The unsolved topic- kachori *part-3*updated..*Completed* - Page 3

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by barkhaa_tpm


Omg Saku yeh kitna pyaara thaa !! Why have I not seen this before 


Your version of the kachori scene was better than the actual one 


Please do write more !!


Aww barkhaa❤️ So glad that u like it..

The actual one is spoiled by makers but hm apni iccha ko puri krenge🤣

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by MeeraWrites


I'm loving this kachori tale. 🤗❤️


Krish ke pet pe kuch nahi tikta. 🤣 


Do update the next chapter soon...


Krish hai hi esa😛🤣

Thankyou for reading

Posted: 2 years ago

PART -3



Raavi goes outside the haveli to find krish.

Krish is hiding behind the trees to avoid her question session.

"Krish kaha h tu, sun na muje tujhse baat karni h"

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"Lagta h ungli tedi karni hi pdegi" raavi by herself.

"Offo ab krish ko kaha dhundu muje voh tu us ladki ke baare m btana tha jo usko ko dhund rahi thi" she said in high tone.

Krish bumped out "bhabhi ruko toh sahi chetak par sawar kyu ho rhi ho"

Vese....(blushing) konsi ladki ki baat kar rahe ho???

Raavi smiles mischievously

"Voh ribbon wali jiske bare m tu bolta rehta h"

"Voh...voh mili thi apko or kya bola"

"Fas gya bacha ab baato hi baato m sach nikalwati hu" raavi said proud of herself.

"Or puch rahi thi ki tujhe khana bnana aata h ki nahi, meine bola haan aata h or kachoriiii toh bhaut hi lajawab banata h...Thik kiya na??"

"Arey raavi bhabhi jhoot nahi bolna chahiye tha na, par koi ni m bhi shiva ka idea use krunga ushe bhi pta nhi chlega jese apko nahi chala...(give a high-five to raavi) he realise wht he said...ohhnoo...!!

"Mei toh soch rahi thi ki mehnat karni pdegi par nahi tu toh bhaut jldi out ho gya krish...(laughed) Chal ab bata kya h kahani...??

"Voh bhabhi mei kisi kahani ko nahi janta.."

"Ae gadhede matlab jo raita failya h na voh bata..!!"

"Bhabhi mei sab kuch nahi janta bs shiva ko dekha tha chupke se kitchen m ja raha tha or kachori table pr rkhkr aapke aane ka wait kr rha tha..!!

Bhabhi aap shiva ko mt btana ki meine apko btaya h vrna voh muje maar daalega"

Raavi is smiling hard, she is feeling on the top of the world...heartbeat fast as train filled with joy ...she is not able to control her happiness..!!

"Bhabhi" krish scream

Krish scream helped her to came back in sense.

"Hm hm khushi chupayi nahi ja rahi h kya baat h.."

"Chup kar shiva ko batau" she warned

"Nahi nahi mei ja raha hu, aap apni sapno ki duniya m khoye raho.."

He rushed from there..!!

Raavi is looking for shiva in the entire haveli as she wnna talk with him, but couldn't able to find him. She came in room and find shiva standing there.

"Acha hua tu mujhe mil gya, mei tujhe poore haveli m paglo ki trh dhund rahi thi.."

"Kyu...tujhse kbse mujhse gaape marne ka shok ho gya"

"Mowgli ka junglee dimag.." she said in irritated

"Bakwass mat kar muje tujhse baat karni h..bhaut important"

"Pan muje nahi karni" said lefting the room

She hold his wrist, he turned around and looked into his brown eyes.

"Sun toh sahi, voh m krish se mili..(ohh no shit yeh nahi bolna tha)

His eyes widened..."matlab krish ne sab ulti krdia...uske pet m koi baat kyu ni reh sakti..shiva beta bhaag le yaha se varna is officer ka na interrogation shuru ho jayega.."shiva by himself

"Shiva..."(she said innocently) and started tracing her fingers on his chest..."muje pata h voh kachori....."

Before she could complete, he pushed her and rushed from there.

"Shiva..shiva sun toh sahi mei jnti hu sab tune kara h..shiva..!! Sune bina hi chle gya gadheda..koi baat nahi raat ko toh yahi aayega na tab dekhti hu.."

"Yeh Gadhedi na, is krish ko toh chodunga nahi..raat m uske sone k bd jaunga..varna fr shuru ho jayegi.."

At night..!!

Raavi is lying on her side of bed and waiting for shiva's arrival.

"Itni der ho gyi kaha reh gaya yeh bhootnath, stupid, idiot gadha fool...!!

Meanwhile shiva is waiting for her to fall asleep.."der ho gyi so gyi hogi ab jaata hu..!!"

He silenty open the door, raavi sense it and pretend to asleep.

He sneak glances at her and sign in relief.

"Acha hua so gyi"

He looked at her and smile, turned towards the cupboard , takes out his shirt and thn vest.

Raavi open her eyes to check, but she left wide eyes as soon as see him without vest.

He is charming, his biceps arms and muscular body structure is freaking hot. She is now not able to control herself, she only want to feel his body, tracing her hands over his arms..!! Her thoughts started becoming wild, suddenly shiva turned and she close her eyes.

He sense something fishy, he takes out the vest from cupboard and wear it.

He moves closer to her, place his hand over her cheeks, she shivers a little.

He cupped it once and smiles as he now know she is pretending to asleep. He go and lay on his side of bed.

His back is facing towards her, she started the conversation.

"Shiva sun na"

"Hmm"

"Mujhe tujse baat karni h"

"Hmm" (as he know his chipkali is stubborn and he have no other way to escape)

"Kya tabse hm hm kare ja raha h"

He sit and hence she too..

"Shiva voh kachori tu lekar aaya tha na"

He look at her once, stand up from bed, she rush on his side and make him seat.

She took her both on his shoulder.

"Shiva...dekh mei janti hu voh kachori tu laya tha, par tu chupa kyu raha h??"

He is avoiding to look at her, as it is difficult for him to face her with proximity.

"Shiva..thankyou" she said with smile

"Voh...voh mei bhabhi ke liye kara taki unko or hurt na ho..!!"

"Shiva jab bhi tu fumble karta h na tu jhoot bolta h"

"Esa...esa kuch nahi h chod muje"

He take off her hands from his shoulder and stood up again she hold him, but this time move closer to him.

"Shiva fikar karta h toh btata kyu nahi h..??"she said with teary eyes 

He is looking into her eyes, this girl is impossible, her eyes her desperate to know everything from his mouth 'his unspoken love too'..!!

He gently rested his hand on her waist and other under her neck.

"Fikar jatayi nahi jaati raavi"

"Raavi" he call her raavi after ages...this is special..!!

She place her hand over his which is rested on neck.

Her eyes is now filled with tears, she is feeling like she achieve everything she want 'His Shiva' too..!!

"Shiva tu mere liye khana lekar aaya (she gulped once) kyu..kyuki tu janta h meine khana nahi bnaya, tu chup gya yeh dekhne k liye ki meine khaya ya nahi. She pat on his cheek 'gadheda' or toh or krish ko bhi mana kar diya btane se. Pan tuje pta h sach na sabke samne aa jata h..or us sach m teri fikar thi...tera...tera pyar tha..!!

He looked at her surprised..'pyar'...does she know about that, did..did she also love him..or only telling him???

"Shiva..thankyou again.."she take his hand closer to her mouth and kissed it.

The grab on her waist become tighter, he close his eyes...his blood is flowing fast in his veins, she could feel his sensation and warmth..!!

She looked at him for reply, he looked at her and hold both of her hand..!!

"Raavi...tu meri biwi h, meri zimedaari h, mei yeh kabhi nahi chahunga ki meri galtiyon ki saza tu bhugte or kabhi agar padhe bhi toh uska asar tujhe preshan na kare..janta hu tu aaj preshan thi isliye khna nhi bnaya , or yeh bhi jnta hu tu kitni badi gadhedi h, ziddi h..!!

Behosh ho jati toh kaha lekar ghumta tujhe vese hi itni bhari h tu...dinosaur..(she pouted angrily) he laughed..!!

Vese toh mei akele khana gya tha pan tere khaylo ne vaha bhi nahi chodha, tujhe kachori pasand h na, isliye lekar aa gya or jaha tak baat h tujhe na batani ki toh voh mei janta tha tu mehsus zaroor karlegi haina...!!"

He hold her chin and make her look into his deep eyes..waterly eyes are deep as ocean..both are flooded with happiness, emotions and love.

Their lips curved into smiles.

"Fikar..jatayi nahi jati tune hi bola na vese hi pyar bhi jataya nahi jata bs mehsus ho jata h"

She said and place head on his chest .

He grab her with arms..close his eyes to feel the warmth.

Shiva gently unfold her, she looked at him..

He move more closer to her, slightly bent his head inside, both close their eyes, now their forehead and nose are touched, they could feel each other breath....and this time none of them averted and at last with thousand of desires, they kissed passionately..!!


-THE END





HEY YOU GUYS...

So this the end of this TS, thankyou so much for showing  love on this...❤️

Will be back soon with another one🤗

Love,

S_Verma ❤️

Posted: 2 years ago

Beautiful ending! I loved ShiVi's conversation..  

the line "fikar jatayi nahi jaati" was typical SHiva! ❤️

Posted: 2 years ago

This was such a Shiva thing to do . I can totally imagine them both 

Posted: 2 years ago

That was beautiful!! So glad you wrote about this scene. Now I feel like we got the closure we needed! ❤️

Posted: 2 years ago

Beautiful ending! I loved ShiVi's conversation..  

the line "fikar jatayi nahi jaati" was typical SHiva! ❤️

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Yes he is

Glad that you like it❤️

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by Scarysea


This was such a Shiva thing to do . I can totally imagine them both 


🤗🤗



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