Maneet FF - Mere Brother ki Dulhan...

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Posted: 2 months ago

          Mere Brother Ki Dulhan'.


 

Prologue... 


Khuranas


Dadi - Savithri Devi


Maan Singh Khurana ' Angry Young man


 

Pammi ' step mother

 

Dev Singh Khurana ' step brother


 


This is just yet another version of GHSP'..


Samjo GHSP ka ek rewind hai'


Lekhin kahaani mein thoda twist hai'..


Kaisa twist? Ye toh bahot jaldh aapko patha chal jaayega'..


Hummari Geet Handa toh wahi hai'.


Bolibali bak bak karnewali Hoshiarpur express''


Maan Singh Khurana bhi wahi akdu hai, aur sadu hai'.


                                                                Part – 1


 


Maan Delhi ka business man hai, aur Dadi ke saath Delhi mein rehtha hai


Ussne apne kudh ke mehnat se KC ko banaya hai……



 

Warna khuranas toh Hoshiarpur ke log hi hai….

 

Maan just couldn't stay with his step mother after his father's remarriage…..


He spent his childhood in the hostel and he just hates vacations….


It's only Dadi that he loves and Dadi too takes good care of him….


She takes him to different temples and other places during holidays as he hates Hoshiarpur….


Pammi ne toh Hoshiarpur ke sare properties apne naam kardhi…..



 

After khurana's death Dadi decides to take Maan to their purana house which is a little outside

Hoshiarpur…

 

Ab Maan bhi bada hogaya aur Dadi bhi apne bete ke bina Pammi ke saath nahi rehna chahathi….


Ye ghar jahan Dadi ne shadhi karkke pehle katam rakha tha bahut hi chota hai….


Lekhin Maan aur dadi ke liye toh kaafi hai……


Shukar hai baabji ki Dadi ke naam mein kuch toh fields hai jissko bejkke Dadi ne Maan ko apne naye business ki shurauvaat karne ko kaha…..


Maan Delhi mein apna business shuru kartha aur apne kadhi mehnat se sirf paanch saal mein KM ko kareedhkke Dadi ko apne paas bhulatha…..


Delhi jaane ke badh dadi bhi Hoshiarpur nahi aathi….


Lekhin ab toh Dadi ko Hoshiarpur aana pada….


Aakhir apne pothe ki shadhi hai……


Dadi had to come and that too with Maan…..


Maan has come here against his will, just for the sake of Dadi….


Ye Pammi aur Dev ne toh khurana khandaan ki naam hi mitti mein miladhi….


Ab toh Hoshiarpur ke log sirf Dadi ka izzat karthe hai aur unkko patha hai ki Maan ko Dadi ne pala hai toh Maan zaroor apna khandaan ka naam ko bacha payega….


They are eager to meet Maan Singh Khurana, khuranaji ka potha haina?


Khuranaji Hoshiarpur ke sarpanch the…….


Aajkal Dev unkke naam ko lekhe yahan gundagiri karthe rehtha….


Patha nahi kiss ladhki ki kismat karab hai jo isse shadhi karnewali hai….


Suna hai ki ladhki Hoshiarpur ki hi hai …koi Meera naam ki ladhki…..


Ye Meera bahut sundar hai aur Dev ko woh bahut pasand hai…..


Pammi ke paas itna paisa hai toh woh apne bete ke liye koi bhi ladhki kareedhkke de sakthi…..


Ye bechari toh bahut gareeb khandaan ki hai…….


Aur usske papa bhi nahi hai, sirf maa hai……


Issiliye usske maa ne socha ki jaise bhi usski shadhi ho….


Dev ke barein mein jaanne ke badh bhi ussne shadhi ke liye haan kardhi….


Maan ko iss shadhi mein aane ki koi diljasthi nahi hai….


Par dadi ne jab shadhi mein jaane ki zidd kiya tha, Maan ko unkke saath aana hi pada…


Dadi ko akhele hoshiapur kaise jaane desaktha?


Woh bhi usskke ghar, Maan aaisa kabhi nahi kar saktha….


Chahe kudh ki kitna bhi beizzatti ho Maan bardaasht kar saktha lekhin dadi ki ek beizatti nahi sheh patha…


Issi liye aaj Maan bhi yahan aaya hai Dadi ke saath….


Dadi shadhi ke ghar pe hi rukhthi…



Par Maan nahi, Maan toh apne purane ghar pe hi rukhtha….

 

He is not even interested in attending the wedding…..


Lekhin Dadi chahathi hai ki Maan 5 minute ke liye toh aaye…


Shadhi ka din….


Dadi calls Maan….


Dadi: Maan bete, aap aarahe haina?


Maan: nahi dadi, mujhe kuch zaroori kaam hai


Dadi:lekhin bete, yahan sab aapka intrezaar kar arhe hai


Maan: Dadi, mein yahan sirf aap ke liye aaya hoon


Dadi: par bete, ghaavwale toh aapse milna chahathe hai


Maan: unkko mein kal bhi mil saktha, haina?


Dadi: toh aap nahi aayenge?


Maan: please Dadi, aap jaanthe hai ki mein kyun nahi aana chahatha, I just ahte that woman


Dadi: sshhh, Maan bete, aap tension mat hojao, teek hai bete, jaise aapki marzi


Maan: apne khyaal rakhna Dadi, aapko bhi koi tension lene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, aap jaanthe haina, mere liye aap ke alawa iss duniya mein koi nahi hai


Dadi: haan bete, hum sab jaathe hai, aap hummari chintha chodiye aur haan, aapne kuch khaya hai ya nahi, mein Ramu se kehthi hoon ki aap ke liye kuch banayein


Maan: Dadi, aap meri fikar mat kijiye, mein koi chota bacha nahi hoon


Dadi: teek hai bete, hum aapse badh mein baat karthe hai


Maan: bye Dadi, aap wahan sambalkke rehna


Maan is worried about dadi, Dadi uss pagalon ke beech kya karegi?


Kaise unkko sambalegi?


Lekhin hummari dadi toh pammi ko bahut achche se jaanthi….


Issilliye koi dar nahi, Dadi ko patha hai ki ussko kaise sambalein…..


Meanwhile pammi is busy attending the guests….


She is so happy for her son….


Woh bhi apne bete ke liye itne achchi ladhki nahi doondh pathi…


Aakhir beta kisska hai?


Meera jaise bechariyon ka kya kami hai?


Warna kaun apne beti ki shadhi Dev ke saath karne ke liye tayaar hoga?


Itna kuch jaanne ke badh bhi log kaise aaise shadhi ko accept karthe hai?


Isse achcha toh Maan ki tarah shadhi hi nahi karne ka faisla lethe, haina?


Kyun shadhi karkke ek masoom ladhki ki zindagi ko barbad karne mein dhule hue hai ye log?


Maan just can't digest this, how could he witness such a shadhi?


Issi liye Maan iss shadhi se dhoor hi rehna chahatha….


Par Kismat ka khel toh bahut alag hai……………….


Ye shadhi Maan ki wajhe se hi hogi, warna ye shadhi rukh jaathi….


Aaisa Maan ne kya kiya tha?


Jaanne ke liye ek din intrezaar karna padega……

Posted: 2 months ago

Part - 2


 


 

 

Geet Handa''.Darji ki pothi'..

 

Geet bhi abhi abhi Hoshairpur aane ki tayaari mein hai'..


Geet lives in Amritsar with her beeji'..


She has just now finished her higher secondary and is eager to join college'.


Beeji toh Geet ki shadhi karna chahathi hai'..


Unkko Geet ki bahut fikar hai'..


Lekhin Geet toh aage padna hi chahathi hai'.


She knows Beeji would not agree'.


Her only hope is he rbrother Brij'..


Agar Brij ne Geet ko college join karne ko haan kardhi toh Beeji bhi mana nahi kar sakthi'.


Aur Geet apne bhai ki ladli hai'.


Brij Geet ka har baat maantha'.


Who toh sirf Geet ki kushiyan chchatha'.


Geet Beeji se ladhkke Amritsar chodkke apne bhai ke paas jaane ki faisla karthi'..


She leaves Amritsar''.Beeji is not willing to send her alone'.



 

But Geet is so adamant that beeji had to send her''


Ye ladhkki toh kissi ki baat nahi sunegi?


Patha nahi shadhi karkke kya karegi?


Geet ne toh shadhi ke barein mein socha hi nahi'.


Pehle padayi, phir naukri, phir dekhthe hai ki Salman jaisa koi miltha hai kya? haina babaji?


Geet apne kuch saheliyon ke saath Hoshairpur aathi hai'.


She is very excited'.


Haoshiarpur aathe hi Geet ko bahut kushi hothi'..


Ye usski gaav hai, apni mitti mein katam rakhne ka kushi hi alag hai'..


Geet ko lagtha hai ki yahan ka har cheez ussko welcome karna chahathi'.


Chahe ye tande hawa ho, ya panchiyon ka Ghana'.


Aur toh aur saawan bhi Geet ke aane se bahut kush ho gaya'.


Barish bhi aathi hai as if to welcome Geet''.



Geet enjoys the rain and she dances in the rain''

 

She hops in the rain and heads to her house'..


Dadi yahan Khurana haweli mein apne pothe ki shadhi mein busy hai'..


Dadi apne purane rishdedaron se milkke bahut kush hojaathi'..


She looks for the young girls'..


Yahan ka sabse sundar ladhki kaun hai?


Hare Dadi toh apne Maan ke liye dulhan dhoondhthi hai''



 

Ladhkiyan toh aaise shadhiyan mein hi milthe haina?

 

Dadi ke zamane mein toh shadhi ke ghar mein hi kahin rishtey pakki hothe hai'.


Dadi ne socha ahi ki Maan apne liye kabhi bahu nahi layenge'.


Ab dadi ko hi kuch karna hiana?


Maan kehtha hai ki shadhi nahi chahiye, aur kissi ki saath ki zarrorat nahi hai toh dadi kaise manegi? Dadi ko patha hai ki apne Maan ke liye kya sahi hai, haina?


Dadi wahan ki sare ladhkiyon ke informations collect Karthi''


Lekhin koi bhi Maan ke liye suit hi nahi hothe'..


Dadi is disappointed'.


Ye kya hai? hummare Hoshiarpur mein koi bhi sundar ladhki nahi hai kya?



Geet toh abhi abhi aayi hai Dadi, aap ko thoda aur intrezaar karna padega'..

 

Dadi: pammi, tumne sare Hoshairpur ko shadhi mein bhulaya haina? Kssi ko choda toh nahi


Pammi: kaise chodthi? Ye mere eklautha bete ki shadhi hai



 

Dadi: lekhin humme lagtha hai ki zaroor kuch galthi hogayi hai, ho saktha hai ki aaj Hoshairpur mein kissi aur ki shadhi bhi ho



 

Pammi: nahi toh, aap bahut din se bahar rehthe haina? Issi liye aap sab ko bhool gaye ho


Dadi: nahi nahi, hum Hoshiarpur ke logon ko kaise bhool sakthe?


Pammi: pehle aap Dev ki Dulhan se toh milliye


Dadi has totally forgotten about Dev's bride'.hum toh yahan Dev ke shadhi mein aaye hai'..


Maan ke liye toh koi na koi ladhkki intrezaar kar rahi hogi'..humme bas unkko dhoondhna hai'


Aapko dhoondhne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai Dadi, Maan apne dhulan kudh dhoondhlega''


Aahir kismat ne Maan ko Hoshiarpur tak laya hai toh kya babaji maan ko apne jeevan saathi se nahi milayenge kya?


Aaap fikar mat kijiye, Hoshiarpur express station aagayi'..


Yahan ek chota sa break lekhe jaldhi apne manzil pohunch jayegi'..haina?

 

dadi is disappointed...

 

she goes and checks the arrangements and takes charge of the wedding...

 

aakhir dulhe raja ki Dadi haina?

 

sab dadi ka bahut izzat karthe hai, issiliye unsse thoda darthe bhi hai...

 

pammi comes...she is happy to see Dadi involved...

 

Pammi: sab tayaar haina ? toh hum dulhan ko lekhe aathe hai, aap kisse dhoondh rahe hai? aap aarahe haina mere saath, Dev ki dulhan se milne?

 

Dadi: haan haan, hum bhi wahi poochne wale the, kahan hai hummari bahu, zara humme bhi toh dikhayiye

Pammi: hummmari bahu lakhon mein ek hai, Hoshairpur ke sabse sundar aur samajdar ladhki hai


Dadi: achcha, waise khurana khandan ki bahu jo hai


Dadi ko apne bahu ki yaad aathi, hare Pammi ko toh dadi kabhi apne bahu nahi maanthi'..


Dadi toh Maan ki maa Sheetal ki yaad karthi'.


Woh bhi bahut samajdar aur susheel ladhkki thi'.


Mr. Khurana ussko bahut pyaar karthe the, aur woh bhi apne pariwaar ko bahut pyaar karthi thi, khaas karkke apne bete Maan ko toh ek pal bhi apne se dhoor nahi jaane dethi'..


Khuaranaji hamesha ussko dhaantthe the ki woh aaise karkke Maan ko kamzoor karthi hai'.


Ussko apni zindagi kudh jeene do, warna woh kabhi independent nahi hoga'.


Khuranaji ne toh Pammi se shadhi sirf Maan ke liye kiya tha'..


Pammi bhi shuruwaad mein bahut achche se apne zameendariyon ko nibhaya tha'.


Pammi was too young and innocent'.


Dadi didn't want her to get married to her son who was 15 years older'..


But pammi's father insisted that he is very happy to get his daudhter married into the Khurana khandaan'..


He convinced Mr.khurana that Pammi will look after Maan as her own son'..


Dadi had to agree atlast as her son wanted to marry her'..


pammi itne pyaari thi ki Dadi ne bhi ussko dhere dhere apnaliya tha'..


sab kuch achcha chal raha tha'.par jab Pammi pregnanat hui usske attitude change ho gayi'..


Lekhin Dev ke janam ke badh woh bahut insecure ho gayi aur bahut selfish ho gayi'.


Maan ko paraya samja aur Dev ko bhi Maan se dhoor rakha'.


Ussko laga ki sab Maan ko hi asli waris samajthe aur ussko hi pyaar karthe'..


Khuranaji toh Maan se itna pyaar karthe the ki Maan ko kabhi bhi Pammi ke saath akhela nahi chadthe'.


Dadi toh unkko kitne samjane ki koshsish kiya tha ki aaise karne se Pammi ko lagega ki usspe humme koi barosa nahi hai aur ussko sirf ek naukrani ki roop mein sweekar kiya hai'..


Lekhin Khuranaji sheetal ko kabhi bhool nahi paye aur ussi ki yadhoon mein alchoholic ho gaye'.


Pammi issi moke ka faida utaakke Khurana ji ko kudh philakke apna sara kaam puri kardhi'.


Sare properties apne naam jo kardhiya tha'.


Khuranaji bimar padgaye aur ajldh hi guzar gaye'..


Lekhin kismat ne ussko Maan se cheenliya hai aur Maan hamesha hamesha ke liye akhela ho gaya'..


Dadi purane bhathon ko saochkke aaj ka din ko karab nahi karna chahathi'.


Jaise bhi ho, Dev bhi unkka hi potha hai'.


Aur Dev ka issme koi galthi nahi hai seva ye ki woh Pammi ka beta hai''


Bachon toh hummare parwarish se hi apna character banathe haina?


Dev has been brought up like that''he thinks that he is Hosiarpur's prince'.


He owns everything here''..Dadi feels bad for him at times'..


Maa hi apne bachon ki pehla guru hothi hai'.haina?


Agar aaisa maa milthi toh bacha kaisa hoga?


Pammi takes dadi to the bride's room'..


Lekhin wahan toh sirf Meera ki maa hai'..


Meera's mom: namasthe sambandhiji, aayiye


Pammi: insse milliye, ye Dev ki dadima hai


Mm: namasthe Dadiji


Dadi: namasthe bete, hare hummari bahu kahan hai?


Mm: Meera naha rahi hai, mein bhi toh usska hi intrezaar kar rahi hoon


She goes and knocks the door'.


Dadi: rehne do, humme koi zaldhi nahi hai, hum intrezaar karenge


Pammi: aaise kaise? Wahan Panditji ne toh sare tayaari karli aur ye abhi tak naha rahi hai?


Pammi too knocks'..


Someone opens the door''


But it's not Meera''


It's Pinky, Meera's friend''


Mm: tum? Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? Meera kahan hai?


Pammi: ye ladhki kaun hai?


Dadi: Pammi, ye hummari bahu nahi hai kya?


Pammi: nahi, ye koi aur ladhki hai, ye sab kya hai? kahan hai Meera?


Ma: bataho Pinky, Meera kahan hai?


Pinky is so scared''


Pinky: Meera, Meera toh neeche chali gayi


Mm: kya? Lekhin panditji ne toh abhi abhi ussko bhulaya hai


Pammi: jaldhi chalo, ye pagal ladhki kahan chali gayi?


Dadi: pammi. Pareshaan mat ho, hummari bahu Dev ke saath hogi


Dev comes''


Dev: maa, kya baat hai? aap log itna pareshaan kyun lagthe ho?


Pammi: Meera apne kamre mein nahi hai


Dev: kya? Aapne teek se dekha?


Pammi: haan dev, mujhe lagtha hai ki woh bhaag gayi


Mm: aaisa nahi ho saktha


Dev: aapne ussko samjaya nahi


Mm: meinne toh ussko bahut samjaya tha


Dev: ye zaroor uss brij ka kaam hoga


Pammi: dev, ab kya hoga?


Dev: aap fikar mat kijiye, usski itni himmat? mein bhi dekhtha hoon ki woh Dev Singh Khurana se kaise bachkke jaathi?


Dev calls his men and they go and search Meera'..


Actually Meera Brij ki padosi hai aur woh donno ek dusre ko bahut chahathe hai'.


Lekhin beech mein dev gusjaatha aur Meera ke saath sagayi bhi kar liya tha'


Meera ko ye shadhi pasand hi nahi'



Woh sirf apne maa ke liye shadhi ke liye raazi ho gayi'.


she was very upset...usskke maa usskko sambal rahe the...

 

hummari kismat aaisa hai toh hum kya kar sakthe?

 

mein ek akheli gareeb aurat ek beti ke lekhe kya kar sakthi?

 

 

Meera is not ready to accept this as her fate...

 

she wants her life back...

ye meri life hai, aur mein kissi ko meri zindagi barbad karne nahi doongi...

 

her mother convinces her and gets her ready...

 

meera is restless, she is not ready to give up that easy...

 

Lekhin Brij has other plans, he has eloped with Meera'..

 

 

 

Pinky helped them run away''


Pinky Meera ki saheli hai'..

Posted: 2 months ago

Part ' 3


 


They start looking for Meera everywhere, but they couldn't find her''.


Servant: Dev bhaiya


Dev: kya baat hai? Meera ka patha chal gaya hai kya?


 

Servant: nahi, gurwinder ne unko dekha

 

Dev: ussko jaldhi bhulao


Gurwinder comes'.


Dev: tumne Meera ko dekha?


Gur: ji bhaiya, babhi uss Brij ke saath kahin jaa rahi thi


Dev: tumne unkko rokha kyun nahi?


Gur: meinne peecha kiya tha, lekhin woh log bhaag gaye, Brij ki ghar ki taraf hi jaa rahe the


Finally they go to Brij's house to look for them'..


Pammi starts crying'.


Dadi ussko sambalthi'.


Dadi: aap fikar mat kijiye, hum abhi Maan se baat karthe hai, woh zaroor meera ko dhoondhkke layenge


Dadi calls Maan'.


Maan: ji dadi


Dadi: Maan bete, aap kahan ho?


Maan: yahi, hummare ghar pe


Dadi: aap jaldhi ayhan aayiye


Maan: Dadi, aap teek toh haina?


Dadi: haan bete, par yahan ek problem ho gayi


Maan: Dadi, aapko kissi ne kuch kaha? Kisski himmat hai aapko kuch bhi kehne ki, mein abhi aatha hoon


Dadi: Maan bete, aaise koi baat nahi


Maan: phir kya problem hai?


Dadi: woh' Dulhan bhaag gayi



Maan: wow Dadi, bhaag gayi? ye toh hona hi tha

 

Maan starts to laugh'..

 

Maan: achcha hua woh aldhki bhaag gayi, lagtha hai ki usski kismet achcha hai


Dadi: Maan bete, ye kaise baat karthe hai aap?


Maan: sahi toh keh raha hoon, ye toh aap bhi jaanthi hai


Dadi: Maan, ye hummare Khurana khandaan ki izzat ka sawaal hai, koi mazak nahi


Maan: dadi, aap kyun pareshaan ho rahe ho? woh bhi unlogon ke liye


Dadi: ye kaise baat hai bete? Dev hummara potha hai aur aapka chota bhai, samje aap


Maan: achcha Dadi, aap thoda relax kijiye


Dadi: Maan bete, aapko hummari madat karna padega


Maan: ji Dadi, kahiye, mujhe kya karna hai?


Dadi: zara aap Dulhan ko dhoondhne mein Dev ki madat kijiye, shayad woh hummare ghar ke aaspaas kahin hothi toh


Maan: ji dadi, mein dekhtha hoon, aap tension mat lijiye


Maan also atsrts to look out for that girl'..



Dev and party go to Handa house'.

 

Handa house''


Yahan toh sirf Brij rehtha hai'..aur koi nahi'.


Sab upar chale gaye'.bhagwaan ke paas'.


Brij yahan apne khethi ko sambalkke akhela hi rehtha'.


Meera usski padosi hai'


Donno bachpan se ek dusre ko jaanthe hai'..


Woh kehthe haina childhood love'..


Meera ek seedhe saadhe ladhki hai'bahut bolibali hai'.


Brij ne hi pehle apna pyaar ko bathaya tha'.


Meera thoda hesitate karthi but finally she accepts his love'.


Even Meera's mother supported their love until Dev fell in love with her'..


Ab Dev ke rishtey ko kaise tukrathe?'.Dev yahan ka sabse bada gunda jo hai'.


Dev se dushmani karkke koi Hoshiarpur mein kaise reh sahtha?


So Meera's mather agreed for the marriage'..


Dev aur party pura ghar ko dhoondhthe hai, yahan toh koi nahi hai'..


Dev is really angry'..ye kaise ho saktha?


Dev: Brij, tum jahan bhi jao, mein tumme zinda nahi chodoonga


Woh wahan se nikhalne hi wale the'..


Just then they hear someone coming'..


Dev: peeche hatto, koi aaraha hai, shayad Meera hogi


Ye it's a girl'..


Dev dives and catches her''


Dev: kahan bhaagthi ho?


Girl: chodo mujhe


Dev: ye toh Meera nahi hai, ye kaun hai?


Gur: ye toh Geet hai


Dev: Geet?


Gur: Brij ki behen


Dev takes a closer look'.


Ye toh Meera se bhi bahut sundar hai'.meinne issko pehle kyun nahi dekha?


Kaise dekhtha? Geet toh itne din apne beeji ke paas rehthi thi Amritsar meim'.


Geet ki beeji rajinder ka koi issues nahi hai toh ussne Geet ko godhliya tha'.


Lekhin ab beeji ka bhi ek beta hai'.Lucky''


Lucky se baad mein milenge'.ab toh apne Geet ki kahaani ko dekhenge''.


Geet apne padayi katam karkke apne holidays mein Brij ke saath rehne aayi hai'..


She has made a surprise visit, Brij ko lagtha hai ki Geet Amritsar mein hai'..


Dev Geet ko hi gurkke rehtha'..


Geet is very angry''


Geet: mere brijveerji ko patha chaltha ki tumne mere haath pakda toh woh tumme zinda nahi chodenge


Dev: Brij? Woh bhaag gaya


Geet: kya? Lekhin kyun?


Dev: Brij mere dulhan ke saath bhaag gaya


Tabhi Dev ki dimag mein ladu poota, Dev Geet se shadhi karne ka faisla kartha'Geet itni soni jo hai'.


Dev: toh tum brij ki behen ho?


Geet: chodo mere haath, chodo mujhe


Dev: hare aaise kaise, tummare bhai ne bahut badi galthi kiya hai, usski saza toh tumme hi bukadna padega


Geet: kya?


Dev: samjo teri kismet bahut achcha hai, warna tum Dev ki dulhan kaise banthi?


Geet: mein kissi ki Dulhan nahi hoon, chodo mujhe



Dev Geet ko zabardasthi lekhe jaatha'..

 

Pammi: Dev, meera milgayi?


Dev: maa, issko tayaar karo


Pammi: ye kaun hai?


Dev: yahi tummari bahu hai


Pammi: kya?


Dev: tum nahi chahathi ki meri shadhi ho?


Pammi: nahi toh


Dev: toh isse tayaar karo


Pammi takes Geet with her '.


Geet ussko samjenne ki koshish karthi, lekhin koi faida nahi'.


Geet ko Dulhan ki tarah sajaathe hai'..


Geet jaise bhi wahan se bhaag jaathi'..


Ab dusri Dulhan bhi bhaag gayi toh kya hoga?


Dev can't digest this''


Geet might not have gone far, aaj toh mein iss ladhki ko chodunga nahi'..


Phir se Dulhan ko dhoondthe hai''


Dadi is not aware of all this neither is Maan'.


Geet pagalon ki tarah bhaagthi hai'.


She keeps running she doesn't know where she is heading'..



kya hummara Rajkumar safed godhe mein aakke hummari Geet ko uttakke le jayega?

 

Suddenly she finds someone coming in a jeep'.

 

Geet ko thoda umeed hotha hai ki ussko madat miljayega'.


Ab Geet ko lagtha hai ki aaj woh bachgayi'.


Hummara Maan haina?


Haan, it's our one and only Maan Singh khurana''.


Geet rasthe ke beech mein aakkee gadhi ko rokhne ki koshish karthi'.


Geet: gadhi rokho, gadhi rokho


Geet keeps shouting'.


Ussko patha hai ki koi bhi ussko iss halat mein, woh bhi dulhan ki kapde mein dekhkke zaroor madat karega'.


Lekhin MSK aaise kissi ladhki ki madat kaise karega?


Maan doesn't even slows down'.



He keeps driving faster'..

 

He blows the horn non-stop'.


Bechari Geet ko peeche hatna pada'.


Iss Dhust Danav se koi kaam nahi hoga''


Chalo koi aur gadhi toh aathe hi hogi?


Geet moves back and Maan's jeep goes past her almost hitting her'..


Geet looses her balance and falls'..


kya Maan Geet ko bachayega? kya Maan Geet ko apnayega?

Posted: 2 months ago

Part – 4


 


Maan turns back and looks at her…..


Finding her in a birde's attire Maan stops….


Geet gets up and watches the jeep coming back towards her…..


Maybe he had noticed her just now…..


Maan comes near her and stops the jeep …..


Geet ,daro mat, here comes your savior …..


Maan stops but he never looks at her….…..


Geet: mujhe bachao, koi mera peecha kar raha hai


Maan: andar beito, he orders her to sit in the jeep still keeping his eyes on the road….


Geet looks at him for a while….


She is confused whether to trust him or not?


Lekhin ab toh Geet ke paas koi aur rashtha bhi nahi hai uss Dev se bachne ke liye….


Geet decides to go with this stranger, come whatmay? She just wants to get rid of this dev first…


Geet gets in the jeep….


Maan starts to drive….


He doesn't ask her anything…..


But he feels sorry for her…….


bechari ladhki, isski kismat ko dekho? Bhaagthe bhaagthe mere paas aagayi….


Geet is too tired….she closes her eyes and takes some rest…


She feels that she is in safe hands now…..


She just wants to get out of here somehow…..


Then she will manage to get back to her beeji………


After a while Maan stops the jeep….


Geet opens her eyes to look where they have come……


Geet couldn't believe what she saw…


Ye mein kahan aagayi? Babaji, ye kaisa khel hai aapka?


Aur jisko meinne apna rakshak samja, woh kaun hai?


Ye Dev ko kaise jaantha?


Geet is surprised to see Dev waiting for her there…..


It's the same house, shadhiwali ghar jahan se Geet bhaagi thi…..



 

Geet: babaji, ye kaise ho saktha?

 

Maan has mistaken her for Meera, she was dressed like a bride know…..


So he brought her back to the wedding party……


Geet looks at Maan……but Maan is in a hurry…..


Maan is looking somewhere else……


He is just waiting for her to get down so that he can leave….


Geet ko ab samaj mein aatha ki ye bhi Dev ka hi aadmi hai….


Dev Geet ke haath pakadkke ussko zabardasthi andar lekhe jaatha…


Dev: tum mujhse nahi bach sakthi….aap bhi aayiye


Maan turns back and looks at them….


Geet keeps looking at Maan……


Her eyes plead for help….


Maan is so disturbed ……


Usske aankhon mein kitna dara hai? aur kitne sawaal hai?


Mujhe aaisa kyun lagtha hai ki woh sare sawaal mere liye hai?



 

Mein toh ussko jaantha bhi nahi?

 

Lekhin phir bhi Maan ko lagtha hai ki kuch toh gadbad hai….


Maan ko bahut bhura lagtha….this is getting worse….


Maan can't stand this anymore….he decides to leave…


for Maan is not going to interfere in Dev's life…..


It's better to leave it to Dev…….


Waise innkke mamle mein Maan kabhi nahi passega…..


Maan leaves but he is not at all happy…..


Though she is a stranger she is so innocent and young…..


Maan ke mann mein hazaroon sawaal utthe hai….


Why did she run away?


Why was she so scared….


What was she expecting from him?


Woh Maan ko aaise kyun dekh arhi thi?


Geet ka chera Maan ke dimag se nikhaltha hi nahi…..


Maybe she is scared of shadhi…..


Kabhi kabhi aaisa hotha haina…….


Maan aaise apne aapko convince kartha hai……


Lekhin Maan ko patha nahi ki woh uss ladhki ke barein mein bar bar kyun sochtha?


Dev: kya dekh rahi ho? woh mere bhai hai


Geet ko ab patha chaltha hai ki ussne galat aadmi se madat maanga tha….


Geet: chodo mujhe, koi bachao


Par Dev sunnewala nahi hai…..


Geet has no other go but to go with him…..


Dadi is happy that Meera is back….


They get married……


Dadi donno ko ashirvaad karkke wahan se chale jaathi….


Later she comes to know about Geet from the driver….


Dadi feels very bad for that girl…..


Sach mein usski ksimat bahut karab hai….


Warna aaj hi ussko Hoshiarpur kyun aana tha?


But Dadi has no clue that Mann had helped Dev getting his bride back….


Woh bhi instant bride……


Geet is very scared….


But she is not going to give up…


She looks for the right chance to escape….


Luckily she finds Pinky…she is her friend…..


Pinky feels guilty that somehow she is also responsible for Geet's plight…..


Hadn't she helped Meera Geet wouldn't have landed herself in this trouble…..


Pinky helps Geet get out from there…..


She takes Geet to her house…..


Pinky's father is afraid of Dev and he doesn't want Geet to stay at their place….


But he allows her to stay there for that night alone…..


Geet thanks him and stays there….


Dev ki Dulhan phir se bhaag gayi……


Dev is pissed off…..


He vows to get Geet back and sets out to find her…


He searches the nearby jungle and all the possible routes…..


Par Geet toh pinky ke ghar mein haina?


Iten raat ko Dev kissi ke ghar ke andar kaise guss saktha?


So he is waiting for the sun to rise….


Early morning Geet leaves Pinky's house and she enters the jungle….


This is much safer…


Jungle janwar toh insaan se bhi behthar hai……


She keeps running….


At Maan's house….


This is inside the jungle….

 

Maan and dadi leave for Delhi…….


Driver ke saath apne black lancer mein chalthe hai…..


On the way…


Dadi looks dull…..


Maan: kay baat hai dadi? aap kal se kuch pareshaan lag rahe hai


Dadi: Maan bete, aapne teek kaha, humme yahan nahi aana chahiye


Maan: Dadi, kya hua?


Dadi: patah nahi ye kaise log hai?


Maan: dadi, aap inkke barein mein kyun sochthe hai?


Dadi: humme bas uss bechari ki fikar hai bete


Maan: kaun? Meera?


Dadi: nahi, Meera is very lucky that she left , but the other girl, na jaane Dev ko woh ladhki kahan se milli?


Maan: aap kiss ladhki ke barein mein baat kar rahe hai Dadi?


Dadi: wahi ladhki jisskke saath Dev ki shadhi hui


Maan: par Dev ki shadhi Meera ke saath hi hui na? Meera wapas aagayi haina?


Dadi: nahi bete, woh Meera nahi hai


Maan: Dadi, aap kya keh rahe hai?


Dadi: haan, bete, woh bechari toh galat waqt pe Dev ke haath laggayi


Maan: Dadi, woh Meera nahi hai toh kaun hai?


Dadi: woh, uss ladhke ki behen hai, jisskke saath Meera bhaag gayi


Maan: ye kya hai? Meera bhaag gayi?


Dadi: haan bete, lagtha hai ki woh kissi ko pyaar karthi hai


Maan: phir ye shadhi ke liye haan kyun karthi?


Dadi: ussne toh shuru se hi inkaar kiya tha


Maan: kya?


Dadi: haan bete, ye toh Pammi ki galthi hai, ussne Dev ki zidd ko mankke ye shadhi zabardasthi karwane ki kosish ki


Maan: Dadi, ye sab kya hai? mujhe toh kuch samaj mein nahi aatha, aur meinne ye kya kardhi?


Dadi: kya hua bete? Aapne kya kiya?


Maan: lekhin Dadi, aapne mujhse dulhan ko doondhne ko kyun kaha? Achca hotha ki ek ladhki ki zindagi bach jaathi, haina? Dadi, humme yahan aana hi nahi chahiye tha, meinne pehle hi aapko rokhne ki bahut koshish ki, lekhin aap toh maanthe hi nahi, ab dekho kya ho gaya?


Dadi: humme bhi shadhi ke badh hi sare sachayi patha chala, warna hum ye shadhi hargis nahi hone dethe


Maan: woh ladhki Meera nahi hai, toh meinne galat ladhki ko shadhi ke ghjar choda? Ye kaise ho saktha? MSK ne aajtak aaisa koi bhi galthi nahi kiya hai, ab ye mujhse itne bade galthi kaise ho gayi? Ab woh ladhki kaise hogi?


Dadi: aap kiss ladhki ke barein mein baat kar rahe hai?


Maan: driver gadhi rokho


Dadi: kya baat hai bete? Aapne gadhi ki rokha? Hum nahi chahathe ki aap inlogon ke bathon mein interfere karein, ye log bahut katharnak log hai, aur toh aur ye gawar log hai, inkko samjana bahut mushkil hai


Maan: par dadi mujhse ek bahut badi galthi ho gayi, ab mujhe hi ussko sudarna padega, aap jayiye dadi, mujhe yahan bahut zarrori kaam hai


Dadi: par Maan


Maan: aap mere chintha mat kijiye, driver sambalkke



Maan remembers Geet's face pleading for help...with a hundred questions hidden behind...

 

Maan gets back to his house….

Posted: 2 months ago

               Part ' 5


 


On the way Maan keeps thinking of that girl'.


Her pleading look flashes in his mind again and again'..


Maybe he should listened to her pleas'


Maybe he could have saved her life'..



Why the hell did he meet her?

 

Neither she comes in his way nor he takes her back to Dev'..

 

But how on earth would he know that she is not Meera'.


Maybe he should have asked her name?


What's the use? He just came to know about Meera from Dadi''


Though it's just a mistake and Maan didn't even know about all this he is still feeling guilty'..


How could he do that?


He just can't leave Hoshiarpur just like that'


Atleast he should meet this girl once'.


Maybe she is in trouble''.


What if she does something stupid?


Ussko dekhthe toh aaisa hi lagtha hai ? haina?


Maan can't stop thinking about her'.


It's better to put an end to this''.


Else he will go mad''


He takes his jeep and heads to Dev's house''


He has to get that girl out of that mess now'..


Geet bhi ussi tarf aathi hai'..


Maan is happy to find her'..


Accha hua ki woh yahi milgayi''


Warna Maan Dev ke gahr ke andar kaise jaatha/


He calls her'.


Geet looks back'..it's the same guy'.


Ye yahan kyun aaya hai?


Kahin phirse mujhe doondhke aaya toh nahi?


Geet's heart beat raises'.no no no'.ye dhak dhak Maan ke liya nahi'.


Ye toh dar ka dhadkan hai''.


Babaji, iss bar mein isske haath mein nahi lagnewali'..


Aap pls meri madat karo, aur uss Dusht Danav se mujhe bacho'.


Geet starts to run'..


Maan: rukho, Meera, shit, isska naam bhi nahi patha, rukho


Geet Maan ko dekhkke aur tez bhaagthi'.


Kal ke incident ke badh Geet ko Maan pe kaise barosa hoga?


She starts running faster inside the woods'.


Maan gets out of his jeeps and chases her'..


Geet comes across a well'.


She thinks that it's better to die than to get into his hands'.


She jumps into the well'.


Geet Handa haina? Ussko tehelna nahi aatha''.


Ab kya hoga?


Geet pani mein tadap rahi hai'.


Maan looks at her drowning'..


Maan to the rescue'.


He too jumps into the well'''


Luckily iss well pe steps hai'.


Warna Maan ko superman banna padtha''



Maan saves her but she is falls unconscious in his arms''

 

After all the running and chasing she is already exhausted''


Issiliye behosh ho gayi'.


Maan carries her to the jeep and takes her home'..


Geet hosh mein aathi hai''


She slowly opens her eyes and looks around'


Wahi purani dialogue'..mein kahan hoon?


She is lying on a bed'


Ye mein kahan aagayi?


Ek baat toh pacca hai, ye swarg toh nahi lagtha aur mein abhi bhi zinda hoon


Shukar hai babaji ki'


Geet tumne toh bina soche samje jaldhi mein babaji ko thank kardhi'.


Teek se dekho abhi bhi tum katthre se bahar nahi ''


Geet just turns to the other side'.


Maan is sleeping there'.


After saving Geet he took her to his room'.


She is running high temperature'.


Ab issko kahin aur kaise lekhe jayega?


Aur itni raat ko hospital bhi nahi jaasakthe, ye Delhi thodi nahi, ye Hoshairpur hai'


Yahan paas mein koi doctor bhi nahi hai'.


So he has changed her wet clothes & made her warm'.


Maan bhi tak gaya toh woh bhi sogaya'.


Geet: baabji, mein yahan? Isske saath?


Geet tries to get up'but she couldn't move, she is so weak'


She looks at her dress'.


It's not her dress, aur ye kissne badla aur kyun?


Kahi issne mere saath?


Aaise sochthe hi Geet bahut dar jaathi'.


Geet: babaji ye mere saath kya ho gaya? ab toh mein yahan ek pal bhi nahi rukh sakthi


Isska bhai toh isse kahin behthar hai'.


Ussne toh zabardasthi shadhi kiya tha, issko dekho'.


Ye kaise aadmi hai? apne bhai ki Dulhan ke saath koi aaise kaise kar saktha?


Geet bade mushkil se wahan se utne ki koshish karthi''


She gets off his hold somehow and gets up'.


She hits the glass mug and it falls down'..


Maan wakes up'.he gets closer to her'..


Geet is very afraid'.


Maan: hare, ye kya kar arhi ho? tumne dekha nahi, yahan koi soraha hai, aadi raat ko bhootni ki tarah kya dekh rahi ho? chupc chap leit jao


He pushes her back'..



Geet bahut dar jaathi'.

 

Ye phir se? bechari ki mann mein kaise kaise khyaal aathe hai'..


Maan: ab tum utgayi toh


Geet: toh?


Maan Geet ke maathe pe haath rakhkke dekhtha'


Abhi bhi pukar hai'..


Geet: haath mat lagao


Maan: mein haath nahi lagatha toh tum abhi zinda nahi rehthi



Geet: baabji aapne mujhe kyun bachaya?

 

Maan: tere babaji ne tujhe nahi bachaya, MSK ne tujhe bachaya hai, samji?

 

Geet: aaise jeene se marna hi behthar hai

 

Maan: tumme marna hai toh kahin aur jaakke mar jaana, mere samne nahi, samji

 

Maan takes some medicines'.

 

Maan: ye lo, khalo

 

Geet: mujhe nahi chahiye


Maan: toh tum aaise nahi manogi?


Geet: tummare jaise janwar ki madat se jeene se behthar mein mar hi jaathi


Maan: tum toh'' tummari itni himmat?


Maan holds her shoulder '..



Maan: tujhe kya lagtha? Mein yahan tere saath picnic karne aaya hoon, woh mujhse ek galthi oh gayi, issiliye

 

Geet: galthi? Ho gayi?


Maan: haan, ab chup chap ye dawa lelo, mujhe janwar banne ke liye majboor mat karo, samji?


Geet turanth dawa lethi aur chup chap sojaathi'


Next morning'..morning nahi it's already noon'


Geet wakes up'she feels better now'.


She looks for Maan'.he is not there'.


Maan kahin bahar gaya hai'.


Yahi achcha moka hai yahan se bhaagne ki'.


Geet aaisa sochkke chup chupkke neeche jaathi'.


Neeche koi kitchen mein kaam kar raha hai'.


She just moves quietly to the front door'.


She tries to open it'.woh toh kulla hi hai'.


She gets out'.closes the door'.


Geet looks around'.agar kissi ne dekh liya toh?


Woh dhere dhere bahar chalthi'.


Tabhi koi peeche se aakke ussko pakadtha'..

Posted: 2 months ago

                         Part – 6


 


Geet turns back to see who it is….


Geet: hare, ye toh mujhe jeene bhi nahi detha aur marne bhi nahi detha? Ye kya chahatha hai mujhse?


It's Maan, Maan has come back at the right time…..


Maan: toh tum teek ho gayi?


Geet: chodo mujhe, please mujhe jaane do


Geet bahut dargayi…….phir se ye mujhe andar band karkke? Babaji?


Geet's imagination goes wild…..


Geet feels like a prisoner in the devil's den….


Maan: hare aaise kaise? Tum toh meri mehmaan ho, ek hi din mein kaise jaane dettha?


Geet tries hard to get rid off him….


Maan tightens his hold…..


Geet is adamant….she doesn't move a bit….


Maan tries hard to pull her…..


Ye aaise nahi manegi……


Maan lifts her and takes her back to his room….


Geet toh itna pathli hai ki Maan ussko aasaani se lekhe jaa saktha, haina?


He lays her on his bed…..


Geet moves to the other corner…..


She looks at him and is so scared….


He looks like a villain to her…..


A lion ready to leap on its prey…..



Par Maan aaisa kuch nahi kartha…..

 

Maan:Ab tum yahi raho….phir se bhaagne ki koshish mat karo…Kyunki Maan Singh khurana ke ghar se koi tabhi jaa saktha jab Maan kudh chahatha, samji?


Maan locks the door….


Geet ko bahut gussa aatha…..ye kaun hotha hai mujhe rokhnewala?


Iss ke bhai ne toh atleast shadhi ki, shadhi? kaisi shadhi?


Geet ne toh ussi waqt uss mangalsutr ko phekdhi….


She goes and knocks the door…..


Maan has left….


She keeps knocking and even tries to kick it open….


Koi faida nahi, Maan ki tarah ye door bhi bahut strong hai….


That evening…….Maan comes back…..


He opens the door….


Pura saman idhar udhar pada hai….


Kahin ye stupid ladhki phir se bhaag toh nahi gayi?


Maan jaldhi jaakke dekhtha….


Geet toh zameen pe sorahi hai….


She has brokem everything she could possibily break…..


Achcha hua Maan bahar chala gaya, aaj Geet ke haath lagtha toh socho usska kya haal hotha?



 

After all that hardwork, she got tired and fell asleep…..


Maan lifts her and takes her to the bed…


She is still asleep….


Maan looks at her…Geet bahut dari hui hai…


Bechari….Maan kuch pal ussko dekhthe hi rehtha….


After a while Maan thinks….


Ye toh sach mein pagal hai, agar phir se khua mein jaakke girthi toh?


Isska kuch karna padega…..



That night….

 

Maan Geet ko dinner lekhe aatha….


Geet is sitting there thinking what would happen next….


Agla plan kya hoga? Kaise yahan se bach ke jayegi?


Maan: toh tum utgayi ho?


Geet: ye tumne teek nahi kiya hai


Maan: Maan Singh Khurana ko ab tum bathaogi ki kya karna hai?


Geet: tum samajthe kya apne aapko? Tum mujhe yahan kyun lekhe aaye ho? aur tumne mere saath aaisa kyun kiya?


Maan: ab teri bakwaas sunne ke liye mere paas time nahi hai, jaldhi khalo, mujhe neendh aarahi hai


Geet shows her hands…


Maan has tied her hands & legs so that she doesn't break anything else….


Waise kuch bacha toh nahi…..


Maan: oh! Mein toh bhool hi gaya


Maan usske haath kholtha…


Geet ko bahut bhook lagi hai…subhe se ussne kuch kaya nahi haina?


After she finishes her dinner, Maan ties her hands back…..


Maan: ab chup chap sojao, warna jaanthe haina mein kya kar saktha?


Maan gets closer…. Geet bahut darjaathi……aaj bhi?


Maan usske khaan mein whisper kartha….Gud Night


Geet: issko Gud Night kehthe hai?


Maan ko Geet ke halat dekhkke bahut bhura laga, jaise koi khooni ko baandhkke rakhthe haina? Waise hi lagtha hai, bechari? Ab Maan bhi usski koi madat nahi kar saktha jab tak Geet ko Maan pe barosa nahi aatha, chalo, aaj nahi toh kal ussko sach patha chal hi jatyega ki Maan ne ussko aaisa kyun bandkke rakha hai, he also lies down near her….


Maan toh sogaya, lekhin Geet ko needh kaise aayegi? Usne toh pure din soya hi haina?



 

Ab Geet Maan ko dekhthe hi rehthi, ajeeb aadmi hai?


Aaise koi sundar, babaji mein sundar lagthi hoona?


Geet looks at herself, haan, thoda toh shabby lagthi hai, woh to iss Dusht Danav se pura din ladne ki asar hai, aaise koi ek anjaan ladhki ke saath woh bhi ussko aaise kaidi banakke chain se kaise so saktha? Geet ki halat ko dekhkke bade se bade gunde ka mann bhi bigal jayega, lekhin isska koi asar nahi laga, kaise lagega? Isske paas dil ho toh asar hoga, isske paas toh pathar ka dil bhi nahi hai, pathar ho toh woh bhi chalthe pani se bigaljaatha, issko toh baabji ne dil ke jagah kali choddhi, haina babaji?


Geet aaise kuch sochkke jagthe hi rahi, aaj woh nahi soyegi, warna ye toh kal ki tarah kuch bhi kar saktha, aaj isko mere paas aane do, mein isski shir thodthi, Geet ne pillow ke neeche ek badi iron statue chupakke rakha hai….


Aaj issne kuch kadbad karne koshish ki toh mein issko zinda nahi chodungi……


After a while….Geet keeps on thinking how to get rid of this musibat……


Geet bahut mushkil se light on karthi….


Maan wakesup….


Maan: tum itne raat ko bhaagkke kahan jaa sakthi?


Geet: mujhe washroom jaana hai


Maan: toh jao, mujhe kyun disturb karthi ho?


Maan gets back to sleep….


Geet ke haath pher ko toh Maan ne bhaandh ke rakha haina?


Ab kaise jayegi? Phir bhi Geet neeche utharne ki koshish karthi aur ghir jaathi….


Maan: ab kya?


Maan finds her lying on the ground….


He then remembers her condition….


Maan: mujhe utta nahi sakthi?


Maan stares at her…..


Geet ne toh ussko utane ki kitni koshish ki?


Maan lifts her……


Maan: tummare haath ko meinne bandha hai, lekhin muh toh khula hi haina? Mujhe keh sakthi


Geet keeps silent….


Maan unties the rope….she goes to the washroom and comes back ….


Ab Maan ko lagtha hai ki ye teek nahi hai…….he leaves her free…..


He goes and locks the door and hides the key……..


Ab toh ye bhaag nahi sakthi….

Posted: 2 months ago

                                                          Part – 7


 


Next morning…..


Maan wakes up and finds Geet missing…..


Maan is afraid that she has left….


Maan bahut gabragaya……agar ye wapas Dev ke haath lagthi toh?


Maan: ye ladhki bhi na? chalthi phirthi disaster hai, mein ussko kathre se dhoor rakhne ki kitna bho koshish kyun na karoon, ye toh apne aap kudh ko kathre ke hawaale karne mein lagi hai, stupid girl


Maan finds the door still locked…darwaza band hi hai…..


phir ye kahan gayi hai?


Kahin kidkki se nahi koodhgayi?….


He looks out of the window……


Nahi yahan bhi nahi hai….


Maan gets really worried….ab ye pagal ladhki ne kya kiya hoga?


Kahin cupboard mein toh chup nahi gayi?


Maan looks in the wardrobe…..


He takes his shirt and tries to go out and search her……


Suddenly he finds Geet…..


Geet toh wahi hai….


Geet ko neendh nahi aayi toh woh wahan kursi mein beitkke soch rahi thi aur wahi pe sogayi….


Maan ussko disturb nahi kartha….woh tayaar hokhe chale jaatha….


Aaj ghar ko hi lock karkke chala gaya….


Geet utjaathi aur bahut kush hothi jab Maan nahi nazar aaya toh, ab toh Geet yahan se asaani se bhaag sakthi….


Geet checks all the possibilities….


There is no way out except the main door…


Kaise ghar hai, koi emergency exit bhi nahi hai……


Agar kabhi aag lagtha toh ye log kaise ghar se bhaag sakthe?


Aaise mokke mein bhaagne ke liye koi aur rastha toh hona hi chahiye, haina?


Lekhin yahan toh aaisa kuch nahi hai, kidkki se kudhthi toh usski hadiyan thod jaathe, kitna uuncha hai, Geet ko bahut gar lagtha, bahar dekhthi toh neeche ghaas bhi nahi hai, jaise filmon mein hothe haina?


Bahar jaane ki koi bhi rastha nahi hai…….


Geet apne sare koshish fail honne ke badh neeche chale jaathi….


She goes to the kitchen…ussko thoda bhook bhi lagtha hai…..


Kitchen mein Ramu kaka hai….


Geet ko dekhkke woh bahut kush hojaathe….


Ramu: toh ab tum bilkul teek ho gayi ho bitiya? Mein toh bahut gabra gaya, kal tum kaise hallat mein thi?


Geet: woh kahan hai?


Ramu: kaun?


Geet: wahi, Dust Danav, aapke boss, aap isske saath akise kaam karthe ho?


Ramu: Maan baba toh kahin bahr gaye hai, kyun? Usse koi kaam hai kya?


Geet: nahi nahi


Ramu: tum unko dekhkke itna kyun darthi ho? woh bahut achche hai


Geet: achche? aap nahi jaanthe woh kitna Dust Danav hai, dus shirwala Ravan se bhi katranaak hai


Ramu kaka smiles….


Ramu: tujhe koi galatfami hui hai


Geet: nahi, unhonne hi mujhe kaha ki woh bahut bhure hai, pure ke pure Dust danav


Ramu: hare aaise nahi kehthe, woh sunthe toh unko kitna bhura lagega?


Geet: meinne bilkul sachi baat kaha hai, woh bahut bade Dust danav hai


Ramu: chalo, tum kuch khalo


Geet: mujhe nahi khana


Ramu: phir yahan kyun aayi ho?


Geet: woh…..aapke paas chabhi haina?


Ramu: haan hai


Geet: toh aap mere madat karoge?


Ramu: nahi, tum abhi bahar nahi jaa sakthi


Geet: aap bhi unke hi sunthe hai


Ramu: Maan baba ne toh ye sab tummare bhalayi ke liye hai kiya haina?


Geet: mere bhalayi?


Ramu: ab tummare yahan rehna hi tummare liye surakhshith hai


Geet: aap nahi jaanthe ki mein yahan kitna shurakshith hoon?


Ramu: ab tum kuch khalo, yahan aao


Ramu serves her breakfast……


Geet ko khana hi pada…..


Maan comes back in the afternoon….


After lunch Maan comes to check Geet….


Geet toh kamre mein hi hai….


woh andar se lock karkke beiti hai…..


Maan ko shak hotha…..agar ye kuch ulta seedha karthi toh?


Maan knocks….Geet doesn't open the door….


Maan pareshaan ho jaatha….


Ek laat Martha toh darwaza khul jaatha…..


Geet dar jaathi….


Maan: tummari himmat kaise hui aaise karne ki? Mera hi kamre mein mujhe hi nahi aane degi?


Geet: woh….. mein….


Maan: mein mein kya?


Geet: woh mujhe laga


Maan: mujhe koi interest nahi hai tummari faltu batein sunne ki


Maan Geet ke haath pakadkke Dadi ke room lekhe jaatha….


Maan: ab tum yahi raho



Maan locks the door, andar se band kartha…..

 

Geet bahut dar jaathi, ye aaise kyun kartha hai…..


Lekhin Maan Geet ko hatakke apne kaam mein busy hotha….


Haan, aaj Maan sare samaan ko safely cupboard ke andar lock karkke hi jayega….….and he removes all the things that she could possilbly break…


Aaj Maan Geet ko phir se aaise karne ki koi moka nahi dega…


Aur toh aur, ye dadima ki things hai, these are her precious belongings, that she cherishes as a token of her fond memories with dadaji…..


Geet stands there looking at him remove them…..


Geet: aapko kya lagtha? Ye sab thodna hi mera kaam hai?


Maan: mujhe kya patha? Isske pehle tum pagalkhane mein aaisa hi kuch karthi hogi?


Geet: kya? toh mein pagal lagthi hoon?


Maan: lagthi kya? tum toh sach mein pagal hi ho


Geet: kya?


Maan: haan, aaise kaam toh sirf pagal log karthe hai


Geet: aur aaise kaam toh sirf Dusht danav hi karthe


Maan: kya?


Geet: haan


Maan: tumne mujhe dusht danav kaha? Agle bar aaise kaha toh


Geet: toh? Kya karoge? Mein aaise hi kahoongi, Dusht danav, DD, DD


Geet keeps on repeating….


Maan shuts her mouth with his hands…..


Geet blinks….


Maan looks into her eyes…..


Kitne boli hai?


Maan: chup….bilkul chup


Maneet eyelock……


Maan toh ek minute Geet ko dekhkke apna hosh kho jaatha….


Jab hosh mein aatha, Maan ko wahan se jaane ka mann hi nahi kartha…


Jaise iss ladhki ne koi jadu kiya ho? Maan ko apne saath kissi undekhi dor se bandh ke rakha ho….



BGM……

 

Lagan ab tujhse lagthi lagan….


Lagan ab tujhse lagthi lagan…..


Maan ab wahan nahi rukh saktha, ab toh usska mann usske kabhu mein nahi hai, bekabhu ho gaya….



He just leaves locking behind Geet in the room…..

 

Ramu kaka tried to give her snacks….


Geet ab strike karthi hai….na kuch bolthi hai aur na kuch khathi ahi…..


Ramu kaka Maan se complaint karthe….


Maan : woh toh din bar kathe hi rehthi haina? Issiliye bhook nahi hoga, chodiye raat ko khalegi


Maan too tries to annoy her…..


Maan: aaise kya ho gaya?


Geet reply nahi karthi…..


Maan: meinne toh aaj tumme bandh ke bhi nahi rakha


Maan: aaise sathyagrah karkke tumme asaadi nahi milne wali, chup chap khalo


Geet turns her back to him….


Maan bhi usske badh Geet ko akhele chodkke aatha…..


Ramu kaka dinner ko Geet ke kamre hi lekhe dethe…


Lekhin Geet kuch nahi khathi…..


Maan: chodiye , ussko bhook lagegi toh woh kudh khayegi


Geet wahi sojaathi….


Lekhim Maan teek se sonahi paya….


Beech beech mein Geet ko jaakke dekhthe rehtha….woh teek toh haina?


Next day…..


Dev ko kabar miltha hai ki Geet Maan ke ghar mein hai…..


Maan goes and opens Dadi's room….


Geet is still asleep……


Maan: ye ladhki bhi na, ya toh sothi rehthi hai ya phir ladhthi rehthi hai, kya karein? Ladh ladhkke tak jaathi toh thoda aaram toh karna hi padega haina?


Maan: utto, Maan shakes her up……


Geet wakes up….


Maan: jaldhi tayaar ho jao, humme abhi yahan se nikhalna padega


Geet: kyun? Mein toh kudh chale jaoongi, aapko aane ki koi zaroori nahi


Maan: tum wahi karoge jo mein kehtha hoon, samji, ab chup chap tayaar ho jao, ye lo, issko pehenlo


Ye toh jeans aur T-shirt hai….


Maanthe hai ki yahan ghar ke andar Maan ke kapde hi pehenthi…lekhin isse pehenkke bahar kaise jayegi?


Geet: mere kapde?


Maan: woh meinne phekdhi, futgaye haina


Geet: mujhe ye nahi pehenna


Maan: toh tujhe meri night suit hi pehenna hai toh mujhe koi problem nahi hai


Geet Maan ke haath se kapde lekhe jaathi….


Geet jaldhi se tayaar hojaathi….jaise bhi yahan se jarahi haina? Geet bahut kush hai…..


Bahar toh koi na koi ussko madat karega, haina?


Rasthe mein chilathi jahan beedh hai toh koi an koi aakhe gadhi rohkkke ussko bachyega, haina babaji?


Ab ye mujhe kahan lekhe jaa raha hai?

Posted: 2 months ago

                               Part – 8


 


Geet ko lagtha hai ki Maan ussko kahin aur band karkke rakhnewala hai…


Shayad kissi ko patha chal gaya ki mein yahi hoon?


Babaji, mujhe kaise bhi iss sadoo aadmi se bachao….


Aaj mein isski koi bhi baat ko sunnewali nahi hoon…


Achanak Geet ko Dev ki yaad aathi…..


She is terrified by the thought of that day…..


Maan ke samne toh aaisa gabrahat nahi hothi…


Sirf gussa aathi, ladne ki mann karthi…..


Chahe kitna bhi bhura kyun na ho, Maan ke saath do din rehkke Maan ke aadat padgayi Geet ko….


Babaji, ye mein kya sochthi hoon? Ye toh Dev se bada Dhust hai, haina?



Maan: kadhe kadhe sochthe rahoge kya? jaldhi karo

 

Pehle iss ghar se bahar jaana hoga, phir jaise bhi chilaakke kissi ki madat lekhe isse bach jayegi….

 

Geet aaise plan banakke tayaar hothi…..


Maan ke samne achche bachi banne ki natak karthi….


Tabhi toh Maan ko koi shak nahi hoga Geet pe…


Warna kya patha, gadhi mein bhi isskkke muh haath baandhkke lekhe jaatha toh?


Issiliye Geet jaldhi tayaar hokke aajaathi, as if she would obey his orders anytime?



 

Yahan se bhaagne ke liye Geet ko kya kya karna padtha?


Geet is scared…..ab kya karnewala hai?


Lekhin Maan toh tayaar hi nahi hotha…..


Geet waits in the front….


Kahin issne plan ko badal nahi diya?


Maan aaram se breakfast kar raha hai….


Geet ko bhi bhook lagi hai, lekhin isskke saath kaise kayegi?


Maan bbi ussko khan eke liye poochtha bhi nahi….


Ramu kaka hi Geet ko bhulathe hai….


Ramu: tum bhi khalo, bahut lamba safar haina?


Geet: nahi ,mujhe bhook nahi hai


Ramu: thoda toh khalo


Maan: kaka, ye kya hai? kuch naya item hai?


Ramu: nahi baba, ye toh shahi paneer hai, tumme bahut pasand haina? Jab chota tha har din issi ko khane ki zidd kartha


Geet looks at Maan….


Maan toh toot pada….


He is just relishing the tasty parathas ….


Maan ko dekhkke Geet ko bhi chakne ki mann kartha….


Lekhin ussne toh saaf saaf kehdiya ki bhook nahi haina?


Ab Geet kitchen ke andar jaathi….


Ramu kaka ki madat karne ki bahane…..


Geet: aapne ye shahi paneer kaise banaya? Bahut badiya lagtha hai


Ramu kaka smiles….


Ramu: tum chak ke dekho


Geet toh issi ke liye wait kar rahi thi….


Who plate lekhe aathi….


Ramu kaka ussko serve karthe….


Geet kitchen nein hi khana shuru karthi…..


Maan andar aatha….itne dher kya kar rahi hai?


Maan waits for her to finish eating…..


Maan: aaise chup chupkke khane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, mein iss ke liye paise nahi maangoonga


Geet : mein bas chak ke dekh rahi thi, ramu kaka ne kitne pyaar se mere liye banaya hai, haina?



 

Maan ko patha hai ki ye toh ramu kaka ne Maan ke liye banaya hai….


He looks at Ramu kaka and winks….


Ramu kaka samaj gaye….


Ramu: haan bitiya, ye toh meinne khaas tummare liye banaya tha…..


Geet: dekha?


Maan: tummara tasting katam ho gaya toh chalo, 5 parathe kaafi nahi hai toh pack karkke lelo, abhi khane ki time nahi hai, jaldhi karo


Toh itne dher issne mujhe chup chupkke dekha hai, meinne bhi teek se gina nahi kitne parathe the, issko dekho?


Ramu kaka ne pehle hi pack karkke rakha hai….


Geet ussko lethi……


Adi comes…..Adi ko toh Geet jaanthi hai….


Pinky ke mangethar….



 

Geet ne toh Adi ko ek bar pinky ke ghar pe dekha hai….

 

Ab ye yahan kyun aaya hai? shayad ye mujhe pinky ke ghar lekhe jayega?


Maan: kya dekh rahi ho? Adi ke saath jaane mein koi problem nahi haina?


Geet nods her head….nahi


Maan: Adi, tickets tayaar haina?


Adi: ji sir


Maan: ab mujhe kya dekhthi ho? jao


Geet leaves with Adi……


Maan: Adi


Adi turns back: sir


Maan: sambalkke


Maan is really worried…..


Adi: yes sir



They leave for Delhi…..

 

On the way…..


Adi: Geet tum bahut lucky ho jo Maan sir ke paas aagayi ho


Geet: kya?


Adi: haan


Geet: aapko kaise patha ki mein yahan hoon?


Adi: woh… Maan sir ne mujhe bhulaya aur tumme Delhi lekhe jaane ko kaha tha


Geet:Delhi? Hum Amritsar nahi jaarahe hai?


Adi: nahi toh, hum Delhi jaa rahe hai, tumme patha haina ki mein bhi Delhi mein hi rehtha hoon, Maan sir bhi wahi rehthe, unkka bahut bada company wahan hai, Khurana Constructions, mein wahi kaam kartha hoon


Geet: toh ye aapka boss hai?


Adi: haan


Geet:inkke saath kaam karna bahut mushkil hoga, haina?


Adi: haan, shuru mein thoda tension hotha par badh mein


Geet: badh mein sab teek hotha?


Adi: nahi, badh mein Maan sir ke gusse ki aadat padjaathi


Geet: kya?


Adi: tum bhi dhere dhere sab samjaooge


Geet: mujhe kyun samajna?


Adi: tumme unkke ghar pe rehna jo hai


Geet: kya? Gadhi rokho, rokho gadhi, abhi


Adi: Geet, kya hua?


Geet: mein aapke saath nahi aasakthi


Adi: par Geet, mein tumme yahan chodkke jaatha toh Maan sir mujhe jaan se mardenge, aur mein tumme yahan kaise chod saktha? Dev sab ko tummare barein mein patha chal gaya, woh kabhi bhi yahan aasakthe hai


Geet: kya? Toh itne din uss kamine ko patha nahi ki mein yahan hoon?


Adi: haan, mere baat mano aur tum Khurana Mansion chale jao, Maan sir ke saath rehna hi tere liye surakhshith hoga


Geet: nahi


Adi: Geet, tumme gabrane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, tum wahan akhele nahi rahogi, dadima haina tummare saath


Geet: dadi?


Adi: haan, Maan sir ki dadi


Geet ko ab Adi ki batein mein thoda vishwaas aatha….


Adi takes her to the raiway station from where they go to Delhi by train….


Dekhi aathe hi adi Geet ko ek boutique lekeh jaatha…


Geet is confused…..Adi gets her some slawars….


Geet: ye kiss ke liye hai?


Adi laughs…..


Adi: mein toh ye nahi pehentha


Geet: phir? Pinky ke liye hai?


Adi: nahi, tummare liye


Geet: mere liye?


Adi: tum aaise Dadima ke samne nahi jaa sakthi haina? Issiliye Maan sir ne kaha


Geet: toh ye bhi aapka boss ne hi kaha hai, toh aapko unkke baat ko maanna hi padega


Adi: haan Geet, issiliye mujhe salary dethe haina?


Geet: aap aur aapke boss, lao


Geet gets angry…….she snatches a suit and goes to the trial room and changes her dress….


Ab lagthi hai typical Punjabi gudhi….


Adi: toh chalein?


Geet: haan


They leave the maal and head to Khurana Mansion….


Gurmeet Choudhary Drashti Dhami


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