ShiVi OS: Bole Choodiyaan - Page 2

Posted: 2 years ago

This was so cuteeee💗💗💗 Wish Shiva does something like this for Raavi 

Posted: 2 years ago

Your writing is absolutely amazing!!! Beautiful story!!!!

Posted: 2 years ago

So beautifully you have penned down their acceptance for each other through gifts, care and the need of their own secrets 🥺

Love it❤️
Love Krish for asking the perfect question 🤣

Posted: 2 years ago

Aww this was such a beautiful read! So very sweet as well, made me smile like a maniac 😆

Posted: 2 years ago

Aaaaluuuu this was so beautiful!!!

I loved it!

It was everything I wish they show🖤🖤🖤🖤

Write more!!!!

Posted: 2 years ago

Aaliya, this was so beautiful❤️

Loved the flashback story ❤️

Posted: 2 years ago

Where do I begin? 


Raavi's comment about Shiva's besabri and intensity was love!! And Krish ka tadka on it was sone pe suhaga!!!😍


Her absolute delight over receiving the bangles perfectly shows her desire to find joy in simple things. Brownie points to Shiva for noticing that about her. 😳👏


I loved how Raavi was possessive of the gift from her husband. Shiva too, for that matter, with his taking care of the shirt from biwi - a far cry from the the guy who never bothered about his clothes. ❤️


Gaumbi ne kholi Shiva ki pol.😆

ShiVi Vs Dhara ki memory was hilarious and apna Krishu with his two cents was pure gold!! I'll always be partial to him🙈😛


The flashback scene stole my heart. ShiVi had a decade of history between them, surely there'd be some memories where they weren't just fighting. Ive always wanted to see the ones where they were there for each other in good and bad times. Thank you for that.🤗


And lastly, their conversation and Raavi's resolve. I was like you go girl! Get your man!!! Be the chipkali he thinks you are!!! 😃


This was so so beautiful! Absolutely magical!!!🤗❤️

Posted: 2 years ago

Awwwwww! I loved the title! ❤️

This is such a beautiful OS, Aaaluuuu! Loved her excitement seeing the bangles. Loved how Shiva took care of the shirt 😆❤️

Also, the tax waala dialogue🤣

And the ending 

Posted: 2 years ago

Aliyaa🤗This is sooo beautiful❤️I could hear the voice of bangles, feel Raavi's happiness and see little Shiva's first tremors of love through your wordsLoved it🥳

Posted: 2 years ago

This was so beautiful and light hearted story😍

I know it was lobg enough but I wanted more😬😬

I loved Shivi and the bangle scene

Lets hope if they show something lije this in show or not

Keep writing dear🤗



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