MG FF - Pyar Hua Chupke Se - Part 47 Pg 111 Mar 16 - Page 6

Part 1 

Great start my dear !! 👍🏼

Good description of the surroundings & everyone ‘s feelings 

You can sense the aura 

Liked how you are describing geet & maan ‘s unknown pull or connection 

It is intriguing 

Thank you 🤗

I am glad that you are losing yourself in the land of maneet b/c it is s very fun place to be ♥️

thanks for updating

Part 3

Astounding update..... Beautifully written

well Brij is clearly impressed with Maan

Maan indeed as an aura that surrounds him

so had it been a year back, Brij would approached Maan for an alliance with Geet

however its not the case anymore

as expected Maan heart beats are raised

of cos he cannot understand why and puts it down to work and travel

liked that just by hearing the jingle of her bangles, Maan is drawn towards Geet

Gosh the urge see her is compelling

at least Maan sensed her pain

now he knows her name

Brij was a bit restless when Maan mentions audit

great that Brij was upfront with Maan regarding everything

nice that Maan assures Brij

not surprised that Maan was curious regarding Dev Sharma

seems like Dev deceived Geet??? 

loved that Geet was also pulled towards Maan

she wonders how he looks.....

she controls herself from going out of the room

sadly Brij blocked her view and she was unable to get a glimpse of Maan

lovely precap

already waiting for Part 4

story is getting built up nicely.

i am behind couple of parts but i will catch up soon!!

and i am already waiting for Rakshak next part.

hope u will update that next!!

Ok so Dev Sharma has something to do with Geet’s past, wonder what it was exactly?

Lol I understand that the story will go slow but can they at least see each other already 😆

Part 2 

Interesting, they knew each other in childhood

They both seem to be drawn each other w/o even meeting 

What has happened in geet’s life , why is she melancholy now ??? 

& how will this business deal change geet’s life 

Thank you

Part 3 

Hmmm, so there was a dev that deceived geet ...,.,, 

Was geet married to dev 

Now that maan knows he will look into it 

They both still feel the forces being drawn together 

Curious what happens next 

Thank you

Why is Brij thinking its not possible to consider an alliance for Geet?

Was Geet married to Dev and the property was given to him?