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RaghVi Shorts (6th OS updated)

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Posted: 2 years ago

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I still feel RaghVi before marriage>>>>>RaghVi after marriage

Their initial fights, tashan scenes were magical. The potential it had was insane. But somehow we never got to witness it.

So, this is a small effort from my side to write about RaghVi & the way I might have wanted the scenes to go forward.

PS. This is my 1st ever try at writing something so, please excuse me if I make any mistake.


  1. AGAR TUM SAATH HO (PG 1)
  2. HUA HAI AAJ PEHLI BAAR (PG 1)
  3. GHAR MORE PARDESIYA (PG 2)
  4. JAANE TU MERA KYA HAI (PG 3)
  5. KUCH TOH HAI TERE MERE DARMIYAN (PG 4)
  6. KUCH TOH HAI TUJHSE RAABTA (PG 5)
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1. AGAR TUM SAATH HO


The OS is set during the pregnancy drama when everyone was at the hospital waiting for the abortion news.

 

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Raghav had brought an injured elderly lady to the hospital meanwhile Deshmukhs were in the hospital for Pallavi's pregnancy report. When Raghav was coming out after paying the Doctor, he saw Deshmukhs. He looked around for a certain Deshmukh when his eyes landed on a disturbed Saree Ka Dukaan. He frowned looking at her pale face. 

 

He was going towards her when Sulochana saw him & started taunting “Oh ho, dekho iska Majnu bhi aagaya” 

 

Pallavi saw Raghav & tensed. The last thing she wanted was Raghav doing a full blown drama in the hospital. 

 

“Ekdum sahi time pe aaye ho Mr. Rao. Tum dono ke chakkar ka raaz bas khulne hi waala hai” Sulochana continued. 

 

“Kaunsa chakkar? Aur konsa raaz khulne waala hai?” He was confused. 

 

“Tum aur P- “ she was interrupted by a nurse who came with news.

 

“Abortion kisi Pallavi Deshmukh ne karwaya tha” she announced leaving everyone shocked & more so Raghav.

He looked at Pallavi. She was as shocked as he was. 

 

“Dekha, akhir sach samne aa hi gaya na. Kitna chupane ki koshish ki tum dono ne” Sulochana said looking at both Pallavi & Raghav. 

 

“Aye Bada Bindi, tum jaanta bhi hai tum kya bol raha hai. Main aur yeh Saree Ka Dukaan? Kabhi nahi” Raghav said pointing towards Pallavi. 

 

Pallavi was looking at Vijay Deshmukh for his reaction. When he didnt say anything she started talking “Baba, mera vishwas kijiye, yeh sab jhooth hai, mere aur Raghav ke beech mein kuch nahi hai. Yeh sab jhooth hai” 

 

“Sab ghar chalo. Mujhe yahan hospital mein koi tamasha nahi chahiye” Vijay said & started walking with the rest of the Deshmukhs leaving her. 

 

“Yeh sab kya hai Saree Ka Dukaan? Kya bakwaas chal raha hai” 

 

“Raghav, main abhi tumhe kuch nahi bata sakti. Aur please, tum dur raho iss sabse” 

 

“Mera naam jud chuka hai tumhaare saath aur tum chahta hai ki main dur rahe. Tum pregnant tha, abortion karwaya aur merepe daal diya sab kuch” 

 

“Maine kuch nahi kiya, naa hi main pregnant thi aur naa hi maine koi abortion karwaya. Itni giri huyi nahi hu main” She said choking on her voice. 

 

Raghav felt guilty for thinking like that about her & muttered a quick sorry.

 

She was leaving when he held her hand & asked “Par yeh sab kya chakkar hai? Mereko batayega tum” 

 

Realizing that Raghav wont leave her without knowing the truth, she decided to tell him everything.

 

She sat on the bench in the corridor & narrated everything right from day 1 till now. 

 

“Kya? Itna sab kuch hogaya. Mera naam itna involve ho gaya aur tumne mereko bataya bhi nahi” 

 

“Kya batana tha Raghav? Ki mere khudke gharwaale mujhpe bharosa nahi kar rahe. Mere Aai Baba mujhse theek se baat bhi nahi kar rahe” Keeping both her hands on face, she started crying. 

 

Raghav felt bad for her. He understood the pain of your family not believing you. He kneeled down infront of her & removed her hands. 

 

“Agar abortion tumne nahi karwaya toh kisne karwaya? Kahin who chipku ladki ya Mansi ne toh nahi kiya” 

 

“Mujhe kuch nahi pata Raghav” 

 

“Tum abhi ghar jao Saree Ka Dukaan. Main dekhta hai kya karna hai. Mera driver tumko drop kar dega” 

 

“Main akele chali jaungi, waise bhi main dukaan ja rahi hu, abhi ghar nahi ja sakti” she said getting up. 

 

“Tum abhi akela jaane ka haalat mein nahi hai. Kabhi toh mera baat suno Saree Ka Dukaan” He said angrily. 

 

She nodded & he signalled Farhad to inform the driver. 

 

Raghav straightaway barged into the Doctor's cabin. 

 

“Aap aise andar nahi aa sakte” The doctor said getting up from her seat. 

 

“Kisne khilaaya tumko paisa?” Raghav asked her. 

 

“Kya bol rahe hai aap? Kaise paise?” The doctor became nervous.

 

“Yeh jhooth bolne ke liye ki Pallavi ne abortion karaya hai” 

 

“Pa...Pallavi Abo...Abortion” she fumbled. 

 

“Janta nahi kya tum use?” Raghav asked going towards her. 

 

“Woh...” she got scared. 

 

Raghav removed his gun & pointed it at her. 

 

“Ab bolega ya thok du goli tumhaare bheje mein” He said in a threatening voice. 

 

“Batati hu, please mujhe mat maaro” she pleaded. 

 

“Toh bol” 

 

And she narrated everything (Same as show) 

 

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Pallavi finished her work at DSE & left for home. She was scared would be an understatement. Baba didnt say anything at hospital but at home he would not leave her. Praying to Bappa, she entered the Deshmukh house. 

 

Everyone was waiting for her. 

 

“Aa gayi Maharani” Sulochana taunted. 

 

“Baba, mera yakeen kijiye. Maine kuch nahi kiya. Yeh sab jhooth hai. Raghav aur mere beech mein kuch nahi hai” 

 

“Toh woh hospital mein kya kar raha tha? Tumne hi bulaya hoga tabhi toh aaya hoga” Vijay said. 

 

“Mujhe nahi pata Baba, woh hospital mein kyun aaya tha” 

 

Suddenly they heard a loud screeching voice of car. And there stood the man himself, Raghav Rao with Farhad. 

 

They came inside. Raghav looked at Pallavi. Her teary eyes & pale face broke something in his heart. No matter how much he hated her or atleast claimed to hate her, he just could not see her in a defeated state. She was the only woman who had the guts to stand tall infront of him. He always liked her fighting spirit. She never bowed down infront of him. And today she was standing like a statue. That pricked his heart. 

 

“Ab kya karne aaye ho tum yaha, Raghav Rao. Jo kuch karna tha woh tum dono ne kar diya. Ab aur kya bacha hai?” Vijay taunted looking at Pallavi. 

 

“Aye Sanki Buddhe. Zyada bol mat samjha. Tera kya haal karega na main tum soch bhi nahi sakta” Raghav was already very angry & Vijay was testing his patience. 

 

“Dhamka rahe ho mujhe?” 

 

“Dhamka nahi raha hu, bata raha hu” Raghav said going towards Vijay. 

 

Before more drama happens, Pallavi decided to interrupt. She stood between them. 

 

“Raghav, tum jao yaha se abhi, please. Hum baad mein baat karlenge” she kept her hand on his chest slightly pushing Raghav back. He looked at her. She was pleading to him with her eyes. 

 

“Zaroor jaayega, Saree Ka Dukaan. Par jis kaam ke liye aaya hai woh toh pura karu” 

 

“Konsa kaam?” Vijay asked. 

 

“Abortion ka sach” Raghav said. 

 

“Woh toh sabko pata hai ki abortion iss neech ladki ne karaya hai. Usmein kya batana” Sulochana said. 

 

“Aye Bada Bindi. Zaban sambhal ke baat kar” Raghav threatened her. 

 

“Dekho Raghav, tum yahan koi tamasha karne aaye ho toh niklo yaha se” Vijay said to Raghav

 

“Mereko bhi yaha rehne ka shaunk nahi hai” He looked at Farhad & signalled him to give him the envelope. 

 

“Yeh kya hai?” Vijay asked. 

 

“Ismein uss shaqs ka naam hai jisne abortion karwaya hai” Raghav announced. 

 

Pallavi shockingly looked at him. How did he find that? 

 

“Pallavi ka hi naam hoga” Sulochana said. 

 

“Ji nahi, ispe Amruta Deshmukh ka naam hai” 

 

And everyone was shocked. Amruta was scared & so was Sulochana. 

 

“Kya bakwaas hai yeh? Yeh jhooth hai” Sulochana defended Amruta. 

 

“Yeh hi sach hai Bada Bindi. Yakeen karna hai toh karo warna jaane do” Raghav said. 

 

“Tum aise iss ghar ki beti par koi bhi ilzaam nahi laga sakte” Vijay interfered. 

 

“Toh yeh Saree Ka Dukaan bhi toh tumhara beti hai. Ispe bhi toh ilzaam laga hai” Raghav said pointing towards Pallavi. 

 

“Beti? Yeh koi beti weti nahi hai iss ghar ki balki iss ghar ke mare huye bete Mandaar ki vidhwa hai ye” Kaku said & Pallavi closed her eyes tightly. 

 

Raghav was shocked would be an understatement. He didn't know how to react. Pallavi was not their daughter but their daughter-in-law. Nobody could have said that Deshmukhs were not her real family. The way she worked for them day & night without caring fir herself was incredible. No one could have done so much for their in-laws. He was totally impressed by her. 

 

Pallavi slowly opened her eyes & looked at Raghav. She didnt know what would be his reaction after knowing her truth of being a widow. He was staring at her. Tears were continuously sliding down from her eyes.

 

“Tum sahi kehti thi Sulochana, Mandaar ke jaane ke baad maine isko kuch zyada hi chooth di. Itni ki yeh bhool gayi ki yeh ek vidhwa hai, kisike ghar ki bhau hai. Mujhe sharam aa rahi hai tumpar” Vijay said. 

 

“Baba..” Pallavi walked towards him. 

 

“Apni gandhi zubaan se mera naam bhi mat lo tum” Vijay stopped her. 

 

Raghav was still processing the new found information when a small commotion brought him out of his reverie. He saw Vijay had held Pallavi's hand & dragging her out of the house. He also went out. 

 

“Baba aap kya kar rahe hai. Please mujhe ghar se mat nikalye” Pallavi was pleading to him. 

 

“Aise batchalan logo ke liye mere ghar mein koi jagah nahi hai. Mujhe apni shakal kabhi mat dikhana” Vijay said throwing her on the ground & closed the door. 

 

Pallavi brought her knees closer to her, held them tightly & was sitting on floor like a small baby. 

 

Raghav couldn't see her like this. He bent on his knees in front of her. She was muttering something on the lines of 'Baba maine kuch nahi kiya'. She didnt even notice him. 

 

He held her shoulder & said “Saree Ka Dukaan, uth aise baitha mat reh neeche” He made her stand. 

 

“Chalo mere saath” 

 

“Kahan?” She asked in a low tone. 

 

“Mere ghar aur kahan” He said nonchalantly. 

 

“Tumhare ghar?” She whispered. He nodded at her. He signalled Farhad to start the car & started walking towards car with her. Her legs were shaking so she couldn't walk properly. Raghav saw this. He bend down & picked her up in bridal style. She didnt mind it as she was not in her correct mind set. Her hands automatically circled around his neck. He smiled lightly. He put Pallavi on the back seat & sat besides her. She leaned on his shoulder & held his forearm.

 

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RR MANSION

 

Raghav entered RR Mansion with Pallavi in his arms. She had dozed off in the car & he didn't wanna disturb her so he carried her to his room & made her lie down on the bed. He put quilt on her & sat beside her. He didn't even realize for how long he was in his own trance when suddenly Pallavi woke up. 

 

She started looking around “Raghav, yeh..” 

 

“Tum mere ghar pe hai aur yeh mera room hai” 

 

“Ab tum yahi rahega, no arguments” Raghav ordered Pallavi. 

 

He kept on staring at her to which she asked. “Aise kya dekh rahe ho?”

 

“Deshmukhs tumhaara in-laws tha. Jin logo ke liye tum itni mehnat kiya, din raat kaam kiya, mere se jhagda kiya woh tumpe aaj 1 percent bhi bharosa nahi dikhaya. Unlogo ne uss Doctor ki baat ko sach mana aur socha ki tumne abortion karwaya hai. Lekin jab main proof leke aaya ki woh abortion Amruta ne karwaya hai, tab bhi unhone tumpe vishwas nahi kiya. Aur upar se ghar se bedhakal kardiya. Kaisa log hai yeh Saree Ka Dukaan” He said in a disappointed tone.

 

“Mujhe hi galatfehmi thi Raghav, ki main Aai Baba ki beti hu unke mare huye bete ki vidhwa nahi par aisa nahi hai. Jab unka mere liye pyaar aur vishwas prove karne ki bari aayi tab unhone jhat se mana kar diya. Kisine sahi kahan hai Raghav, 'Blood is thicker than Water' Par pata hai aaj jo hua woh ek tarah se sahi hua, saare khokle rishte khul gaye aaj” She closed her eyes letting all the pain to come out in the form of tears.

 

Raghav leaned towards her. He cupped her face & wiped her tears. She opened her eyes. They were very close & leaned more towards each other but Raghav withrawed realizing that Pallavi was very vulnerable at the moment & he didn't want to take her advantage when she was not in her true senses. 

 

“Chalo, tum ab fresh hojao, phir khaana khate hai” Raghav said getting up from the bed to avoid the awkwardness.

 

She looked at her saree & he realized that she doesn't have her clothes. He went towards his wardrobe, took his tshirt & sweatpants & gave it to her.

 

“Abhi keliye tum yeh pehen lo” 

 

Pallavi was looking at him. Her family which she thought was her own didnt trust her & threw her out of the house & here was a guy, her so called enemy who didnt only trust her but also stood by her. When Raghav snapped his fingers infront of her that's when she came out of her reverie. He asked her what happened by raising his eyebrows to which she nodded her head in a no. She stood up to go to the washroom. Because of constant crying she felt dizzy when Raghav held her. 

 

“Sambhalke” Raghav said & took her to the washroom. She went inside & he left for kitchen to get food. 

 

Pallavi took a much needed shower. After wearing Raghav's clothes, she came out. It smelled like him. His clothes were too big for her petite size figure. She rolled the waistband of sweatpants so that they stay at her waist. The tshirt was so long that it almost reached her knees. The shoulder was falling down. She felt like she might drown in his clothes. 

 

Meanwhile Raghav came inside with a food tray. He was mesmerized when he looked at her. This was the first time when he was seeing her in something other than Indian clothes. She was looking extremely cute in his clothes. She came towards him & that's when he got a grip. He signalled her to sit on the chair & kept the tray on table. He sat on the other chair. 

 

“Mujhe bhook nahi hai Raghav” She told him. 

 

“Baitho Saree Ka Dukaan. Khaana toh tumhe padega” He pulled her & made her sit. 

 

“Par Ragh-” Before she could finish, he put a morsel of food in her mouth. 

 

“Pehle khao Saree Ka Dukaan, baad mein baat karo” He kept on feeding her. 

 

“Tumne khaaya?” Pallavi asked. 

 

“Main baad mein kha lega” He said. Pallavi tore a piece of roti, dipped it in daal, took it towards his lips & signalled him to eat. Raghav slowly opened his mouth. While feeding when Raghav's lips touched Pallavi's fingertips, she felt a current pass through her body. Same was with Raghav but they decided to ignore it & continued feeding to each other. After sometime, a servant came to pick the tray. Pallavi cleaned up & lied down on bed. Raghav took his night clothes from his wardrobe & went to the washroom to change. After changing, he came out & said good night to her. 

 

“Tum kaha jaa rahe ho?” Pallavi asked. 

 

“Main guest room mein sone jaa raha hai” He said. That's when Pallavi realized that she had forgotten that she was in his bedroom. 

 

“Raghav, I'm really sorry. Mujhe realize bhi nahi hua ki main yaha tumhare room mein hoon. Tum yaha so jao, main dusre-” Pallavi started getting up from bed when Raghav interrupted 

 

“Bilkul nahi” Raghav came towards her “Tum yaha comfortable hai na abhi, isliye ab tum yahi so jao. Main dusre room mein so lega” 

 

“Par Raghav-” 

 

“Par war kuch nahi. Tum chup chap yaha so jao” He said tucking her inside the quilt. 

 

“Tumhe kuch chahiye ho toh mujhe utha dena. Ok, Good Night” 

 

She nodded “Good night” 

 

He got up & closed the door not before looking once at her. 

 

Pallavi just could not believe what she saw. The Raghav she knew from past few days & the Raghav she witnessed today were completely different. That Raghav was rude, egoistic & full of attitude. But this Raghav was so tender, caring & understanding. She was confused. After thinking for sometime about what to do next, she decided to sleep. After everything that happened today, she needed a good sleep. 

 

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Pallavi was getting continuous flashes of Baba accusing her & throwing her out of the house. She was getting restless. 

 

Meanwhile Raghav could not sleep. The thought of Pallavi was constantly on his mind so he decided to check upon her. He went to her room & what he saw shocked him. Pallavi was shivering in the sleep. He went towards her. 

 

“Baba please mujhe ghar se mat nikalye. Maine kuch nahi kiya” she was muttering in her sleep. 

 

Raghav sat on the bed & took her in his arms. “Pallavi, aankhe kholo” He said while patting her cheek. She slowly opened her eyes. 

 

“Raghav, Baba ne mujhe ghar se nikal diya. Maine kuch nahi kiya” she told him 

 

“Shhh... pata hai mereko, tumne kuch nahi kiya. Tum please shaant ho jao, Pallavi. Please” He held her tightly & kept on giving soft kisses on her head. 

 

Pallavi closed her eyes & hugged him as if her life depended on him. They sat like that for long. 

 

After sometime, when she calmed down, Raghav made her lie down on bed. He covered her with quilt & started getting up from the bed when Pallavi held his hand. 

 

“Please mat jao” She pleaded in a way he could not refuse. He knew she was not in a right mindset & he didnt want to leave her alone. So, he decided to be with her & he got into the quilt. She came closer & cuddled to him. He wrapped his arms around her & started caressing her head. 

 

“Main sab theek kardega Saree Ka Dukaan” He promised to her in his mind. Kissing her on forehead, he closed his eyes. Somewhere, in his heart he knew that he was going to get the most peaceful sleep tonight. 

 

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The sunrays made Pallavi wake up. She opened her eyes slowly & saw the most beautiful sight ever. The Raghav Rao was sleeping peacefully like a baby with his mouth open. This brought a slight smile on her face. Few strands of hair had come on his forehead. She felt the urge to side them but decided to control herself. Soon the realization hit her. She realized that both of them were cuddling to each other. She tried getting up but his strong grip on her waist didn't let her. When she tried moving his hands, he ended up cuddling even more to her. Not to forget he was bare chested. They were so close that she could feel his breathe on her lips. She just had move an inch above & they would end up kissing. Raghav's movement brought her out of this crazy thought. She then finally decided to wake him up. 

 

“Raghav” 

 

“Hmmm” He was still in sleep 

 

“Raghav, please utho” He suddenly opened his eyes. 

 

“Saree Ka Dukaan” He saw their position & removed his hands from her waist. She tried getting up but their chains were interlocked just like their faith. And she ended up on him. Her hair was spread on his face which he slowly tucked behind her ear. She tried separating their chain but failed so he had to get involved. He signalled her to come even closer & finally separted their chains. Both of them sat on bed awkwardly. 

 

“Woh...tum...yaha...kaise...” She tried asking him 

 

“Woh kal raat ko mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi toh tumhe dekhne aaya tha. Par dekha ki tumhe koi nightmare aa raha tha, aur tum shiver kar raha tha. Toh isliye main yahin ruk gaya. I'm sorry main aise tumhe...hug kara. Woh tum shaant nahi ho raha tha toh isliye maine tumko aise hug kiya tha. Par baad mein tum mereko jaane diya hi nahi. Mereko laga ki tumko mera zaroorat hoga isliye main yahin ruk gaya” He explained. 

 

“Sorry, tumhe pareshaan karne ke liye & Thank you, meri itni help karne ke liye” Raghav nodded his head & was getting up when Pallavi interrupted.

 

“Raghav, main soch rahi hu ki main mere Dada ke pass waapis chali jau Kolhapur” She said & Raghav immediately felt bad.

 

“Kyun, tumko yahan theek nahi lag raha kya?”

 

“Nahin, aisa nahin hai Raghav. But main yahan hamesha toh nahi reh sakti na. Kabhi na kabhi toh jaana hi hai” She said looking down but somehow he wanted her to stay with him.

 

“Woh sab mujhe nahi pata but main tumse sirf itna kehna chahta hai ki tum jab tak chahe yahan reh sakta hai” He said looking deeply at her at which her heart skipped a beat. The ringing of Raghav's phone broke their trance.

 

“Tum fresh ho jao. Main Reddy ko tumharaa breakfast bhejne ke liye bolta hai” He got up from bed. 

 

“Raghav, main neeche table par hi breakfast karungi. Upar bhejne ki zaroorat nahi” 

 

“Are you sure?” He asked just to be confirmed to which she just nodded in a yes. 

 

“Tumhe change karna ho toh mere wardrobe mein se jo chahiye woh le lena” He said. She just gave him a slight smile. He closed the door & left. She went towards his wardrobe, took a tshirt & track pants & clutched it to her heart. She went to washroom to freshen up. After changing, she came out & saw herself. Somehow she had started liking wearing his clothes. They smelled like him. Although it was just a piece of clothing but she weirdly felt protected in it.

 

Raghav Rao was a mystery & she had to solve it. 

 

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And here comes the first OS. I hope you like it.

 

Please suggest me in the comments what would you like me to write the next OS/TS on


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Posted: 2 years ago

this was awesome for your first OS. 👏


please do write more ❤️


take care

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Posted: 2 years ago

This is awesome! 👌 Loved it 💜

You could make this into an ff rather than just an os. That would be more awesome 😁

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lovely  Keep writing❤️

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2. HUA HAI AAJ PEHLI BAAR


A random OS of RaghVi when Raghav visits Pallavi late at night at DSE

 

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Deshmukh Saree Emporium

 

It was 11 pm. Pallavi was working late night at the shop as she had to complete a very important order. She had spread all the packaging boxes on the floor & was sitting in the middle with her airpods on. She had to pack the sarees in the boxes & they had to be delivered tomorrow by 9 in the morning.

 

After finishing his work at JJ, Raghav was heading home. He felt a sudden urge to go through the small lane which leads to DSE. He had not seen Saree Ka Dukaan for a whole 2 days. So he just wanted to see whether she was there at the shop or not. When he reached DSE, he saw that the shutter was closed but not locked. So he got down.

 

“Yeh Saree Ka Dukaan bhi na, lock karna bhul gaya” He muttered to himself & went to lock the shutter as he had extra keys but he saw that a ray of light was coming. 

 

“Koi chor ghus gaya kya andar? Oh shit. Pehle hi yeh Saree Ka Dukaan loss mein chal raha hai, kuch chori ho gaya phir toh ho gaya satyanash”

 

He went to his car & took his gun. He opened the shutter only to see the most beautiful sight ever. Pallavi was sitting on the floor surrounded by sarees & boxes around her. She had tied her hair tied in a bun & had her airpods on & was humming some song. Her saree pallu was tucked at the waist revealing her milky bare waist. She was packing the sarees in the boxes. And because she was listening to music, she didnt even notice that he had entered. He closed the shutter, kept his gun on the table, sat on the chair admiring her. 

 

Suddenly, he stood up & started walking towards her. And that's when her eyes landed on footsteps approaching her & in nervousness, she widened her eyes. Slowly, she started looking up to see the owner of the footsteps but was shocked to see that it was none other than the owner of her shop, The Raghav Rao. But, somewhere in her heart, she was relieved that it was him & not anyone else.

 

“Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?” She asked.

 

“Yeh mera dukaan hai, main jab chahe aa sakta hai. Tum abhi bhi yaha kya kar raha hai, ghar nahi jaana?”

 

“Mujhe yeh order complete karna tha. Kal subah deliever karna hai usi ki packing kar rahi thi” She said doing her work.

 

“Tumko tumhaara family itne der tak bahaar kaise rehne deta hai? Koi puchta nahi kya?” He asked in a concerned tone.

 

“Ghar pe koi nahi hai. Sab ek function ke liye Kolhapur gaye hai 4 dino ke liye” She answered. “Aur waise bhi yahan hote, toh bhi kisiko kya faraq padta hai” She muttered to herself but Raghav heard it. He felt bad for her. He knew that Deshmukhs didn't really care much for her. They were all living off on her hard work. And Pallavi being Pallavi was doing everything for them selflessly. 

 

Not to make her sad, he decided to change the topic.

 

“Kaam mein itna busy bhi kya hona ki tumko pata bhi na chala main aaya karke. Koi aur hota toh? Kuch bhi kar sakta tha” He asked.

 

“Kuch nahi hota. Main sambhal leti khud ko. Samjhe” She said trying to show him that she was not scared of any intruders. But somewhere in her heart she was relieved that it was Raghav who had come & not some stranger but she would not admit that.

 

Raghav shook his head in a frustration & sat on the chair.

 

After some time Pallavi stood up to pick some sarees from top shelf. To reach there, she brought the stool & stood on it. She wanted few sarees from the topmost rack. But her hand wasn't reaching there, so she stood on her toes & tried to touch it. The stool that she was standing on not being proper at the base it was shaking. Suddenly she lost balance & was about to hit the floor when a strong pair of arms caught her. Ofcourse, it was Raghav. His one hand was under her knees & other was behind her back. He was staring at her intently. Her eyes were tightly shut & she was chanting something. He chuckled looking at her condition. When he made her stand on the ground, that's when she opened her eyes. He was still holding her by her waist.

 

“Tum theek hai Saree Ka Dukaan. Gira nahi, maine bacha liya tumko” He said smirking.

 

“Thank you” She said to which he nodded. Realizing that she was literally in his embrace, she withrawed herself. 

 

“Tumko kya chahiye upar se? Mereko boldo main nikal dega” He said changing the topic to avoid the awkwardness.

 

“Woh upar waale rack se sarees nikal do” 

 

“Pehle bhi bol sakta tha na tum?” He said while standing on the stool. She just mimicked him.

 

Raghav got down & handed the sarees to her. While taking them from him, their hands touched making them experience a strange feeling. He went back & half sat on the table. He received a call from Farhad informing about some important meeting with the foreign delegates the following day.

 

Meanwhile, Pallavi had packed some boxes & was searching for pencil to write something on them but she didnt find it. So she stood up & started searching for it.

 

“Kya dhund raha hai?” He asked.

 

“Tumhaara dimaag. Dekh rahi kahin gira hai toh” She said getting irritated.

 

“Tum kabhi seedha muh jawaab nahi de sakta kya?”

 

“Pencil nahi mil rahi mujhe” She said & started searching.

 

He saw that she had tied her hair in a bun with a pencil. He chuckled to himself. He got up & started walking towards her. She didn't see him until he was close. He came forward, she started going backwards & this thing continued till she hit the saree rack. He came closer. 

 

“Ragh-” 

 

“Shhh...” He interrupted her

 

He held her bare waist & pulled her towards him. Her hands were on his chest & they were very close. Seeing him coming closer towards her, she closed her eyes somehow half expecting him to kiss her. He saw that she had shut her eyes tightly & chuckled inwardly. He slowly removed the pencil, letting her hair fall down smoothly. 

 

Realizing that he has loosened her hair, she opened her eyes & touched her head.

 

“Tumne mere baal-” He showed her the pencil.

 

“Tum pencil nikaal rahe the?” He nodded “Aur mujhe laga-” She muttered to herself. But he had already heard it.

 

“Kya laga?” He asked her knowing what she might have been thinking.

 

“Kuch nahi” She somewhere felt weirdly disappointed that he did not kiss her.

 

Shaking her head, she continued her work.

 

Pallavi's work wasn't finished & Raghav didnt want to leave her alone. As it was already late night, he decided to stay till her work was over. He was worried for her safety but would not admit it to her. Having nothing to do, he started using his phone.

 

Seeing that he was still sitting there looking at his phone, Pallavi asked, “Tumhe ghar nahi jaana?”

 

“Jaana hai, tumhare liye ruka hai main” He said still engrossed in his phone.

 

“Kya? Mere liye? Kyu?” She could not believe what he said. He also realised his slip of tongue. He didnt want her to know his concern for her.

 

“Mera matlab hai ki tumhaara samaan check karne ke liye taaki tum kuch gadbad na kardo” He made some excuses. 

 

“Tumhe badi chinta ho rahi hai mere samaan ki” She asked raising her eyebrows.

 

“Woh.... Shop mera hai na. Toh kuch galat hua toh log mereko bolega” He said & started using his phone not to get caught by her. But somewhere Pallavi knew that he was making up stories & that he was genuinely concerned for her safety as it was already very late. She felt happy to know his concern & smiled to herself.

 

Finishing her work after sometime, she started packing her things. 

 

“Ho gaya mera kaam. Tumhe check karna hai toh kar sakte ho” Pallavi told Raghav.

 

“Nahi zaroorat nahi hai uska. Theek hi hoga”

 

“Accha, toh ab tumhaara naam kharab nahi ho raha hai”

 

“Yeh sarees DSE ka hai aur tum uska naam kharab nahi hone dega. Toh isliye phir mera naam bhi kharab nahi hoga” 

 

“Tum na boht ajeeb ho” Saying this, she continued packing her things. 

 

“Jaldi se shop close karke aaja, main wait kar raha hai car mein”

 

“Ab kahan jaana hai?”

 

“Tumko ghar nahi jaana kya?” He asked.

 

“Haa, toh?” 

 

“Main drop kar dega tumko”

 

“Koi zaroorat nahi hai, main chali jaungi akele” She said meanwhile closing the shutter.

 

“Chup chaap aake gadi mein baitho, Saree Ka Dukaan” He said getting frustrated by her.

 

“Nahi toh” She said her hands around chest.

 

“Tumko uthake leke jayega main. Aur tum janta hai, main aisa kar sakta hai” 

 

“Tum-” Before she could finish, Raghav picked her up in a bridal style & made her sit in the car. He came from the other side & started driving.

 

Reaching halfway, he saw that she was not talking & sitting with an angry face. He chuckled to which she gave him a serious look. He continued driving.

 

After sometime, they reached Deshmukh house. Realizing that Pallavi has not noticed it yet, Raghav snapped his fingers infront of her.

 

“Huh?”

 

“Tumko utarna hai ya mere car mein hi rehna hai?”

 

“Kya?” She asked to which he signalled that they were infront of her house.

 

“Oh, pohoch gaye. Thank you” She said & was about to get out from the car when he held her wrist.

 

“Kya hua?”

 

“Sach batana Saree Ka Dukaan. Shop mein jab main tumhaare kareeb aaya pencil nikalne ke liye, toh tumhe kya laga tha?” He asked.

 

“Mat...Matlab?” She asked slowly.

 

“Tumhe laga main tumhaare saath kuch karne waala hai. Hai na?” He deliberately ignored the main thing.

 

“Nahi. Mujhe aisa kyu lagega. Aur main tumhe thodi na kiss karne deti” She said in one go.

 

“Par maine kiss ka baat kiya bhi nahi” He said smirking.

 

Pallavi felt embarrassed realizing what she said unknowingly.

 

“Woh...main...” She stammered.

 

He leaned closer, “Tum kya Saree Ka Dukaan?”

 

“Kuch...Nahi...” Seeing him closer, she was at the loss of words.

 

He pulled her towards him. They were very close. She could feel his breath on her face. In nervousness, she closed her eyes tightly. He held her chin & leaned forward to kiss her on lips but somewhere, he felt it was wrong so he kissed her on her left cheek. She opened her eyes slowly & was weirdly disappointed that he did not kiss her. Realizing that he wont do it anyhow, she pulled herself back.

 

She gulped hard, gave one last look to him & walked out of the car. He smiled to himself & started the car.

 

Pallavi came running inside the house, closed the door & stood right against it. She was breathing heavily. Whatever happened in the car was least expected. She looked at her wrist which he had held very gently. She came in her room, stood infront of the mirror & touched her left cheek. She could still feel his lips there. Only if he had kissed her lips.

 

“Yeh main kya soch rahi hu? Maine use rokna chahiye tha lekin roka kyu nahi. Yeh sab galat hote huye bhi galat kyun nahi lag raha?” She stood there looking at herself in the mirror.

 

“Raghav Rao, tum ho kya cheez aur main tumhe kab samjhungi”


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And here comes the second OS. Do like, share & comment. 

Please suggest in the comments what would you like me to write the next OS/TS on


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Posted: 2 years ago

मस्त मस्त है loved it. 

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Posted: 2 years ago

What a sweet update!!! I always wished for a scene like this in the earlier days of the show!!!❤️😳

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Posted: 2 years ago

Comments on OS 1. AGAR TUM SAATH HO:


You wrote a fascinating story in which Raghav behaves tenderly with Pallavi. All the better, it's not Raghav's fault that Vijay banished Pallavi. You made Raghav and Pallavi more palatable as a couple. While it's strange that Pallavi keeps repeating, "I did nothing," but wants to cuddle with the man with whom she's accused, you portrayed Pallavi's agitation so convincingly that I believe Pallavi and Raghav are behaving naturally.


You had Raghav saying "jī nahīṃ" to Sulochana. I can't recall him ever being so polite to her on the show. Other than that one line, I like your Raghav's manners, both good and bad.


I like that your version of Raghav listens to Pallavi's troubles. There was never enough of that on the show; it was always Raghav complaining that Manasi's saṃgīta was postponed when Pallavi's grandmother-in-law died, Raghav telling Pallavi to give up wanting her family after he turned them against her, Raghav deciding that Pallavi shouldn't care if the wrong person went to prison for the hit-and-run ... I like that your Raghav sends his driver with Pallavi, takes her into his home, and thinks of what she will need.


However, I also liked that Pallavi on the show was discreet; she didn't want Raghav in her family's private matters. Your version of Pallavi complains to Raghav (who just assumed that she had an abortion and named him) that her Āī and Bābā don't believe her. Why does she open up to him? Anyway, your line that Raghav sympathized because his own family doesn't believe him was a nice parallel - well done!


I like that you had Raghav threatening the doctor with a gun instead of what we got on the show: Raghav almost driving himself and Farhad off a cliff with Dr. Kanika. I don't know why the writers think it's romantic for Raghav to toss away his life for some chaste ideal of Pallavi instead of treating the human Pallavi with respect as in your story.


Your version of Vijay, who believes the doctor over Raghav, and believes Amruta over Pallavi, is not that far from Vijay on the show, who distrusted Sulochana, but not as much as he distrusted Raghav and someone who would marry Raghav. However, Vijay throwing Pallavi out of the house was more understandable on the show; there he felt that she was stealing and degrading his life's work, and here he's just punishing her for a sexual relationship.


One thing that I worry about in my own fan fiction is whether Raghav's efforts to rescue Pallavi make her look weak. In the show's abortion story, Raghav felt sympathy when he saw the disgust in Pallavi's eyes; you have written that he sees her defeated. I could cheer for the strong Pallavi who stood up to the abortion bullies on the show, but that's an unrealistic expectation of strength from the heroine, and your version's weakness makes her more human.


Now I'm going to read your second story. I hope you keep writing and sharing!

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Posted: 2 years ago

Comments on 2. HUA HAI AAJ PEHLI BAAR:


This is a nice original story. Raghav's understated concern and Pallavi's desire and trust in him in spite of her effort to be self-reliant both come through beautifully. Pallavi in this story feels unappreciated by the Deshmukhs, whereas on the show she was the one hiding her problems from them and Sharada scolded her for it more than once.


I loved the pencil moment! On the show, when Pallavi told Raghav to stay away from her blouse hooks, but he put his hands around her torso anyway, it didn't look right. In your story, she just backs away without telling him his limits, so he's not exactly disregarding her when he pulls her by her waist. And her touching his chest and hoping he'll kiss her means that he's actually behaving better than she'd like.


Since you asked for suggestions, would you like to write about Raghav meeting Pallavi's Siddhesh Dādā and Pavani Vahinī? Or maybe Pallavi's chicken pox?