Abhiya Os: My Only Eternal Love, Happy 11th Anniversary! 🥳

Posted: 2 years ago

She was walking on the road. Setting rays of the Sun was falling on her face. It was beautiful, calm, just like a shower after enraged heat of summer.
Her curly hair was bouncing, blowing with warm breeze. With a smile she was looking at her front, holding her hand bag.


I was following her, from the deepest woods, near the road. Her addictive smell was calling me to her. Intoxicating in it I was walking beside, keeping an eye on her.


My eyes were on her, hers on the road. Altogether we were heading towards our destination.


Evening was coming fast; the Sun was on the horizon. Hilly breeze was turning cold.
It was April; spring was showing colours in the nature.
It was her favourite season; it had always been. She spent her days nurturing her tiny flower plants in this season.


She reached her hostel; walked inside it. I stayed at outside waiting for her room to lit up a bit.
It was on first floor; though a bit higher. Nothing could stop me coming to her.


She lived with her another friend same class as her. She was meritorious as usual.
It was good day for me as her friend wasn't with her in the room. I could watch her as much as I wanted.


Climbing on a tree, I was looking at her. Smilingly she was cleaning the room, with a book in a hand of her.
She was always book lover; never wanted anything else. However, her beauty always left a mark on everyone's heartbeat.


Slowly, silently time went by. Eventually night fell darker in the nature.
Her light went off. Sleep came in her baby brown, round eyes. Gradually, it took her senses away; left her peacefully still.


Grinning from eye to eye, I jumped from the tree. Tiptoeing, I entered her room, keeping eyes on her angelic face.
I sat beside her, holding her both hands. Warmth spread on my nerves, coldness marked her skin. Defining the distance between us; it showed the reality.


She was same; every time I saw her. The beauty that gripped my heart centuries prior.
Her lips were wet, soft and rosy; reminding me those wild nights of our marital bliss.


Many men came and several went out. Not a single time they could stay in her life.
Some went themselves; some were needed to be thrown out.
One by one, I removed every single male that I could.


My lips formed a victorious grin recalling their faces.
How they reacted, desperately searched for help after witnessing my devil self.


Moonlight fell on her face, glorifying her stunning beauty.
Mesmerising I was drinking her glory with my two eyes.


She was light; alive and radiation.
I was darkness; deathly and wild. Centuries old curse trapped me inside in it.
Time went along along with tides.
My time stopped in a loop; her clock kept running.


One, two, three, she kept being born as human being. I waited for her with longing in my cold, devilish eyes.
She forgot me; I kept every single memory of her in me.


She kept walking on the rough road; I became her protector like 'a knight in shining armour.'


If she had ever tried to run away from my side, I would chase her, hunt her down till the world ends

.

Afterall, in the end, she is My Only Eternal Love; She is mine and will always only be mine, forever!


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I really don't know what I have written. 😶

Just wanted to show that eternal love can be gray as well.

Happy 11th Pkyek Anniversary to all of us! 😍🥳

So, how was it? Please let me know in the comments!

MY OTHER WORKS-

PROPHECY-MEAN TO BE :-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153349154

VICIOUS EXTREMISM :-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/155142885


Once Upon A Time When I Fell In Love With You:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/155142868


These are available on Wattpad as well.

https://www.wattpad.com/user/sumi96

Edited by Susmitasumi96 - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

I hope you guys like it.❤

Posted: 2 years ago

I hope you guys enjoy it too! ❤

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by Susmitasumi96


I hope you guys like it.❤

 

First join us today on anniversary thread 😆

Posted: 2 years ago

Its too good 

Thank u for tagging me

Posted: 2 years ago

An interesting take on the dark eternal love 😃 well done! 👏

Posted: 2 years ago

Here Abhay is not tayaag ki murti... 😲 and it make me a little afraid .. 


I am worried for other male now . 😆, agar Abhay ka ye version Pkyek me hota to pata nhi kya hota... Ek murder mystery series ban jaati 😆 



Good take sumi 👍🏼

Edited by MyDriYa - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

I must say quite an interesting concept. The story perfectly fits for the title you chose! And it's only because of Abhiya that I started having interest in dark love stories 😆❤️

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by White-Lilac


I must say quite an interesting concept. The story perfectly fits for the title you chose! And it's only because of Abhiya that I started having interest in dark love stories 😆❤️

 

Have u watched Netflix series YOU 😆

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by MyDriYa


 

Have u watched Netflix series YOU 😆

Nahi 🤣

I don't watch shows and series nowadays🤣 ajeeb bimari lag gayi hai 🤣



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