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I love the way you write dialogues! Something about reading Hindi as opposed to English really hits the heart.
We know we won’t get all of this....but I’ll take 25% of this in the show!!
I love the way you write dialogues! Something about reading Hindi as opposed to English really hits the heart.
We know we won’t get all of this....but I’ll take 25% of this in the show!!
Hello y'all 🤗
Based on all the BTS, I have tried to pen down my imagination in a TS. Posting one part now, couldn't complete the second one.... hopefully soon! Hope you all like it🤗
Let's start from the precap! (In my imagination, shaurya doesn't have the ugly ring on his finger!)
Anokhi is having breakfast and thinking about shaurya.
A - PS sach mein nahi aa rahe kya? Unhe aana chahiye na...waise toh bada bolte hai main HOD hu HOD hu...fir unki zimmedari hai na apne students k sath jaane ki!🙄
She remembers the flashback of his talks about his zimmedari and her taunting him about his irresponsible action of maang mein sindoor.
A - Students k liye na sahi, mere liye hi aa jaate☺️ Aise toh bolte hai mujhse dur mat jao...aur khud ko dekho...mere sath jaana toh chhodo, milne bhi nahi aaye...milna bhi chhodo, ek call bhi nahi Kiya...kal raat se ek text bhi nahi!!😏 Aise kyu Kar rahe hai aap, PS!😞Wo toh mere sath rehna chahte hai hamesha, main hi unhe waqt nahi deti...kahi maine hi toh jyada nahi kheech liya baat ko!🥺
Anokhi senses all the students rushing to the bus. She suddenly gets up and goes to pay the money. As she comes back, her phone is nowhere to be seen. She starts searching the phone fervently and the bus drives off! Anokhi panics!
A - Hey bhagwaan! Yeh kya ho raha hai! Main kya Karu ab! Bus bhi chali gayi, mere paas phone bhi nahi hai...kaise jaungi main ab!! PS ne kitni ummeed se mujhe yeh opportunity di thi. Wo apna promise rakh rahe the, mere sapne poore karne me mera saath de rahe the...me apni laparvahi se unhe disappoint nahi Kar sakti...mujhe kaise bhi karke Delhi pohchna hi hoga!!
S - Good morning, Mrs Sabherwal!! Kuch keh rahi thi aap!!☺️
Shaurya comes from behind her and whispers in her ear. Anokhi, shocked, turns towards him. She gets extremely happy to see him but also gets conscious thinking he might have heard her.
A - PS...aap...yahaan? Aapne toh kaha tha teachers nahi aane wale?🤔
S - Haan. Teachers nahi aaenge. Par maine yeh nahi kaha tha k tumhara pati nahi aaega. Bhul gayi tum, maine tumse kaha tha me tumse dur nahi reh pata! Aur maine yeh bhi kaha tha k main hamesha tumhara sath dunga!☺️
Anokhi looks down to hide her blush from him. Shaurya holds his hands around her neck and cups her face.
S - Mujhe tumhara toh nahi pata...par main apne biwi ki baatein kaafi seriously leta hu!☺️
A - PS...wo...pata nahi kaise...meri bus miss ho gayi. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha ab main kya karu!!😰
S - Agar koi problem hoti hai, tumhe koi help chahiye, toh tumhe apne pati ko call Karna chahiye na!🤷🏽♂️
A - Wahi toh keh rahi hu main! Mera phone kho gaya hai...main kaise call Karti aapko?😰
Shaurya pulls her face closer to his!
S - Ohh! Mujhe! Matlab tum maanti ho main tumhara pati hu aur tum mujhe hi call Karna chahti thi!☺️
A - ji...wo...ab mujhe seminar se related koi bhi dikkat aati hai toh main HOD ko hi call karungi na!😜
Anokhi bites her lip as she teases Shaurya, leaving him irritated. Shaurya holds her by her waist and pulls her.
S - Acha? HOD? Main HOD hu tumhara?🙄
A - Haan toh! Kal aap hi toh college mein chilla chilla k keh rahe the k aap HOD hai aur director bhi. Fir Shagun ma'am ko bhi toh yahi bola aapne...aap HOD hai aur main aapki student!🤷
S - Acha? Main Kuch aur bhi batane wala tha sab ko chilla chilla k. Wo bhul gayi tum? Bol du sabko chalke?😉
A - Sshh! Nahi! Aap aise Kuch nahi Karne wale! Ab yeh bataiye main Delhi kaise jaungi. Main jaana chahti hu. Main seminar attend Karna chahti hu. Maine kitni taiyari ki thi. Main aapko bilkul disappoint nahi karna chah....😶
S - Main bhi nahi! Main bhi tumhe bilkul disappoint nahi karna chahta. Isiliye toh aaya hu yahaan! Sach batao, tum chahti thi na main aau?☺️
A - Haan...matlab...🙈
S - Lo...toh aa gaya main! Aur yeh...yeh raha tumhara phone📱
A - Yeh aapke paas kaise aaya! Ek second. Aapne jaan bujh kar churaya tha mera phone? Aap meri baatein sun rahe the chup chup k?😠
S - Ab biwi se kya chori karna aur kya chup chup k sunna! Par wo kya hai na...meri biwi khud kuch bolti nahi mujhe. Toh aise chup chupke hi sunni padengi uski baatein. Badi berehem hai meri biwi, bata raha hu tumhe!😪
A - Main berehem?😠 Apne aap ko dekho pehle! Mera phone chori kiya, meri bus miss karva di, mujhe late ho raha hai aur ab yaha sirf baatein banani hai aapko! Main time par pohoch nahi paayi Delhi toh bhi aap mujhe hi sunaenge...shaurya sir bann jaenge!!😒
S - Kitni bechain ho rahi ho tum mere sath drive pe chalne k liye. Khul k kaho na waise k mujhe le chalo Delhi!🤩 Agar main shaurya sir bann bhi jau, toh tum shaurya sir ki biwi bann sakti ho!🤷🏽♂️
A - Ab chalenge aap jaldi? Ya yahi rukna hai?😒
S - Haan baba chalo!
Shaurya opens the door of the car for Anokhi. She settles in the car and pulls the seat belt.
S - Are are...ruko! Tumhare pati k hote hue aise chote mote kaam tum kyu karogi!☺️
Shaurya leans over Anokhi and extends his hand to pull the belt. Anokhi looks towards the belt, absolutely conscious, and holds his wrist. Shaurya takes a glance at her and places a soft peck on her cheek on his side. Anokhi suddenly turns her face towards him out of surprise and their lips come closer. They get lost in each others eyes for a second. Shaurya pulls the belt across her and fixes it.
S - (in his husky voice) Chalein, Mrs Sabherwal? Shaadi k baad ki humari pehli journey hai yeh...aur wo bhi tumhare seminar k liye! Maine apni good luck wish toh de hi di hai tumhe!☺️😉
Anokhi nods in affirmative and they drive off!
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S - Suno. Hume kaafi time lagne wala hai. Shaam ho jaegi pohochte pohochte. Tum chaho toh thodi der so jao, rest Kar lo. You have a long week ahead.
A - Nahi...uski koi zarurat nahi hai. I am fine. Aur agar main so jau aur mujhe dekhke aapko bhi neend aa gayi toh!😅
S - Toh kya! Main car side mein park Kar dunga aur tumhe apni baaho mein leke so jaunga...pichli baar ki tarah😉
A - Aap se toh baat Karna hi bekaar hai! Aur kuch sujhta hi nahi na aapko!🙄
S - Bilkul nahi! Wo chhodo. Listen to me. Please rest kar lo tum.
A - But main padhna chahti hu. Mujhe preparations Karni hai achese.
S - Are! Tumhara professor hai na tumhare sath. Me pohchne k baad tumhe sab brief Kar dunga na. Aur waise bhi...abhi tum padhogi, mere paas toh aur koi kaam nahi hoga abhi toh main tumhe ghurta rahunga, fir tum distract ho jaogi☺️ aur fir mujhe daantogi...usse toh better hai tum so jao abhi aur fir hum dono sath mein milke tumhari preparation karenge. I don't want you to get overstressed Anokhi☝️
Anokhi looks at him in complete awe with a sweet smile on her face.
A - Pata nahi kyu par dheere dheere mujhe Aastha ma'am ki baato par bharosa ho raha hai. Pyaar sach mein insaan ko badal deta hai. Kya sach mein mera pyaar PS ki soch badal raha hai? Ab main sirf unki student nahi hu, biwi bhi hu. Fir bhi wo mujhe Kitna support Kar rahe hain iss seminar k liye. Pati ki tarah pyaar bhi Kar rahe hai aur professor ki tarah guide bhi Kar rahe hai. Agar yeh aise hi chalta raha toh mujhe unse Kabhi koi shakayat nahi hogi!☺️
S - Anokhi...kya hua? Kaha kho gayi?
A - Nahi toh...Kuch nahi...
Anokhi closes her eyes to take some rest as he said. Shaurya caresses her head and continues to drive.
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It's 2'o clock in the afternoon. Shaurya stops the car at a restaurant. He holds Anokhi's hand in his and kisses it. Anokhi wakes up and sees around.
A - Kahaan pahunche hum?🤔
S - Mid-way pahunche hai. Rasta kaafi kharab hai, jyada time lag raha hai. Mujhe bhook lag rahi hai bohot tez. And I need to freshen up as well. Yahaan chalke Kuch kha lete hai? Warna protein bar pe hi guzaara Karna padega😉 Aur tum toh mere sath share bhi nahi karogi!! Mujhe aise hi bhookha rehna padega!😏
A - Umm...sorry PS...
S - Sorry kis liye?😅
A - Us din maine protein bar share nahi Kiya...aur aaj bhi...main itni gehri neend so gayi aur aapko bina khaane k, bina neend k akele drive karna pada🥺
S - It's okay...koi baat nahi...chalo ab!😀
Shaurya opens the door for anokhi and they head towards the restaurant. Shaurya pulls the chair for Anokhi and he settles on the chair beside her.
S - Bolo, kya khaogi?
A - Umm Kuch bhi chalega...aap kijiye na order🤷
S - Tumhe pata hai na...Jo tumhe pasand hai wahi mujhe pasand hai!☺️
A - Mujhe butter chicken pasand hai!!😁
S - Really? That's my favourite as well! Chalo wahi order karte hai. Aur food serve hota hai tab tak fresh hoke aate hai.
They come back from the washroom and the food is served. Anokhi begins to eat.
S - Suno! Yeh shaadi k baad humara first lunch hai sath mein☺️ In fact, hum first time sath mein lunch Kar rahe hai! Tumhe pata nahi hai wo ek rasam hoti hai! Shaadi k baad pehli baar khaana khate hain tab pati patni ek dusre ko apne haato se khaana khilate hain!! Kya yaar wifey, tumhe koi rasme pata nahi hai...sab sikhana padta hai mujhe!!🙄
Anokhi smiles at his adorable antics. She takes a morsel of roti and butter chicken and feeds him, brushing her fingers on his lips. Shaurya looks at her intensely.
S - Jaanti ho...Maine zindagi mein bahut baar butter chicken khaaya hai...but wo itna acha Kabhi nahi laga!!😍
Anokhi blushes!
A - Waise...yeh aapki rasam sirf one sided hi hoti hai kya? Bhuk lag rahi hai mujhe bhi!!!🙄
S - I like this!😉 Kaho toh, aaj hi kya...main toh har roz, har breakfast lunch dinner mein, poora khaana apne haatho se khila sakta hu tumhe!😉
A - Abhi toh khilaiye filhaal!!☹️
Shaurya feeds her one morsel and gives her a kiss on her cheek😘
S - Aur meri rasam k hisaab se, khane k har bite k sath biwi ko yeh bonus bhi milta hai!!☺️
They finish their lunch and head towards the car.
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Shaurya is about to open the car door for her, but he stops.
S - Suno! Jab hum rasam ki baat kar hi rahe the toh mujhe ek aur rasam yaad aayi. First khaane k baad na, biwi ko gift bhi dete hai☺️
A - Ohho!! First khaane k baad nahi hota wo PS, pehli Rasoi k baad hota hai. Aur maine koi khaana nahi banaya hai yahaan🤷
S - Wo toh theek hai, but mujhe acha lag raha hai tum saari rasmein accept Kar rahi ho☺️ Toh suno! Tum Khana jab banaogi tab banaogi...mujhe nahi lagta tumhe Khana banane Ka koi shauk hoga. Right?
A - Aapko kaise pata!😯 Mujhe bilkul nahi pasand khana banana. Mujhe nahi aata Khana banane!💁
S - Bass, mujhe pata chal gaya. Tum itni career oriented ladki ho, mujhe nahi lagta tumne Kabhi Khana banane mein interest liya hoga. Koi baat nahi...chalta hai🤷🏽♂️
A - Aapko sach mein koi problem nahi hai?😳
S - Bilkul nahi. Tumhe jo pasand hai tum wahi Karo🤷🏽♂️ Waise agar apne pati k liye tumhe kabhi Kuch banane ki iccha hui, toh tum seekh sakti ho khaana banana...I won't mind! Main help Kar dunga tumhari!☺️
A - Aapko aata hai khaana banana?😯
S - Haan! I mean basic toh aata hi hai🤷🏽♂️
A - I am surprised! Mujhe nahi laga tha k the Mr Shaurya Sabherwal khaana bhi banate honge!!😯
Shaurya pulls her closer and looks into her eyes.
S - Tumhe koi idea nahi hai mujhe kya kya aata hai!!!😏
A - Nahi...I mean...😶
S - You mean what Mrs Sabherwal?🤤
A - Wo...Kuch nahi...aap wo kisi rasam ki baat Kar rahe the na!🙈
S - Yeah...rasam!!🙄
Shaurya releases the hug.
S - Toh main keh raha tha...khaana tum banao ya na banao, humne sath mein khaaya hai, khilaya hai, toh main yeh wali bhi rasam Kar hi lunga! I've got a gift for you!☺️
A - Kya gift hai?!🥰
S - Pehle promise karo tum accept karogi mera gift?☝️
A - Aap bataiye toh sahi💁
S - Pehle promise. You know what, tumhe yeh gift dena mera haq hai. Please mujhse wo haq mat chhino? Aur main jaanta hu tumhe bhi acha lagega yeh gift!☺️
A - Acha okay...I promise! Bataiye na ab kya hai!🥰
Shaurya takes out a box of ring from his pocket and goes down on his knees.
A - Yeh kya Kar rahe hai aap? Pls khade ho jaiye!🥺
S - Nahi. Let me do this! Anokhi, humari Shaadi itne hadbadi mein hui k main tumhare liye kuch special Kar hi nahi paaya. I am so sorry!😢 Mujhe humare Shaadi ko lekar ya mere faisle ko lekar koi regret nahi hai. Par jin haalato mein wo sab hua, uske liye I am sorry. I should have asked for your consent...par tum toh jaanti ho na main kitna impulsive hu. Jo mann mein aata hai Kar deta hu😞 Fir bhi. Me tumhe wo saare lamhe dena chahta hu...pyaar k sath...gusse mein nahi...aur aaj main yeh mauka nahi gawana chahta. Bolo Anokhi, kya main tumhe yeh ring pehna sakta hu? Pls apna haath aage badhao?☺️ Mujhe acha nahi lagta jab tum humare shaadi ko zabardasti ki shaadi ya forced marriage bolti ho. Shaadi na sahi, at least yeh ring hi accept Kar lo pls?🥺
Anokhi is touched by this gesture of his. She would have never imagined that Mr Shaurya Sabherwal will go down on his knees for her! He was accepting his mistake and was trying to make amends! He, who had said he didn't even ask for his own consent, was asking for her consent!! Anokhi had a drop of tear in her eyes!
Anokhi extended her left hand to him. He gently put a beautiful delicate diamond ring on her ring finger and kissed her hand😘💍
S - I love you, meri jaan!❤️ And thank you so so much!!! Mujhe bohot acha lagta hai jab tum mere efforts acknowledge Karti ho!☺️
Anokhi held his hand and helped him get up. She held both his hands in hers
A - Aapko kya lagta hai? Main patthar dil hu? Mujhe koi feelings nahi hai? Aap jaante bhi hai mere liye kitna difficult hota hai khudko restrict Karna! Specially tab, jab aap aisi koi harkatein karte ho. Nahi kar paati main khudko control😞
Anokhi briefly hugs Shaurya and suddenly releases the hug.
S - Toh kyu Karna chahti ho khudko control! Mat karo na!! Nahi...main filhaal usse Kuch nahi bolunga. Abhi k liye itni progress kaafi hai. I'll let her take her time.
A - Chalein? Kaafi der ho chuki hai.
S - Haan...chalo.
They sit in the car and continue their journey.
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S - Toh...Ms Fiancée..☺️
A - Sshhh!🤫
S - What! Ab yeh toh haq se bula hi sakta hu na main!🤷🏽♂️
A - Bilkul nahi. Aap kuch nahi bolenge🤫 Main ab padhne wali hu aur aap mujhe padhne denge!☝️ Aur haan...aap mujhe ghoorenge bhi nahi...aur agar ghoorte bhi hai toh mujhe usse koi fark nahi padne wala!💁 Chup chap se gaadi chalaiye!!☝️
S - Ok madam!! Shaadi k dusre din hi pati ko driver bana diya!!🙄
Abhi toh main chup baith jaunga...fir dikhata hu isse!☺️
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I love it babe..😘
Mere rasmo waala adorable pati.. 🥺
Ab mujhe bhi chahiye butter chicken but aaj Monday hai.... 😂
There were two kisses.. 🤭
Ye log ulta chal rahe.. Pehle biwi phir fiance.. 😂
PS- IF mujhe 1st page wala res edit nahi karne de raha..🤔
Awesome👏👏
I loved it.
Shakhi ka emotional breakdown
Romance
Shagun ki beizzati
Mrs & Mrs shauyra Sabharwal ek room me
Anokhi in saari
you have written everything so well.
Hello guys!
Thanks for your lovely response on the first part of this story. Finally completed the rest of the story. Flow flow mein yeh part Kuch jyada hi lamba ho gaya😆 This part has it all...cute scenes, romance, emotional outbursts, sass, everything that you might have wanted to watch on the show. Hope you all give it a read! Let me know your feedback in the comments❤️
Anokhi is engrossed in her books, prepping for her speech at the opening ceremony. Shaurya looks at her mischievously and takes a turn.
After some time, Anokhi looks out of the window and wonders where they are heading to!! She quickly checks the location in her GPS and questions
A - Yeh hum kaha jaa rahe hai, PS?😳
S - Kaha matlab? Delhi hi jaa rahe hai na! Aur kaha jaenge?🤷🏽♂️
A - Main jaanti hu yeh Delhi ka rasta nahi hai. Bataiye na!!🥺
S - Arey baba sach mein! Mujhe uss restaurant k baad wala rasta pata hai. Mujhe GPS ki bhi zaroorat nahi padti. Hum bilkul sahi jaa rahe hai!😌
A - Aapko nahi lagta aap Kuch jyada hi overconfident hai?😏 Hum galat direction mein jaa rahe hai PS!🤦
S - Aise ho hi nahi sakta. Pichli baar ek baar mujhse galti ho gayi iska matlab tum baar baar mujhe galat hi thehraogi? Main apni galti repeat nahi karta😏
A - Ho gaya inka shuru!!😒 Aap yahaan GPS mein dekho...main sahi keh rahi hu!😠
S - Mujhe koi GPS nahi dekhna...hum sahi jaa rahe hai😌
A - Theek hai. Aapko GPS nahi chahiye toh main kisise chilla k pooch lungi!😏
S - No!! Tum aise kuch nahi karogi!!☝️
A - Toh mujhe aapke sath chalna hi nahi hai. Main kood jaungi car se! Aap rokiye car!😠
Shaurya applies an emergency brake and the car stops with a jerk! Shaurya holds Anokhi's right hand tightly and pulls her.
S - Dimaag kharab ho gaya hai tumhara? Yeh kya bewkoofo wali dhamki deti ho tum hamesha? Problem kya hai tumhara, haan?😡
A - Problem hi toh bata rahi thi main...par aap sunte kaha ho kabhi kisiki!😠 Kabse keh rahi hu k hum galat raaste se jaa rahe hai!
S - Jaanta hu!😠
A - Kya matlab?🐣
S - Kuch nahi. Chupchap waha baitho aur apni seat belt pehno☝️
Anokhi gets scared of his anger and does what he says. Shaurya tries to start the car but it doesn't move. He gets frustrated.
S - Oh God!!! Abhi isko kya ho gaya!😡
A - Aise raaste par suddenly brake lagaoge toh yahi hoga na!🤷
S - Toh kya karta? Tumhe koodne deta?😒
A - Nahi...pehle hi meri baat maan lete!💁
S - Tum itni ziddi kyu ho! Yeh sab tumhare vajah se hua hai. Meri koi galti nahi hai😠
A - Really? Aapki koi galti nahi hai?😒
S - Haan! Koi galti nahi hai meri. Main keh raha hu mujhe rasta pata hai par tum bharosa hi nahi karti mujhpe. Tumhe na meri koi baat nahi sunni hoti hai. Tumhe sirf short cuts pasand hai😏
A - Yeh kya bole jaa rahe hai aap mujhe Kuch samajh nai aa raha!🐣
S - Samjhogi bhi kyu! Tum toh hamesha jaldi mein hoti ho na😏
A - Matlab?🐣
S - Matlab Kabhi Kabhi long routes lene chaiye life mein!🙄
A - Aapka matlab aapne jaan bujh k galat turn pe gaadi modi thi?😯
S - Haan!😎
A - Par kyu!!😥 Hume jald se jald Delhi pohchna hai, PS!
S - Kyu jald se jald! Itni kya jaldi hai tumhe! Tumhara seminar kal subeh 11 baje start hone wala hai!
A - Par fir bhi...waqt se pehle hume pohochna chaiye!
S - Lekin kaafi waqt ho gaya hai k mujhe bhi tumhare sath waqt nahi mila hai!!
Shaurya blurted out unknowingly!
A - Kya!! Kya kaha aapne?
S - Sach kaha maine! Main apne biwi k sath thoda waqt beetana chahta hu...usme galat kya hai!
A - Seriously PS? Iss waqt aapko yeh sab sujh raha hai?
S - Toh tum batao, kaunsa waqt sahi hai yeh sab sujhne k liye? Campus mein? Tumhari classes mein? Mere cabin mein? Hostel mein? Tumhe toh har jagah, har samay galat hi lagta hai. Isiliye itni mehnat ki na maine aaj...taaki hum ek dusre k sath thoda toh waqt mile! Tumhe keh raha hu baad mein padhenge, toh tumhe abhi bhi padhna hi hai. Mere liye kab time hoga tumhare paas!!
Shaurya opens the door of the car and moves out in anger. Anokhi follows him.
A - PS rukiye!! Yeh kya ho gaya aapko achanak!! Itna gussa kyu ho rahe ho???
He comes back and pulls her closer.
S - Tumhe samajh nai aa raha mujhe gussa kyu aa raha hai? Main kya chahta hu?
A - Mujhe sab samajh aa raha hai. And I am sorry maine gaadi se kudne ki dhamki di. But aap meri baat sunn hi nahi rahe the!
S - Theek waise hi jaise tum bhi meri baat nahi sunti ho!
Anokhi pulls herself out of his grip.
A - Dekhiye. Maine aapse apni sharth batayi hai aur maine yeh bhi kaha tha k tab tak aap mujhse koi ummeed mat rakhna.
S - Toh main Kaha tumse Kuch jyada expect Kar raha hu. Baas thoda waqt hi toh maang raha hu na Kabse!
A - Par iss waqt mere liye yeh seminar jyada important hai!
S - Hamesha tum apni hi kyu sochti ho! Tumhe kya lagta hai! Jitna tumhare liye yeh seminar important hai, utna hi mere liye bhi hai. Tumhare liye bhi aur SIAC k reputation k liye bhi. Lekin iska matlab yeh nahi hai k tum mujhe waqt hi nahi dogi!
A - Yeh kya bacho ki tarah zidd laga rakhi hai aapne...Kabhi toh Kuch samjhiye aap!
S - Bacho ki tarah zidd? Haan! Hoon main bacha! Wahi bacha hoon jisko kabhi kisine pyaar nahi diya, apna waqt nahi diya, apni priority nahi banaya...Kabhi Uske baare mein nahi socha, wahi bacha hoon main!
Shaurya starts pacing on the road. Anokhi gets puzzled. She doesn't understand what he is trying to say. But she is also firm on her stance that reaching Delhi for the seminar is her priority at the moment. She starts following him to pacify him. It starts thundering and pouring.
A - PS ruk jaiye aap...Kahaan jaa rahe hai! Aap kya bol rahe hai mujhe kuch samajh nai aa raha...par mujhe itna samajh aa raha hai k mausam kharab hote jaa raha hai aur hume jald se jald yahaan se nikalna chahiye aur koi help dhundni chahiye!
S - Tumhe uski chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi hai, maine makhan ko inform kar diya hai, woh mechanic Ka koi intezaam kar dega. Aur rahi baat meri...toh tum wo Kabhi samajh bhi nahi paogi.
A - Toh samjhaiye na aap kya keh rahe hai!
Shaurya walks towards an abandoned building nearby for the shelter. Anokhi follows him. They sit leaning on one of the pillar, facing away from eachother.
A - Boliye na kya bol rahe the aap!
S - Kuch nahi. Kaha na tum nahi samjhogi. Apni family mein, apne maa baap k sath pali badhi ho tum, tum nahi samjhogi.
A - Aur main bhi yahi kehti hu k aap bhi nahi samjhoge mere liye mera career sabse important kyu hai. Aapko kaha koi struggle karna pada hai. Aapko toh jo aap chahte the wo mil gaya hoga hamesha!
S - Kaash mujhe hamesha wo mil paata jo main chahta tha. Par kisike life mein meri koi jagah hi kaha thi. Mere baare mein kabhi kisine nahi socha.
A - Socha toh mere baare mein bhi kisine kabhi nahi.
S - Matlab?
A - Matlab yahi, k sirf apne family k sath rehne se aapko woh sab nahi milta jo aap chahte ho.
S - I don't believe this. Sab k maa baap apne bacho se kitna pyaar karte, unhe jo chahiye wo dete hai...Kuch ek logo k alaawa!
A - Yeh aapko lagta hai. Mere papaji ne mujhse Kabhi nahi poocha k mujhe kya chahiye, main kya chahti hu. Hamesha mujhse wahi karvana chaha Jo wo chahte hain!
S - Kya chahte the wo?
A - Control. Meri Zindagi pe control chahte the wo. Meri, babli di ki, mumma ki...sabki Zindagi apne hisaab se chalana chahte the. Unke hisaab se ladkiyo ko padhne ki, khud k pairo pe khade hone ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Ladkiyo ko sirf ghar k kaam aane chaiye taaki jald se jald unka viah Kara diya jaaye. Fir wo ladka unki beti ko chahe kaise bhi rakhe, unhe koi fark nahi padta. Dekhi na aapne babli di ki haalat? Mummyji k sath bhi yahi hota tha. Agar wo ek lafz bhi unke khilaaf bole toh haat utha lete the unpe. Mujhse yeh sab bardaash nahi hota tha. Main padhna chahti thi, apna vajood banana chahti thi, main apne haq k liye unse bohot ladhti thi. Aap nahi jaante kitni baar unse laathiyaan khayi hai maine sirf college jaane k liye!
Anokhi starts sobbing remembering the torture she went through at her father's place. Shaurya couldn't see her in pain. He was breaking inside imagining her taking the beatings from her father. He suddenly turned towards her and engulfed her in his arms and started caressing her cheeks as she cried and placed innumerable pecks on her head to soothe her pain. She clung on his sleeves and continued telling him her woes.
A - Usse bhi unka dil nahi bharta tha toh mujhe room mein lock Kar dete the wo taaki mein Shaadi k liye maan jau aur padhai Ka khayal apne dimaag se nikal du. Main poora poora din bina khaaye piye rehti thi, kyuki main unki zidd k aage jhukna nahi chahti thi. Yeh meri Zindagi hai, mujhe haq hai apne hisaab se jeene Ka, apni khushiyaan chunne Ka. Par unhe yeh baat bardaash nahi hoti thi. Unhe lagta tha mummyji mujhe sheh de rahi hain. Isliye wo saara gussa mumma par nikal dete the. Mumma pe maar peet karte the. Kabhi socha hai aapne kitna helpless feel hota hoga jab aapki maa ko aapke vajah se maara jaa raha ho aur aap Kuch nahi kar sakte?
Shaurya was speechless. He had no idea what to say, what to feel...he never had a mother to feel these emotions for her. He couldn't do anything but give a listening ear to his wife who was in pain!
A - Mumma ki fikr mein main unki baat maan leti thi. Aise hi mujhe blackmail karke unhone meri Shaadi ek NRI se fix karva di thi. Uss Shaadi ki vajah se main SIAC Ka exam nahi de paayi...kyuki uss ladke ne mujhse Kaha tha k wo mujhe Shaadi k baad padhne dega. Par mujhe uski sachai shaadi se pehle samajh gayi k wo mujhe apne ghar ki naukrani banana chahta tha. Yeh batane k baad bhi papaji ko koi fark nahi pada. Mard aise kaise ho sakte hain!! Uss din babli di ne aur mummyji ne pehli baar himmat jutai aur mujhse ghar se bhaag jaane k liye Kaha. Mujhe koi idea nahi tha main Kaha jaungi, kya karungi. Mere paas na jyada paise the, na Kuch. Main sirf apne kapde aur books ek bag mein uthake ghar se bhaag gayi. Ek car mein chupke. Aur mujhe sabse pehla khayaal aaya aastha ma'am Ka. Main unke ghar chali gayi. Unhone kitni help ki meri...mujhe paise diye, apna phone diya, mujhe station tak chhoda, mera TC arrange karvaya, mujhe SIAC mein admission dilvaya! Wo hamesha mere liye stand leti thi...mere papaji se bhi ladhti thi...unhone hi mujhe yeh sapne dekhna sikhaya. Wo nahi hoti toh pata nahi main kya Karti. Main padh likhke unki tarah banna chahti hu...strong, independent...taaki main apni mummyji Ka, behen Ka khayaal rakh pau!
Shaurya suddenly moved aside. He had tears in his eyes. His eyes couldn't hide his pain. Anokhi wiped her tears and looked into his eyes. She cupped his face and asked
A - Kya hua? Aap kyu ro rahe ho?
S - Tum bhi aastha ma'am ki tarah banna chahti ho? Strong, independent? Aur fir? Unke tarah hi...mujhe chhod k jaana chahti ho...tum bhi?
Shaurya got up from his place and went on other side of the pillar to hide his tears. Anokhi followed him and held his hand.
A - Aap hamesha aise hi kyu sochte ho? Aap ko kya lagta aastha ma'am khush hai bohot aapko chhodke?
S - Main nahi jaanta wo Khush hai ya nahi aur main jaanna bhi nahi chahta. Mujhe bass itna pata hai k unke vajah se main Kabhi khush nahi ho paaya. Aur ab jab tumhare aane se thodi bohot khushi mili thi mujhe apne life mein finally, wo Khushi paane k liye bhi terms and conditions hain. Har koi apne terms kyu rakhta hai mujhe pyaar dene k liye! Mujhe bhi toh haq hai na apni life mein khushiyaan chunne Ka. Meri khushiyo k faisle hamesha koi aur kyu le!
Anokhi felt conscious hearing this. She couldn't look into his eyes. Yet, she stood there with him.
S - Bachpan mein main apni maa se bohot pyaar karta tha...par unko apna career mujhse jyada pasand tha. Unke pyaar ki condition thi k unhe apna kaam karne diya jaaye. Main apne papa se bohot pyaar karta tha. Main chahta tha maa nahi hai toh kum as kum wo mujhe pyaar de. Par unke pyaar ki condition thi unki biwi. Unka saara pyaar unke biwi k liye hi tha. Jab se unki biwi unke life se nikal gayi, unhone Apne bete ko bhi ignore Kar diya. Badi maa. Bachpan se hi unhone bohot pyaar diya mujhe. Main bohot izzat karta hu unki. Par unhe bhi mujhe baar baar yeh baat sabit Karni padti hai k main unse Kitna pyaar karta hu. Agar unke khilaaf koi bhi baat Karu toh unhe wo acceptable nahi hai. Unki har baat maanna unke pyaar ki condition hai. Aur ab tum...tumhare pyaar mein bhi condition. Yeh sab kiski vajah se? Tumhari aastha ma'am ki vajah se! I hate that woman! Tum sab ko lagta hai tum sahi ho, par main kaha hu iss picture mein? Mere perspective se na tab kisine socha na ab. Kyuki main toh sahi hota hi nahi hoon na. Badi maa chahti hain main shagun se shaadi Karu, tum chahti ho main tumhari aastha ma'am ko manau, wo maanna nahi chahti...lekin iss sab mein galat kaun hai? Sirf main. Sab jo kehte hai wo main karta hu...fir bhi galat kaun? Main! Tumhe toh aastha ma'am banna hai!
Shaurya walks out in the rain, unable to control his anger. He picks a stone and throws it to vent out his frustration. Anokhi follows him and stands in front of him.
A - Aapko kya lagta hai? Mera pyaar conditional hai?
S - Haan!
A - Yeh sochte hai aap mere baare mein?
S - Tum baatein hi aisi karti ho!
A - Main baat kuch ek karti hu aur aap samajhte kuch aur hai.
S - Toh ghooma fira k kyu baat Karti ho. Saaf saaf kyu nahi kehti kuch!
A - Maine saaf saaf hi kaha hai. Main padhna chahti hu, apna career banana chahti hu, apni pehchaan banana chahti hu...aur yeh cheez aapko manzoor nahi hogi. Maine aapko vajah bhi batayi aaj. Lekin aap kitni bhi koshish Kar lo, aap apni soch nahi badal paoge. Padhai k liye main aapko waqt na du, yeh toh bardaash nai hota aapse!
S - Tumhe kya lagta hai? Main koi 70's ka gawaar hu jo mujhe kisike padhne se, career se problem hogi? This is what you think of me? Bhul gayi wo saare incidents jab maine tumhe apne liye fight Karne Kaha tha? Tumhara support Kiya tha?
A - Wo baat alag thi. Tab main sirf aapki student thi. Aapki biwi banne k baad aap toh yahi chahenge na k main sirf ghar sambhalu?
S - Kitni baar tumhe samjhana padega k main tumhare sapno k beech nahi aaunga? Shaadi k baad hi, "mere biwi" ko maine hi yeh seminar ki opportunity di na! Kya tumhe yeh lagta hai k main itna bada orthodox hu k mujhe biwi ki tarakki dekhi nahi jaegi?
A - Toh fir Shagun ma'am se engagement k waqt aapko kyu problem hui thi unke padhne se?
S - Jaise main tumhare sapno ko samajhta hu, tumhara darr samajhne ki koshish Kar raha hu, waise tum kyu nahi samajhti mera darr! Tumhe har cheez aastha ma'am k nazariye se kyu sochni hai? Meri bhi toh baat samjho! Tumhari maa ko tum Apne papa se bacha nahi paati thi toh tumhe helpless lagta tha na, lekin wo tumhare sath toh thi. Kabhi socha hai mujhe Kitna helpless feel hua hoga jab meri maa mujhe chhodke jaa rahi thi, aur main unhe rok nahi paa raha tha? Sirf 4 saal Ka tha main. Badi maa ki godh mein ro raha tha, cheekh raha tha, mumma mujhe chhod k mat jao...par na wo ruki na unko kisine roka. Har raat me darke uthta tha, badi maa k paas jaake rota tha k mumma Kaha hai, mujhe koi jawaab nahi milta tha...samajh sakti ho Kitna helpless feel hua hoga mujhe? Main papa se ummeed lagata tha k wo meri maa ko le aaenge, par unhe toh apne gum se aur sharaab se fursat hi nahi milti thi...Soch sakti ho kitna helpless feel kiya hoga maine? Apne dad ki Zindagi sambhalne k liye mujhe umar se pehle bada hona pada, Apne baap Ka baap banna pada, par unhe koi fark nahi pada...tab tak nahi pada jab tak wo unki biwi...tumhari aastha ma'am ne tumhare liye unse baat ki...Kitna helpless feel Kiya hoga maine? Uss din tumhari aastha ma'am ko tumhare haq k liye college mein sabse ladhte hue dekha, ussi tarah Kabhi apne bete k liye nahi ladhi wo...unka beta bass ek helpless bacha banke reh gaya!
A - Main nahi maanti yeh, wo zaroor aapke liye ladhi hongi. She must have tried.
S - Then she should have tried harder, Anokhi!
Shaurya shouted at the top of his voice. Anokhi was shaken! Shaurya broke into tears.
S - She should have bloody tried harder! Tumhe lagta hai na humare beech koi misunderstanding hogi, maine wo sort Karne ki koshish nahi ki? Alright! Hogi unki koi vajah, idk! But that doesn't change the fact that she abandoned me for the rest of my life when I was just a 4 yo kid!! Chhod diya unhone mujhe! Mujhe bohot darr lagta hai main jisse bhi pyaar karu wo apne sapno k liye mujhe chhod dega. Mujhe darr laga rehta hai k mere biwi ne bhi mere sath mere maa k jaise Kiya toh? Wo agar apne career k liye mujhe aur humare bacho ko chhod k chale gayi toh? Main apne bacho k liye wo dard nahi chahta jisse main guzra hu. Main ek aur baar apna dil tootata hua nahi chahta hu. Yeh ek hi vajah hai main nahi chahta meri biwi kaam kare. Mujhe tumhare padhne se, tarakki Karne se koi issue nahi hai Anokhi. I know you have such a bright future. Par main bardaash nahi Kar paunga tumse dur hona. Main tumhe kho nahi sakta. Bilkul nahi. Kitne saalo baad mere Zindagi mein koi aaya hai Jo mujhse utna hi pyaar karta hai jitna main usse. Agar tum mujhse dur chali jaogi toh main bardaash nahi Kar paunga...toot jaunga main.
Shaurya fell down on his knees and started crying like a baby. Anokhi too had tears in her eyes seeing his state, she came down on her knees and hugged Shaurya as tightly as she could. She caressed his hair. She held him close to her heart till he calmed down. She wiped his tears with her thumbs and kissed on his eyes as if she would kiss away all his fears and suck out all his tears. Shaurya again hugged her by her waist, putting his head on her chest, not letting her move an inch away!
S - Tum na, tumhe jo Karna hai Karo, main nahi rokunga tumhe. Par pls mujhse dur mat jao. Aise hi mere sath raho, mere paas raho!
A - Kahi nahi jaa rahi main. Yahi hu aapke paas. Shaant ho jaiye aap pls!
She kissed on his head to calm him down. He broke the hug and looked into her eyes.
S - Tum sirf kehti ho Anokhi, par tum hamesha mujhse dur jaati ho. Pehle wo ACP hota tha, uske sath jaati thi. Aise nahi hai k mujhe tumhare dost banane se problem hai, but tumhe Kisi aur k sath dekhta hu toh I feel so possessive. Tum mujhse jyada Kisi aur ko importance do wo mujhe bardaash nahi hota...theek meri maa ki tarah. Ab humne shaadi Kar li fir bhi tum mujhe waqt nahi deti. Wo possessiveness jo control Karne ki main bohot koshish karta hu wo fir se ubhar aata hai. Main tumhe apne possessiveness se torture nahi karna chahta Anokhi. But I can't help myself at times. Specially jab tum padhai k liye mujhe waqt nahi deti. Mujhe lagta hai tum bhi meri maa k tarah mujhse jyada, I mean humse jyada apne career ko importance dogi, mujhse pyaar Karna band kar dogi, mujhe chhod dogi.
A - Ssshhhh!!!
Anokhi put her index finger on his lips to shut him up. Then she cupped his face and looked straight in his eyes with all the love she could contain in her eyes.
A - Main aapko kabhi chhodke nahi jaungi. Maine aapse pehle bhi Kaha tha, mujhe mera career aur aap, dono chahiye! Main kisi ek k liye dusre ko nahi chhod sakti. Aapko bharosa nahi hai mujhpe?
S - Tum bhi toh mujhpe bharosa nahi karti jab main kehta hu k main tumhare sapno k beech nahi aaunga!
A - Ab karne lagi hu. Jis tarah se aap is seminar mein mera sath de rahe hai, Apne itne gehre dard k bavjud sirf mere kehne pe aastha ma'am ko mana rahe hai...wo dekhke mujhe aap ki baato par bharosa hone laga hai. Aap please samjhiye...apne Zindagi mein aapka saath paana meri sharth nahi hai, mera haq hai! Hai na?
S - Tumhara mujhpe, mere pyaar pe, meri Zindagi pe poora haq hai. You don't have to have a doubt about that Anokhi. Main tumse aur Kuch nai chahta...mujhe bass tumhara pyaar chaiye, tumhara waqt chaiye. Tumhare sath hone se main khud ko theek Kar dunga. Jaise tum chahti ho waise banke dikhaunga. Tum bass mere sath raho, mujhse baat Karna band mat Karo!
A - Aapse dur toh main chah Kar bhi jaa nahi sakti...jaana hi nahi chahti...I love you soooo very much!!
Anokhi gently pulled his face closer and placed her lips on his. She kissed him with all the love she had suppressed all these days. She couldn't stop caressing his cheeks while kissing him. Shaurya was finally at peace. Don't know what got him drenched more...the rain...or his anokhi's love!!
Anokhi realised what she just did. She felt awkward. Stealing glances, she tried to move away. Shaurya held her hand from behind. She looked back at him nervously. She couldn't take his intense stare. She again turned her back and ran on the other side of the glass panel. Shaurya stood on the opposite side of the glass panel. They were separated only by the glass. He put his hand on it and moved it down her face as if trying to feel her. He leaned on the glass and slipped down a bit to match Anokhi's height and kissed her lips through the glass. Anokhi shied away and tried to walk away from there. He walked towards her and gently hugged her from behind holding her by her waist. He put his chin on her shoulder, brushed his stubble on her bare skin and whispered in her ear "I love you too....a lot more now!!" Anokhi blushed. Shaurya lowered his lips and kissed her in the crook of her neck. He digged deeper while drawing patterns on her tummy. Anokhi could feel butterflies in her tummy. She turned around and put her hands around his neck, clutching on his collar. She could only reach his throat by tiptoeing. She kissed on the side of his neck. Seeing her struggling to reach his height, he lifted her up in his arms and smooched her, absolutely wetting her lips. He separated his lips from hers and continued kissing down her lips...on the chin...on her throat...on the collar bone...close to her cleavage....brushing his stubble on her soft bare skin....still holding her up in his arms! She felt electric current in her body everytime his wet lips gently touched her skin. She tried to move but his embrace was too tight to let her go. She pressed her fingers on his shoulder and tried to get a grip on herself.
A - Shaurya...Hume andar chalna chahiye...bohot baarish ho rahi hai...
Shaurya suddenly stopped kissing her!
S - Kya kaha tumne?
A - Andar chalo!!
S - Nahi...usse pehle...
A - Umm...Shaurya...! Wo mood mein...waise...PS nahi bol paayi...
S - I love it, wifey!! PS mujhe kabhi acha nahi laga anyways! Lagta hai yahi mood banake rakhna padega hamesha tumse apna naam sunne k liye😉
Anokhi blushed...and he kissed on her cute little nose that had turned absolutely red!
A - Maine aur bhi kuch Kaha...suna nahi wo aapne? Niche utaariye mujhe aur andar chaliye! Aapko allergy hai na bemausmi barsaat se... tabiyet kharab ho jaegi aapki!
S - Bemausmi barsaat? Kaha hain? Yeh toh pyaar Ka mausam aaya hai...bilkul mausam wali hi barsaat hai yeh...main Kahi nahi jaa raha!
Shaurya ran in the open ground, spreading his hands wide open, looking up in sky, jumping in the rain and shouted aloud..."My wifey loves me...woohhooo!!!"
Anokhi too ran behind him and hugged him from his back and both of them swayed together. He again lifted her in his arms and twirled her and they danced to their heart in the rain!
Anokhi started shivering in cold. That's when he held her arms and started pushing her towards the building. He pinned her on the wall and pressed himself against her such that she felt cozy and warm! He removed his blazer and covered her with it from the back. He also unbuttoned his shirt so that she could feel his body heat. She held the buttonlines of his shirt in her fists in order to get a hold of her heart that was beating faster. She felt the warmth of that manly body of his. She slid her hands inside his shirt and clutched on his back. Feeling her hands so intimately on his bare body was a new feeling for him and he was loving it and how! He couldn't resist but kissed her hard until both of them felt warm enough.
He made her sit on the staircase. He sat on the second step below hers and gently removed her shoes. He rubbed her feet with his hands so that she felt warmer. He was so consumed by her love at that moment that he felt absolutely devoted to her. He held her foot in his hand and gently kissed it expressing the submission of himself in the feet of his lady love. Anokhi was startled to see this avatar of Shaurya Sabherwal! How would she doubt the depth of his love for her anymore?
A - Yeh kya kar rahe hain aap, Shaurya!! Please uthiye aap!
S - Main wahi kar raha hu jo main dilse feel kar raha hu!
A - Fir bhi...uthiye aap! Aur main kaafi theek hu ab...mujhe thand nahi lag rahi...aap isse pehen lijiye, mujhe sach mein fikr ho rahi hai aapki ab.
S - yeh geele kapde pehnunga main ab?
A - Toh aur kya kar sakte hai ab? Yahaan iron toh nahi karke de sakti main aapko!
S - Arey baba, humare paas apni bags mein kapde hain!! Hum Delhi jaa rahe the...bhul gayi kya wifey?😉
A - Umm...Nahi...I mean kapde hai...but change kaha karenge?
S - Usme kya hai? Waha le aaenge aur change Kar denge! Waise bhi yaha koi bhi nahi hai...sirf tum aur main. Fir bhi...I'll guard you😘
Shaurya went to the car and brought back their bags. He took out his towel from the bag and wiped off Anokhi's hair.
A - Toh seekh gaye finally aap baal pochna!
S - Arey...tumhe pata bhi nahi hai main tumhare liye kya kya seekh sakta hu! Waise...kitne pyaare baal hai tumhare...lambe ghane!
A - Acha? Aap bhul gaye hai toh yaad dila du...inhi mere baalo ko kaat diya tha aapne...bohot problem hoti thi na aapko toh mere baalo se!!
Both of them burst into laughter reminiscing the incident. They took out their clothes and went behind the staircase to change.
A - Aap waha aage rukiye, main change Kar leti hu.
S - Kyu? Sharma rahi ho? Main change Karke deta hu na tumhe!😳
A - Ssshhhh🤫 Jyada laad mein aane ki zaroorat nahi hai...jaiye wahaan!!
S - Ok😞
Shaurya stood aside while she changed her clothes...but he couldn't help stealing glances at her. She caught him once briefly checking her out and her cheeks turned into all shades of red!! He winked his eye and blew a flying kiss her way😘
While shaurya changed his clothes, she went back to the stairs and settled there, leaning her head on the wall. He came back and lied on the step, putting his head in her lap. He held her hand and she caressed his stubble with her nails.
A - Suno...
S - Tumhari hi toh sunta hu main hamesha...bolo na!😘
A - I am sorry!
S - Wo kyu ab?
A - Mujhe woh condition nahi rakhni chahiye thi. Mujhe aapke aur aastha ma'am k beech nahi aana chahiye tha. Main bass...
S - Jaanta hu. Tum Aastha ma'am k liye Kar rahi thi.
A - Nahi! Bilkul nahi! Main bass dekhna chahti thi k aap sahi Ka saath de sakte ho kya? Apni galti maanke apni soch badal sakte ho kya? Apne maa k career ki izzat Kar sakte ho kya? Par maine iss sab mein aapka dard samajhne ki koshish nahi ki. Maine yeh nahi samjha k yeh aapke liye Kitna difficult hoga.
S - Anokhi, mujhe unke career se Kabhi koi problem nahi hoti, agar wo career k liye mujhe chhodke nahi jaati. Isme sahi galat kahase aaya?
A - Main nahi jaanti sach kya hai aur jhooth kya. Par maine bohot baar aastha ma'am ko aapke liye tadapte hue dekha hai, aapko yaad karte hue dekha hai. Aap maano ya na maano, main jaanti hu unko Kitna dard hai aapse dur hone ka.
S - Chhodo na yeh sab baatein abhi... pls!!
A - Haan. Main bass itna hi keh rahi hu k I am sorry, mujhe aisi sharth nahi rakhni chaiye thi. Mujhe bass darr tha k kal agar mere sath bhi wahi sab hota hai jo unke sath hua, toh aap mera sath denge ya nahi. Aise bhi ho sakta hai unko kisine majboor Kiya ho yeh faisla lene k liye? Shayad wahi mere sath bhi hua toh?
Anokhi wanted to hint at Devi's manipulation, but she couldn't say it clearly.
S - Majboor? Kya bol rahi ho tum? Kaun karega yeh? Kyu karega?
A - Wo sach toh aapko hi dhoondna hoga...main nahi jaanti.
S - Tum kaho toh yaha se Chandigarh wapis jaane k baad tumhari aastha ma'am se firse baat Karne ki koshish karunga main.
A - Ho sake toh...apni maa se baat Karne ki koshish kariyega!
Anokhi's words hit him hard. He went into trance... thinking what she just said.
S - Kya bol rahi hai yeh? Yeh Kuch jaanti hai kya Jo mujhe bata nahi rahi? Kiske baare mein baat Kar rahi hai? Shayad meri family ise pasand nahi karti, isliye Iske mann mein yeh khayaal aa rahe honge. Koi sense nahi banta iski baato Ka....par agar isme zara si bhi sacchai hui toh? Tab jo hua so hua...par agar sach mein waise hi Kuch mere anokhi k sath hua toh? Yeh main nahi hone de sakta! Mujhe jald se jald sach Ka pata lagana hi hoga. Mujhe Aastha Kashyap se baat karni hi hogi. Lekin iss waqt usse jyada urgent hai k main anokhi ko apne temporary engagement k baare mein batau!
S - Anokhi...Suno mujhe tumhe kuch important baat batani hai. Humari shaadi hui tab se main tumhe batane ki koshish Kar raha hu...par Kisi na Kisi vajah se yeh baat reh hi jaati hai. Abhi hume koi disturb nahi karega. Sun rahi ho tum? Anokhi?
He looked up...only to find her sleeping peacefully, leaning against the wall and putting her hand on his chest. He held her hand and kissed it and decided to tell her about the engagement the next morning...first thing after she gets up. He also closed his eyes and dozed off.
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The next morning -
Anokhi woke up. She found herself sleeping in sitting position all night. Her neck muscles were strained. And then she saw her adorable husband sleeping in her lap, looking as innocent as a baby. She placed a kiss oh his forehead and woke him up.
A - Good morning, Shaurya!😘
S - Ahhh! This is the best morning!! Good morning, my love! Har subeh itni haseen hogi toh aur kya chahiye life mein😳
A - Subeh subeh shuru ho gaye aap? Aap thakte nahi hai na?
S - Bilkul nahi😳 Par tumhi thaki hui lag rahi ho? Kya hua? Gardan dard Kar rahi hai?
A - Hmm thodasa...koi baat nahi...ho jaega theek thodi der mein.
S - Arey aise kaise? Ruko mein massage karke deta hu.
He got up and went on the step above hers. He took her hair in the front. First he kissed her neck and then started giving her a gentle massage.
S - Suno...main kal tumse kuch keh raha tha...par tumhe neend lag gayi thi.
A - Kya? Hum aastha ma'am k baare mein baat Kar rahe the na? Wo baat toh ho gayi thi.
S - Wo nahi. Kuch aur. Main wo...Apne aur Shagun k...
A - Shagun ma'am?
S - Haan
A - Are saamne dekho...Shagun ma'am aa rahi hai yaha. Wo yaha kya Kar rahi hai!!
Both of them stood up at their place. He started wondering how she got to know he's here. She started worrying what will happen now if she tells this in the college.
Sh - Toh yaha ho tum Shaurya. Tumhe koi idea hai kal se Kitna dhoond rahi hu main tumhe!
S - Mujhe? Mujhe kyu dhoond rahi ho tum? Kisne bola mujhe dhoondne?
Sh - Tumne mujhse kaha tha tum Delhi nahi jaa rahe aur kal se tumhara koi aata pata hi nahi tha. Fikr ho rahi thi mujhe tumhari.
S - Ab kya main har jagah tumhe batake jaunga kya? Main zaroori nahi samajhta har cheez tumhe inform Karna. Aur main wahi jaunga jaha main jaana chahta hu, jab jaana chahta hu. I am not answerable to you!
Sh - Really, Shaurya? You are not answerable to me? Main nahi toh kise answerable ho tum? Iss ladki ko?
S - Tum usse kyu beech mein la rahi ho? I warning you, don't involve her in this.
Sh - Isse nahi toh aur kise beech mein lau main? Tum apne fiancée se jhooth bol rahe ho, baatein chupa rahe ho...wo bhi iss ladki k paas aane k liye?
S - Enough Shagun! Anokhi naam hai uska! Yeh ladki ladki kya Kar rahi ho tum?
Sh - Idc iska kya naam hai. All I care about is iska humare beech koi kaam nahi hai.
S - Really? Wo humare beech aa rahi hai?
Sh - Haaaann!!
Shagun shouted out at Shaurya. Anokhi was speechless, she was not able to understand what's going on. Shagun held his hands and started crying
Sh - You are the love of my life Shaurya! We are engaged for God's sake...tum iss tarah mujhe ignore nahi Kar sakte.
A - Engaged???
Anokhi, shocked out of her wits, looked at Shaurya...her sharp were eyes questioning him. Shaurya looked back at her with guilt in his eyes. He strongly pushed Shagun away and held Anokhi's hands.
S - Anokhi, listen...I can explain to you. Meri baat sun lo tum.
Sh - Tum mujhe apne aapse dur Kar rahe ho? Tumhe abhi bhi iski hi padi hai? I am your fiancée Shaurya!
Shaurya took out the ring from his plant's pocket and threw it on her face.
S - I don't care, Shagun!! Anokhi, tum sunn rahi ho? Pls meri baat sune bina koi bhi opinion form mat Karna! Pls let me explain once.
A - Bass kijiye aap. Aap kyu Kuch explain karenge mujhe? Main koi explanation nahi sunna chahti.
Shagun was overjoyed to see the rift happening between them.
A - Agar kisiko explanation dena hi hai toh yeh dengi.
Shaurya was surprised to see her stance. He couldn't guess what's coming his way!
A - Toh...bataiye Shagun ma'am? Kya Kar rahi hai yahaan aap?
Sh - Maine kaha main apne fiancé ko dhoondne aayi thi. Jise tum behkane ki koshish Kar rahi ho.
S - Shagun!!😡
A - Ek minute Shaurya, main baat Kar rahi hu na! Toh kya keh rahi thi aap? Aapke fiancé? Kaha hai yaha? Mujhe toh yaha koi insaan nazar nahi aa raha jo aapse pyaar karta ho, Jo aapka fiancé kehlaya jaa sake.
Sh - Listen Anokhi, don't try to be oversmart. Tum jaanti ho main Shaurya ki baat Kar rahi hu!
A - Wo aapke fiancé? Kab hui aapki engagement? The Shaurya Sabherwal ki engagement ho gayi...aur wo kisiko pata bhi nahi chala?
Sh - That is our family matter!
A - Family matter? Wow! Kya aap yeh kehna chahti hai family ne aapki engagement karvayi?
Sh - Yeah!
A - Aur Shaurya? Wo Kaha hai aapke iss family matter k picture mein? Kyuki jaha tak main jaanti hu...wo apne sahi senses mein Kabhi aapse engagement Kar hi nahi sakte!
Sh - Tumhari aukaad kya hai mujhse iss tarah se baat karne ki? Tumhare class ki ladkiyo ko achese jaanti hu main, sirf paiso k liye ameer ladko ko fasati ho tum!
A - Lagta hai aap bhul gayi hain maine kya kaha tha...maine kaha tha in kaamo k liye aapke class ki hi ladkiyaan kaafi hai!
Sh - Shaurya tum Kuch kehte kyu nahi? Dekho na yeh kaise badtameezi kar rahi hai!
Shaurya simply smirked at her. He was stunned to see his wifey taking a stand for him.
Sh - Anokhi, tumhe yeh rings dikhayi nahi deti?
A - Umm wo ring...Jo abhi inhone nikalke fek di? Usiki baat Kar rahi hai na aap?
Sh - Uh yeh rings hume badi maa ne di thi. Unhone humari engagement karvayi hai. Shaurya kabhi badi maa k faisle ko inkaar Kar hi nahi sakta!
A - Really, Shaurya?
Anokhi remembered the fiasco on her birthday. Her eyes were again filled with pain that he didn't take a stand for her that day. But she also remembered the previous night where she was assured by him about his love and her place in his life. The pain in her eyes turned into hope. Shaurya could sense her feelings. She had shown her trust in him and he didn't want to let her down again. He held her hand in his and looked at Shagun.
S - Not anymore, Shagun...not anymore!! Main itne dino tak chup tha kyuki mujhe badi maa k tabiyet ki fikr thi. Aur main sabse pehle yeh baat anokhi se discuss Karna chahta tha. Par ab jab usse sab sach pata chal gaya hai, I can't tolerate this excuse of an engagement for a day more! Tum bhi jaanti ho wo engagement kin haalato mein hui thi. Aisi engagement k mere Zindagi mein koi maayne nahi hai. Agar dil mein pyaar na ho, toh iss ring ki koi value nahi hai. Aur jaha pyaar hai, waha kisi rasam ki zaroorat nahi hai.
He looked at Anokhi's forehead in a way only she would understand his words.
Sh - Iss ladki ne fasaya hai na tumhe? Iski vajah se tum aisi baatein Kar rahe ho na? Main choodungi nahi isse. Poore college mein badnaam Kar dungi ise.
S - Shut up, Shagun...just shut up!!! Tumhe jo bhi problem hai, mujhse honi chahiye. Anokhi k sath Kuch galat Karne ki tum sochna bhi mat. Trust me, you don't want to see the bad side of me!!
Sh - Kya kar loge tum Shaurya? Badi maa ise Kabhi accept nahi karengi.
S - I don't care! The fact is, I love Anokhi...aur agar kisiko iss cheez se problem hai, toh woh unki problem hai, mujhse unse koi lena dena nahi...I have had enough of you guys!!
Sh - Ghar mein toh tum mana loge badi maa ko...lekin college mein kya karoge tum? Waha toh tum mujhe control nahi kar sakte.
S - In case you have forgotten, Ms Kapoor, I am the director of this institution! Anokhi k khilaaf ek baat and I'll make sure you are thrown out of the institution right away! Main personal aur professional ko mix nahi karna chahta, I hope aap bhi nahi karengi. Otherwise, be ready for the consequences.
Sh - Lekin Shaurya! Badi maa ki tabiyet theek nahi hai. Unke baare mein toh socho. Unhe Kitna stress hoga tumhari baatein sunkar.
S - Unki tabiyet k liye main apna sach badal nahi sakta. Anyways, she's getting better now. Aur agar tumhe unke tabiyet ki itni hi fikr hai, toh yahaan se ghar jao, apna samaan pack Karo, koi bhi excuse banao aur ghar se chalti bano! Warna I have my ways! Waise bhi, Delhi se lautate hi main unhe sab sach bata hi dunga...fir chahe unki tabiyet kharab ho jaaye...toh I'll get best doctors in the world for her...but this engagement is not happening! Am I clear? Now leave us alone and don't you dare follow us to Delhi.
Shaurya took Anokhi's hand in his, took their bag and walked past Shagun, leaving her disappointed.
Makhan had got his car repaired at night.
S - Chalo jaldi, hume Delhi pohchna hai seminar se pehle. Iss Shagun k chakkar mein der na ho jaaye.
He opened the door for Anokhi. She sat inside and he offered to help her with the seat belt but she stopped him without saying a word and did it herself. He realised biwi Ka paara chadha hua hai! He settled in his seat and started the car.
S - Anokhi, suno na...abhi toh tumne Shagun ko itna Kuch sunaya! Ab mujhse kyu gussa ho rahi ho! You know I love you!
A - Maine unke saamne aapse koi sawaal nahi Kiya kyuki yeh humare beech ki baat hai. Iska yeh matlab nahi k main aapse gussa nahi hu!
S - That's so sweet of you wifey😘 Par ab mujhse bhi toh gussa mat Karo na. Khatam ho gayi na baat!
A - Khatam ho gayi? Kaise? Issi baat ka darr tha mujhe....k aap apne family k saamne mere liye stand Kabhi nahi le paenge!
S - Kaisi baatein Kar rahi ho tum! Abhi waha tumhare liye nahi toh kiske liye stand liya maine?
A - Wo toh Shagun ma'am k saamne! Wo family hain aapki?😡
S - Arey baba mera wo matlab nahi tha. Par usse bhi maine wahi Kaha na k badi maa ko sab bata dunga. Main sirf unke theek hone Ka intezaar Kar raha hu.
A - Kab theek hongi wo Shaurya? Aap hi kehte ho na wo chahti hain aap unke hisaab se rahe. Wo mujhe toh rattibhar bhi pasand nahi karti. Jab jab aap unke saamne meri baat karoge, unhe stress hote rahega, wo beemar hoti rahengi.
S - Par unke beemari Ka solution meri Shaadi nahi hai Anokhi! Main unhe ache hospital mein rakhunga, unka ilaaj karvaunga, par unko yeh baat maanni hogi k main tumse Shaadi Karna chahta hu! Tum jaanti bhi ho wo sagai kin haalato mein hui?
A - Main kaise janungi. Aapko mujhe yeh batana zaroori hi nahi laga. Aap mujhse unki engagement chupa rahe the aur bakiyo se humari Shaadi.
S - Have you lost it Anokhi? Tum sunn rahi ho tum kya keh rahi ho? Tum humari Shaadi aur wo engagement compare Kar rahi ho? Haan main maanta hu maine tumhe yeh baat nahi batayi. Par kya tum sunne ki haalat mein thi 2 din se? Yaad Karo maine kitni baar Kaha tumse k main Kuch important kehna chahta hu! Ya toh koi aa jaata tha ya tum nikal jaati thi. Kaise batata main! Tum bhi Kabhi dusro ki baat sunne ki aadat bana lo!!
Suno ab meri baat! Yeh sagai humare Shaadi se ek din pehle hui. In fact, main ise sagai bhi nahi kehna chahta. Main theek hote hi sabse pehle tumse milne tumhare hotel aaya tha...Goa mein. Waha mujhe samjha tum Chandigarh nikal gayi ho. Main tumhare piche airport aane nikal raha tha utne mein Shagun Ka msg aaya k badi maa ko minor heart attack aaya hai. Main turant villa laut gaya. Badi maa ne zidd Kar li thi k pehle tum sagai Karo, tab hi main davai lungi. Maine bohot samjhnane ki koshish ki unhe, par wo maan hi nai rahi thi. Unki saans fool rahi thi. Uss waqt mujhe sahi galat Kuch nahi sujha, mujhe sirf meri beemar badi maa nazar aa rahi thi. Isliye maine wo ring pehna di. Tum hi batao, ise engagement kehte hai kya? Meri baaki family tak nahi thi waha.
A - Sirf aap, shagun ma'am aur devi ma'am the waha?
Anokhi started joining the dots.
S - Haan! Usse kya fark padta hai. Agar poori duniya bhi hoti saamne tab bhi main iss engagement ko bilkul nahi maanta. Rahi baat tumse chupane ki, toh chupane Ka mera koi iraada nahi tha. Main bass chahta tha k tum sunne samajhne ki condition mein ho...humare paas utna waqt ho.
A - Aapko unhe ache doctor k paas le jaana chaiye. Ya koi aur doctor Ka...second opinion? Something like that? I mean...koi Kami nahi rehni chaiye na unki treatment mein.
S - Woh main dekh lunga. Shayad tum sahi keh rahi ho. Main unhe dusre doctor k paas bhi le jaunga. Main bhi yahi chahta hu k wo jald se jald theek ho jaaye...taaki me unhe tumhare baare mein bata saku! Aur unhe yeh baat maanni padegi, she doesn't have a choice! Ab toh gussa nai ho na tum?
A - Hmmm
S - Thanks!! Kitna halka feel Kar raha hu main!
Shaurya kissed her hand. He moved his fingers in Anokhi's hair to touch her middle partition.
S - Jaanti ho, Shagun k sath meri engagement hone wali hai yeh sab ko pata hai, lekin main wo ring sabke saamne nahi pehenta college mein. Aur humari Shaadi hui hai yeh koi nahi jaanta, fir bhi tum apne maang mein sindoor lagati ho aur apne baalo se chhupati ho. Yeh fark hai in dono baato ko chupane mein. Main wo baat chupana chahta hu kyuki uski koi value hi nai hai aur yeh baat chupana chahta hu kyuki tumhe koi problem na ho! Maaf Kiya na tumne ab mujhe?
A - Ji...Kar diya! Lekin aap Chandigarh pohchte hi Devi ma'am ko doctor k paas le jaenge aur jald se jald unhe bataenge k aap yeh sagai tod rahe hai.
S - Yes ma'am!
A - Main bhi jaanna chahti hu k Devi ma'am ko sach mein heart attack aaya tha ya wo natak Kar rahi thi? Warna wo turant dusre din Goa se Chandigarh kaise aati? Aur sagai mein at least apne gharwalo ko toh bulati! Mujhe isme Kuch sahi nahi lag raha, lekin main kahungi toh shaurya ko acha nahi lagega. I am sure, aastha ma'am k sath bhi unhone aise hi kuch kiya hoga. Lekin ab aur nahi...I'll make sure shaurya ko unki asliyat samajh aaye. Ab na main aastha ma'am k sath kuch galat hone dungi, na humare pyaar k sath. Agar shaurya itne efforts le rahe hain mere liye, toh mujhe bhi unpe trust karna hoga!
S - Anokhi...Hotel pahunch gaye hum Delhi. Chalo utro jaldi.
A - Haan haan!!
S - Chalo let's check in...tab tak humara samaan aa jaega.
At the reception counter.
S - There's a booking in the name of Mr and Mrs Shaurya Sabherwal.
A - What?! Aapne ek hi room book ki hai?!!
S - Haan...pati-patni ek room mein nahi reh sakte?🤷🏽♂️
A - Kisiko pata chal gaya toh!!
S - Tum apni batao! Tumhe problem nahi hai toh baki sab I'll handle.
A - Umm...mujhe koi problem nahi hai.
S - Good! Toh yahaan Anokhi Bhalla naam se bhi ek room booked hai baki students wale floor pe. Lekin tumhe waha ki keys nahi milne wali! Tum mere sath humare room mein rahogi!
A - Aapka kuch nahi ho sakta!!
S - Chalo...ab der nahi ho rahi tumhe?
In the room
S - Suno. Main ready ho jaata hu, tab tak tum rest Kar lo. Kal poori raat baithke soyi ho tum. Just relax for a while.
Shaurya took a shower and came out wrapping his towel. He went close to Anokhi who was sleeping on the bed and moved fingers in his hair so as to sprinkle water from his hair on her face. She woke up and saw her husband this close to her, standing there only in his towel. She came to her senses, pushed him away and ran towards the bathroom as she was running late. He back-hugged her and whispered in her ears "Yaad hai na...mujhe blue colour pasand hai?"
She nodded in a yes, took out her clothes and rushed in the bathroom to take a shower. Shaurya got ready in his royal blue suit and crisp white shirt. He relaxed in the sofa, eagerly waiting for anokhi to see what she's wearing.
Anokhi came out of the bathroom, wearing a nicely pleated designer blue saree and white sleeveless deep back blouse. She was wiping her hair with a towel and Shaurya was mesmerized at her beauty. She found him gawking at her. She stood in front of the mirror, took out a hair dryer from the drawer and started drying her hair. Her blowing hair were giving a sneak peek of her fair bare back to the husband. If that wasn't enough, she faced away from him and took her hair in the front to dry them. Shaurya couldn't resist. He came to her, slid his hands inside her saree and held her on her midriff. He placed innumerable kisses on her back, stealing glances at her through the mirror. She too looked at him in the mirror and blushed.
A - Chalo ab, hume der ho rahi hai!!!
S - Meri biwi itni khoobsurat dikhegi toh main kaise chal paunga room se bahar!!
A - Ssshhhh!! Abhi nahi.. Chalo jaldi.
S - Are aise hi jaogi?
A - Matlab?
He turned her around and hugged her and tied the string of her blouse seeing her back in the mirror. This time, he didn't resist brushing his fingers on her sexy back which sent a chill down her spine!! She whispered in his ear in a turned-on voice
A - Ho gaya?
S - Umm hua toh nahi...par raat ko continue karenge!😉
He released the hug.
A - Ab chalein?
S - Ek aur cheez bhul rahi ho tum!
A - Ab kya?
S - Mere naam Ka sindoor!!😳
A - Oh haan!
Shaurya made a middle partition in her hair with his fingers, gently applied just a pinch of sindoor and reset her hair in order to hide it. Anokhi held on to his blazer. He kissed her forehead and extended his hand to her.
S - All the best, wifey, for your first seminar as Mrs Anokhi Shaurya Sabherwal!!
Anokhi held his hand with a smile and said
A - Thank you, Mr. Husband!😳
They stepped out of the room, hand in hand and walked towards the auditorium.
With Shaurya supporting his wife in her dreams and Anokhi accepting him as her husband, they headed on their own little secret journey as a man and wife!❤️
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Thank you for reading!!🤗
Yey.. 🥳🥳
Engagement drama over..
Shagun ki dhulai..
Shakhi convo..
Shakhi trust eachother..
Shawarwals in a room..
Neck massage...
Anokhi being smart..
I love everything babe..😘
Originally posted by: pratikshaa100
Oh my god.....this is so beautiful ❤️
I am literally bursting with happiness rn.
I wished they actually showed something like this in the show. This had everything that I would love to see. Completely in-line with the show story and the character archs are beautifully maintained. 👏
Hands down, this is the best story I have ever read on ShaKhi ☺️
Anuja, what an amazing writer you are! 🤗
Pls do keep writing. Will love to read more of your stories ❤️
Bold - Omg that's the biggest compliment!!! Thanks a lot dear☺️
I'll keep writing as and when the show inspires and time permits!!😀
Originally posted by: rumi_dee
Omg! This is soo awesome Anuja.. how did you manage to write all this in such little time!!?? 👏👏🙌🙌🙌 Hats off.. Loved the writing , the dialogues, the details.. everything is just so perfect! ❤️ You really did take us through and emotional roller coaster ride, starting with the ladai and their much needed heart to heart talk.Followed by the passion.. and Anokhi Sherni Sabherwal defending her husband against Shagun!! 😍🔥❤️😁LOVED IT!! Wow we are blessed with such incredible talents here.. so thankful for sharing this with us !! 🤗🤗 Keeping on keeping on!
Haha I was not able to keep it aside once I started writing. Almost felt like these actors...I was totally into the characters while writing this and was not able to switch between character and reality😆 So I stopped only after I finished writing...didn't even do my office work today😆
Thanks a lot for reading it and leaving such a lovely comment for me🤗
Originally posted by: rishbala3018
Wow wow 👏👏👏
Sach mein maza hi aa gayw
Sab kuch tha ismein, kaash serial mein bhi aisa kuch ho, haayyyyeeee
Wonderfully penned. Too good 👍👌
Bas aise hi likhte raho, jo serial mein milta dekhne ko wo aise enjoy karwate raho humein.
Thank you for writing it so Wonderfully.
Love Preet ❤
Aww thanks a lot Preet☺️
Let's hope serial mein isse bhi behtar Kuch dekhne milega😁
Originally posted by: Mona_988
Anujaaaa!! ...I loved it so muchh ..Hatsoff to you girl 👏👏.. What an amazing story ❤️❤️
While reading this I can actually imagine shakhi.. It is so so good.
You have included everything which I wanted from this delhi track.. That hotel room wala I was thinking yesterday only and you have added that also
You write so well.. Please write more often..💖😍
You are so talented 👏
Haha yesss!! I want to see them living in together at least for a day...need some domestic vibes😁 so had to include the hotel room part😆
Thanks a lot ☺️
Originally posted by: lavs_157
Take a bow Anuja.🤗👏
Loved it so much!!!!
You have written so beautifully. N in line with the show, the characters and their character graphs.
It was gripping and emotional.
Want to see this happening on the show so badly. Both of them baring their souls and past pain to each other. Both of them trying to understand why the other is like this.
I am so happy that you showed Shaurya changing and willing to change for her, willing to understand her and willing to delve into the past so that the same doesn’t happen to them. Him understanding and feeling her pain is very dear to me. But I am very happy you didn’t completely change his character, his possessiveness and stubbornness is an intricate part of his character, and it can’t be changed overnight, till his abandonment issues are settled.
I loved that you made Anokhi give words to her pain and insecurities. She never talks about it. She never opens up. I am so glad you made her tell her reasons behind her conditions. Glad that you made her break down. Being strong doesn’t mean you can’t break down. Strength is allowing yourself to break down and then get back up again. She needed to release the emotions she has suppressed for so long. And I when she took a stand for their love in front of Shagun, I could see our Jugni there. N also that she could see through Devi’s manipulation.They have a long way to go. But they are on the right path.
Please send this to the CV’s Anuja. 🤣🤣They need writers like you.
Thank you much for writing this, took me away a little from the gloomy mood I am in. 🤗❤️❤️
Please continue writing more Yaar. You have an amazing talent. ❤️❤️
Thank you so much Lavs☺️
Their emotional conversation is really long due in the show!! I await it more than any romantic scene!
No matter how much this possessive behaviour could be irritating in real life, show mein we love his possessiveness, no?😆 what's SS without possessiveness😆 He needs to take a journey down the lanes of past and I can't wait for that track to kick in!!
Anokhi needs to emotionally open up. This is one of the very few FLs who has cried the least in ITV show. I don't expect her to keep crying to show her sadness over anything, but I want to see her breaking over something. If nothing could break her till now, only Shaurya's betrayal (maybe as misunderstood by her) can break her. And the worst thing is, she wouldn't have shaurya with her when she breaks down. I wish this is not the scenario! I want to see her breaking down only in the arms of Shaurya. This might happen if Bhallas come into the picture and papaji does something unthinkable.
Anokhi understanding devgun's game is my dream. She very well knows what Devi is. So it shouldn't be difficult for her to understand it. And once she understands, I don't want her to become typical jagga jasoos FL of itv and setting on some mission of exposing them alone keeping the ML in darki want her to be the guiding light in the life of Shaurya and it should be only shaurya exposing his own people!!
I wish I could send this to CVs...but serial ek week mein khatam ho jaata😆 So let's have a faith in them that they do what they are best at!!😊
Anuja!🤗
Its a treat!!!
I loved it! Every part of it!
The conversation concerning their painful past and childhood.
The rain sequence 😳
Shagun ki beizzatti!
Oh Goodness, what a twist you wrote there! It was soooo unexpected! I like that!
And the sindoor ending part is just tooooo cute!
I love love love it!
Delightful reading time i had!
❤️
Thank you so much Mehr❤️
Everyone is dying to see shagun ki beizzati and it is more than welcome if it's done by pati patni both😆 Honestly, I really want anokhi to trust in Shaurya's love for once and stand by him. He is so trapped from all the sides...he needs her trust now!!
And yes, SS ki koi bhi story Mrs Sabherwal k SS k naam k sindoor k bina poori nai ho sakti😆
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