Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG FF - Indebted Part 45 May 19 Pg 152 New Thread Link Pg 1, 153 - Page 5

khwaishfan thumbnail
Anniversary 16 Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 0 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 2 years ago

Prologue

Captivating prologue.... Amazingly written

Geet reminisces the past

so now Geet will be working in Maan's company

she was many reasons for taking the offer

well Brij wants her to refuse the offer

Brij is angry at his selfish family while Meera is worried about Maan

seems like they know what Geet did to Maan

hate how Ranoo complains about Maan

at least Brij spoke up for Maan

dismayed that Geet used Maan as an experiment tool after watching those adult videos

sad what Maan went through 

he was indeed helpless as he was indebted to her family

eager to know why he was indebted to her family? 

Edited by khwaishfan - 2 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

1104

Views

68031

Users

60

Likes

3089

Frequent Posters

khwaishfan thumbnail
Anniversary 16 Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 0 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 2 years ago

Chapter 1

Intense update.... Well written

Seems like the main reason for Geet to accept the offer is Maan

Hope she does not plan to do the same as she did in their childhood

sad that she blackmailed him to get her way

Poor Maan was helpless 

hate how she used him....

feeling for Maan

at least he controlled around her

dismayed how Ranoo accused Maan

so Brij knew what Geet did to Maan

why did he not speak up and allow Geet to continue these acts

upset how Geet relished when he pleaded for her help to cover her misdeeds

why did she not realise what she was doing to Maan

Gosh Maan faced more severe acts

now she misses Maan

Maan left and she is unable to understand why he left

why does she think she owns Maan?

khwaishfan thumbnail
Anniversary 16 Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 0 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 2 years ago

Chapter 2

Marevlous update... Perfectly written 

Liked how Maan pampers his dadima

glad that Maan has reached heights of success and now owns Khurana Enterprise

her concern for Maan is understandable

Maan ensures that Annie and his dadima get the best 

why was Maan staying with Geet's family?

sad that Maan, Annie and his dadima were separated

at least she knows that Maan went through so much 

alas he emerged a winner

she yet to know what Geet did to Maan

well she is indebted to Geet's family

Annie also suffered but not much than Maan

now they are all content and Maan takes care of them

adore the bond between Maan and his dadima

Maan is indeed busy and keeps travelling

of cos he wants to forget the past and distracts himself

wonder how he will react when he realises Geet is the business advisor

as expected Maan also wants Annie to work with him

great that Adi is efficient

Annie will be welcome in grand way


update soon 

tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 2 years ago



Chapter 3: How it all started


Please like and comment dearies.🤗

Edited by tellyme - 2 years ago
Alamelu thumbnail
Anniversary 18 Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 0 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 2 years ago

??? Chapter empty 

tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 2 years ago
jasika08 thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 0 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 0 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 2 years ago

Nice update 

Waiting for next update.....

heycookie thumbnail
Posted: 2 years ago

thanks for updating...commented😃

jeyanthi123 thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 0 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 2 years ago

Superb update 

Loved it 

Maan has gone through so much past and raj s handed over the responsibility of maan to mohi even mohi s jealous of raj now his son s under mohi he s behaving like a superior ..

They gave maan geets responsibility..

Continue soon

Waiting 

sanum23 thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 0 Thumbnail Anniversary 12 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 2 years ago

On blog 

   ...     Pt 2,3