AbhiRa FF- Manmarziyaan ( A/N on Pg 29) - Page 3

Wowwie Zenu.... 🥳

This is so so so nice to read..... The entire kidnapping scene was so very interesting........

Muje ek doubt .... Is Akshara the police officer who helped neil? Then its total wow......I really wanna see that 😉

Siya.... Hayee.... Cute daughter of shefali and parth.....

Neil tho hey hi very sweet....

Now cant wait for the next chapter....

Go ahead zenu.....

Wow Zenu...what a first chapter... kidnapping and a cliffhanger... Akshu as a police officer and Abhi a doctor... what a combination this will be.... I never expected Akshu to be a police officer... I'm pleasantly surprised and eagerly waiting to read more... this is very interesting...

P.S. Didn't Harsh and the rest of the Birla's know Akshu was a Goenka... they are after all in the Goenka household....

Wow nicely done,,,interesting take…..waiting for to ready the next part…

Very interesting 👌looking forward to the next chapter 💖

Interesting concept and first chapter

Originally posted by: mtina0207

ARe u Serious Zen.

baby what are you waiting for.... this is super interesting...Shuru Ho ja meri Jaan and kar fateh Maidan

wow, am super excited. do not forget to tag me

dono Jagah pls (This surely does'nt read right)🤣

❤️

First chapter is up brooo 🤗

Originally posted by: firewings_diya

Will surely read it

Originally posted by: daffodil153

Amazing and refreshing at the same time! (Even though papa birla never changes!!)

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Loving the story Zenu..

I'm glad you liked prologue and first chapter

Thank you❤

Originally posted by: beanstalk04

Wow! Superb start zenab 😃

Maja ah gaya read kar ke.

Parth aur shefali ki daughter Siya and uski kidnapping.

Yeh story toh jabardasth hai.👍

Now I have understood why Sam Nominated your name on reader choice award cause you deserve it. The way you have written ch 1 ii actually grab my attention on the story.

Now i am looking forward for ch2🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳😍😍

Shukriya dost kahani likhane ke liye 🙏🙏🙏🙏

Thank you so much for you appreciation it means a lot ❤❤❤

I'm happy to know that your enjoying it🤗🤗