Arshi TS: The Other Woman (Final Part updated on Pg 4) - Page 4

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by coderlady


He stayed and listened. He owed her that and glad he delivered. They are together and that is what matters now.


Yeah I am not a big fond of misunderstanding that happen because one fail to stop and listen for a moment . Because if you are in a relationship of any kind, you owe it to each other to listen 

Posted: 2 years ago

Hi, just started your story and it looks promising. Will read on and comment. 

Posted: 2 years ago

Very well written and the way you depicted the airport scene is so refreshinng. All the scenes you reimagined, the attempted suicide, the revealation to Akash is so nicely written. The show did not do justice to anymof the above. Thanks for this 

Posted: 2 years ago

Any rewrite of that track is better than how they showed it. My biggest qualm is that literally if they changed the background score of Khushi imagining the impact of her death, it would've made the whole thing more angsty and realistic! 


Adding this fic to my list. Read the first part and absolutely wonderful!

Posted: 2 years ago

Very well written, liked your take 

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by BlurredLines



Yeah I am not a big fond of misunderstanding that happen because one fail to stop and listen for a moment . Because if you are in a relationship of any kind, you owe it to each other to listen 

Nita, this is probably the wrong thread to ask this but please help us out 🥺


Can you please comment “I’ve been colored by Team Jailor" on this thread? smiley42

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5283624

It's for WD's game 🥺

Do me a favour, let's play Holi 🥳

You've been colored by Team Jailor smiley40

Edited by Bee222 - 2 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by Pdrover


Very well written, liked your take 


Thank you . Glad you liked it ❤️

Posted: 1 years ago

I read all parts at once and loved the ending

Also loved how you explored Payal and Akash relationship too.



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