ShiVi OS: Parivaar Ke Liye - Page 2

Posted: 2 years ago

That was perfect!

Ever since the wedding I've been stewing and fuming at the injustice Shiva had to face.

I've ranted about this topic multiple times already and I guess I really really needed this therapy.😳

You have portrayed Raavi's (and in turn ours as well) frustration beautifully. 

Thank you for this amazing piece! ❤️

Edited by barbieflora - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

I really like this strong Raavi who can do anything for Shiva just like Shiva does for her

Posted: 2 years ago

Awww so cute 

After cooker promo this os is really needed for us to read and enjoy the upcoming episodes of the PS😛 Good job 👍🏼

Posted: 2 years ago

Oh my god! This was amazing. Loved what Raavi said to Dhara. Thank you for writing this! ❤️

Posted: 2 years ago

Loved Loved 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕😘💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕😘💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 it so much. Ravi's dailogue with dhara was to the point. How could she ignore fault of one and punish other for his fault? She needs to fair with both her children n being this harsh with shiva was not needed knowing ut was rishita who proviked him.krish dailogues are always hilarious but at the same time visionary.He tends to speak n see what other has not even thought of or keeps ignoring it but it's always true.loved again.Can you write sequel of this story with shivi realtion progress,shiva getting possessive of ravi n ravi teaching good lesson to rishita and dev . pretty please.

Posted: 2 years ago

Amazing update👏

Raavi words regarding Shiva was perfect👏

Shiva also heard it and didn't react😊

Loved Shivi's moment❤️

Shiva is not a kid for sure😉

Poor Krish , his monologue was perfect, he is fed up of his big brother😆

Posted: 2 years ago

I loved this one yar. 

I so want some to scold Dhara. 

Kyuki kal ke episode mein bhi gaumbi ne thik nahi kia. 


I hope atleast raavi shiva ke paas toh ake baithe after dande se pitai. 

Nh toh😡


Anyways. You wrote it beautifully. 

Sach mein yar. 

Keep writing❤️

Posted: 2 years ago

Lmao Krish and his dialogues😂😂



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