Hello! Dear forum waais, myself Jen, I am an active member of this forum since the recent past but have been a follower of this show from the beginning.
I am spotted in ATs but I haven’t made any posts so far, hence I would like to begin with this, I am into writing poems, trust me, I am quite good at it, I aspire to write as many as poems on ShaKhi as well as Shaurya but your response to my work is my muse to write more. After you read it, please make sure you liked it and leave your valuable feedback that will help me enhance my work.
I will begin my first ever written poem in this forum on the ML, Mr. PS aka SS aka KVS, hehehe.
Any poet doesn’t randomly string their thoughts it requires a muse and words doesn’t fall out one’s soul, it has to be entangled in your brain and intertwined to your heart. KV himself is a sculpture, I am all set to just add some glory to the creation, that’s it. Hope you guys will enjoy!!
Walking Sunshine!!
This poem is a fourteen liner, in the form of a Sonnet, this might not rhyme since it is a Shakespeare form of Sonnet. It takes pages to delineate his valour but my humble attempt to constraint.
Waves treating my vision and breeze cajoling my cheeks,
I stood frozen extolling the oceanic beauty, the creator’s exquisite creation, infiltration to admiration, a man chuckles.
A glimpse? I was vanquished by his frame, as if he vanished like million pieces of glasses.
I resisted and restored my thoughts on the ocean, but a scintillating light pierced through my eyes,
A marvellous towering art was lying adjacent to the lighthouse, my dwelling place, overpowering the vibrant shade of the ever fixed mark, the storm waiver.
I pitched my heart on my sleeve and scrupulously advanced towards imagining a chisel in my mind.
The LH was built of rock but the parallel figure that my eyes was transfixed to and surpassed to another universe was sculpted of the stupendous material used to built the King’s sceptre, Royalty and Elitist.
My heart pounded, as the breath of the sunshine that walked past me so scintillating, feel on my cheeks, my arms.
I felt, I could transgress any supreme treasure to follow the path of radiance, that serene smile, could transform onerous life to evergreen land of sequestration.
The ocean’s touch or his breath which is sublime and solace, the swag, the smirk, the embodiment of style and elegance, the epitome of manliness, courage,
The ironically paradoxical fragile as a petal and delicate as a feather when his shoulders collided with mine, the goosebumps plucked up, thy soul, you flew to the sky.
The day of un changeable change springs, not a cantankerous decision in my life.
As the towering man spilled his charm with his ensemble array of a thousand attractions as the human, the Greek God Zeus, would fall zealously jealous, my footpaths ran in his, momentum ceased to eternity.
I am done with it, do comment on this if you like it:
I would like to tag someone of my friends who would really love to read it, but this is a dedication to all the SAAK Forum members.
Happy reading!
Much love
Jen
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