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Posted: 3 years ago

you have written si beautifully. virat’s pain was despicted very well. please continue soon.❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

When are you posting the new chapter?

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Wow... Virat pov just wow

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Thank u for this!! And the title also suits it coz both r blind eyed to each other's love..koi nai we trust u ...u'll make them understand😉😉...It seems interesting please continue soon💜

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved it how he open up to his Aai about his feelings for Sai...I always want him to confide in his mother even in serial...but cv’s are too busy making every one fighting and taunting...anyways very nicely written... thank you for update...please update the next part soon...can’t wait for it...👍🏻

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Beautifully written ❤️

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Part2

Hey there, Readers! I am back with the second chapter. This chapter mainly focuses on Sai and her reluctance in accepting Virat as her true husband and not just a deal one.

Sai looked at the moon, shining beautifully in the sky. It felt so peaceful. She closed her eyes as the breeze gently touched her face. She never thought she would be able to stand in this balcony ever again in he rlife. But thankfully, Virat Sir made it sure that that wouldn’t be the case. She smiled thinking of him. Just how adamant he was about leaving her in GC. He never gave hope. That’s what touched Sai the most. He bore every taunt, every harsh words and every cold glare she sent towards him silently, without a single complain. He could have just told her that she was just as guilty as he was. She knew she was. Even if she was the only one who knew the truth about Pulkit jiju, she had no right to do what she did. She didn’t trust him and that’s what hurt him the most. But he never even brought the topic. He just kept on apologizing. How could she not forgive someone like that? If he can forgive her for her mistakes, she can too. And she doesn’t feel as if she had much choice in the matter regardless. She knew she was a goner the moment she saw him waiting outside her house in the pouring rain. He already occupied her mind long since the moment she saw him standing up for her against his family the first time. Now he had her heart too.

She opened her eyes at that thought. No, Sai. Don’t make this mistake. Give Virat Sir all that you can, your mind, your trust, your respect. Just don’t make the mistake of giving him your heart. Don’t make his and your lives any harder.

 But try all she might,she cannot control her heart and nor her mind. She thought of all the times Virat was with her,all the times he supported her, all the times when he cleared the mess she created.He there was always there for her. She never realized just how much value he held in her life until she no longer had him.Those days in Gadchiroli were one of the worst days of her life. It was as if she lost her Aaba all over again.  It doesn’t matter how angry she was with him,she felt as if she was revived the moment she saw him outside her house. That was the first time she was thankful of the promise Virat sir made to her Aaba. At least that promise brought him back to her.

“Sai Vahini?”

She jolted out of her reverie and turned around to find Mohit standing there, looking at her with tears in his eyes. He rushed towards her and engulfed her in a tight hug. She closed her eyes as she hugged him back. It felt so good to be loved, she thought.

Mohit broke the hug and said, “Sai Vahini, kaha chali gyi thi aap. Ek baar mud kar bhi nhi dekha apne iss bhayi ko jaane se pehle. Virat dada ke ek baar kehne par iss ghar ko, hum sab ko chhodh kar jaane ke liye taiyaar ho gyi?”

Sai smiled at him and replied, “Mujhe maaf kr dijiye, dada. Main sabke taane sun sun ke itne tension mein aa gyi thi ki mujhe ye khayaal hi nhi aaya ki aisa kr ke maine aapko, aai ko, aur shivani bua ko kitna hurt kr diya.”She held her ears and said softly, “Sorry”.

Mohit smiled looking at her. How can anyone stay angry at this cute face? Then his smile vanished as he remembered that one person managed to accomplish that. And that too to such an extent that he completely forgot where his limits lie

“Sai,” He said, sternly, “Virat dada ne tumhare saath uss din jo kuch bhi kiya vo maafi ke hakdaar nhi hai. Lekin fir bhi main unki taraf se haath jod kar tumse maafi maangta hun.”

Sai immediately held his hands and exclaimed, “Dada! Ye aap kya kr rhe h?  Maana ki Virat sir se galti hui lekin vo Virat sir se hui iski maafi aap kyu maang rhe h. Aur maine kaunsa bahut samajhdaron vala kaam kiya tha. Virat sir ka reaction galat tha lekin understandable tha. Aur ab jo ho gya vo ho gya, uss baat ko bhul jaiye”

“Kaise bhul jau Sai? Unhone tumhe ghar se bahar nikaal diya tha.Ye jaante hue ki tumhara unke alawa aur koi nhi h, rehne ka koi aur thikana bhi nhi h. Inn sab cheezon ke bavjood unhone tumhe ghar se bahar nikaal diya. Iss baat ko kaisa bhul jau main?”

“Dada…” Sai closed her eyes with a sigh. “Ab jo ho gya use badla to nhi jaa skta na. Aur agar Virat sir ne mujhe ghar se bahar nikala, to mujhe pyaar se mana kar vaapas bhi to vhi laye na.”

She smiled mischievously, “Aur aise hi nhi maaf kr diya tha maine unhe. Bahut mehnat krvai. Aapko to garv hona chahiye apni behen par ki use koi bhi sirf behla phusla kar mana nhi skta.” She commented proudly.

Mohit smiled at that, and patted her cheeks.

“Garv to bahut hai mujhe Sai tumpar. Bas ek cheez mujhe shi nhi lagi.” He walked towards the railing and held it with his hands.

Sai stared at him, bemused.

“Kya?” she asked.

“Tumbe itni aasaani se dada ko maaf nhi krna chahiye tha.”

“Arey, abhi to bola aasaani se thodi na maaf kiya tha maine unhe.”She continued, turning serious, “ Aur vaise bhi dada maine kaha na Virat sir ka reaction galat tha lekin understandable tha.”

Mohit turned towards her furiously, “Nhi Sai! Nhi tha”

Virat came out of his room, just in time to hear Mohit speak,"Dada ne uss din tumhe sirf ghar se nhi nikala, tumhari disrespect ki. Unhe koi hak nhi tha ki vo tumhe iss tarah se beizzat kre. Kis liye kiya unhone ye sab? Tumhe sazaa dene ke liye? To uske liye tumhe data dete, tum par chilla lete, lekin aise ghar se bahar nikalne ki kya zaroorat thi? Vo sazaa nhi thi Sai, vo kroorta thi. Hum sabhi ghar walon ne galti ki h to kya hum sabko bahar nikal diya jaata tha? Pakhi didi ne to jhootha letter likh diya, to kya unhe ghar se bahar nikaal diya? Jab unhe nhi to tumhe kyu?”

Virat lowered his eyes in shame as he realized just how true Mohit’s words were. He hid behind the pillar. His heart thumping in his chest as he continued to listen.

Oblivious to his presence, Mohit continued, shaking his head,“Sai mujhe nhi lagta ki tumhe Virat dada ko maaf krna chahiye tha.”

“Kaise maaf nhi krti main unhe, dada?” Sai said, a bit timidly, shocked after Mohit’s outburst, “Unko apni galti ka ehsaas tha. Aur unse zindagi bhar to naraaz nhi reh skti na. Aakhir hain to mere pati hi.”

“Kya fark padta hai Sai, unke tumhare pati hone se?” Mohit said,a bit too surely for Sai's liking.

Both Sai and Virat turned their heads towards him, their eyes wide. One filled with panic and the other with shock.

“Kya matlab hai aapka dada?” Sai said, appalled.

“Matlab ye Sai, ki Virat dada ne kabhi bhi pati jaisa bartaav kiya hai tumhare saath? Bas zimmedari ban kar reh gyi tum unke liye. Aur kya fark padta hai Sai unke hone ya na hone se. Tum to fir bhi khushi khushi apni zindagi bita sakti ho. Doctor ban sakti ho. Ab Virat sir ki ehmiyat hi kya hai tumhare life mein?”

“Mohit dada!” Sai shouted. Both Mohit and Virat looked at her,shocked

Sai didn’t care at the moment. How can he think like that? How can anyone?

“Aapko aisa kaise lag skta hai ki Virat sir ki ehmiyat nhi h meri zindagi mein?” Sai asked. “Mere pati h vo.” Her voice broke slightly as she continued to speak.

“Haan maana ki humare beech pati patni jaisa rishta nhi h,lekin iska matlab ye nhi h ki unke hone ya na hone se mujhe fark nhi padega.  Unke siva hai hi kaun mera? Unke bina jeene ka main soch bhi nhi skti” Tears flowed from her eyes as she rigorously wiped them away.

“Sai…” Virat whispered softly, unable to believe his ears.

“Sai mujhe nhi pata tha ki Virat Sir tumhare liye itne important hai.” Mohit said, looking at her tear soaked face.

“Itne nhi bahut.” Sai looked at him. “Aap janna chahte the na ki kya farak padta hai unke mere pati hone se? To suniye. Bahut fark padta hai. Kyuki vo mere sirf pati nhi hai, usse kai zyada hai. Meri zindagi mein pehle sirf aaba hi the. Vahi meri duniya the. Lekin unke jaane ke baad Virat sir ne meri zimmedari uthayi. Unhone hi mera saath diya. Meri zindagi mein agar Aaba ke baad koi hai to vo sirf Virat Sir hai. Main soch bhi nhi skti ki agar vo mere saath nhi hote to mera kya hota. Jab aaba mare the tab main…main kahi ghum si gyi thi. Mujhe laga tha ki meri zindagi bas mere haathon se phisli jaa rhi thi. Lekin tab Virat Sir ne hi mujhe sambhaala tha. Aur aaj bhi Virat sir hi hai jo mujhe sambhalte hai. Virat Sir-“Her voice broke as she controlled her tears,” Virat Sir sirf mere pati nhi hai. Meri puri family hain.”

Virat felt tears prickle his eyes as he heard her speak the words he had been dying to hear. He had no idea that the girl who he thought paid no heed to his presence, actually felt so strongly about him.

Sai continued, “Haan main ye zaroor kehti rehti hu ki humari shaadi ek deal hai, lekin maine kabhi ye nhi socha ki unki meri zindagi mein importance nhi hai." She spoke slowly, as if talking to herself. "Vo mera support hai. Unke bina main kho si jaati hu. Unke saath rehti hu to aisa lagta hai ki iss duniya ki koi cheez mujhe hurt nhi kar skti. Aisa lagta hai ki jaise iss duniya ki saari mushkile aasaan ho gyi, saare dard chale gaye ho, jaise maano iss duniya mein sirf hum hi ho, aur hume chot pahuchane vali aur koi nhi. Vo sirf mere pati nhi hai, dada.” She stared at a distance, her eyes unfocused as she conveyed all that she felt. “Vo mera vo hissa hai jiske bina main toot jaaungi. Aaba meri duniya the aur ab-“ She looked back at Mohit, her eyes steady, “Ab vo meri duniya ban gaye hai. Mera sab kuch hai, Virat Sir.”

Virat felt as if somebody breathed life into his body. He stared at Sai, unable to blink, still as a rock. Scared that even a single movement can disturb this precious moment. God! Please if this is a dream,never let it end!

“Aur tum kehti ho ki tum unse pyaar nhi krti?” Mohit asked,smiling at her. There was no shock, no anger, no disbelief in his eyes.Just plain happiness, as if something much awaited finally happened.

Sai looked a bit taken back. She wasn’t expecting him to say that. But as soon as she got back to her senses, she smiled a smile which Mohit felt was the most heartbreaking.

“I can’t.” Both Mohit and Virat frowned at this, unable to understand the meaning behind her words.

“Main unse pyaar krti hu ki nhi ye to kabhi sawaal hi nhi tha.Main unse pyaar kr hi nhi skti.”

“Lekin kyu Sai?” Mohit asked, “Pati hai vo tumhare.”

Sai continued,timidly, “Kyuki bas ek dil hi to bacha hai mere paas.” her shoulders sagging.  “Ab agar ye bhi toot gya, to main fir shayad apne aap ko na sambhaal pau.”

“Sai, tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki virat dada tumhara dil todenge.Vo bhi tumse bahut pyaar krte hai.”

Sai shook her head in a no. “Nhi krte. Kyuki unhone to apna dil kisi aur ko hi de rakha hai.”

Sai, looked at the sky, as if begging for some strength. “Mujhe to ye nhi samajh aata ki kaun si cheez zyada dard deti hai. Ek aisa rishta jo ho to magar samaaj ki nazro mein benaam ho. Ya fir vo jisko samaaj ne naam to hazaar diye ho magar jisme rishta hi na ho.” Virat closed his eyes, as he understood the meaning behind her words.

“Tum ko itna yakeen kaise hai ki Virat Sir jisse pyaar krte the unse abhi bhi pyaar krte hai?” Mohit asked her.

Sai slowly made eye contact with him. “Vaade ke karan” She replied. And Virat felt all the energy drain out of his body. Again that damn vaada.

“Virat sir ne vaada kiya tha, ki unki zindagi mein uss ladki ke alawa aur koi nhi aayega.”

Mohit stared at Sai, unbelievably. “Vaada hi to hai. Toda bhi jaa skta hai.”

She looked at him, eyes wide, looking like a scared little child, “Uska to mujhe aur bhi zyaada dar hai.”

Mohit frowned. “Kyu?”, he asked, bemused.

“Kyuki main bhi to sirf vaade ke hi karan unki zindagi se judi hun.” Virat felt his eyes widen at her response. How can she feel that her and Pakhi’s condition are alike in any way? 

"Agar kisi din unhone Aaba se kiya vaada tod diya to? To main kya karungi?" Mohit had never seen this girl so scared before. This Sai, who always acted as if she didn't need anyone, was in reality, so hungry for love. This has gone long enough, he thought. He didn't had in himself to hurt her anymore. 

“Aur agar Virat dada ye prove kr de ki tum unki life mein uss dusri ladki se kayi zyada important ho to?” Mohit asked, smiling gently at her.

Sai smiled. “Aur aisa vo kaise prove krenge?”

Mohit shrugged. “Pata nhi.” But mujhe pata hai, Virat thought, finally finding a way out of this mess. “Lekin mujhe itna zaroor pata hai” Mohit continued, gently holding her shoulders, “Ki, meri pyaari vahini, aakhir Gadchiroli se bhi to mana ke le hi aaye dada aapko.” Sai grinned as she hugged him.

Virat smiled and breathed a deep sigh of relief. Now that he was finally sure that Sai actually loved him, nothing was going to stop him from loving her back, not even that god damned vaada.

There you go! You have your Second chapter. I thought of uploading it after a few days but then thought, ab likh liya hai to daal bhi dete hai. It didn't come out as well as I hoped it would but still I  hope you liked it! Agar dhyaan se notice kiya ho to Mohit Sai ko beech mein Vahini se Sai kehne lagta hai, that was to show that when he got really serious, he starts to call her Sai.

Please do comment your thoughts on this one

-Love, Anu

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Posted: 3 years ago

This is very beautiful.  I wish the writers show the confrontation like this. They dont copy KD and show some realistic scenes like this.


Thank you for writing 

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I really really want a confrontation like this. This is really well written, feels true and the emotions came out so well.

Nice👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👌🏼👌🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago

It's amazing loved it plz continue dear.