Wooowww this was hot, hot, hot 🔥🔥🔥
Wooowww this was hot, hot, hot 🔥🔥🔥
Woah Ashu... This was intense!!! Shiva just lost it towards the end.
Unlike Raavi, I dislike soft Shiva 🤣 I love this Shiva 🔥 Aag boy + Gunda boy
Beautifully written!
I loved it🖤🖤🖤
Write more Aashu
Pleaase tell me, akhir kya chahti hai Shiva ?
Please I just am so confused 🤬
And I’m damn well about to f*cking murder his ass for being rough with Raavi !
She’s finally f*cking giving him what he wants and he called it a tantrum ? Really ?
I’m sorry I’m being emotional ! I’m just all over the place busy these past 2 weeks that my head isn’t it the right place !
Please please pleaasssee write a companion piece to this ! At least the outcome of this fight ! Of how Shiva finally accuses her of doing natak the past few days of wanting to stay with him and finally giving up. Of how Raavi at least defends herself saying she tried and tried but he pushes her away and turns her down everytime. How was she supposed to hold on to someone that didn’t want to be HERS. She let go of Dev because he wasn’t hers. She tries to hold on to him, because she thought finally she had SOMEONE that is SOLELY HERS. Of how she finally, finally broke down and Shiva finally SEES, how hurt she had been BECAUSE OF HIM.
Fuuuhj, sorry about that 😂
If you don’t want to write it, it’s okay too. I’m just so all over the place right now, I’m not even thinking straight 😂😂
GREAT JOOB JAAN ! As always ! ♥️♥️♥️
I really missed your stories alot🤗
Thank you so much for tagging😊
This one is wonderful... Although intense Shiva is way more in pre wedding scenes
But I can still imagine if Raavi try to leave him he will be back to square one😛
He really can't let her go Loved the OS...
This was such an amazing os…
I lovvvedd it…
There conversation were amazing..
ShiVi are back again from where they have started…
Beautifully written 👏
This ShiVi is missing on-screen
Lovedddd ittttt ❤️❤️
Loved it soo much 🔥
Shivi ❤️
This was a full circle... parallel to the chodunga nahi tod dunga... amazing
Ufff...Ufff..Ufff...lovedddd it❤️
This Shiva was so intense🔥🔥he won't let his chipkali go at any cost Maza aa gaya..plz continue it☺️
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