Originally posted by: MihikaWait.....Raghav....died???😲
And I realise now that this is an OS .....matlab yahi pe khatam😲
It was cute but ending😭
Loved it👍🏼
Now somethings need to be open ended right? So can't answer that.
Thnx a lot.
Originally posted by: MihikaWait.....Raghav....died???😲
And I realise now that this is an OS .....matlab yahi pe khatam😲
It was cute but ending😭
Loved it👍🏼
Now somethings need to be open ended right? So can't answer that.
Thnx a lot.
Originally posted by: ReemShahThat was an unpredictable ending and quite shocking especially the last line
and how did Pallavi not manage to see the blood while she was holding him---he hid his pain from Pallavi perfectly well behind the smile
Although I would love to read a continuation on what happened---do write it if you wish.
But this os was cute and your version of their life post separation is really good
Not sure if it came in properly or not but I tried to reason that out in writing itself. I myself hate loopholes. Just try a read once again or else bad writing maybe.
Thnx. Severe time issues. Thats y restricted it to OS.
Arey...no. I wasn't asking anything here ... I interpreted that....you have done a great job as writer👏Originally posted by: lateuser1234
Now somethings need to be open ended right? So can't answer that.
Thnx a lot.
Originally posted by: MihikaArey...no. I wasn't asking anything here ... I interpreted that....you have done a great job as writer👏
My bad. thnx.
You are an all-rounder, wonderful VMs and beautiful writing👏
Thanks for the open ending, it gives us reader to imagine our kind of ending.👍🏼
Thanks for the PM😊
Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRonYou are an all-rounder, wonderful VMs and beautiful writing👏
Thanks for the open ending, it gives us reader to imagine our kind of ending.👍🏼
Thanks for the PM😊
Thoda sa zyada ho gaya. Anyways Thanks.
Yes. Thats the reason I like open endings.
Originally posted by: lateuser1234
Thoda sa zyada ho gaya. Anyways Thanks.
Yes. Thats the reason I like open endings.
I don't think, forum people will agree with.
If possible do read the heartbroken heartbreaker from Wattpad, superb writing and and the best open ending.
Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon
I don't think, forum people will agree with.
If possible do read the heartbroken heartbreaker from Wattpad, superb writing and and the best open ending.
Will try to get my hands on that for my next travel.
It is awesome loved it ❤️🤗
But ending what's happened to Raghav are you going to continue it
Originally posted by: RAGHVIFAMIt is awesome loved it ❤️🤗
But ending what's happened to Raghav are you going to continue it
No. I won't continue. And regarding what happened to Raghav. This happened.
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Something died that day
But they said nothing was killed
No mourning ,no cries
Nothing unusual which truth defies
The smile is as big as always
The laugh is the real one
Still it wasn’t pondered
Never that laugh have the pure send off no one wondered
Shatters never shelter have known it for too long
Why that off doesn’t kept it to where it belong
But it ends ,was always meant to be
Something was lost which keeps the beats
It laughed a lot It preached
but don’t expect to be real Cause reality is screeched
Fakeness is what everyone wants
So that is what they get
It have to carry each and every ounce of Its regret
Surprised to see no one awestruck and That’s anyways good
cause that what It wanted as not they but It was a fool
Then again what would have surprised was never seen
As It knew something died that day
But everyone believed that nothing was killed
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