ohk. Thnks for your appreciation πwill try to give my best πOriginally posted by: ReemShah
story kaisa bhi jaye..humko bas last main Raghav aur Pallavi ko sath main mangta--beech main jo bhi ho---I would love to read it--so write as you wish
ohk. Thnks for your appreciation πwill try to give my best πOriginally posted by: ReemShah
story kaisa bhi jaye..humko bas last main Raghav aur Pallavi ko sath main mangta--beech main jo bhi ho---I would love to read it--so write as you wish
Glad you doπ
See Kavita--you have so many people supporting your writing as readers..β€οΈ
Why you did stop!? π₯Ί
It was gonna get interesting
I so wanted to face Mandar and Raghav
Please update soon
yuppπm grateful πππ»Originally posted by: ReemShah
Glad you doπ
See Kavita--you have so many people supporting your writing as readers..β€οΈ
usko ek poora alg part dena banta tha eslie. Next will be full of twists and turns. Will upload whenever get timeπthnks πWhy you did stop!? π₯Ί
It was gonna get interesting
I so wanted to face Mandar and Raghav
Please update soon
Part 10
As raghav expected its sanki deshmukh who opened the door. Raghav cursed his stars in mind but he is in no mood of arguing with this ungrateful person today.
V(Angrily) - tummm... Tum phir aa gye. Tumhari himmat kese hui mere ghar tak aane ki. Vo hospital tha toh mene kuch bola nahi par tum itne besharam ho ke yaha bhi chale aae. Achanak kya hua hai jo tum phir aa gye hamari zindagi mai toofan banke.
R-oo sanki uncle tumse baat karne ka mereko koi shauk nahi hai aur mera mood bhi nahi hai. Tum andar chalega tab toh bataega na ke mai kayko aaya hai.
M-kon hai baba aap itna chilla kyu rahe hai.
V-ye aae hai na mr. Raghav rao.
Mandar's anger knows no bound and he grabbed raghav's coller. Raghav is enjoying this but there stands one lady who already tolerated enough drama for the day... His lady.
P-raghav se door raho mandar. How dare you. Bus baat hi karne aaya haina bina sune tum esa kese kar sakte ho. Tameez bhi bhul gye ho kya ke ghar aae mehmaan se kese pesh aate hai.
To say Everyone is stunned by this mode of pallavi would be a understatement.
V-pallavi tum ek paraye mard ke liye apne pati par awaj utha rahi ho....
R-wow saree ka dukan impressive. Tumhara fighter mode on ho hi gaya. Toh ye hai tumhara vo not so dead husband.
M-yaha kya chal kya raha hai. Aur pallavi tumhari itni himmat.... he is about to slap pallavi but raghav grabbed his hand and twisted his wrist .
R-lagta hai kisine sikhaya nahi aurato se kese pesha aate hai. Accha hai mai sikha dega. Ab tum tumhara ye family drama band karo aur dhayan se mera baat suno beech mai koi bola toh usko idar hi zinda gaadh dega mai ardhamainda.
He goes to pallavi and says-sorry pallavi i know mai tumko promise kiya tha badlega karke par aaj bhi raghav rao kisi ke saath badatmizi bardast nhi kar sakta.
P-its ok raghav. Kuch log na kabhi nahi samjhate. Tum batao iss wqt yaha kese aana hua.
R-vese toh mai jaanta hai tum kya chahta hai par mai chahta hai tum apna baat khud sabke samne rakho.
P-mai kuch samjhi nhi raghav.
R-tum bataya tha na iss so called tumhare ek din ke pati se vapas tumhara shadi plan kar raha hai ye sanki family. Toh tum bolo kya tum karega iss se shadi.
Sharda-kya matlab hai tumhara. Ye toh vese bhi mere mandar ki hi patni hai.
R-dekhiye sharda ji mai baat pallavi se kar raha hai usko bolne deejiye. Koi beech mai bola toh....
M-toh kya gundagardi dkhaoge.Ye meri wife hai aur tum ye fact nahi badal sakte.
R-oh hello i am raghav rao mai kuch bhi kar sakta hai. Tum bolo pallavi.
Pallavi's eyes started shedding tears and she hugged raghav which infuriates mandar.
M-kisi aur mard se chipkte hue saram nahi aati par mene jab uss din choona chaha bada natak kar rahi thi.
R-tum apna ye bandar jesa mooh band rakhega toh sahi salamat rahega ardhamainda.
P-raghav mujhe yaha nahi rehna. Lekar chalo mujhe yaha se.
V-ye kya bakwas hai. Tum iss ghar ki bahu ho aur yahi rahogi. Bhool gyi ab ye tumhara pati nahi hai. Kis rishte se is se gale lag rahi ho.
P-haa nahi hai par dost hai aur usi haq se madad bhi kar sakta hai. Aur rahi mandar se shaadi ki baat toh mai iss mandar ooppss monster mandar ko divorce dungi samjla.
M-tumhari itni himmat.
Just then lawyers arrived as raghav already called them and pallavi told them to file divorce.
M-tum mangogi aur itna asani se mil jaaega toh bhool jaao. Ulta mai tum par charges lagauga cheating and characterless hone ka jo tum ho. Iss aadmi ke saath najayaj rishte jo hai tumhare.
Pallavi slapped mandar.
P-shut up just shut up. Tum ye character ka bhasan jake kahi aur dena mujhe nahi.
P-ab mai iss ghar mai ek aur second nahi rukugi.
M-haa haa jao apne aashiq ke ghar raasleela manane.
P-tumhari soch par thookti hu mai mr. Monster deshmukh. Aur haa mujhe kisi ke sahare ki jaroorat nahi hai. Raghav mera saath jaroor de raha hai par mai uska naam nahi uchalne doongi. Mene krishna se pehle hi baat kar li hai. Usne mere liye kiraye ka ghar dekh liya hai. Mai vese bhi vhi jane hi vaali thi par raghav aa gaya toh muje aur himmat mil gyi. Chalo raghav.
Koi bhi mujhe rokne ki himmat na kare varna pallavi ka vo roop dekhega jo aajtak na dikha....
And they left from there holding each other's hands...leaving behind all the trash of their life.
In car
R-vese konsa roop ka baat kar raha tha tum miss pallavi.
P-vahi jiska demo abtak sirf Hyderabad ke ex-don ko mila hai.
And they started laughing. After some time-
P-kya hua esa kyu dekh rahe ho.
R-itna khush aaj pehli baar dekha na tumko. Smile really suits you. Miss smiley.
P-tum aur tumhare nicknames dene ki adat uffff....
R-tum aur tumhara ye baar baar shampoo change karne ka adat uffff....
P-tum.. Tumne firse mere baal soonghe.
R-kya karu vo mera favorite hobby hai na. Itna time se miss jo kia.
P and R together - missed you.
And the rest of the time goes well for these two. But....
Next part updated
So this was even better than the direction I was imagining. Pallavi already having separate living arrangements made for herself and being already prepared to walk out on the ass/trashmukhs and then actually doing it.
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Now I am assuming both Raghav and Pallavi will make excuses to see each other for quite some time before confessing and also divorce drama and protective Raghav who will put a bodyguard on Pallavi to protect her and maybe we get a jealous Raghav too if you plan to introduce a new character or something like that π
Nevertheless I loved this update.
Also two two updates in a day, aap hamari aadatein bigaad rahe ho π
glad u liked itπlet's see aage kya hota hai πu asked for a quick update na thats y 2 in a dayβΊοΈab next dekhte h kab likhne ka man hoga πOriginally posted by: Medha0609
So this was even better than the direction I was imagining. Pallavi already having separate living arrangements made for herself and being already prepared to walk out on the ass/trashmukhs and then actually doing it.
ππ»ππ»
Now I am assuming both Raghav and Pallavi will make excuses to see each other for quite some time before confessing and also divorce drama and protective Raghav who will put a bodyguard on Pallavi to protect her and maybe we get a jealous Raghav too if you plan to introduce a new character or something like that π
Nevertheless I loved this update.
Also two two updates in a day, aap hamari aadatein bigaad rahe ho π
Lovely update..liked Pallavi's independent plans....
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