Lost and Found- An AbhiRa SS ||Update:Part 4, Pg 17|| 17/06 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 months ago

This is so good!


Creatives take a hint from this one. Please update soon.

Posted: 10 months ago

The way you have written about Akshara pining for her love after rejecting him by looking him in the eye:  Simply Superb!! πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ


The lyrical Lag Jaa Gale interludes were so beautiful and added so much more depth and meaning to the characters and their feelings.  That part was so creatively written 😍


And at the end, she remembers his dulhan comment just before the accident. And her final memory before blacking out is him!  You have created a very good base for why she remembers only him after recovering πŸ‘


Thoroughly enjoyed reading this, and looking forward to the next part where they "find" each other after being "lost" 🀩

Posted: 10 months ago

Oye oye oye (in the words of Abhi and Akshu) this is brilliant. Exactly what I would have wanted. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ

Posted: 10 months ago

Thank you sooo much you guys!!! Reading all your comments first thing in the morning gave me a HUUUUGE smile smiley4smiley4smiley4


Thank you. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€— Will reply individually to all of you a little while later. 


Will try and post the next chapter soon. 

Posted: 10 months ago
Originally posted by Mridzy


Thank you sooo much you guys!!! Reading all your comments first thing in the morning gave me a HUUUUGE smile smiley4smiley4smiley4


Thank you. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€— Will reply individually to all of you a little while later. 


Will try and post the next chapter soon. 

Eagerly waiting for your next update...smiley27

Posted: 10 months ago

Wow πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Awesome Starting 😍😘😍😘

Can't wait for more ❀❀❀❀

P.S. Please do update the index on the first page 😁

Posted: 10 months ago

HOLY SHIZZ 

She remembers Abhi as her husband xD omg, I CANNOT WAIT for how this story will progress.

Please, pleaaase write the next part soon 

Eagerly waiting for an update ❀️

Posted: 10 months ago

Nice concept 

Please update soon 


Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai 


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