out and then we would go talk to dad together.. Everything will be fine soon..
"Thik hai.. "
She just took her stuffs and went out of the room.. When did she become so amicable? Why did it seem like I just wasn't important anymore to argue! When did I stop existing for her!
Thank you dear 😘 💕
Cont with part 2 ,3 and more
i didn't know where this new relationship would take me, but hopefully I won't be made to fight for my basic rights of food and shelter..
this line touched me seriously , how meety is suffering to claim her basic rights is so humiliating
Jiggy please writer ko hata k tuk Beth jao. 😭. Thank you so much for writing this. I love when any Ahlawat suffers. And if it is MA toh sabse accha lagte hai .Except Ragini and Isha.
Part-1
It's my engagement day finally.. I have to go out, stand infront of everyone and commit to someone else.. I should be removing the ring he made me wear while promising himself to me.. Why didn't he do anything to stop it yet! Why didn't he go and say his parents that he won't divorce his wife, he won't let the girl he loves get engaged to any guy!
Did he ever love me or I just assumed it by myself? He said he loved me and made me wear the ring, maybe he was just pitying me! He said he loved me that morning but maybe he was just thanking me for being there for him.. If he loved me, my presence wouldn't have become so unbearable for him that he would have been trying multiple ways to send me away.. Maybe he will be actually happy when I go away!
I could hear the window panes being opened and knew it was him..
"Meet chalo mere saath.. Hume sab kuch jaldi solve karna hoga.. "
"Sab kuch already thik ho chuka hai.. Papaji dekh lenge.. Hume kuch karne ki jarurat nahi.. "
"Meet tum samajh rahi ho.. Aaj tumhari engagement.. Wo ladka.. Wo ladka tumhe aaj.."
"Angoothi pehnayega.. Yahi hota hai engagement mai.. Isme kya galat hai? "
"Meet kyu aisa kar rahi ho? Patni ho tum meri.. Hum pyaar karte hai ek dusre se.. Hum ek hai Meet.. Kaise tum kisi aur se sagai kar sakti ho?"
His words now seemed hollow like his multiple promises and declarations of love earlier to me.. The words which made me stronger during my lowest, made me feel belonged and cared for hurt my ears now.. They were just conditional and somewhat fake just like his attachment, adoration or love!
"Dekh manne in sab baato mai time waste nahi karna hai.. Abhi mujhe nahane jaana hai qki aadhe ghante mai parlour waali aane waali hai mujhe taiyaar karne.. Tu please jaa yahan se.. "
"Meet! Tumhe sach mai ye engagement karni hai? "
"Haan isiliye to haan bola tha maine is rishte ko! "
I may have started this as a plan to woo him back but the past few days have taught me what I will be in this house.. An unwanted guest forever who could be thrown out anytime.. I never really belonged to him after all this time.. He may pity me and say few words in my defence now and then according to his convenience but mostly I will be left alone to be abused by his mother and sister.. I didn't know where this new relationship would take me, but hopefully I won't be made to fight for my basic rights of food and shelter..
"Ab idhar khada q hai? Jaa.. Mujhe nahana hai phir taiyaar bhi hona hai.. "
" Abhi divorce hua nahi hai hamara.. Abhi bhi tum meri patni ho aur ye hamara kamra hai.. Nahi nikal sakti tum mujhe yahan se.. "
"Thik hai baitha rahe.. Mai jaa rahi hu bathroom agar tujhe use nahi karna ho.. "
"Aur agar mai bolu mujhe do ghanto ke liye bathroom use karna hai to? "
I knew my fiesty little wife was hidden somewhere inside.. She wouldn't be able to resist a challenge that too from me.. She would fight me for her rights in my life and our room.. Remind me of our vows and my duties.. I just needed to bring her out and then we would go talk to dad together.. Everything will be fine soon..
"Thik hai.. "
She just took her stuffs and went out of the room.. When did she become so amicable? Why did it seem like I just wasn't important anymore to argue! When did I stop existing for her!
thank you so much for writing this. That line about basic rights touched me..I would love a scenario where she actually walks out of everything that is linked to this family including this new rishta. She is self sufficient and independent and doesn’t need a guy to provide her basic requirements. I would love to see her walk out of everything literally at the last moment..with a dialogue..I don’t need to run but I am capable enough to walk away with my held high!!! Let Babita faint!
Originally posted by: Anjureads
Lovely Jiggy... will this have more parts?
Yes I have some scenes in my mind which I want to pen down.. 1 or more I dunno..
I plan to.. This serial won't give me anything except clownery.. 🥲
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