Part 2
Awesome and Emotional Update
Once Maan returned home he could not stop thinking about Geet
and this led him to stay in his room
stressing whether she will agree with his love or will she grow up
to love someone else
Pinky had noticed when Maan got a glimpse of Geet he suddenly had life within him
and she decides to tell Maan's mother everything
Though Geet is still a child but the mother agreed and decided to meet Geet's parents
after an emotional talk Geet's mother agrees but she also says
that now she cannot get an answer out of Geet which is understandable
but Maan's mother say they will wait for Geet
Part 1 & 2
Great updates, both of them..
Maan is an armed forces personnel.. nice character!
Adi and Maan are best friends? Had to be!
Is Adi the same shy and stammering kind?
Pinky had to be Adi's wife... something the original show should have made part of the storyline!
Geet and Maan meet and staircase interaction was funny.
Maan thinking she is shy and naive while she profusely thanks him for saving her from losing her balance!
Ah! Trust only the true MSK to open the door with half nude chest... Geet will be like.. Babaji.. kyaa hoga inka? Koi sharam hayaa naam ki cheez toh makkhan maarke bhi koi insaan seekhe par yeh rahenge Dusht hi hanesha!
Can imagine Geet's frustration!
Maan and his room in a mess!
Expected that Miss Hoshiyaarpur ka kuch toh asar ho naa Maan par!
How will the story move ahead if Maan doesn't feel for his girl?
Geet knows her parents have spoken to Maan's mother?
Will she agree?
Has she also connected to him?
Will the age gap prove detrimental or will Maan make her feel at ease and let her be her chubby and bubbly Geet as she is and the way his mother has promised her parents?
Do update soon!
And will you PM?
part 3
Just than Geet ring the bell of door and all get silence ….. pinky stand and went to open the door pinky introduce Geet to Maan mother ….geet say namste …ma mummer Geet paav chu lo beta but Maan mother stop her and ask Geet nahi beta app to gale lago …bahot pyare ho app Geet get shy with her talk ….she once look to her ma her ma nodded and she hug to Maan mother….
Geet like her and she start to open with her just than she ask …wo abhi main apke bête ko balcony main dekha is he ill?….she turn to rano ma unke eyes ke niche itnai badi badi dark circles dik rahe rahi thi ma like he not sleep from ages lakin last week wo jab yaha reh rahe thee to thik hai …..kya unko apko chod ke duty join nahi karna kya ,pinky di tell me that he have to joind in kerla for duty …..bahot dur hai na…..
Rano give one look to Maan mother with respect now respect for her increased in rano mind when she heard about Maan halat still Maan mother not force them or try to give emotionally trouble them ….
Now big question who going to talk with Geet …..but Geet herself show the way …
Maan mother once look to rano and then ask wo beta problem ye hai ke wo wo ek he love one girl …..geet give look to her ..to problem kya hai she ask innocently ….maan mother wo beta wo ladki choti hai shyaad apke umar ki….abhi apki umer ki ladki how he or we going to ask for such bounding ….
Geet turn silent for while like she is thinking something she say but it’s illegal ma na under age marriage na…..
All smile her on her qus but its right qus …
Maan na na beta hum sahdi to wo ladki age and career set hone ke baad hi hogi ….but we will tense for her age …acha dekho abhi apka hi lo agar if your ma say u will get engaged now and after 5/6 year we will marry u apptyar hoge kya …..
Geet turn silent for while then she once look to her parent …..she reply with soft yet determined tone I trust my parent if they ask me I will say yes …what if u like some other one after few year pinky ask……
Sawal hi nahi hota di because main dekha hai / I see ma papa and apko and adi bhiya ko apke rishte bounding trust …pyar yahi hota hai n adi aur ma kehati trust hi pyaar hota hai….and agar main kisi ke sath commitment karungi to usko puri tarah se nibhaungi ….nahi to nahi karuni and I know my parent wo muje force bhi nahi karenge
All gaping her and worried for her reaction may be she react like kid but she is talking so maturely we really underestimate this generation, all think for while..they took all things so easly as well as very clear mind…a satisfied smile appear on Maan mother Avanti face….she once look to rano…..
Rano ask her to come near her …Geet sense some serious tension in this all …kuch to gadbad hai she think for while and seat next to rano..she ask ma kya hua wo bahot jada bimar hai kiya ,she refer about Maan…
Rano once look to all and she cup Geet cheek and say softly He like you beta …..geet feel like her heartbeat stop for while …and as reaction next word come from her mouth WHAT WO RAKSHAS (DEVIL) ko main pasand hu….next moment she bite her tongue and give an apologized look to Maan mother …
All chuckle on Geet reaction ….maan mother reaply u are right beta uska dimag to koi rakshas se come nahi like dus sir wala ravan …
Geet cheek heat red with embarrassment…. She don’t know ye sab uske khood ke liye hi chal raha hai …she hug ma …..and say softy ma ye sab….muje apko chod ke kahi nahi jana she start to feel so emotions same time like fear ,sadness ,embrassment ….some tear fall from her eyes …..all turn tense with her action …rano ma slowly carsed her back to make her clam and say I know beta situation aise aai hai ke we have to ask so early which is not appropriable for your age ….apki wo umar bhi nahi hai …laking beta no one going to force u ..na hum log na wo(Maan )…bas tum bolo jo bhi tumara answer hai beta ..no one going to judge u …..
Geet once look to ma with her red puffy eyes ..i don’t know ma main kabhi aise socha nahi….my mind turn so confused I trust your choice ma but…don’t know what to answer ma ….
Rano say softly aisa karo bas ek baar apni eyes colosed eyes and take deep breath dekho phir what if confusion dur hota hai kya ….geet took deep breath and closed her eyes ….and his face appear inher closed eyes from no wear she open her eyes in shock …a red hu spread in her cheek ..which give ans to them ….pinky almost ready to jump but Avanti nodded in no….and with confused look she seat on her place with so much chulbul restlessness.
Rano caressed her cheek ….beta …she hug more tightly to rano ma and mummer unka face tha ma….rano smile on her response and say to aunty ko ha bol du kya …as ans she mumuer hu…..ma say her I don’t heard proeperly beta …Geet slowly say ha ma …..lakin main choklate and ice cream khana band nahi karuni no one going to give me lecture on my wight ..and meri padai and uske baad mera career fhir shadi …and and she stop for while …once look to Avanti and say app aunty ko bo do unko mere se unchi awaz main baat karna allowed nahi hai ..and mere school main ya fhir society main bhi kisi ko nahi batana hai about it ….she clear her mind ….very well…she is clever girl.
Next moment pinky almost run to her house and rano ma and mohinder went inside fro small preparation….avanti come and seat near Geet and say today I got baby girl Maan se pehle app mere liye important hai beta …app kabhi bhi mere sath konse bho topic pe baat kar sakte ho…like u talk with rano …Geet nooded on her talk..and mummer yes I will.
Avanti - and promise me if in future u like some other one u are coming to me and talk with me without any guilt and all.geet nodded on Avanti talk.
part 4
Part 4
Other side pinky almost run to her house where she found adi waiting for her with open door he also so much tense with Maan situation now also Maan not come out from his room which very opposite to his nature till now usne poor ghar sir pe utha liya hota with his nonstop bak bak ..how many time he himself stop his bak bak ,but today his silence hurting him like anything for while just punch him hard and brought his brain back on place he feel so frustrated and worried same time …
When he saw running pinky come to home he stand from his place thou he prepared for himself for any verse still he feel so much tense its his love and care for Maan….
Just than pinky hug adi and before adi ask anything she peek his lips …and big tensrion throw away from his body and mind he very well know its Yes from Geet …he hug her tight…ohh god pinky itna tense to main apne iye bhi nahi hua tha….pinky who litte bit emotional ask where is he…..
Adi chukle and ans devdas in his room ..pinky roll her eyes on his response and mummer u are too much now go and change till than I will talk with him…
Adi - no way I am coming with u …
Pinky give him one gaze and ask so can tease him….btu adi turn emotional and say no not today pinky…pinky nodded and entered in room there he on sofa with sad face ..his eyes looking puffy …lack of sleep and thought take toll on him…
Pinky seat near him and called …Maan …..maan get shock he is so muh lost in thought he don’t know when they entered in room ….
Pinky chalo utho and change in some Indian attired ….wo humko bhar jaana hai …
Maan give confused look to her …kaha di he don’t have mood to go anywere …
Now pinky start to get angry still Maan still you don’t want to share your heart with us she feel hurt with his silence and all hide and seek …tumne kaha nahi but me and ma went to Geet house …the name Geet make him alert a some tension appear in his body ..his heart feel like any moment it will stop with tension ….
He mummer Geet house …
Pinky -yea yea and Geet and her parent get ready for this relation Maan she cup his face …..
Maan feellike he heard something wrong how on earth this problem get solve ike this so easily he is not trusting his own ear its too much for him….fear of crushing hope making him more tens..
He called di ..ye sab….
Pinky suchhai Maan she is ready with whole heart …she is diamond Maan and some tear make its way from Maan eyes next moment he hug pinky this is so much for him…last few days turn very hell for him …he feel like he get medicine for his winded heart …. Just than adi also come there and hug both of them….
After few moment pinky ….say softly don’t shut yourself like this again Maan tume tabhi bola hota to tumahri aise halat to nahi hoti na
Maan once look to them and mummer main apko pareshan karna nahi chata tha ..
Pinky -to kya hum log abhi pareshan nahi hai Maan …Maan mummer sorry on pinky question
…dekho ab aise face lake javoge apne would be wife and In law ke samne …
Maan eyeswinded in sock and he almost run to mirror side …and start to look himself he mummer what the hell …he cried kuch help karo ye kya face hua hai mera face ….and all what they call me…
Pinky I don’t know about uncle aunty but meri bhabhi to tumko Rakhshas bulati hai pinky say with so serious face ….maan stop for while and adi also and next moment that room fill with laughter of adi and pinky …..its treat for them to look Maan so shock face and reddish hu on his cheek …
Maan cried stop it yaar she is kid …..and again adi and pinky to look each other and next moment pinky adi burst in lugh ya ya and MSK fail in love with KID …..a adorable smile appear on his face he caressed his own hair and give foolish smile to adi and pinky …
Ok ok bas chalo be ready abhi hai jo hai …u have to face it bahot devdas banne ka bhukar chada tha na ….adi tease him …..after ten/ fifteen min they are standing in front of Handa family door…Maan feel so much butterfly flying in his stomach so many emotions appear ….like happiness new duty …attraction ,love so many emotions ..pinky arrange roka things ,sari and giftfor Geet …..and door get open by mr Handa . Maan somehow control himself and trio entered in room where theyfound Avanti and rano on sofa ….rano and Mohinder is so shock with Maan face …Geet saying true he looking like ill.
Maan eyes start serch on object which make up and down his life in one week only …..just than he heard the sound of chum chum and his gaze went to that sound side there she is standing in sari with all tamzam but he sawirritation on her face and got that she wear sari first time ..he bend to pinky side and say something ….pinky nodded and went to Geet side and both girl went to Geet room side…..
Maan and adi settle on sofa Maan and Geet parentgive confused look but after few min pinky entered with Geet change into dress its red dress which is her fev..and she looking so beautiful in it.
Rano feel emotional with Maan act now she is relax that Maan going to protect her bachpana…..
Geet cheek turn totally beetroot red which maching to her red chubby cheek …Maan so much want to…pull that once …all eyes just fallowing Maan Geet and Maan get that he at last say please yaha hum dono ke alva bhi log hai …and all smile on his talk .
Ok ok chalo I think hum log first ritual finish karte hai fhir baat karenge what say ..pinky say with smile ….rano make seat Geet Maan side and ritual get start to roka ..all give blessing to Maaneet ….both are nervous with some different reason …Maan is tense his restlessness and may be he done something wrong and make scare her ..and Geet is tense that she seat so closed to him. She first time so closed to any male other than her papa.
Ritual get finish and Maan ask permission to talk with Geet once …all nodded its needed beause she have to be comfatbale with Maan first ….
Geet once look to Maan than to her ma …ma nodded and Geet took Maan to her room….
There is Geet room as accepted all pink pink a study table a bed and cubord ….a teady bear rested on bed cornor typical girl room but neat and clean…he seat on bed with her permission …..
Maan once look to Geet like he want to look her for hour to make assure to his heart that its not dream its ture and real.
Geet still standing near door she looking nervous ….
Maan know he have to take lead and say wo what is your fev subject …she look to him once and say wo I like science …
Maan wow very good ….
Now u are in std ……
Geet mummer 9 th exam ho gaya hai ….
Maan wise ucan ans after seat also chair is there look near table he say with teasing tone …and that’s work she retotret back its my room I know where is chair and she seat on chair .
Maan chukle on her reaction …waise I want toask why u say yes to this relation..
I trust ma papa choice she say simply ….
Maan - yeitna simple nahi hai Geet …..
Geet - hum isko simple bana sakte hai na ek duje ko trust karke ek duje ko adjust karke …I know meri age kam hai but I will try it ….waise can I ask u something
Maan who shock with her maturity nodded ….
Why u likeme …I mean I know I am not slim and all apko to bahot achi a chi girls …she look to him..inncoently …..
Who say u are fat u are perfect and likeness ya love aye aspect nahi hota ..kuch anjane se wave hoti hai jo jud jati hai wiase I like you cubbiness its perfect specially your cubby cheek ..like tomato…Maan say softly…
Geet feel some gudgudi in her tummy with Maan talk she stand and she stand near table ….she don’t how to react to him…
Maan ask softy can I come to near u ….womuje kal sayyad wapas jana hoga mummy ko chuti nahi hai and muje joing ka documatation finish karna hai so…wo I want to hold your plam Geet …
Geet get shock he going back again that’s also tomorrow ….till now she get that he is good person and he will not harm her when pinky say that Maan suggest to c hange of her dress she like him very that moment itself
Maan slowly went to her side and took her hand in his hand softly caressed that ….tum bahot achi ho Geet apni age se bhi mature cheej ko difficult nahi karke unko simpe bana deti ho…. As u say will work on this relation but u have to promise me …
Geet look to him once and ask ji…u are not going to adjust with your childness I like u with your that aspect …tumko jab bhi koi bhi problem hogi u will talk with me directly …ek duje baat karenge tabhi ek duje ko samje paayege and last thing mera closeness tuko uncomfatbel kare to u talk with me directly ok …
Geet nooded as ans ….
Maan can I hug u Geet he ask with so much hope she once look to him and nodded next moment Maan put her one hand on his shoulder and other on his back and slowly pull her ike delicate doll ..he hug her softy both soul fee like this hug is so perfect that hug make them so perfect like two part of puzzale ...
Thay stand for while like that only and next Maan slowy make her seat on table she look him with big big eyes …..maan smile on her reaction …
Maan look toher face and now she can also look him very closely now she get why he make her seat on table …both looking each other …with love trust …
I need to go now apke parent se bhi baat karni ..hai ..and next moment Geet face fail down in sadness don’t know but she don’t like his going …main kerla join karne pehle tumko milne aa jaunga Geet he say soflty ….
Some tear start to Geet eyes ..she fee miserable ..maan cannot not stnd to her sad face and mummer aise bye nahi karte Geet ….
Geet mummer I know I know bye karte waqt goodbye kis* dena hota hai ..i saw it in movie …
Poor Maan who till controlling his all other thought and all ..get bold with her talk …
Maan what u say …
Poor Geet …nahi wo main movie main dekha tha ….but Maan come near Geetand cup her face with his palm and slowly put his M shape lips on herlips…for few second only ….
Poor girl she feel cracker bust in her body ……and before eshe say anything Maan went outside …putting her on fire with lots thought …..
Part 3
Perfect Update
I loved and admire the maturity in Geet
the truthfulness and respect she holds for her parents
and how easily she answered to all
that if her parents have chosen a guy then she will accept
as she trust her parents
she also says that trust is needed in a relationship and there is no need
to seek someone else out
but she was so cute saying that she will still eat ice cream and no one should tell
her about her weight
Maan's mother asking Geet to always speak to her and I like that
Part 4
Beautiful and so Fantastic Update
Maan was still so tensed and when Pinky tells him that Geet and her parents
agree to an alliance
making Maan unbelievably happy and he came alive now
the most beautiful moment was with Maan and Geet in Geet's room
when they began to speak and Maan witness her maturity he was indeed
very impressed with Geet
oh and she is in 9th grade too doing Science
waiting for Maan to come and see Geet before he joins his Force
thanks for the pm
Part 3
terrific update.... nicely written
Maan's mom meets Geet
likes Geet's concern for Maan
Maan's mom indirectly asks Geet about marriage
she is awed with Geet's response
she is indeed mature
she does trust her parents
her confusion is understandable
seems like she saw Maan's face when she closed her eyes
of cos no one she lecture her on her weight
Part 4
Wonderful update.... nicely written
of cos Adi is worried about Maan
they cannot see Maan like this
they are amazing friends
Adi is tensed seeing Pinky
well kiss relieves his stress
they are ecstatic
sad seeing Maan like that
glad that she put him out of his misery
can understand Maan's reaction
Pinky's concern for Maan is justifiable
great that she teases him
at least she told him that Geet called him a rakshas
Maan's thoughts well portrayed
liked how Maan admires Geet
as expected Maan knew she was iritated wearing a saree and told Pinky so that Geet can change into something comfortable
Rano is indeed emotional seeing this
not surprised that Geet is nervous
the ritual is completed
nice that Maan and Geet spoke alone
he initiated the convo
her question was reasonable
loved his response and that he does not want her to change
adore the hug
she is upset that he has to leave
wow she asked for a goodbye kiss
Maan was stunned and she was affected by the kiss
update soon