Hey Priya.... It was so so so good man... I really like your words selection. Although I had not commented on each and every part seprately but ya each and every part is so amazingly beautiful. To be honest first I thought that I will gonna read few parts now and then few parts afterwards but girl your story made me stuck to it. I mean after every part I was just not able to stop myself from reading the next.👏👏👏👏... I was actually wondering that how come I missed such a beautiful piece of work. To be very honest I made account on this platform only after reading the mind-blowing episodes of SKR Ff- Hum saath saath hai by @Saumya96 and I just became fan of her writing skills... And then because of that story I came across this one and thank you so much for letting me know about it ...
So starting from the teaser god the teaser itself was capable of forcing the reader to read the next part automatically.. Really the words selection in teaser was so good and thrilling and then the first ... After reading the intro of Dr Agarwal I was imagining the face of her and then the entry of that mysterious person.. God I was really curious to know who was at the other end of that mysterious threatening phone call.. and then the beautiful yet somewhat difficult reunion of two old friends where one was completely delighted to meet with his old friend but other was hesitating a little bit.. well no one was at the fault because meeting old friends after such a long time than too when you are not in contact for so oong brings some kind of hesitation with it...
And then how beautifully the story continues from marking the entry of all the characters in its own unique way leading to marking a important phase of life and then that beautiful school reunion and how the long lost friends meet after such a long period of time and how everyone is changed...
Prithvi's walk down to his memory lane in agony and distress and how he was remembering his childhood and memories of the school was somewhat sad 😢😢... It is really difficult to overcome that phase of life which you have lived as if you are living your life to fullest ... And one thing that's important in any kind of relationship whether it's of friendship or any other is communication . As communication is the oxygen of any relationship without it the relationship dies😣😣.. and after reading these parts what I felt is there was a lack of perfect communication among the friends which leads to suffering of all of them...
That beautiful meeting of two unknown girls to becoming bff was just 💕💕💕. It reminds me of my meeting with one of my friend 😊😊... And then intro with Megha's mother was not different with what happens in real life.💕💕💖💖
So the real culprit behind the sufferings is Dharam🤔🤔...
Looking forward for the next part.... Update soon...
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