The bare back pt 2 continued : fatejo os

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Posted: 7 days ago

Running her slim fingers again and again into the soft fabric checking through the details of each one she was annoyed like hell

How could he? Just how could he ? He knows i dont wear such clothes and still ,,, 

She just couldnt think clearly 

Is he doing this on purpose ?

Jasu ka gussa vo mujpey nikal reha hai?

Meri bezati karney ka acha behana dunda hua hai

Frustrated just frustrated how could he ?

I thought he was my best friend

Little did she realise that the good friend had turned into a monster of lust within the last few hours,

Thanks to her bare back

What shall i do now ?

Moving restlessly to and fro in the room ,

Wait a minute , she stopped

Could he mistakenly took someone else 's purchase. ?


He was sitting in the living room anxious

How is she going to react ? She never wore such clothes before?

He was restless shifting himself a little in that giant leather brown sofa?

Perhaps she might like it and would want to try?

And she might need my help , 

He leaned back resting his head on the soft cushion rewinding that beautiful moments of yesterday morning

That soft glowing skin . The desire to feel it ,

That curvy waist was so perfect in its feminisme,

Never thought for once that she is so beautiful

The need to hold her ,

His universe  of fantasy was finally interrupted by the bell of a phone nearby,

Irritated with his eyes still closed

Arey kiska bhej raha hai ?

Bhai apka , mahi replied passing by the hallway to the kitchen holding a glass of orange juice,

He was nervous , its her call

Tejo ji 

She interrupted before he could speak

Zera thodi der key liye ao uper 

Her tone was normal, he was excited

I am just thinking too much

He smiled to himself

Perhaps she need my help to tie it again, the morning memories refreshed once more

He stood up an action of reflex took quick steps on the staircase

The outbursting desire wrapped his mind in it that it made his body swayed once he reached the corridor to his room

Full investigation done 

No human species found, clear corridor 

No one noticing 

He danced slowly  to the tunes of kishore kumar super duper retro hit singing along moving himself accordingly to its lyrics

Yeh sham mastani madhosh kiye jai

Mujhey dor koi khichey teri ore liye jai


Teri ore teri ore kar kar key ghisk pit key bechara biwi ki bare back key lust ka maara paunchgeya apni menzil

Knocked on the door when it was already open and said tejo ji may i come in pls 

What  a lunatic ? He was already in his room unnoticed by his own actions 


She was irritated

Fatehji ap already ander aa chukey ho

He looked at his distance from the door,

Practically a feet inside the room 

He smiled innocently hiding the monster in him pretending

Apko kapdey achey leg gey?

Irritated she held it up

A yellow top 

Yeh dekho , she was pointing to the back of it

Is kemez mey kehin bhi apko pichwada nezer aata hai?

He grinned to irritate her more

Mall mey sab aisey hi miley they pichwadaless 

She was shocked , realising it was his purchase after all

How could he ?

Tujhey legta hai mey aisey kepdey pehen thi hun?

He leaned against the door 

Par tum selwar kemez pehentii toh ho? Whats the big deal

She couldnt  believe his ignorance

Oi angrez mey pichwadey waley pehenti hun


Gurpreet walks in with his protein shake 

He took it politely

She walked towards tejo looking at the yellow top

Then going through the other pieces lying on the bed

She wss shocked 

Fateh yeh sab kya hai

Mall mey aisey hi miley they he said in beween the shake sips 


Tejo was silent. Thinking now let the mama bear handle her teddy bear

Gurpreet blasted him left right centre from his jasmin ka pagal wala pyar to marriage humiliation and now further insults to her daughter in laws dignity,

He was silently taking his slow sips enjoying the flavors of the shake telling to himself

She will calm dowm in a while and then i get to see the wondeful delicious sight that i wanted thinking cruelly how he destroyed the tags and bills at the mall dustbin so they could not be exchanged

Full proof devised plan to satify his lust antennas


Bills kahan hai or in mey tag bhi nehin hai

Mall sey lekey aya hai ya chor bazaar sey 

Gurpreet asked angrily frusttrated with his actions

He chuckled

Maa national boxer hun meri bhi kuch image hai key nehin

Aur jo apni biwi ki image kherab kar reha hai uska kya

She lashed at him


Thinking with  lust filled memories of the bare back

 Biwi ki toh mey dor bandh key hi rehunga 

The tune played again

Bare back tera mechley dil mera 

Fateh ! 

The tone disappeared with gurpreet calling his name

Arey mummy chill yaar 


Sehi toh bol raha hai 

Dadi interrupted walking into the room

Gurpreet showed her the tops

Toh kiya hua dadi said calmly

She continued saying they live in the 21st century now

Tejo is young and shes got a beautiful figure

The tune started again in fatehs subconscious mind

Bare bsck tera mechley dil mera


Then dada walked in saying whats the matter followed by khusbeer and mahi

Lo pura khandhan hi iketha ho geya 

Mahi came up finally with an idea to solve the backless issue which annoyed fateh

Let her cover it up with her dupatta

All agreed finally

Fateh was like 

Arey tu behen hai ya dushman 

Kyun pyara sa nezara kherab ker rehi hai


All left. Tejo was placing the newly bought items into her cupboad 

Fsteh relieved a sigh finally

Dupatta hua toh kya hua 

Kuch na kuch toh dikhai dega

The tune repeated 

Bare back tera machley dil mera


Dada and dadi were in their room 

Each holding a glass of lassi

Tossing to  their victory 

A twist in the tale 

It was their fabulous plan 




To be continued

























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Edited by Aniash - 7 days ago
Posted: 7 days ago

Oh God 😂😂😂

I love your write ups.


By the way, Writers may have heard you. There is a bare back scene in tomorrow's episode.

Posted: 7 days ago
Originally posted by mistofshadows


Oh God 😂😂😂

I love your write ups.


By the way, Writers may have heard you. There is a bare back scene in tomorrow's episode.


Tq dear


I watched it already

Very happy

Posted: 7 days ago

Oh man it was amazing loved it

Posted: 7 days ago

It was hilarious, we never got to see the naughty side of fateh on the show, so it is really refreshing to read.. 

Do update the next part soon..waiting for it

Posted: 7 days ago
Originally posted by Sparklle801


It was hilarious, we never got to see the naughty side of fateh on the show, so it is really refreshing to read.. 

Do update the next part soon..waiting for it


Thats what i was trying to show. What he did for jasmin onscreen i am  showing it in the forum for tejo

His cuteness and naughtyness is a treat to watch

Hope they showed it onsscreen as well 

Regarding naughty ideas arey puch mat

My bheja is full fried with fateh the naughty husband

I will bring more of his hilarious side

To what level of stupidty and craziness he will go to see that beautiful nezara of her bare back

Part 3 will be revelations of the twist

It was his grandparennts plotting 

How they planned and executed

What made them took this step for fateh

The only problem is time constraint

Need to take time to write

These posts are prepared midnites before going to bed 

 

Posted: 6 days ago
Originally posted by Aniash



Thats what i was trying to show. What he did for jasmin onscreen i am  showing it in the forum for tejo

His cuteness and naughtyness is a treat to watch

Hope they showed it onsscreen as well 

Regarding naughty ideas arey puch mat

My bheja is full fried with fateh the naughty husband

I will bring more of his hilarious side

To what level of stupidty and craziness he will go to see that beautiful nezara of her bare back

Part 3 will be revelations of the twist

It was his grandparennts plotting 

How they planned and executed

What made them took this step for fateh

The only problem is time constraint

Need to take time to write

These posts are prepared midnites before going to bed 

 

Take all the time you need, we know good things take good amount of time..smiley31

Posted: a day ago

super funny

let handle teddy bear by mama bear smiley36

mahi bechari dushman ho gayismiley37

so dada dadi behind this 

between good choice of songs

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Udariyaan 


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