Posted: 2 years ago

She lit the diya in front of her world, her parents. 

Every time she thought of them, there was both  

smile in her mind and pain in her heart

Smile from the memories she made and 

Pain from the one she couldn't. 


But today there was no warmth,just the fear of losing a loved one once again gripping her


Asking the question again for the millionth time, 

'Why'? , 'why did you leave me'? 

was I not a good daughter? 

they had not left her that day

they could have guide her today. 


chaos in her mind , 

confusion in her thoughts, 

anxious in her breathe, 

as tears rolled down her eyes. 

she was supposed to chose one of them, 

between her sister and the love of her life. 

Two people she loved with her everything

How was she supposed to chose? 




Hello guys!😆

Mahi here, 🙋 I am new in this forum.First I thought let's remain a silent reader but then I thought I shouldn't miss the chance to make frds.😃   So here I am.

Let me know ur thoughts on this piece.😳

Edited by scintillaxx - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

MAAAHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by scintillaxx


She lit the diya in front of her world, her parents. 

Every time she thought of them, there was both  

smile in her mind and pain in her heart

Smile from the memories she made and 

Pain from the one she couldn't. 


But today there was no warmth,just the fear of losing a loved one once again gripping her


Asking the question again for the millionth time, 

'Why'? , 'why did you leave me'? 

was I not a good daughter? 

they had not left her that day

they could have guide her today. 


chaos in her mind , 

confusion in her thoughts, 

anxious in her breathe, 

as tears rolled down her eyes. 

she was supposed to chose one of them, 

between her sister and the love of her life. 

Two people she loved with her everything

How was she supposed to chose? 




Hello guys!😆

Mahi here, 🙋 I am new in this forum.First I thought let's remain a silent reader but then I thought I shouldn't miss the chance to make frds.😃   So here I am.

Let me know ur thoughts on this piece.😳


This is so so beautiful.... I hope you are gonna continue this ... Nd if your answer is gonna be no then I insist you to write .... Pretty please 


And yes, you made the right choice of not staying bas a silent memeber... 

Posted: 2 years ago

Hiii!!

I was looking for a story to read, so THANK YOU for posting something xD 

Cannot wait to read what happens with AbhiRa

Please continue soon 💜

Posted: 2 years ago

Hey Mahi🤗

Welcome to the forum 

This is Lovely... Keep treating us with you ffs

Posted: 2 years ago

Hi Mahi welcome to the forum. I’m Sam. So glad you decided to not be silent anymore and share this beautiful story with us. Please continue, I would love to read more.

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by asmaanixx


MAAAHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!

FINALLLYYYY!! 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍🤗🤗🤗🤗

Gurrr yaarrr I missed u so muccchhh!!! 

Ek toh mobile se emoji bhi nahi ja rahe😂 and yeah finally mujhe mobile bhi mil gaya😂

Damn I am so so sooo happy ki kuch likha hi nahi jaraha😆

Kaisi ho? Aap kaisa yaha? Jaha tak mujhe pata hai aaisi story hume jaisi pasand hai usse aalag hai😆lemma guess chemisty btw the leads Or HC. 

Mera toh maat buchna aapke piche piche aai hu😂😂tinu sa karan HC bhi hai but mainly aap hi hoo😂aapko ghost kar rahi hu😂

Pata nahi kab chali jau😂

Aaj insta pe chati hu  (aviothicca ya aphoiticxx jo account khule😂password merko yaad nahi)ke through request bhejugi accept kar lio😆

Yaarrr I am so happpppyyyyyy!!! Meri toh smile hi nahi ja rahi😅

Edited by scintillaxx - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by ishqdinoorhai9



This is so so beautiful.... I hope you are gonna continue this ... Nd if your answer is gonna be no then I insist you to write .... Pretty please 


And yes, you made the right choice of not staying bas a silent memeber... 

Thankn u so much sweetie ❤❤❤

Waise toh yeh os tha😂 but I can't turn down ur sweet request toh I will definitely try to write a next part😳

🤗

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by sheet_leher


Hiii!!

I was looking for a story to read, so THANK YOU for posting something xD 

Cannot wait to read what happens with AbhiRa

Please continue soon 💜

Helloo😆

The pleasure is all mine😊

Waise it's supposed to be an os but I will try to make a secong part too.. 

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by Zenab78


Hey Mahi🤗

Welcome to the forum 

This is Lovely... Keep treating us with you ffs

Hello 🤗

Thank u so much ❤I'll definitely try 😳



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