MG FF - Pyar Hua Chupke Se - Part 47 Pg 111 Mar 16 - Page 2

Posted: 2 years ago

congrats and looking forward....very interesting

Posted: 2 years ago

Fascinating Teaser 


It seems like both Maan and Geet are curious to see the other 

attraction and curiosity is already in the air 


Thank you for this teaser 

I'm sure the storyline will be Interesting and Amazing 

I can't wait to read this story too

Posted: 2 years ago

Interesting teaser.... congrats on it 

Can't wait to read

Posted: 2 years ago

Congrats for new story!!

Waiting for updates!

Posted: 2 years ago

Nice teaser waiting for the full fledged story to unfold 

Posted: 2 years ago

Pyar HuaChupke SePart 1


 

Hey All,

Not Giving character sketch here. As I want you to analyze characters on your own. Please enjoy the feel of updates here…

Disclaimer: Will be taking a lot of creative liberty here so logic may be missing many a times.😆

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As his open jeep entered Hoshiyarpur, he was welcomed by the dusty wind. That didn’t bother him though, he kept driving increasing his speed on the dusty bumpy road. But the entrance to HP gave him a whole unique sensation. He felt unknown Jingle around his whole self. It was different very different. But why? As he was here strictly for business purpose. Though he was prompted to start this new venture here by family but then he was all business and have to figure out for profit. He will bring the team later but first he has to give initial kick off and this one Dadi insisted to have his own touch and thus he was here.

He almost did not remember HP. Mom had told him he was here when very small, maybe 4 or 5 yrs. Anyways that cannot be the reason of his still feeling the weird jingle he had been feeling since he has made entrance to HP. Ohh maybe this new setup. But for businessman like Maan Singh Khurana, a big name in nation, it should not be the case. He tried shrugging it off.

Maan was at last in front of the Guest house. He closed his Jeep and set his foot down.

 

Geet felt a sudden movement in her whole self as she was looking out of her room window and pondering into the words of Veerji. What was it? Why was her heart beat having a different music all together? Ohh she was not at all in the music feel type of zone, then what was this. She shrugged off, may be anything. She was practically thinking on what Daarji and Veerji have been explain her these days. They were right she badly needs to get busy. She have to be her happy self, if not for herself, for her family and friends and for her HP. She was spellbound by the love and support that everyone has showered on her. How she cribbed of their being conservative but their support in her most need was forcing her to be happy for everyone here.

It has been couple hours of his arrival and Maan has settled himself in the Guest house. He was busy looking into the documents when he gets the much needed call from Muneem ji.

Yes Muneemji, everything is ready?” “Welcome Sirji. Sirji isit right time to come for me. Or you can rest Sirji” “No Muneem ji. I want to look into documents soon. Early morning, they will come for signature.”  

Ok Sir ji coming in30 minutes.”

Muneem ji was with Maan as he thoroughly checked the documents. “Everything is fine. Call them and schedule the meeting for 8 am.”

 

It was 8pm in the night. The family was having dinner “Daarji, any news if Khurana Ji is here.”

Khurana Ji” Geet repeated involuntarily, didn’t knew why. “Haan Geet. He is the same client for the land.” Said Brij.

He took pause “Only if you are Ok with it Geet” Brij’s concerned voice asked “I am sure Veerji” she assured him.

 

It was then Brij’s phone rang. Bright smile formed on Brij’s face “He has a long life Daarji. We were talking about him and here is his Muneem ji” as Brij picked the call.

Haan Muneem Ji” “Sir ji is here. He has checked all the documents. If you can come at 8am for signatures

Sure we will” and the phone was disconnected.

Geet Bachcha, get ready early tomorrow. We will need reach there to Khurana ji by 8 am tomorrow” with this Brij casually got up but it sent 1000s of sensation to Geet. Why she was completely unaware. She has badly gotten over this type of Girly and it looked like ages when she has become like this. On the top this Khunana Ji can be anyone. He can be in his 30s, 40s, 50s, what does she know. Then what was jittering at the sound of meeting “Khunara ji” tomorrow at 8am. She seriously scolded herself and hated herself for this type of jittering in her belly at the thought of meeting “Khurana ji”. But this jittering was not in her control.

 

It had now been a year plus that now 23.5-year-old Geet just wanted to handle things practically. And she was happy with her decision. This Jittering and all, she shied at her foolishness and shed it of her shoulder.

 

It was 8am and Maan was waiting for the other party for signature. The next step will only proceed after that.

It had been 9 am now and no news from them. Maan was racing two and fro.

Sir ji, it is village. People are not that time bound as you Sir ji. In village it goes like this Sir ji”.

Hmmm” he realized he have to mentally prepare to work in Village.

Precap: Khurana Ji in Handa Haveli Part 2

Edited by tellyme - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

Amazing update..

Maan is in HP and wants to buy geet land..

Continue soon..

Posted: 2 years ago

thank you for updating


Part 1

Fabulous update..... superbly written

so Maan is in HP for business

his entry into HP gives him a weird jingle

of cos he cannot understand why

while Geet's heart seems to be have a different music all together?

curious about Geet

why is she unhappy?

she does belong to a conservative family but they support her in her need

liked that she involuntarily said his name

well its Geet's land that is been sold?

she is already affected when she realises that she will be meeting Khuranaji

as expected she berates herself for her thinking

not surprised that Maan is a restless as the Handas have not yet arrived

at least Muneemji made him understand



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