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Posted: 2 years ago

WAH WAH ! Chinmayi i am so impressed..i loved it….

Shappu ke pyaar ne sab ko writers bana diya hai….


I loved it ke khadus ko realzae hua ke woh wrong hai…and all the family want HIM to go manao and bring her back…(lol if i were khadus i would be jealous of appu,,,since they love her more 😉) and raat ko hi…control dear …but teddy bina dono ko chain kaha…eagerly waiting for the next part…

Thanks you dear…

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Posted: 2 years ago

That was so quick and good Chinmayi! Ab Khadus apni shist ko kaise manaye!


If this is what we get after separation, I am totally ok with the separation track! 🤪


Keep them coming Chinmayi!!

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: ishqi

Please write! I'm sure it will be brilliant. I am always up to read any TR story! can't wait!


yes please do write!!! I am up for reading stories of TR! Don’t worry, you will be great!

Edited by arshia786 - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Hii friends 🤗

to aaj mai first time apna dimag chalakar kuch likhne ki try kar rahi hu I hope aap sab boar na ho jaye bas 😆


Title - " Reunion of shappu " part 1


To shashank ko finally Appu ke letter se exact reason pata chal gaya hai, ki woh ghar chhodkar kyu chali gayi suddenly bina kisi ko bhi kuch bataye. Shashank gussa hai bahut jyada but Appu se nahi, khud se!

S : kitne bade pagal ho tum shashank Kanetkar 😡 kukki right bolta hai , mera brain bahut sharp hai, but heart soft nahi hai. Pyaar to maine kar liya Apurva se... But kabhi bhi use samjh hi nahi paya. Har bar apni bato se use hurt kar deta hu mai. Fir use manata hu, woh itni innocent hai ki easily mere harsh words bhul bhi jati hai. Par mai ghadha ek hi mistake again and again repeat karta hu.

Kya jarurat thi muze, babi aattya ki shadi me sabke samne Apurva se kehne ki , " Tum jaisi childish ladki se kon pyar karega " mere ek sentence se Apurva ko kitni badi missuderstanding ho gayi hai. Use lagta hai ki mai kabhi bhi usse pyar kar hi nahi sakta, kyunki mai us Netra se pyaar karta hu!

Apurva ko lagta hai ki woh Deepali hai jo Netra aur mere beech me aa gayi hai. Aur is liye hum do so called lovers ko milane ke liye ye ladki ghar chhodkar chali gayi.

Abtak muze lagta tha ki Apurva muzse jyada meri family ko pasand karti hai. Agar kabhi galti se choose karna pad jaye to woh definitely meri family ko choose karegi. Kyunki Apurva shadi ke pehle se bolti thi ki she loves my family and hates me. Par aaj meri khushi ke liye, mai Netra se shadi kar saku is liye Apurva meri family ko chhodkar chali gayi hai. Us family ko chhodkar chali gayi, jiske bina woh 2 minute bhi nahi reh pati 😭

(phone me Appu ki photo dekhte hue) Par shisht is mahanta ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Kyunki meri khushi sirf tum me hi hai. Aur ye bat tumhe samjhane ke liye mai aa raha hu.. Tumhara khadus aa raha hai shisht!! I know tum bahut nakhare dikhane wali ho, but mai bhi apni ziddi bayko ka ziddi navra hu. Tumhe apne sath wapas lekar hi aaunga!!

" Fasle aate jate rahe shisht

Pyaar lekin nahi hoga kam "

Shashank hall me aata hai. Sab pareshan hai, dukhi hai kyunki Appu ghar me nahi hai.

S : Dada kaka trust me, jis reason ki wajah se Apurva ghar chhodkar chali gayi hai. Woh sach nahi hai. Mai Netra se pyaar nahi karta, shadi se pehle bhi nahi karta tha aur ab to possible hi nahi hai.

Kukki : kyu possible nahi hai?

S : kyunki ab meri wife Apurva hai!!

Sua Aai : Sirf bolo mat, apni wife ki respect karna bhi sikho jara 😡

Vithhu baba : shashank tali ek hath se nahi bajti. Agar Appu ghar chhodkar chali gayi hai usne itna bada decision liya hai to kuch to reason hoga na

S : ha ek galti hui hai muzse. But trust me mai sab kuch thik kar dunga aur aapki ladli bahu ko wapas lekar aaunga I promise.

Mai : Ghar ki laxmi dukhi hokar ghar chhodkar gayi hai shashank ye sahi nahi hai. Tumhe jo karna hai Karo aur Appu ko wapas lekar aao.

Dada kaka : shashank tum dono husband -wife ke beech me jo bhi hua ho, par us wajah se hamari bahu ghar se dur nahi rehni chahiye.

S : don't worry, mai Apurva ko wapas liye bina ghar nahi aaunga.

Mai : shashank jaise tum is ghar ke bete ho waise hi Appu bhi is ghar ki bahu nahi beti hi hai! Is liye hum sab chahte hai ki tum dono ek sath hi ghar wapas aa jao jaldi se

Kukki : Are don't worry, ab Dr.shashank Kanetkar ne decide kar liya hai to woh apni bayko ko wapas lekar hi aayenge 👍🏼sab happy ho jate hai ☺

Shashank jane lagta hai

Sua Aai : Are itni rat ko nahi kal jana beta

S : nahi Aai. Abhi nahi to kabhi nahi... I mean abhi jyada rat nahi hui hai. Mai jaldi se jakar aata hu

Amey : Jane do use, waise bhi ab khadus apni shisht ke bina reh nahi payega 🤭

Sab ke sath : All the best 👍🏼Appu ko liye bina wapas mat aana 😆

S : jo hukum Appu lovers 😊

Next part kal post karungi friends 🤗



loved it!!! Please continue writing—-you write so well

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Posted: 2 years ago

Arpita tagging you so you can add this to our first page…thank you…

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: jollyismyname

Arpita tagging you so you can add this to our first page…thank you…

Ignore me…my bad…you did it before I REALIZE. SORRY
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Posted: 2 years ago

Btw, I just saw Appu's insta...guess they are starting Marathi version Smart Jodi? and vittu baba and sua aai are part of it? I love that they are a couple in real life too...somehow makes the K family even sweeter on screen.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Now i feel like i CANT go on with my day, until i read the next chapter Chinmayi is writing….yeah shappu ne and stories ne nikamma kar diya hai….

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Posted: 2 years ago

Thanks friends for sach a nice response ❤️

I tried my best and I will post second part soon 👍🏼

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Posted: 2 years ago

Waah Chinmayi..

Shappu ne sabhi ko writer bana diya😊

keep it up👍🏼 waiting for next part

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