The unsolved topic- kachori *part-3*updated..*Completed* - Page 2

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by Iktara22


Here she is!!My partner in crime for ffs & writeups!!!Sakku take my hearttt❤️

Jaldi jaldi aage likh or else you know the ,ukka and thappaddddddddddd🤣❤️


Aww my buddy thankiewww❤️

Hn mukka thappaad i knw....ab delay hoga or bhi zyda🤣

Posted: 2 years ago

Part 2



Yeh shiva ne kiya, aww

Nahi par voh gadheda kyu krega ...voh bhi mere liye??

Impossible..!!!

Par is language m toh bs yhi bolta h..??

"Yeh Gadhedi kitna soch kya rahi h, chup chap kha nahi skti kya!!" Shiva murmured in frustration

Raavi turned around again to check the surrounding, still no one is visible.

"Ab hai toh yeh mere liye hi na, toh kha hi leti hu" raavi said

She hold the kachori and break a small piece from the corner dip it in curd.

Shiva take out hid head slightly more from the pillars to get the clear view,

She takes her hand near the mouth and the note flashes in front of her eyes

"Ghur kya rhi h ab

Tere liye hi h khale"

She smiles and take his first bite, shiva admire her from distance and smile too.

"Hush, is mami ki behen ki beti ke gale m kuch gaya toh sahi varna kahi behosh hojati toh aafat aajati"

'Chl shiva ab tu bhi khale' He said with relief

He takes out his kachori from the packet and eat it.

Raavi sense shiva's presence and immediately turned towards the pillar where shiva is standing but he hide again.

"Muje esa kyu lga ki yaha shiva h" raavi said confusingly

Shiva smiles at this statement

"Acha matlab is chipkali ko meri aahat bhi mehsoos hoti h"

Raavi took the plate, sit on the chair and shiva sit on the platform .

And they both enjoy their hide and seek treat.

Raavi is sitting in the room folding the clothes and murmuring song.

"Bhabhi mei andr aa jau" krish scream

"Haan krish aaja chila kyu raha h"

"Kya bhabhi aap bhi or btao kesi ho??"

"Yeh kaisa sawal h krish, kya hogaya h kuch btana h toh seedha seedha bta muje bhot kam h"

"Bhabhi btana toh bhot kuch h voh kach..."he realise what the hell with my tongue.

"Ky..kya bola tu phirse bol zara"

"Na..nahi mei kya bola kuch bhi toh nhi"

*yeh bhabhi ke kaan toh badhe tez h, hey somnath bacha lena varna shiva muje maar dalega* krish by himself

Their is another knock on door and rishita enter

"Krish tu yaha h mei kabse tujhe dhunde ja rahi hu"

Haash....!! He signs in relief

"Ab mei yaha se kuch bhi bhahana krke bhaag jaunga thankyou patrani bhabhi"

"Krish..voh dev sabke liye khane k liye samaan laya tha na voh kaha rakha h" rishita said

"Voh chalo mei btata hu"

Rishita and krish left in hurry..!!

Matlab voh kachori dev laya tha shiva nahi or m kitni badi buddhu hu,zyda hi soch bethi, us bandar se expectation rkhna matlab apne sar pr patthar marna.

"Par voh note toh shiva ne likha h na" she said cutely

After 1-2min

Ohh ab samjhi yeh sab na sabki planning h taki m shiva se impress ho jau or hm dono paas aa jaye..!!

Raavi is in hurry and suddenly get into someone, her toes twist, she close her eyes and was about to fall but she feels hands over his waist with a tight grab and her hands tangled around their neck.

She slowly open his eyes and found herself in shiva's arm.

Their breath stuck for a minute when eyes meet, there was intensity and affection for each other.

Raavi wanted to averted his gaze but couldn't able to do that because her eyes is drown in shiva's deep eyes who is staring her continously without blink.

He slowly make her stand, their hands are in the same position, eyelock is still maintained.

Shiva moves his hand from waist gliding towards arms and finally rested on her neck.

All his touch makes sudden sensation which heats up her body. She gulped once and look into his eyes that seems like that she is giving him permission .

He tug the strand of her hair behind the ear, hold her chin and makes her look into his eyes again, he bent his head down, close his eyes to feel the proximity and just about they are into it, raavi break the contact, push him away.

He is about to fall because of sudden pressure but she grab him by his wrist, they both look at each other and reminds suman's blessing,

"Aise hi girte padte ek dusre ko sambhalna sheekh jaoge"

Raavi and shiva both averted their gaze.

"T..tu yaha kya kar raha h??"

"Mei voh...mei kuch nahi tu bta??"

"Chicken mtlb kitchen m ja rhi thi"

"Haan toh ja"

Raavi come in the kitchen, rishita and dhara are making their respective food.

Raavi start cutting vegetables.

Dhara go to the dining but stop as soon she watch 4 brothers hiding behind the pillars.

'Tum sab yaha kya kar rahe ho'

"Voh hum tum logo ki help karne aaye the haina"

All of them nodded

They all rush into the kitchen sit there and start helping their wives.

R- "aa gya mera kaam kharab karne"

S- "aey zyda bolegi na toh"

R- "toh kya? Aaj sirf teri wjh se yeh batwara hua sara kam krna pd raha h.. tera bhi..!!"

S- "Ho gya tera de idhar, mei khud apna khana bana lunga"

All of them looked at both, raavi said nervously

"Shi...shiva kya kar raha h m..mei kar rahi hu na" with a fake smile

R- "Dhyan se dekh le zehar nahi milaya h"

S- " Haan tu yehi chahti h na shak paida ho jaye mere mn m jesa subah nahi khya vse abhi bhi na khau..!!"

Krish jump in between

"Aey..shiva jhoot kyu bol raha h tu subah nahi lekr aaya kach...(pause) at shiva death glare

R- Krish kya bola tu, subah bhi esa kuch bol raha tha na bata sach kya h..??

She looked at shiva for answer but he avoid looking at her and whistles

K- Bhabhi..voh voh mera call aaya h mei jata hu.

He rushed away from their as fast as he can.

R- Krish sun toh..

She again look at shiva..

"Shiva tune suna mei vahi suna kya jo meine suna mtlb thk se nahi par..."

S- Mei....meine kuch nahi suna tere kaan baj rahe h..!!

He stand up and look at her once she was confused and amazed..!!

He left without any delay

"Yeh bhi chala gya, ab toh pakka kuch gadbad h, yeh krish se sab btayega..!!"


"Shiva tu kitna bhi dur chale ja

Mujhe tere sath hi payega"





Hey lovelies back again, ignore the mistakes as i updated it in hurry...

Love,

S_Verma ❤

Edited by S_Verma - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

Chotii this is sooo funny and cuteeee....jaldi jaldi next update de mujheeee

Posted: 2 years ago

Awsome update ❤😍😍


Aree yr ye dev kyu khane ka saman le kar aaya tga😐

Kaam bigadu


Waiting for next part 

Cont soon🤗

Posted: 2 years ago

Omg Saku yeh kitna pyaara thaa !! Why have I not seen this before 


Your version of the kachori scene was better than the actual one 


Please do write more !!

Posted: 2 years ago

I'm loving this kachori tale. 🤗❤️


Krish ke pet pe kuch nahi tikta. 🤣 


Do update the next chapter soon...

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by Iktara22


Chotii this is sooo funny and cuteeee....jaldi jaldi next update de mujheeee


Bilkul Bilkul 

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by CheerlessIM


Awsome update ❤😍😍


Aree yr ye dev kyu khane ka saman le kar aaya tga😐

Kaam bigadu


Waiting for next part 

Cont soon🤗


Haha, no one likes dev🤣

Glad that u like it, will update soon❤️

Posted: 2 years ago

This was lovely! But God no. She thinks Dev got the Kachoris?! Hope Krish reveals to her that it was shiva! Continue soon!



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