Originally posted by: Mountains_LakesWonderful. Was it just me, but I wanted him to smell the hing when they were dancing. It wasn't a small smell, but hing left in dupatta can have very overpowering smell.
Glad that u opened up but he already knw that❤️🤗
Originally posted by: maanmeet1lovely start.......i loved it.......unable to do so on your post
feel the pain
Sure i'll ❤️
PART-2
Now only kids are dancing, raavi is helping dhara in kitchen.
Shiva is sitting on the cot remembering all the words said by kaki to raavi..!!
He is still fuming in anger and the thing which make him more angry is that she doesn't even said a single word to shut their mouth.
He murmured "Kya kru ...kya kru is mami ki behen ki beti ka dimag ka size matar jesa h"
Suddenly a voice came which bring back him to senses.
"Dhara bhabhi" suresh scream
"Dhara bhabhi" he again scream.
Shiva get up and ask him
"Are kya hua kyu chila rahi h"
"Shiva bhai, dhara bhabhi..." Before he could complete his sentence dhara arrive.
"Haan bol suresh, kya baat h!! Phele yeh bata tujse ubah subah kuch mangvaya tha voh toh dekar hi ni gya or abhi bhi khali hath aaya h tu..??"
"Hn bhabhi vahi toh puchne aaya hu ki apko mila ki nahi, meine voh jhule pr jo kapde rakhe the na uske upr rakh kar gya tha"
"Jhule par toh raavi bhabhi ke kapde the" krish said in between
Shiva look eye widened at him.
"Pan bhabhi aapne mangvaya kya tha" shiva asked in desperately
"Are shiva...Hing..!! Mangvayi thi"
Shiva stunned at her reply "hing" he murmured.
Immediately he fell like the ground slips under the feet...!!
Shiva rushed from the house and sit on his favorite place that is the tree.
"Iska matlab voh sab suresh ki wajah se hua or meine socha ki ...."
Flashback
Raavi is dressing up for function, he took her dupatta and started arranging it but she smells something "is it hing".
"Yeh hing ki itni gndi bhadbu kaha se aa rhi h"
Shiva enter that moment he is working in store.
He smells his hand which also has hing aroma.
He looked at her with anger in his eyes, he speak up
"Aey chipkali kya boli bhadbu aa rahi h, haan kyu ni aayegi tu toh phoolkumari h na tujhe toh mahak chahiye bhadbu kaha sehan hoti h terse!!"
"Shiva yeh tu kya bol raha h ky ho gya achanak tuje" she asked him in confusion
"Ky hua glti hui h tujse shadi krke kha tu or kaha m kirane ki dukaan..!!"
"Kaha ki baat kha lekar ja raha h shiva m teri baat nahi kr rhi thi dupatte ki baat kar rhi thi" she scream
He think for second and said
"Haan toh aayegi hi na tera dupatta mere kapdo ke sath tha hath lg gya hoga toh chli gyi bhadbu haina"
"Shiva kya bol raha h, jha m baat smbhalne ki koshish krti hu tu baat bigad deta h, shiva shadi hm dono ki hui h compromise krna pdega m bhi toh kar rhi hu na"
"Kya bola ?? compromise...sahi h tu kar mei nahi krne wala..!!"
"Chal nikal yaha se" he said furiously
Flashback end~
"Kitna bada gadheda hu mei, sunne chahiye thi baat ...!!" He said in disappoint
After 10min of complete silence
"Pan voh bhi toh bta skti thi na, usko btana hi nahi tha..!! Thk h meine mauka nahi diya..pan usne hi bola na voh compromise kar rahi h!!"
His heart and eyes again filled with fire of anger.
Now the function has been over, all the guest leave the house and the family members is resting in their respective rooms.
Raavi is in the kitchen, handling the work as she wanted to kept herself engaged in some work. So that she could face shiva's face.
Shiva is sitting on bed thinking about the chaos and waiting for raavi's arrival.
"Yeh gadhedi kis bil m chup gayi h jo abhi tak aayi nahi".
After while,
Raavi enter the room , see shiva and she went outside.
Shiva is confused by this move, he stand up and stood in front of her but on distance..!!
"Aey chipkali yeh kya tha, andr aayi firse vapis kyu gayi??"
She don't want to look him so decide to keep quiet .
"Tujhse hi puch raha hu kanpur m hadtaal h kya??" He asked again angrily.
She again don't respond.
"Ohh samaj gya mei hu na isliye aana ni na tujhe or ab toh tera compromise k bare m muje pta chla gya h toh tu full tadi m rhegi haina.."
"Shiva...bakwass mat kar kuch bhi bole ja raha h" she said angrily with half tears.
"Haan bakwass hi toh h tujhe toh mahal chahiye yh toh ghosla h" he passed a taunt.
He looked at him, her face become red because of anger and disappointment.
She slightly murmured 'almarhi m se kapde nikal kar de"
He can't listen to her properly, he asked her again.
"Kya ...kya boli thoda zor se bolegi vese toh loudspeaker fir h tere gale m"
She is now frustrated with his interrogation. She speaks up loud.
"Shiva meine bola ki almarhi m se kapde nikal kar de"
He looked at her "kyu tere hath nahi h kya ya voh bhi bheje k sath bech k aayi h"
"Shiva tu de raha ya m krish ko bulau!!"
"Krish so raha h usko kyu preshan kregi..mei kyu du tere pero m mehndi lagi h kya aakr khud lele.."
"Shiva...meine bola na kapde nikal kr de"
"Tu khud le or yeh bahar khade khade kyu drame kar rhi h andr aa..!!" He claimed with haq.
She a deep breath look up and said
"Nahi aaungi tune hi bola tha na nikal jane ko..!!"
Shiva is stunned by her statement did she actually agreeing to his words..
"Aey gadhedi, kya bol rahi h tu kabse meri baate manne lagi, tere bheje m busa bhaar gya h"
"Manne lg gyi baat jb se tu esa ho gya" she said with heavy heart.
He can sense her emotions, every droplet of tears is scratching his heart, she is disappoint from him.
"Shiva..."she said
He choked once as he is not in senses,
"Mere kapde nikal kar de..!!"
"Nahi dunga" he said
"Shiva, mei bhaut thak gyi hu aaj mere kapde de jldi muje sona h"
"Nahi dunga kisine mana kiya h aaja andar" he said softly.
"Nahi aaungi..!!" She is stubborn
"Thik h mt aa, mei nahi dunga kapde dekhta hu kese nahi aati" He is more stubborn
"Fine, nahi de raha na"
He nodded no...
"Chatt pr jo kapde sookh rahe h na vhi phen leti hu tu reh andar" she said in rage and leave
Shiva is amused by her behavior..
Raavi angrily goes on the terrace and take out her clothes from rope.
"Gadheda, pagal, stupid smjhta kya h apne aap ko bhaut ziddi h ab dekh mei dikhati hu zid kya hoti h" she murmured.
She grab her clothes and find it little wet as the weather is in favour of rain their is some humidity and in atmosphere.
"Offo ab yeh bhi aaj sab mre sath ulta kyu ho raha h"
"Yeh sab na us gadhede ki wajah se horaha h, zameen nahi deh jati agr kapde de deta toh par nahi chattan pandya ki tadi h...!!" She said furiously
"Raavi take a deep breath " she by herself
"Ab room m toh ja nhi skti lad kar jo aayi hu.." she said cutely
"Koi baat nahi raavi phen le shukh jayege, vese bhi garmi ho rahi h thanda thanda lgega" she said trying to convince herself
She take the white chikakari kurta and palazzo and changed.
She went downstairs and looked around the aangan to find a space.
"Jab kapde lene hi nahi gyi toh sone bhi nahi jaungi, yeh par soungi par kaha??"
She turned her eyes wide abdomen to find the place. Krish was sleeping on the cot with his legs spread wide and besides him there were bedsheets lying on the ground.
Raavi see them and said "ab toh koi problem nahi h"
She went near him smiles n ruffles his hair once "chota gadheda h yeh"
She take the bedsheet spread it on the ground and sleep.
Shiva is restless he want her to be in the room..and also feeling little guilty about his behavior
"Shiva tu bhi na dedeta kapde toh kya chala jata kam se kam kamre m na aane ka ek or bahana toh nahi milta na...!!"
"Pan yeh aayi kyu nahi ab tak kaha reh gyi h yeh jakar hi dekhna padega"
He went outside to look find her, he directly jumped on the stairs as he thought that she was there, but suddenly he sense raavi's presence.
He turned around and find raavi sleeping on the cot, she is struggling with the space and fighting with mosquitoes in sleep.
He laughed at her and went closer.
He made some space adjusting somewhere and sit beside her and admiring her.
Is she beautiful yes she is ...!!
He ruffles her hair and tug the strand of hair behind the ear.
Raavi feel the warmth of his hand and grab his hand.
Shiva choked once, she open her eyes and found shiva in front of herself.
They shared a cute eyelock. Raavi averted the gaze witnessing a little awkwardness.
She managed to speak
"Tu...tu yaha kya kar raha h??"
"Yeh sawal toh mujhe tujhse puchna chahiye na??"
"Kyu, tujhe dikhai nhi diya kya so rahi thi, yaha machhar ki tarah bhin-bhinane aa gya" she angrily make pout.
He smiles and softly said,
"Chal kamre m"
She looked at him surprisingly
"Ky...ky kaha tune mei kamre m chalu, shiva tu shyad bhul gya h meine abhi thodi der phle tujhse kaha tha mei nhi jaungi"
"Dekh raavi, bol raha hu chal tu yaha preshan ho jayegi tujhe aadat nahi h" he said
"Nahi jaungi"
"Dekh, dimag ka dahi mt kar chup chap chal varna..!!"
"Varna kya" she give back with courage
He stand up, grab her waist and take off to the terrace.
"Shiva, chod muje kya kar raha h"
"Or tu kya kar rahi h??"
"Mei...kya kar rahi hu teri baat hi toh maan rahi hu na..!!"
He grab her arms tightly , she winced in pain
"Tu muje avoid kar rahi h..!!" He said with heavy throat.
"Or tu jo muje itno dino se kar raha h uska kya" she said directly looking into his eyes.
"Meri baat alag h raavi, tu sirf abhi apni zid ki wjah se kar rahi h....m kch bhi bolunga toh tu maan legi kya phle toh esa nhi krti thi tu..!!"
She ungrabed herself and pushed him
"Is baar maan li baat shiva..taang aa gyi hu tujhse, tere nakhro se, tere gusse se...kitna sahu haan insaan hu na mei bhi....jab mn m aata h suna kar chala jata h meri baat tak nahi sunta. Hmesa meri baato ka ulta matlab nikalta h akhir chahta kya h tu chali jau tujhe chodkar hmesa ke liye...!!"
Her eyes are filled with tears, they are dropping like a rain droplets slowly slowly, she get onto her knees and cry miserably.
He can't see her tears, it broke his eyes. He melted and went down.
He hold her chin, making her look in his eyes but she averted that..!!
"Raavi...!! Mei janta hu jo mei kar raha hu jo kara tha tere sath voh galat tha pan uska peeche kch baat h pan tu jo..."
She cut in between "muje nahi janna ki mei kya kr rahi hu kya nahi..tu kyu kar raha h..konsi baar h jo tujhe sataye ja rahi h jo tuje mujse dur kar rahi h"
She grabs his hands..he jerked it off and stand up turned his back towards her.
"Shiva...muje bta kya bt h..."
"Kuch nahi na mei tujhe samja paunga or na tu samaj payegi"
"Koshish krungi na shiva tu bta toh sahi"
"Raavi zid mat kar, tu ja soja"
"Nahi...jaungi tu jb tak nahi btayega kahi nahi jaunga" she claimed
Ughh he turned around grab her arms once again and pulled her closer.
"Kya sunna chahti h tu haan..!! Kya btau sab toh tujhe pata hi h na, mei tujhe deserve nahi karta raavi, tujhe gentlemen chahiye tha pan mila kon haan...kon mila mei..jo kirane ki dukaan h, jungli h, jaheel, gawar, unpadh h. Tujhe mahal chahiye tha na pr tujhe mila kya ghosla..!!
Tuje toh muje apne dosto se milvane m sharam aati h, pan teri galti nahi hu mei hu hi esa, na kapde pehenne dhang, na chalne ka or na hi baat karne ka..!!Mei toh tere sath chalne ke layak tak nhi hu raavi, kuch...kuch toh alag dikhata hoga na logo ko tabhi bolte h na...
Raa..raavi mei nahi chahta tu mere sath compromise kare... tu mujhse acha ladka deserve karti h, mei nahi chahta tu puri zindagi mere sath jabardasti rahe, apni khushiyaao ko laat maarke....tu...tuje phele bhi bola tha tu azad h apne faisle lene ke liye...tu ja sakti h agr tuje jana h toh mei nahi rokunga..!!" He said with tear filled eyes.
In the silent atmosphere , a sharp noise echo..
Shiva feel the warmth on his cheek, raavi is looking at him with red hue eyes...crying.
She cried more by slapping him, he stand still not utter even a single word because he know she is hurt...because of him, he deserve it.
"Kya bakwass kare ja raha h kuch bol nahi rahi toh kch bhi bolega...kya bol raha h mei chali jau tujhe chdkr....??"
"Bol na kya bol raha h...shiva shadi hm dono ne kari h nibani hum dono ko h faisla hum dono ka hona chahiye tu akele esa kese bol sakta h...!!
Shiva jo tune diary m padha esa kya tha usm jo tuje phele se nahi pta tha pura somnath janta tha voh baat tu bhi...!! Fir tujhe itna kyu frk pada...or voh diary meine ushi raat ko jala di thi kyuki mei nahi chahti thi hm dono ke beech m ladai ho...pr tu toh yahi chahta h na..!! Mei tujhe apne dosto se isliye nahi milvati kyuki har waqt tere sar par tandav chlta h kb kisko kya bol de kisi ko nahi pta...!! Tujhse behtar muje kon milega shiva...apni jaan daav pr lagakar tune meri jaan bachayi thi...voh ladka jo hmesa mere sath khada rehta h..shiva..jesa naam vesi seerat....!! Mei compromise isliye kar rahi hu taki tere nayi zindagi shuru kar saku par tu toh...!! She cried.
Shiva cupped her face with his both hand, he looked at her affectionately.. he is happy and emotional at the same time.
"Does she love him like he does..??" Shiva by himself.
"Shiva tuje itna bura kyu lg raha tha..." she asked him softly
"Voh..."
"Bol na shiva kyu frk pd raha tha tujhe"
"Voh...isliye kyuki m tera pati hu...!!" He trying to end this topic soon.
"Nahi shiva jhoot mt bol...mei janti hu sab ab mt chupa.."
"Kya tu janti h ki mei tujhse..." he stop in between seeing the smile on her face.
"Tu has kyu rahi h"
"Har baat ka jawab nahi hota shiva kuch baate batayi nahi jati mehsus kari jati h" she said.
Shiva smiles at her statement and hug her, she hugged him back.
The weather is in different mood today, it started raining
Her white chikankari suit become more fitted to her body making her skin visible, he slowly moves his hands around his waist.
She raise her hand and tangled it on his arms, they both looked at each other affectionately desperate to feel each other proximity.
He gently glid the strands of her hair behind the ears and kiss her earlob. She dig her nails on his shoulder and moaned his name which drive him even more crazier, she slowly makes his path from ear to neck. She pulled his hair and make him even more closer.
"Shiva.."
"Hmm"
"I love you bhootnath" she said with confident
"Hmm same" he laughed
"Aeyy yeh kya hota h..??" She make a fist and hit on his chest.
"Majak tha i love you too chipkali"
Their happiness is sparkling in the eyes, finally they confess their feeling to each other,
He move closer and seal the scene with a kiss...!!
The end~
Hey you beautiful people, this this end part of TS...!!❤️
Will catch you all soon...till thn takecare and stay happy...
Love,
S_Verma
Lovely, ending! Liked the confrontation and Raavi being stubborn about not entering the room!❤️
Isn't it the exact as we talked about...I mean stilll i take the credits, but kya likha hai Chotii tune...kitna ji kha gai mera tera to complete this lol but lagta hai it was worth waiting for all, anyways, ik its just 8d of exams but im gonna hell miss us discussing & decoding tracks and gossiping aroundddddd.....and idk how am i going to not watch it till a week....anyways jab mujhe daantni ki baat aati hai u act like mumma....lmao......❤️😆
and positivity u spread to everyone...its my perfect choti and u being mein hu us type ki raavi lollll....❤️
achha anyways, keep writing out of idea boxes and then Ill jump in...not related in all ways buttt wanted to bragg some taarifs for youuuuu...chal ab udd mat and detective mode on kar ikyk..
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