(MG-SS) MLS SEASON 6 (TOO BAD TO BE GOOD GUYS)LAST PART & EPI/PAGE 113 - Page 3

Posted: 2 years ago

Superb banner......

Awesome character sketch......

Posted: 2 years ago

Part 1

Thrilling update.... splendidly written

of cos Geet did not expect such drama in her life

She is caught in the middle

of cos Champak could not help her

at least Maan saved Geet 

Gosh that guy is dead

but there was no police investigation nor a dead body

well Maan's face was hidden behind a mask

Surprised that Maan revealed himself to her

as expected he warns her to keep her mouth shut

was Maan following Geet?

yet again they meet at her new place....

of cos she is scared seeing the five guys

at least Maan assures them that Geet is no danger

Geet's questions are reasonable 

liked that he saved her again

wonder why?>

curious as to what Maan meant when he said they aren't killers without a purpose

Edited by khwaishfan - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

thank you for the note 

update as and when you can

Posted: 2 years ago

fascinating teaser

Maan is in her apartment and that too as a guest

will await the update 

Posted: 2 years ago

No problem dear we can wait🥰 

I tried many times to add myself in to your WordPress site ... But my request is not being accepted ...kindly do something 😔 

Posted: 2 years ago

congrats n thanks for new season

great update 

geet is scare to see maan's gang 

geet find maan little different from his gang n think him as leader as he command them not to hurt her 

Posted: 2 years ago

Congratulations for new story dear

Very nice start

Watting for update

Posted: 2 years ago

Congrats for new season 

Nice update 

Waiting for next update 

Posted: 2 years ago

Hey congratulations to your new MLS story. 

Awesome start . Geet saw maan killing someone and they was no case after that not even dead body. Ma’am keeps on coming in front of feet probably he got smitten by her in her first look. Did they both reside in same apartments 

Posted: 2 years ago

Wowww i so loved the first part the first maaneet meet is really awesome so maan is a person who kills people for a reason but affected with geet too how nice waiting to read more ❤️ thanks for the PM dear

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