AbhiRa OS: Sealing The Promise - Page 7

Originally posted by: scorp1AN

Beautiful 🤩 

Loved the entire storyline.. ❤️

Akshara finally breaking down and sharing her feelings 

Abhimanyu understanding akshu’s relationship with aarohi

And abhimanyu also reassuring akshara was sweet… 

I am glad she got the support from abhi!

She really needed it as in the show, ppl are more concerned about aarohi than akshu (which is weird 😅)

Hope abhi and akshu share their feelings soon in the show also

Thank you for the beautiful OS 🤗

Omg thank you for such a lovely breakdown of what you liked about the shot. Loved reading it. I feel like you guys are gonna get bored today hearing me say thank you over and over again but I can't help it. you guys are the sweetest honestly! thank YOU for the beautiful comment🤗

Originally posted by: HahaHeheHuhu9

That was simply WOW!!!  You're a gifted writer, with the rare ability to use words that paint a vivid picture of the story in the reader's mind!  So many descriptions in your OS stood out as simply amazing 👏

Really enjoyed reading this!  Please do write more on Abhira! 😍

Trust me my cheeks are burning at this point form all the blushing i have been doing☺️

These words will forever be so precious to me. thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and being kind enough to shower me with so much love and appreciation. Love ya! 🤗

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

 You are hilarious 

I know right ... I am just awesome 😂😂🤣🤣

Haan yaar. I mean i loved how they fell for each other in the show where they tried to show that sometimes you dont even need explicit words to feel the instant connection with someone or grow feelings for them but now it feels like they sre going a little overboard with this whole falling and catching and eyelocks when really, they NEED to talk! Im losing my patience.

Exactly....humne inki love at first sight dikhan ki tareef kya kar di inhone toh sapne mein hi jeene ko bol diya ... Kya hi joker banate hai ye humein. I am already writing to them and giving away ideas.... Itna main padhai mein mann lagati ... Kaash.

I guess we will need to survive this period with Mush’s OSes. So madamji aap pls hum readers ki upar meherban hoiye aur ek aur OS jaldi se post kijiye. Dhanyavad 

Sacchiii... Writer sahiba ab aap hi hamari ek matra sahara hai.... Humein viraan na chode please 

🌚😂

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Oh my god your comment is killing me  especially your comment on “kash mein itna padhai mein mann lagati” story of my life honestly 

Underline - wah kitne sundar nivedaan hai aapki, if Mush doesnt melt with this sincere request im gonna go into sttack mode and stalk her to death. Waise kaha chhupi hai madam ji. Ajke k eoisode ka  review bhi nahi diya

Tum do no na poore ki poore pagal ho 🤣 i'm dying reading your comments. 

@ishqdinoorhai9 please try Stand up comedies. I think you are gonna nail it. You gave me such a good laugh, and your timing is just 

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Oh my god your comment is killing me  especially your comment on “kash mein itna padhai mein mann lagati” story of my life honestly

I guess hum sabke jeevan ki yahi kahani ho gyi hai. Ab aap humein hi le le... Kal hamara maths practical hai aur hum yahan madhumakhi ke tarah mandra rahe hai. Aur 11 din baad hamara pehla boards ka exam hai ... Wo bhi barvi kaskha ka aur humne kuch padhai bhi nahi ki hai lekin majaal hai jo hum abhi bhi apni kitaab khol le. 

Underline - wah kitne sundar nivedaan hai aapki, if Mush doesnt melt with this sincere request im gonna go into sttack mode and stalk to her death. Waise kaha chhupi hai madam ji. Ajke k eoisode ka  review bhi nahi kiya

Aaj ke episode dekh kar writer sahiba bhi soch rahi hongi ki Abhimanyu kaise ek thank you se hi pighal Gaya aur ab apna popat banane wala hai. 

Koshish karenge ki hum apne vichitra vakya rachnao se aapko aise hi hasate rahein.... Aage aur hasne ke liye hamare saath Jude rahiye ✨💃

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(i know you meant yesterday's episode but honestly i didn't mind it yesterday. the above gif is for the bullshit they fed us today)

Originally posted by: Illuminatus.

So beautiful. 

Perfect timing for me to read this today and reinstate my hopes on this pair of love birds. I was never a fan od dream sequence but todays was mother of all nightmares. 

Your OS is one of the best that I have read so far and your word flow is magical. 

Thank you for gifting this to us. 

Please keep writing. 

WHen is the next one coming? 

Arreh tum log kya pagal ho?! I'm on the verge of tearing up now. i'm not used to being showered with so much mithas and pyaar😒 Words won't suffice to express  how much this comment means to me, my love!! By far, one of my fav comments on this threads

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Originally posted by: Mushfika_01

You really found my OS surreal?

Thank you so much. Means the world 🤗

offcourse ❤️

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Mush I am speechless. totally at a loss fr words. I have been following you since khkt days and i knew you would kill the OS but THIS is some next level abhira you gave us. your writing is like a breath of fresh air and i felt like you just threw me to a virtual abhira world where i was seeing all this play out in front of my eyes. 

what akshu felt was so natural,  especially if the subject has anxiety issues. I loved every single detail about her remembering the earlier evening and pulled down to that spiral of panic. 

Abhi's reaction when he found akshu like that oh fod. you are gonna call me a sadist but i felt like dancing in joy.

And when he did find his sense back, he was shocked to hear his own broken voice that called her name in a whisper of agony…

 “Akshara….!” 

My own heart was beating so fast, i can only imagine what abhi was feeling. 

He reached her in two long strides, fell on his knees and gathered the fragmented frame fervently in his arms. His own breath hitched realizing how cold she felt in his embrace. Her face was as white as a ghost, and her entire form withered like a dry leaf in his cocoon. He held her face to his chest, stroking her back in an attempt to bring some sanity to her as well as to him, as he tried making sense of what she was saying. 

This was my reaction ^^^

You don't know how badly i needed this protective side of Abhi. I have been waiting for this kind of scene for soooo long. I was so mad seeing arohi in the hospital instead of Akshu🤣 imagine the reaction we would have gotten from abhi if the kach ki pieces wentin akshu's hands

“I got you sweetheart. It’s alright. You are okay…”

oh god i think i died an instant death reading this part. did he really call her sweetheart?☺️i'm sorry im fangirling like this when the scene was so sad and intense but freak i can't control myself. this scene needs to have a separate fan base by god!!

Abhimanyu had looked into his father’s eyes with an unfathomable resolution as he replied, “Too late, Sir. It has become far too personal for me to consider it just a ‘medical case’.”

me when i read this:🥳🥳

what a savage and what a dialogue! It is indeed has gotten far too personal for him😳

She quickly took her first step to get herself away from him only to be halted by the tight grip around her wrist.

“Don’t you dare move those tiny feet away from me again…” 

“Leave my hand.”, her broken voice almost made his grip around her loosen  but he quickly held it back again. 

Her absurd request brought back the blazing anger within him as he replied, “Like hell I will…what the f*ck were you even thinking, taking off the IV drip and getting up like this when you can barely walk?!” 

“It’s none of your business. Please leave my hand Abhimanyu.”

 

Abhimanyu scoffed, “oh, as a matter of fact, it damn well IS my business when it concerns you...all of it. So now you are going to let me walk you to that bed over there or I have other ways of getting my work done and trust me you don’t want that.”

His warning voice sent a chill down her spine. 

“No.”, replied Akshara, chin up.

Shocked at her blunt refusal, he begged her pardon, not sure if he heard her right,  “Excuse me?” 

“You heard me.”

ufff what a sherni! Naira's daughter after all. I loved this scene and their banter so much. and when abhi said "it damn well IS my business when it concerns you...all of it. So now you are going to let me walk you to that bed over there or I have other ways of getting my work done and trust me you don’t want that.” 

🤣🤣🤣

“You know, I don’t usually do stuff like this but you leave me with no other option. So with all due respect, - ”, 

And before she could grasp what he was talking about, she felt a warm hand under her gown-covered knee while the other went around her back  and in one swift motion, she was swept off  the ground. 

this man is respectful towards women but knows how to get his work done too. The " so with all due respect " KILLED ME🤣🤣🤣 too good yaar! how do you even come up with such dialogues🤣

and then the whole part about Abhi's realization that why she might have stayed quiet at the tilaak and putting the two and two together was the best way the whole thing could come out! akshu's own actions made him realize it and i couldn't be happier. i wish the show showed something like this. from all the sbs segments, i am left with no hope for abhira to unite anytime soon and my heart is breaking at the thought. 

Comment to be continued in the next post because the second half of this OS needs a separate section...😳

okay ritu, tu pehle mere paas aa i need to give you a bone crushing hug 

Matlab yeh KYA hai?! Tu sach mein pagal hai! itna bada comment😲 I honestly needed time to process this.

aur tera comment itna bada hai ki you divided into two parts🤣🤣🤣 Mujhe pata nahi teri harkat e kyun itni cute lagti hai. they are just hilarious 🤣

@red: don't apologize. you fangirling over abhi calling akshu sweetheart just made my night🤣

@blue: now that you pointed out like that, even i'm cracking up🤣 pata nahi kaise aate hai dimag mein. i just go with the flow and type whatever comes to my mind😆

@green: i'm really glad sweetheart❤️

mein bhi apne reply next post mein continue karti hoon phir😆

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

“I’m really sorry for leading you on when….when I...erm….I never intended to marry you”

He stared at her, shocked, unable to form any words.

Akshara’s own belly gave out a queasy feeling, making her want to throw up at what she was doing. Her heart thumped hard, ready to come out of her chest, she could feel her hands tremble and turn sweaty as she gulped to take a moment to form the next sentence. 

There was no other way to do this, she told herself. 

“It was just one of those passing flings for me and i never re...realized….that...that you would t...take it s..so seriously” 

i'm sure im not the only one who was laughing at this excuse our akshu came up with🤣 kya kehto ho yaaro? to whoever is reading my comment, what were your thoughts when you read the fling excuse?

but i was so scared of abhi's reaction because for one second i thought he was actually furious because he believed her words. the way you described abhi's 'pulse ticking like an atom bomb' , kasam se i thought this is it for them🤪

and then abhi goes on to casually put the IV on her as if nothing happened.  and then the best part comes:

“Did anyone ever tell you what a horrible liar you are, Akshu?”

I read this line at least 10 times because i couldn't believe he actually said that. you said in your previous review post that abhi's jawline makes your heart flip right? well guess what, ABHI'S THIS DIALOGUE FLIPPED ALL THE INTESTINES AND GALL BLADDER AND EVERYTHING ELSE INSIDE MY BELLY

this is the best part hands down of this os. abhi seeing through her lies

He continued, “A passing fling? Really? I mean, at least come up with something feasible for me to believe” 

I felt like kissing abhi at that time when he said this. uff munda itna smart kaise hai

the whole scene of akshu breaking down when abhi said he understood her situation was something this show truly needs. akshu has been suffering silently for so long and just so that the family doesn't worry, akshu tries to become that pillar of support and strength by putting a smile and acting like she is alright when in reality she is the one suffering the most. 

so when akshu for once forgot that and told abhimanyu how she is exhausted and how she can't go on anymore, it felt like a breath fresh air. i love how she found a confidant in abhi. and she didn't just say it, she freaking put her head on his shoulder as if to receive some strength from the physical contact...oh how beautifully that scene was written Mush! 

“Who said you lost me?”

.

.

He brought his thumb to wipe the tear that stung her eyes as he continued, “I’m not going anywhere.” 

🥳🥳YESS YES YESSSS

the rational conversation that happened between them in that short period of time, especially when akshu expressed her fears about arohi and abhi telling her that he is ready to give the relationship as much time as she wants,  is another thing the show DESPERATELY need right now. what a well planned scene you put there mush! 

i also loved how he became all bossy with  his instructions and having the nurse to keep an eye on her🤣 served her right. akshu is a bachchi sometimes by god🤣

the whole feeling of protection, calmness and hope akshu felt in abhi's presence was so precious. and she felt the loss the moment he went out.

BUT HE CAME BACK!!!! HE FREAKING CAME BACK AND GAVE A FOREHEAD KISS!!!

She felt his warm hands cup her damp cheeks, as he looked into her eyes. He stared down at her slightly longer than he intended to, as if to memorize the features in her face...

“I’m not going anywhere alright? I will be just two floors above you at OT#523. You will be okay right?” 

The warm pads of his thumb stroking her cheeks stirred her heart and flipped her stomach, yet it felt like the most natural gesture coming from him. She also didn’t fail to notice the unimstakable concern and fear laced in his voice. She jumped in for reassurance. 

“I’ll be okay! Do your surgery with a clear head, Dr. Birla”, spoke akshara with a reassuring smile.

Abhimanyu looked deep into her face. He wanted to say so much….he wanted to voice all his fears to her…

What if kairav didn’t go to check on you last night. What if I hadn’t come on time today? What if something bad had happened to you?

But he didn’t. He was a doctor and he knew better than that. Instead, he leaned forward to press his lips on her forehead as a reassurance for him that she was indeed okay, to let her know that he would be there for her, from now till his last breath, protecting her from all the evil, shielding her from the harsh words, and paving a better path for her to walk on.  

the line in read was something i read i think multiple times and i can guarantee you my heart stopped beating when i realized it was actually happening. THEIR FIRST EVER FOREHEAD KISS🥳and it was so so simple and felt so natural. even akshu didn't blush or anything because it was something she NEEDED at that moment. it wasn't done to convey a romantic gesture. it was done for comfort, for solace and it acted like a balm to akshu. 

i can't express in words how beautiful this OS was. this will forever be one of my favorite stories on AbhiRa. and i needed , in fact we all needed this so so badly at a time like this when the show is being so hopeless. I love you yaar Mush. please never stop writing 🤗

@green: yaar hamare chhoti aur innocent si akshu k dimaag mein agar mahima k jaise excuses aane lagi to phir to baan hi jaati baat😆

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are you okayyyy???!!!! your your intestine and gall bladder flipped?!🤣🤣🤣 aaj mein pakka mere seat segirne wali hoon from laughing 🤣🤣 never knew my writing could be so dangerous.bhai tu thik hai na, sach mein ?🤣

@Blue: Bang on, Ritu!! this is the most apt explanation to that forehead kiss. i'm amazed how well you caught onto the emotions behind it. take a bow!

I'm so happy you liked the small conversation between them. and everything that you pointed out in your comment - the entire breakdown of all the convo and emotions of abhiRa's from the humor to their banter to the forehead kiss  - just truly sent me to another world. I'm basically on cloud nine right now. 

This is THE best comment I have received on this thread. I can't express my emotions at this point, just know that i love you with my whole heart! ❤️

Hi guys, I hope you all are doing well. 

So this is me in a nutshell after reading the comments:

The response I received from y'all blew my mind.  To me, it has never been about how many likes or comments i get. rather, I care about the quality of the response. I would rather get 2 detailed and genuine comment than 15 dry or forced replies, and trust me when I say this, each and every single comment touched my heart and sent me straight to cloud 9. By the time i was done reading and replying to them, I was a puddle of emotions. 

 I'm truly honored you guys liked AbhiRa's convo so much. I didn't put much detail to the conversation on purpose as the focus of the OS wasn't about coming up with a solution as to how they are gonna be together ,  rather it was about akshu opening  up to Abhi and for abhi understanding  and communicating with her. I felt that once they cross that bridge, things would be a lot easier. 

So many mentions about the "fling" and the "forehead kiss" parts☺️

Also SO MANY of you said you guys actually wanted parts of this OS to be shown in the actual show, like , bruh i was gonna faint from all the emotions you were making me feel all at once 😆 you guys are crazyyy! I felt so positively overwhelmed reading all the replies. 

Honestly, I never thought I would have such a warm virtual family! From appreciating my posts to saying such kind words about my stories, I honestly found my perfect escape from AD and I couldn't be happier. 

So to everyone who liked and commented on my posts in the past two weeks, I love you with my whole heart. You know who you are🤗

Originally posted by: Mushfika_01

Trust me my cheeks are burning at this point form all the blushing i have been doing☺️

These words will forever be so precious to me. thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and being kind enough to shower me with so much love and appreciation. Love ya! 🤗

You're so cute!!  But seriously all the appreciation is very well deserved. 👌 

It was an absolute pleasure reading your work.  Do let me know of your other works too!  Would love to read more from you!! 😃  Sending you much love and best wishes!! 🤗