AbhiRa OS: Sealing The Promise - Page 11

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Posted: 5 months ago
Originally posted by ishqdinoorhai9

Tum do no na poore ki poore pagal ho smiley37 i'm dying reading your comments. 

Aree woh toh hum hai hi... Koi shak nhi bacha hai... After all ek bande ke liye hum ye show dekh rhe hai... Iss se bada aur kya hi proof hoga hamare clownigiri ka smiley37

@ishqdinoorhai9 please try Stand up comedies. I think you are gonna nail it. You gave me such a good laugh, and your timing is just 

Ab main itna bhi khaas nhi smiley43haan thodu sa... Ittu sa hun smiley41 log tamatar phenkenge mere par main stand up comedy karne gyi toh... 

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Tareef karne ke liye main shukriya ada karti hu writer sahiba  

@bold: LMAO you are giving me major Geet vibes from Jab We Met for some reason! smiley37

Posted: 5 months ago
Originally posted by Manju1066

Waiting for the hug 😁and your take on  these episodes.💕

Aww Manju!smiley31 I hope I didn't disappoint you with my venting in my previous post thensmiley44If I did, Dil se maafi chahti hoonsmiley9

Posted: 5 months ago
Originally posted by Mridzy

🤗🤗🤗 No really, it was brilliant - eager to read more from you, whenever you post them. :) 

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Posted: 5 months ago
Originally posted by Anokhi01

What a masterpiece this is Mushfika! I'm speechless with the way you pulled off all the characters, emotions and painted it right infront of my eyes! one of the best OS i have ever read. like wow, really! smiley32

with the horrible drama these days in the actual show, this was a breath of fresh air. I would love for you to write more and bless us with nice stories that make more sense the the show itself

Wow, look who commented!smiley3

Thank you so much for the kind wordssmiley31I truly appreciate that you took the time to read this shot and even happier that you commentedsmiley40Lots of love to you :)

Edited by Mushfika_01 - 5 months ago
Posted: 5 months ago
Originally posted by Anokhi01

Few things i loved about this os:

1. Abhimanyu ASKING akshara "what is it that's bothering you?. even though he had an idea, he still ASKED. this is called good communication skills.

2. Akshara actually opening up to abhimanyu and telling him that she is scared and worried shit for arohi, the family, and for failing him. again, great communication

3. I love the subtle gestures and all the emotions and physical contacts that transpired during the whole convo when akshara opens up to abhimanyu. When she puts her head on his shoulder, again not an actual hug but still needing for his warmth for her to confide in him was a magical scene you wrote Mushfikasmiley32

4. Abhimanyu seeing through akshara's lie. this is far fetched any ITV show so i couldn't be more happy reading that part

5. last but not the least,  the forehead kiss. that one paragraph of abhimanyu going to his surgery but then coming back to place a kiss on her forehead more for himself than akshara to assure that she is in one piece and really sealing the promise of always protecting her with a kisssmiley32 i dont rememer the last time  i read such a meaningful OS 

It is a sincere request from all of us that you keep writing and please tag me when you do because i wouldn't want to miss your work like i did this one (saw this after 5 days what!!!) 

I absolutely L.O.V.E this comment! almost everything that i wanted to convey through this OS - you caught on and explained with such simplicity! Thank you SO much Anokhi, it's honestly comments like this that encourage me to write moresmiley27

Posted: 5 months ago
Originally posted by Mushfika_01

@bold: basically! smiley36

@red: smiley43and your comment has MY heart!  What's your name btw? It's fine if you don't want to reveal your real name , vrtual name is fine too.Asking so that it's easier for me to address you LOLsmiley36

You can call me Noor 🙈🙈 it's a virtual name but it's close to my heart... 

Posted: 5 months ago
Originally posted by Mushfika_01

@bold: LMAO you are giving me major Geet vibes from Jab We Met for some reason! smiley37

Bas Geet hi smjh lo... Apni favourite toh kyunki hu main smiley37

Posted: 5 months ago

Oh not at all.It’s fun to read everyone’s point of view.I love this forum bec everyone is positive towards the others opinion and there’s a healthy discussion.I look forward to reading everyone’s take on the episode and comments on them more than watching the serial 🤣🤣so lage raho😁😁💕🤗

Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai 

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