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Posted: 5 months ago

The story is fine 


But how its potrayed is really bad 


The main lead is shown voilent like daar SRK sometimes when he follow niyati with rod


Dora pada toh which mentally sick behaves so


Only criminals behave so


They even spoilt Abhimanyus dad chracacter by making him send niyati dad to jail 


What is wrong with writers?


Either abhimanyu is mentally sick but good guy


Or he is crazy after niyati like SRK in bazigaar or daar 


Cannot be both at same time


Mentally ill people cannot plan and plot like abhimanyu did actually some episodes back


Neither they can behave so normal as abhi in wedding party?


They should have shown abhimanyu getting better than niyati marraige fix to anand it would look more logical 


Than abhimanyu again going mad seeing her getting married 

Posted: 4 months ago

writers should have taken time to develop abhi-niyati bond first.... before those frequent attacks ...


 at hospital during abhi's treatment & niyati  helping him in searching home nearby... to stay during/after treatment... he is improving...... and... then both of them developing feeling, abhi getting friendly with niyati parents...... and after a while these dramas of wedding functions...  & disclose childhood relationship after abhi-niyati run away from niyati wedding or similar lines...


In starting, for catching trp they could have added wedding functions of someone else from hospital staff... that friend of niyati... or someone else.. where abhi-niyati both are invited...

Edited by A4Anjie - 4 months ago
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