Shivi drabble: THE PERFECT REPLY

Posted: 2 years ago

                   THE PERFECT REPLY

Shiva silently heard as Rishita spewed venom against Raavi and he was going to blast both her and his coward of a brother when Raavi’s voice stopped him.

“Bas bohot bakwaas kar le tumne, tumhe shaadi ke raat ko he bata diya tha ke na tumhara kamra chahiye na tumhara pati, mein tumhare kamre main bin bulaye nahi ghus aaye Rishita, tum khud ek open space main tamasha bana rahi ho apna meri jagah koyi bhi aa sakta tha, tumhe koyi haq nahi hain mujhe insult karne ka aur rahi baat jhagde ke toh haan roz jhagda karti hun shiva se din main char baar karti hun par iska tumse ya tumhare dev se koyi relation nahi hain pichle dus saal se karti aayi hun aage ke pachas saal aur karungi, tumhe koi zarurat nahi hain chinta karne ke.” She took uneven breaths and was just about to go from there when Rishita started crying, Raavi rolled her eyes as she saw Dev trying to console Rishita and she thanked her stars that she wasn’t the one married to dev his obliviousness and lack of spine would have been the death of her.

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A few minutes later shiva found raavi sitting near the lake lost in thought, he went and sat beside her breaking her trance, she smiled at him looking peaceful and he almost had a heart attack but hid his surprise well.

“Waise manna toh padega tu hain chudeil he, paanch minute main uss ameerzaadi ke aansu he nikalwadiye. Ab tak ro rahi hogi”

“Chudeil ka pata nahi par bohot din baad Raavi jaisa lag raha hain”

She was right ever since they had got married Raavi had lost herself somewhere in self pity, her fights had lacked fire, her taunts had been fueled by pain and not playfulness, she hadn’t felt like the Raavi he had known since forever, she hadn’t felt like his chipkali, he was relieved to have her back.

“Aur tu kya baak kar aayi wahan par matlab agle pachas saal mera dimaag khayegi lad kar”

She laughed at his comment and it sounded like music to his ears.

“Pachas kya  paanch soo saal ladti rahungi tujse,tere khoon peena meri favourite hobby jo hain” she said then splashed water on him and ran away.

“Tu ruk chudeil” he shouted before following her.

Chudeil tha treminded him Rishita had no idea what was going to happen to her tonight.

 

Edited by Guntaaskaur - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

This was amazing...

The reply Raavi gave Rishita was amazing...

Posted: 2 years ago

If only something like this

happens in the show, it was indeed the perfect reply

Loved it

Write more soon :)

Edited by Foxii - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by chandiniebinda


This was amazing...

The reply Raavi gave Rishita was amazing...

Thank you. I really want someone to thrash rishita.

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by Foxii


If only something like this

happens in the show, it was indeed the perfect reply

Loved it

Write more soon :)

Thank you

Posted: 2 years ago

Hearing Raavi say all this would totally be a dream come true!! Love this ❤️


Write more 

Posted: 2 years ago

I wish, Raavi would speak up!!


Wonderful take on the event!! 

Posted: 2 years ago

Yes yes ! I love this version of Raavi !

we were all ranting waiting for Dhara or Shiva to come and save Raavi, that we've all forgotten that Raavi CAN DAMN WELL SAVE HERSELF, THANK YOU VERY MUCH ! 😂😂😂


She is very much an outspoken girl before marriage, and I can dare say much more fierce than Rishita ever was. She is so strong mentally, varna how could she have been braved enough to face Shiva when everyone in Somnaath knows about his temper ! Rishita should've been a piece of cake for Raavi. But yes, she lost herself in self pity and broken dreams. She just needed sometime to grieve for it so that she can put it past her and move on ! Thank God, she didn't marry Dev. The spineless coward wouldn't even know how to handle her !


Great job ! Keep writing ♥️♥️♥️♥️


Posted: 2 years ago

Just like the title, this OS is perfect! I want Raavi say something like this in the show to shut Rishita up for good.

Posted: 2 years ago

I love this Raavi. Hopefully not today, but Raavi will give back to Rishita just as good as she got it. Thanks for writing this lovely drabble.



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