ShiVi OS: Back To Square One - Page 4

La la la la la........ 😍

In love with this one, really hope you continue it if you can though. 

Beautifully written 

loved it❤️❤️

I love, love, love seeing the intense Shiva compared to the compliant nervous Shiva 😍😍

Great OS as usual!!

I LOVE IT I LOVE IT❤️. 

THISSSS IS WHAT HAVE BEEN MISSING SINCE THEIR MARRIAGE.

SHIVA’S ANGER HAVE BEEN TONED DOWN SO MUCH THAT I CANT FEEL THE INTENSITY BETWEEN SHIVI BUT THIS ONEEEESHOTT🔥🔥🔥. AAAGGGG LAGA DE. 

THANKS FOR THISSS❤️

The last part was really intense

For a second I too got scared😬😬

Amazingly written OS🤗

Amazing 😍😍😍

Loved the intense Shiva and their dance ❤️❤️🔥🔥

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Ahsuuuu❤️❤️❤️❤️

This was🔥🔥🔥🔥 

I loved the fiery, intense pre wedding shiva😍

He has somewhat toned down after marriage, which is understood as he saw raavi in her most vulnerable form.i had hoped that this insecurity track would bring him back, but the continuity is lost in the few mins shivi scene the makers show over one week 💔 

Thank you so much for writing this, it was an awesome read.I know something like this won't happen in the show but I soo wish it does.❤️

thank you so much pixu 🤗

they toned down his intensity and increased his pagalpan 😭 the insecurity track did him so dirty 😭

I just want my aag boy back 🤣 the hot hot one 

Originally posted by: Sugarcanes_AC

Awesome 🔥🔥🔥

thank you so much jaan for reading and commenting 🤗

Originally posted by: Transference

Uffffff 

I loved this one. I miss the intensity of Shivi a lot. This softer, mellowed version is so 🤪in the show. This is extremely intense and so 

thank you piu jaan 🤗

I miss him too 😭 but I wrote this before he did the pushing act and now I don't know what exactly I want 😭

Originally posted by: Scarysea

OMG this was fire❤️ Wow☺️

thank you for taking the time and reading jaan 🤗 love youuu