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Hello y'all 🤗

Based on all the BTS, I have tried to pen down my imagination in a TS. Posting one part now, couldn't complete the second one.... hopefully soon! Hope you all like it🤗


Let's start from the precap! (In my imagination, shaurya doesn't have the ugly ring on his finger!)





Anokhi is having breakfast and thinking about shaurya.


A - PS sach mein nahi aa rahe kya? Unhe aana chahiye na...waise toh bada bolte hai main HOD hu HOD hu...fir unki zimmedari hai na apne students k sath jaane ki!🙄


She remembers the flashback of his talks about his zimmedari and her taunting him about his irresponsible action of maang mein sindoor.


A - Students k liye na sahi, mere liye hi aa jaate☺️ Aise toh bolte hai mujhse dur mat jao...aur khud ko dekho...mere sath jaana toh chhodo, milne bhi nahi aaye...milna bhi chhodo, ek call bhi nahi Kiya...kal raat se ek text bhi nahi!!😏 Aise kyu Kar rahe hai aap, PS!😞Wo toh mere sath rehna chahte hai hamesha, main hi unhe waqt nahi deti...kahi maine hi toh jyada nahi kheech liya baat ko!🥺


Anokhi senses all the students rushing to the bus. She suddenly gets up and goes to pay the money. As she comes back, her phone is nowhere to be seen. She starts searching the phone fervently and the bus drives off! Anokhi panics!


A - Hey bhagwaan! Yeh kya ho raha hai! Main kya Karu ab! Bus bhi chali gayi, mere paas phone bhi nahi hai...kaise jaungi main ab!! PS ne kitni ummeed se mujhe yeh opportunity di thi. Wo apna promise rakh rahe the, mere sapne poore karne me mera saath de rahe the...me apni laparvahi se unhe disappoint nahi Kar sakti...mujhe kaise bhi karke Delhi pohchna hi hoga!!


S - Good morning, Mrs Sabherwal!! Kuch keh rahi thi aap!!☺️


Shaurya comes from behind her and whispers in her ear. Anokhi, shocked, turns towards him. She gets extremely happy to see him but also gets conscious thinking he might have heard her.


A - PS...aap...yahaan? Aapne toh kaha tha teachers nahi aane wale?🤔

S - Haan. Teachers nahi aaenge. Par maine yeh nahi kaha tha k tumhara pati nahi aaega. Bhul gayi tum, maine tumse kaha tha me tumse dur nahi reh pata! Aur maine yeh bhi kaha tha k main hamesha tumhara sath dunga!☺️


Anokhi looks down to hide her blush from him. Shaurya holds his hands around her neck and cups her face.


S - Mujhe tumhara toh nahi pata...par main apne biwi ki baatein kaafi seriously leta hu!☺️

A - PS...wo...pata nahi kaise...meri bus miss ho gayi. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha ab main kya karu!!😰

S - Agar koi problem hoti hai, tumhe koi help chahiye, toh tumhe apne pati ko call Karna chahiye na!🤷🏽‍♂️

A - Wahi toh keh rahi hu main! Mera phone kho gaya hai...main kaise call Karti aapko?😰


Shaurya pulls her face closer to his!


S - Ohh! Mujhe! Matlab tum maanti ho main tumhara pati hu aur tum mujhe hi call Karna chahti thi!☺️

A - ji...wo...ab mujhe seminar se related koi bhi dikkat aati hai toh main HOD ko hi call karungi na!😜


Anokhi bites her lip as she teases Shaurya, leaving him irritated. Shaurya holds her by her waist and pulls her.


S - Acha? HOD? Main HOD hu tumhara?🙄

A - Haan toh! Kal aap hi toh college mein chilla chilla k keh rahe the k aap HOD hai aur director bhi. Fir Shagun ma'am ko bhi toh yahi bola aapne...aap HOD hai aur main aapki student!🤷

S - Acha? Main Kuch aur bhi batane wala tha sab ko chilla chilla k. Wo bhul gayi tum? Bol du sabko chalke?😉

A - Sshh! Nahi! Aap aise Kuch nahi Karne wale! Ab yeh bataiye main Delhi kaise jaungi. Main jaana chahti hu. Main seminar attend Karna chahti hu. Maine kitni taiyari ki thi. Main aapko bilkul disappoint nahi karna chah....😶

S - Main bhi nahi! Main bhi tumhe bilkul disappoint nahi karna chahta. Isiliye toh aaya hu yahaan! Sach batao, tum chahti thi na main aau?☺️

A - Haan...matlab...🙈

S - Lo...toh aa gaya main! Aur yeh...yeh raha tumhara phone📱

A - Yeh aapke paas kaise aaya! Ek second. Aapne jaan bujh kar churaya tha mera phone? Aap meri baatein sun rahe the chup chup k?😠

S - Ab biwi se kya chori karna aur kya chup chup k sunna! Par wo kya hai na...meri biwi khud kuch bolti nahi mujhe. Toh aise chup chupke hi sunni padengi uski baatein. Badi berehem hai meri biwi, bata raha hu tumhe!😪

A - Main berehem?😠 Apne aap ko dekho pehle! Mera phone chori kiya, meri bus miss karva di, mujhe late ho raha hai aur ab yaha sirf baatein banani hai aapko! Main time par pohoch nahi paayi Delhi toh bhi aap mujhe hi sunaenge...shaurya sir bann jaenge!!😒

S - Kitni bechain ho rahi ho tum mere sath drive pe chalne k liye. Khul k kaho na waise k mujhe le chalo Delhi!🤩 Agar main shaurya sir bann bhi jau, toh tum shaurya sir ki biwi bann sakti ho!🤷🏽‍♂️

A - Ab chalenge aap jaldi? Ya yahi rukna hai?😒

S - Haan baba chalo!


Shaurya opens the door of the car for Anokhi. She settles in the car and pulls the seat belt.


S - Are are...ruko! Tumhare pati k hote hue aise chote mote kaam tum kyu karogi!☺️


Shaurya leans over Anokhi and extends his hand to pull the belt. Anokhi looks towards the belt, absolutely conscious, and holds his wrist. Shaurya takes a glance at her and places a soft peck on her cheek on his side. Anokhi suddenly turns her face towards him out of surprise and their lips come closer. They get lost in each others eyes for a second. Shaurya pulls the belt across her and fixes it.


S - (in his husky voice) Chalein, Mrs Sabherwal? Shaadi k baad ki humari pehli journey hai yeh...aur wo bhi tumhare seminar k liye! Maine apni good luck wish toh de hi di hai tumhe!☺️😉


Anokhi nods in affirmative and they drive off!



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S - Suno. Hume kaafi time lagne wala hai. Shaam ho jaegi pohochte pohochte. Tum chaho toh thodi der so jao, rest Kar lo. You have a long week ahead.

A - Nahi...uski koi zarurat nahi hai. I am fine. Aur agar main so jau aur mujhe dekhke aapko bhi neend aa gayi toh!😅

S - Toh kya! Main car side mein park Kar dunga aur tumhe apni baaho mein leke so jaunga...pichli baar ki tarah😉

A - Aap se toh baat Karna hi bekaar hai! Aur kuch sujhta hi nahi na aapko!🙄

S - Bilkul nahi! Wo chhodo. Listen to me. Please rest kar lo tum.

A - But main padhna chahti hu. Mujhe preparations Karni hai achese.

S - Are! Tumhara professor hai na tumhare sath. Me pohchne k baad tumhe sab brief Kar dunga na. Aur waise bhi...abhi tum padhogi, mere paas toh aur koi kaam nahi hoga abhi toh main tumhe ghurta rahunga, fir tum distract ho jaogi☺️ aur fir mujhe daantogi...usse toh better hai tum so jao abhi aur fir hum dono sath mein milke tumhari preparation karenge. I don't want you to get overstressed Anokhi☝️


Anokhi looks at him in complete awe with a sweet smile on her face.


A - Pata nahi kyu par dheere dheere mujhe Aastha ma'am ki baato par bharosa ho raha hai. Pyaar sach mein insaan ko badal deta hai. Kya sach mein mera pyaar PS ki soch badal raha hai? Ab main sirf unki student nahi hu, biwi bhi hu. Fir bhi wo mujhe Kitna support Kar rahe hain iss seminar k liye. Pati ki tarah pyaar bhi Kar rahe hai aur professor ki tarah guide bhi Kar rahe hai. Agar yeh aise hi chalta raha toh mujhe unse Kabhi koi shakayat nahi hogi!☺️


S - Anokhi...kya hua? Kaha kho gayi?

A - Nahi toh...Kuch nahi...


Anokhi closes her eyes to take some rest as he said. Shaurya caresses her head and continues to drive.


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It's 2'o clock in the afternoon. Shaurya stops the car at a restaurant. He holds Anokhi's hand in his and kisses it. Anokhi wakes up and sees around.


A - Kahaan pahunche hum?🤔

S - Mid-way pahunche hai. Rasta kaafi kharab hai, jyada time lag raha hai. Mujhe bhook lag rahi hai bohot tez. And I need to freshen up as well. Yahaan chalke Kuch kha lete hai? Warna protein bar pe hi guzaara Karna padega😉 Aur tum toh mere sath share bhi nahi karogi!! Mujhe aise hi bhookha rehna padega!😏

A - Umm...sorry PS...

S - Sorry kis liye?😅

A - Us din maine protein bar share nahi Kiya...aur aaj bhi...main itni gehri neend so gayi aur aapko bina khaane k, bina neend k akele drive karna pada🥺

S - It's okay...koi baat nahi...chalo ab!😀


Shaurya opens the door for anokhi and they head towards the restaurant. Shaurya pulls the chair for Anokhi and he settles on the chair beside her.


S - Bolo, kya khaogi?

A - Umm Kuch bhi chalega...aap kijiye na order🤷

S - Tumhe pata hai na...Jo tumhe pasand hai wahi mujhe pasand hai!☺️

A - Mujhe butter chicken pasand hai!!😁

S - Really? That's my favourite as well! Chalo wahi order karte hai. Aur food serve hota hai tab tak fresh hoke aate hai.


They come back from the washroom and the food is served. Anokhi begins to eat.


S - Suno! Yeh shaadi k baad humara first lunch hai sath mein☺️ In fact, hum first time sath mein lunch Kar rahe hai! Tumhe pata nahi hai wo ek rasam hoti hai! Shaadi k baad pehli baar khaana khate hain tab pati patni ek dusre ko apne haato se khaana khilate hain!! Kya yaar wifey, tumhe koi rasme pata nahi hai...sab sikhana padta hai mujhe!!🙄


Anokhi smiles at his adorable antics. She takes a morsel of roti and butter chicken and feeds him, brushing her fingers on his lips. Shaurya looks at her intensely.


S - Jaanti ho...Maine zindagi mein bahut baar butter chicken khaaya hai...but wo itna acha Kabhi nahi laga!!😍


Anokhi blushes!


A - Waise...yeh aapki rasam sirf one sided hi hoti hai kya? Bhuk lag rahi hai mujhe bhi!!!🙄

S - I like this!😉 Kaho toh, aaj hi kya...main toh har roz, har breakfast lunch dinner mein, poora khaana apne haatho se khila sakta hu tumhe!😉

A - Abhi toh khilaiye filhaal!!☹️


Shaurya feeds her one morsel and gives her a kiss on her cheek😘


S - Aur meri rasam k hisaab se, khane k har bite k sath biwi ko yeh bonus bhi milta hai!!☺️


They finish their lunch and head towards the car.



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Shaurya is about to open the car door for her, but he stops.


S - Suno! Jab hum rasam ki baat kar hi rahe the toh mujhe ek aur rasam yaad aayi. First khaane k baad na, biwi ko gift bhi dete hai☺️

A - Ohho!! First khaane k baad nahi hota wo PS, pehli Rasoi k baad hota hai. Aur maine koi khaana nahi banaya hai yahaan🤷

S - Wo toh theek hai, but mujhe acha lag raha hai tum saari rasmein accept Kar rahi ho☺️ Toh suno! Tum Khana jab banaogi tab banaogi...mujhe nahi lagta tumhe Khana banane Ka koi shauk hoga. Right?

A - Aapko kaise pata!😯 Mujhe bilkul nahi pasand khana banana. Mujhe nahi aata Khana banane!💁

S - Bass, mujhe pata chal gaya. Tum itni career oriented ladki ho, mujhe nahi lagta tumne Kabhi Khana banane mein interest liya hoga. Koi baat nahi...chalta hai🤷🏽‍♂️

A - Aapko sach mein koi problem nahi hai?😳

S - Bilkul nahi. Tumhe jo pasand hai tum wahi Karo🤷🏽‍♂️ Waise agar apne pati k liye tumhe kabhi Kuch banane ki iccha hui, toh tum seekh sakti ho khaana banana...I won't mind! Main help Kar dunga tumhari!☺️

A - Aapko aata hai khaana banana?😯

S - Haan! I mean basic toh aata hi hai🤷🏽‍♂️

A - I am surprised! Mujhe nahi laga tha k the Mr Shaurya Sabherwal khaana bhi banate honge!!😯


Shaurya pulls her closer and looks into her eyes.


S - Tumhe koi idea nahi hai mujhe kya kya aata hai!!!😏

A - Nahi...I mean...😶

S - You mean what Mrs Sabherwal?🤤

A - Wo...Kuch nahi...aap wo kisi rasam ki baat Kar rahe the na!🙈

S - Yeah...rasam!!🙄


Shaurya releases the hug.


S - Toh main keh raha tha...khaana tum banao ya na banao, humne sath mein khaaya hai, khilaya hai, toh main yeh wali bhi rasam Kar hi lunga! I've got a gift for you!☺️

A - Kya gift hai?!🥰

S - Pehle promise karo tum accept karogi mera gift?☝️

A - Aap bataiye toh sahi💁

S - Pehle promise. You know what, tumhe yeh gift dena mera haq hai. Please mujhse wo haq mat chhino? Aur main jaanta hu tumhe bhi acha lagega yeh gift!☺️

A - Acha okay...I promise! Bataiye na ab kya hai!🥰


Shaurya takes out a box of ring from his pocket and goes down on his knees.


A - Yeh kya Kar rahe hai aap? Pls khade ho jaiye!🥺

S - Nahi. Let me do this! Anokhi, humari Shaadi itne hadbadi mein hui k main tumhare liye kuch special Kar hi nahi paaya. I am so sorry!😢 Mujhe humare Shaadi ko lekar ya mere faisle ko lekar koi regret nahi hai. Par jin haalato mein wo sab hua, uske liye I am sorry. I should have asked for your consent...par tum toh jaanti ho na main kitna impulsive hu. Jo mann mein aata hai Kar deta hu😞 Fir bhi. Me tumhe wo saare lamhe dena chahta hu...pyaar k sath...gusse mein nahi...aur aaj main yeh mauka nahi gawana chahta. Bolo Anokhi, kya main tumhe yeh ring pehna sakta hu? Pls apna haath aage badhao?☺️ Mujhe acha nahi lagta jab tum humare shaadi ko zabardasti ki shaadi ya forced marriage bolti ho. Shaadi na sahi, at least yeh ring hi accept Kar lo pls?🥺


Anokhi is touched by this gesture of his. She would have never imagined that Mr Shaurya Sabherwal will go down on his knees for her! He was accepting his mistake and was trying to make amends! He, who had said he didn't even ask for his own consent, was asking for her consent!! Anokhi had a drop of tear in her eyes!


Anokhi extended her left hand to him. He gently put a beautiful delicate diamond ring on her ring finger and kissed her hand😘💍


S - I love you, meri jaan!❤️ And thank you so so much!!! Mujhe bohot acha lagta hai jab tum mere efforts acknowledge Karti ho!☺️


Anokhi held his hand and helped him get up. She held both his hands in hers


A - Aapko kya lagta hai? Main patthar dil hu? Mujhe koi feelings nahi hai? Aap jaante bhi hai mere liye kitna difficult hota hai khudko restrict Karna! Specially tab, jab aap aisi koi harkatein karte ho. Nahi kar paati main khudko control😞


Anokhi briefly hugs Shaurya and suddenly releases the hug.


S - Toh kyu Karna chahti ho khudko control! Mat karo na!! Nahi...main filhaal usse Kuch nahi bolunga. Abhi k liye itni progress kaafi hai. I'll let her take her time.


A - Chalein? Kaafi der ho chuki hai.

S - Haan...chalo.


They sit in the car and continue their journey.



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S - Toh...Ms Fiancée..☺️

A - Sshhh!🤫

S - What! Ab yeh toh haq se bula hi sakta hu na main!🤷🏽‍♂️

A - Bilkul nahi. Aap kuch nahi bolenge🤫 Main ab padhne wali hu aur aap mujhe padhne denge!☝️ Aur haan...aap mujhe ghoorenge bhi nahi...aur agar ghoorte bhi hai toh mujhe usse koi fark nahi padne wala!💁 Chup chap se gaadi chalaiye!!☝️

S - Ok madam!! Shaadi k dusre din hi pati ko driver bana diya!!🙄

Abhi toh main chup baith jaunga...fir dikhata hu isse!☺️



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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow Anuja ❤️ First of all, congratulations for writing your first ever TS on this forum 🤗 Secondly, I was blushing all the time while reading this it's so wonderful 😆


Bechara Shaurya, I thought while tying up her seatbelt he'll steal a kiss from her lips, but wo hote hote reh gaya humare KPs ke tarah 🤣 but anyways, it was so cute ❤️ at least, he gave a peck on her cheek ☺️


I was thinking ki yeh Anokhi ko padhne nahi dega, aur agar padhayega bhi toh physically tease karta rahega har time 🤣


Aur tune toh sach mein Shaurya ko submissive bana diya, biwi ka sara kaam karne wala h yeh - from driving to cooking to feeding her 😆 isliye I'm always Team Anokhi 🤣


I can't wait to read the second part of your TS, jaldi tayyar karna aur please ek hot passionate wala liplock iss bar include zaroor karna aur detail mein write-up hona chahiye kiss ka ☺️


Thanks for this absolutely loved it ❤️

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Wonderful update dear

Totally loved it

Pls update the next part soon

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unres❤️

Majnu sabherwal 🤣🤣

Looks like kafi sari cheezein tumhare TS k first part ki puri hongi 😆

Beautiful update

Rishta wahi soch nayi

Shaurya being the ultimate bahurani 😆

Btw he was adorable and anokhi couldn't resist his charm.

How i wish we get so many kisses in the upcoming episodes 😆

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Such a fantastic update.👏I had a smile on my face throughout while reading it..☺️

Update next part soon..

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Such a sweet os ♥️

Enjoyed it thoroughly!!

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Beautiful OS❤️

It's really sweet and interesting one.

Keep writing🤗

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Originally posted by: IFLove

Hello y'all 🤗

Based on all the BTS, I have tried to pen down my imagination in a TS. Posting one part now, couldn't complete the second one.... hopefully soon! Hope you all like it🤗


Let's start from the precap! (In my imagination, shaurya doesn't have the ugly ring on his finger!)





Anokhi is having breakfast and thinking about shaurya.


A - PS sach mein nahi aa rahe kya? Unhe aana chahiye na...waise toh bada bolte hai main HOD hu HOD hu...fir unki zimmedari hai na apne students k sath jaane ki!🙄


She remembers the flashback of his talks about his zimmedari and her taunting him about his irresponsible action of maang mein sindoor.


A - Students k liye na sahi, mere liye hi aa jaate☺️ Aise toh bolte hai mujhse dur mat jao...aur khud ko dekho...mere sath jaana toh chhodo, milne bhi nahi aaye...milna bhi chhodo, ek call bhi nahi Kiya...kal raat se ek text bhi nahi!!😏 Aise kyu Kar rahe hai aap, PS!😞Wo toh mere sath rehna chahte hai hamesha, main hi unhe waqt nahi deti...kahi maine hi toh jyada nahi kheech liya baat ko!🥺


Anokhi senses all the students rushing to the bus. She suddenly gets up and goes to pay the money. As she comes back, her phone is nowhere to be seen. She starts searching the phone fervently and the bus drives off! Anokhi panics!


A - Hey bhagwaan! Yeh kya ho raha hai! Main kya Karu ab! Bus bhi chali gayi, mere paas phone bhi nahi hai...kaise jaungi main ab!! PS ne kitni ummeed se mujhe yeh opportunity di thi. Wo apna promise rakh rahe the, mere sapne poore karne me mera saath de rahe the...me apni laparvahi se unhe disappoint nahi Kar sakti...mujhe kaise bhi karke Delhi pohchna hi hoga!!


S - Good morning, Mrs Sabherwal!! Kuch keh rahi thi aap!!☺️


Shaurya comes from behind her and whispers in her ear. Anokhi, shocked, turns towards him. She gets extremely happy to see him but also gets conscious thinking he might have heard her.


A - PS...aap...yahaan? Aapne toh kaha tha teachers nahi aane wale?🤔

S - Haan. Teachers nahi aaenge. Par maine yeh nahi kaha tha k tumhara pati nahi aaega. Bhul gayi tum, maine tumse kaha tha me tumse dur nahi reh pata! Aur maine yeh bhi kaha tha k main hamesha tumhara sath dunga!☺️


Anokhi looks down to hide her blush from him. Shaurya holds his hands around her neck and cups her face.


S - Mujhe tumhara toh nahi pata...par main apne biwi ki baatein kaafi seriously leta hu!☺️

A - PS...wo...pata nahi kaise...meri bus miss ho gayi. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha ab main kya karu!!😰

S - Agar koi problem hoti hai, tumhe koi help chahiye, toh tumhe apne pati ko call Karna chahiye na!🤷🏽‍♂️

A - Wahi toh keh rahi hu main! Mera phone kho gaya hai...main kaise call Karti aapko?😰


Shaurya pulls her face closer to his!


S - Ohh! Mujhe! Matlab tum maanti ho main tumhara pati hu aur tum mujhe hi call Karna chahti thi!☺️

A - ji...wo...ab mujhe seminar se related koi bhi dikkat aati hai toh main HOD ko hi call karungi na!😜


Anokhi bites her lip as she teases Shaurya, leaving him irritated. Shaurya holds her by her waist and pulls her.


S - Acha? HOD? Main HOD hu tumhara?🙄

A - Haan toh! Kal aap hi toh college mein chilla chilla k keh rahe the k aap HOD hai aur director bhi. Fir Shagun ma'am ko bhi toh yahi bola aapne...aap HOD hai aur main aapki student!🤷

S - Acha? Main Kuch aur bhi batane wala tha sab ko chilla chilla k. Wo bhul gayi tum? Bol du sabko chalke?😉

A - Sshh! Nahi! Aap aise Kuch nahi Karne wale! Ab yeh bataiye main Delhi kaise jaungi. Main jaana chahti hu. Main seminar attend Karna chahti hu. Maine kitni taiyari ki thi. Main aapko bilkul disappoint nahi karna chah....😶

S - Main bhi nahi! Main bhi tumhe bilkul disappoint nahi karna chahta. Isiliye toh aaya hu yahaan! Sach batao, tum chahti thi na main aau?☺️

A - Haan...matlab...🙈

S - Lo...toh aa gaya main! Aur yeh...yeh raha tumhara phone📱

A - Yeh aapke paas kaise aaya! Ek second. Aapne jaan bujh kar churaya tha mera phone? Aap meri baatein sun rahe the chup chup k?😠

S - Ab biwi se kya chori karna aur kya chup chup k sunna! Par wo kya hai na...meri biwi khud kuch bolti nahi mujhe. Toh aise chup chupke hi sunni padengi uski baatein. Badi berehem hai meri biwi, bata raha hu tumhe!😪

A - Main berehem?😠 Apne aap ko dekho pehle! Mera phone chori kiya, meri bus miss karva di, mujhe late ho raha hai aur ab yaha sirf baatein banani hai aapko! Main time par pohoch nahi paayi Delhi toh bhi aap mujhe hi sunaenge...shaurya sir bann jaenge!!😒

S - Kitni bechain ho rahi ho tum mere sath drive pe chalne k liye. Khul k kaho na waise k mujhe le chalo Delhi!🤩 Agar main shaurya sir bann bhi jau, toh tum shaurya sir ki biwi bann sakti ho!🤷🏽‍♂️

A - Ab chalenge aap jaldi? Ya yahi rukna hai?😒

S - Haan baba chalo!


Shaurya opens the door of the car for Anokhi. She settles in the car and pulls the seat belt.


S - Are are...ruko! Tumhare pati k hote hue aise chote mote kaam tum kyu karogi!☺️


Shaurya leans over Anokhi and extends his hand to pull the belt. Anokhi looks towards the belt, absolutely conscious, and holds his wrist. Shaurya takes a glance at her and places a soft peck on her cheek on his side. Anokhi suddenly turns her face towards him out of surprise and their lips come closer. They get lost in each others eyes for a second. Shaurya pulls the belt across her and fixes it.


S - (in his husky voice) Chalein, Mrs Sabherwal? Shaadi k baad ki humari pehli journey hai yeh...aur wo bhi tumhare seminar k liye! Maine apni good luck wish toh de hi di hai tumhe!☺️😉


Anokhi nods in affirmative and they drive off!



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S - Suno. Hume kaafi time lagne wala hai. Shaam ho jaegi pohochte pohochte. Tum chaho toh thodi der so jao, rest Kar lo. You have a long week ahead.

A - Nahi...uski koi zarurat nahi hai. I am fine. Aur agar main so jau aur mujhe dekhke aapko bhi neend aa gayi toh!😅

S - Toh kya! Main car side mein park Kar dunga aur tumhe apni baaho mein leke so jaunga...pichli baar ki tarah😉

A - Aap se toh baat Karna hi bekaar hai! Aur kuch sujhta hi nahi na aapko!🙄

S - Bilkul nahi! Wo chhodo. Listen to me. Please rest kar lo tum.

A - But main padhna chahti hu. Mujhe preparations Karni hai achese.

S - Are! Tumhara professor hai na tumhare sath. Me pohchne k baad tumhe sab brief Kar dunga na. Aur waise bhi...abhi tum padhogi, mere paas toh aur koi kaam nahi hoga abhi toh main tumhe ghurta rahunga, fir tum distract ho jaogi☺️ aur fir mujhe daantogi...usse toh better hai tum so jao abhi aur fir hum dono sath mein milke tumhari preparation karenge. I don't want you to get overstressed Anokhi☝️


Anokhi looks at him in complete awe with a sweet smile on her face.


A - Pata nahi kyu par dheere dheere mujhe Aastha ma'am ki baato par bharosa ho raha hai. Pyaar sach mein insaan ko badal deta hai. Kya sach mein mera pyaar PS ki soch badal raha hai? Ab main sirf unki student nahi hu, biwi bhi hu. Fir bhi wo mujhe Kitna support Kar rahe hain iss seminar k liye. Pati ki tarah pyaar bhi Kar rahe hai aur professor ki tarah guide bhi Kar rahe hai. Agar yeh aise hi chalta raha toh mujhe unse Kabhi koi shakayat nahi hogi!☺️


S - Anokhi...kya hua? Kaha kho gayi?

A - Nahi toh...Kuch nahi...


Anokhi closes her eyes to take some rest as he said. Shaurya caresses her head and continues to drive.


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It's 2'o clock in the afternoon. Shaurya stops the car at a restaurant. He holds Anokhi's hand in his and kisses it. Anokhi wakes up and sees around.


A - Kahaan pahunche hum?🤔

S - Mid-way pahunche hai. Rasta kaafi kharab hai, jyada time lag raha hai. Mujhe bhook lag rahi hai bohot tez. And I need to freshen up as well. Yahaan chalke Kuch kha lete hai? Warna protein bar pe hi guzaara Karna padega😉 Aur tum toh mere sath share bhi nahi karogi!! Mujhe aise hi bhookha rehna padega!😏

A - Umm...sorry PS...

S - Sorry kis liye?😅

A - Us din maine protein bar share nahi Kiya...aur aaj bhi...main itni gehri neend so gayi aur aapko bina khaane k, bina neend k akele drive karna pada🥺

S - It's okay...koi baat nahi...chalo ab!😀


Shaurya opens the door for anokhi and they head towards the restaurant. Shaurya pulls the chair for Anokhi and he settles on the chair beside her.


S - Bolo, kya khaogi?

A - Umm Kuch bhi chalega...aap kijiye na order🤷

S - Tumhe pata hai na...Jo tumhe pasand hai wahi mujhe pasand hai!☺️

A - Mujhe butter chicken pasand hai!!😁

S - Really? That's my favourite as well! Chalo wahi order karte hai. Aur food serve hota hai tab tak fresh hoke aate hai.


They come back from the washroom and the food is served. Anokhi begins to eat.


S - Suno! Yeh shaadi k baad humara first lunch hai sath mein☺️ In fact, hum first time sath mein lunch Kar rahe hai! Tumhe pata nahi hai wo ek rasam hoti hai! Shaadi k baad pehli baar khaana khate hain tab pati patni ek dusre ko apne haato se khaana khilate hain!! Kya yaar wifey, tumhe koi rasme pata nahi hai...sab sikhana padta hai mujhe!!🙄


Anokhi smiles at his adorable antics. She takes a morsel of roti and butter chicken and feeds him, brushing her fingers on his lips. Shaurya looks at her intensely.


S - Jaanti ho...Maine zindagi mein bahut baar butter chicken khaaya hai...but wo itna acha Kabhi nahi laga!!😍


Anokhi blushes!


A - Waise...yeh aapki rasam sirf one sided hi hoti hai kya? Bhuk lag rahi hai mujhe bhi!!!🙄

S - I like this!😉 Kaho toh, aaj hi kya...main toh har roz, har breakfast lunch dinner mein, poora khaana apne haatho se khila sakta hu tumhe!😉

A - Abhi toh khilaiye filhaal!!☹️


Shaurya feeds her one morsel and gives her a kiss on her cheek😘


S - Aur meri rasam k hisaab se, khane k har bite k sath biwi ko yeh bonus bhi milta hai!!☺️


They finish their lunch and head towards the car.



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Shaurya is about to open the car door for her, but he stops.


S - Suno! Jab hum rasam ki baat kar hi rahe the toh mujhe ek aur rasam yaad aayi. First khaane k baad na, biwi ko gift bhi dete hai☺️

A - Ohho!! First khaane k baad nahi hota wo PS, pehli Rasoi k baad hota hai. Aur maine koi khaana nahi banaya hai yahaan🤷

S - Wo toh theek hai, but mujhe acha lag raha hai tum saari rasmein accept Kar rahi ho☺️ Toh suno! Tum Khana jab banaogi tab banaogi...mujhe nahi lagta tumhe Khana banane Ka koi shauk hoga. Right?

A - Aapko kaise pata!😯 Mujhe bilkul nahi pasand khana banana. Mujhe nahi aata Khana banane!💁

S - Bass, mujhe pata chal gaya. Tum itni career oriented ladki ho, mujhe nahi lagta tumne Kabhi Khana banane mein interest liya hoga. Koi baat nahi...chalta hai🤷🏽‍♂️

A - Aapko sach mein koi problem nahi hai?😳

S - Bilkul nahi. Tumhe jo pasand hai tum wahi Karo🤷🏽‍♂️ Waise agar apne pati k liye tumhe kabhi Kuch banane ki iccha hui, toh tum seekh sakti ho khaana banana...I won't mind! Main help Kar dunga tumhari!☺️

A - Aapko aata hai khaana banana?😯

S - Haan! I mean basic toh aata hi hai🤷🏽‍♂️

A - I am surprised! Mujhe nahi laga tha k the Mr Shaurya Sabherwal khaana bhi banate honge!!😯


Shaurya pulls her closer and looks into her eyes.


S - Tumhe koi idea nahi hai mujhe kya kya aata hai!!!😏

A - Nahi...I mean...😶

S - You mean what Mrs Sabherwal?🤤

A - Wo...Kuch nahi...aap wo kisi rasam ki baat Kar rahe the na!🙈

S - Yeah...rasam!!🙄


Shaurya releases the hug.


S - Toh main keh raha tha...khaana tum banao ya na banao, humne sath mein khaaya hai, khilaya hai, toh main yeh wali bhi rasam Kar hi lunga! I've got a gift for you!☺️

A - Kya gift hai?!🥰

S - Pehle promise karo tum accept karogi mera gift?☝️

A - Aap bataiye toh sahi💁

S - Pehle promise. You know what, tumhe yeh gift dena mera haq hai. Please mujhse wo haq mat chhino? Aur main jaanta hu tumhe bhi acha lagega yeh gift!☺️

A - Acha okay...I promise! Bataiye na ab kya hai!🥰


Shaurya takes out a box of ring from his pocket and goes down on his knees.


A - Yeh kya Kar rahe hai aap? Pls khade ho jaiye!🥺

S - Nahi. Let me do this! Anokhi, humari Shaadi itne hadbadi mein hui k main tumhare liye kuch special Kar hi nahi paaya. I am so sorry!😢 Mujhe humare Shaadi ko lekar ya mere faisle ko lekar koi regret nahi hai. Par jin haalato mein wo sab hua, uske liye I am sorry. I should have asked for your consent...par tum toh jaanti ho na main kitna impulsive hu. Jo mann mein aata hai Kar deta hu😞 Fir bhi. Me tumhe wo saare lamhe dena chahta hu...pyaar k sath...gusse mein nahi...aur aaj main yeh mauka nahi gawana chahta. Bolo Anokhi, kya main tumhe yeh ring pehna sakta hu? Pls apna haath aage badhao?☺️ Mujhe acha nahi lagta jab tum humare shaadi ko zabardasti ki shaadi ya forced marriage bolti ho. Shaadi na sahi, at least yeh ring hi accept Kar lo pls?🥺


Anokhi is touched by this gesture of his. She would have never imagined that Mr Shaurya Sabherwal will go down on his knees for her! He was accepting his mistake and was trying to make amends! He, who had said he didn't even ask for his own consent, was asking for her consent!! Anokhi had a drop of tear in her eyes!


Anokhi extended her left hand to him. He gently put a beautiful delicate diamond ring on her ring finger and kissed her hand😘💍


S - I love you, meri jaan!❤️ And thank you so so much!!! Mujhe bohot acha lagta hai jab tum mere efforts acknowledge Karti ho!☺️


Anokhi held his hand and helped him get up. She held both his hands in hers


A - Aapko kya lagta hai? Main patthar dil hu? Mujhe koi feelings nahi hai? Aap jaante bhi hai mere liye kitna difficult hota hai khudko restrict Karna! Specially tab, jab aap aisi koi harkatein karte ho. Nahi kar paati main khudko control😞


Anokhi briefly hugs Shaurya and suddenly releases the hug.


S - Toh kyu Karna chahti ho khudko control! Mat karo na!! Nahi...main filhaal usse Kuch nahi bolunga. Abhi k liye itni progress kaafi hai. I'll let her take her time.


A - Chalein? Kaafi der ho chuki hai.

S - Haan...chalo.


They sit in the car and continue their journey.



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S - Toh...Ms Fiancée..☺️

A - Sshhh!🤫

S - What! Ab yeh toh haq se bula hi sakta hu na main!🤷🏽‍♂️

A - Bilkul nahi. Aap kuch nahi bolenge🤫 Main ab padhne wali hu aur aap mujhe padhne denge!☝️ Aur haan...aap mujhe ghoorenge bhi nahi...aur agar ghoorte bhi hai toh mujhe usse koi fark nahi padne wala!💁 Chup chap se gaadi chalaiye!!☝️

S - Ok madam!! Shaadi k dusre din hi pati ko driver bana diya!!🙄

Abhi toh main chup baith jaunga...fir dikhata hu isse!☺️



....stay tuned to know where this drive takes them!

This is Beautiful. 😍 Eagerly waiting for the next part!❤️❤️
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Beautiful writeup❤️

Mujhe ye sabh chahiye show mein bhi.. You have written it so well 👏

Please update the next part soon..💙

Ignore Shagun's bts..😛 Not worth it 😂

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I'm giddy!!!

What a beginning! 👏

You penned so many wow moments!

❤️❤️❤️

I love it!!!

N you Anuja, this is for you 🤗🤗🤗

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