Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpalThis was so beautiful and moving ❤️ Loved every bit of it!
Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it ❤️❤️!
Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpalThis was so beautiful and moving ❤️ Loved every bit of it!
Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it ❤️❤️!
Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.this - is the first fanfic that has every made me so emo that I'm this close to balling my eyes out
I don't even know what to say, how to react
so I'm going to leave my res here, recollect, and come back 😭
I know you've res'ed this... but just know you weren't the only emo one. It took me the entire day (I started typing this story at 9AM EST and finished at 6PM EST) because I kept bawling or didn't want to think about writing such a heavy scene. And on top of that, I looked up sad songs to set the mood. Luckily, my sister was the only one at home to see my emo-ness (she point blank ignored me since she knows I write fanfics)
Originally posted by: kitmLoved it loved it loved it ❤️❤️❤️❤️ beautifully written 🥰🥰
So emotional 😢😢😥
I loved "B-Bholenath... please. I don't want to go yet. I want to try at this marriage" part.....I teared up reading this part 😭😭😭😭
Amazing update dear 🙏😘😘
Thank you so much!! I couldn't keep my composure while writing this. It's why I wrote two lines before heading over to the EDT to laugh a bit. And that line was my favorite typing it out as well ❤️❤️
You wrote it!!! 😍😍😍Read it really quickly but morning time here so lots to do... Cant wait to read jt properly and will comment later 😊
This was exceptional... Raavi’s thoughts and Shiva’s reactions were on point!
This was really so beautiful ❤️❤️
This is lovely! ❤️ Shiva's and Raavi's thoughts and emotions were expressed beautifully. I loved how Raavi's childhood memories were full of Shiva! ❤️
And you got Shiva to give her MMR too
This piece feels like a balm to our souls. Such poignant emotions ❤️
Thank you for tagging me Avi!
This was just beautiful. It brought so many emotions and beauty to yesterday's episode. I want to go see it again with these thoughts in mind. And I love love love these flashbacks. And in all her happy memories, subconsciously, Shiva was always connected. And the way you wrote itots like Shiva did xyz which lead to happiness event 123. Shiva and his eaternal love for chole. Hope Raavi actually makes his fav meal. This OS gave me hope for another pyare pyare scenes. Once they go back to their room, I hope they finally have a conversation of their marriage. And this is a perfect conversation starter. Both expressing what they went through in this situation, fearing of losing the other, and letting each other know about their desire to work on this marriage.
Thanks for this wonderful piece, Avi!
This is so beautiful
comment:
p_commentcount