Sairat TS- The Blind Eye (Last Chapter Updated -part 3 on page 5)

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Posted: 1 months ago

Hey, everyone! I am new to this forum, so, this is my first ever fanfiction. I wanted to write an OS regarding the feelings that Sai and Virat have for each other, reasons behind Sai’s reluctance and of course, how they end up together. So, this story will take place shortly after the separation track. I think that this is going to take three shots, but it might take more.

Virat lie down on his bed with a sigh. It has been an exhausting day at work. Though certainly not as exhausting as these last couple of days were. At least now he can finally breathe. Virat smiled as he thought just how much his wife affects him. Her every move, every word and every expression has a direct influence to his heart. Every time they fight, every time she is taunted by his family and every time she is in pain, he remains anxious all through the day until he is sure that she is fine. These last few days, without her, felt like eternity. It was as if someone was slowly, painfully and ruthlessly ripping his heart out. He never felt as helpless as he did when all he could do was rely on her kindness and hope for her forgiveness. Of course,she did forgive him. It was Sai he was talking about, though at that time he wasn’t sure she would. She might have, but he doesn’t think he can ever forgive himself. Even now, just thinking about it makes his blood boil. How can he? How dare he?! Was she wrong to help his Tai elope? Yes. He knows that she realizes it too. But throwing her out of his house, knowing that she had nowhere else to go, that was taking it way too far. He always thought that because she was younger than him, it was her who needed him the most. But now, he realizes, it was he who was the weak one between them. He needed her, like his lungs needed air, like his mind needed thoughts. But God help if she realizes it.  

He breathed deeply, inhaling her scent around him. Even this room feels like it belongs to her more than me, just like my heart. He wouldn’t have it any other way though.

Why can’t this girl ever understand just how deeply he loves her? Sometimes he thinks that she does it deliberately. After all, who can be so clueless regarding the feelings of someone with whom one lives? But then again, he thinks, almost laughing, she  can be.

But where was she? Shouldn’t she be back by now? All the household chores must be completed by now. His chain of thoughts was broken by a knock on the door. He looked to see his Aai standing there with a smile on her face.

“Arey, Aai. Waha kyu khadi ho, andar aao na. Basa.”

Aai came and sat beside him. He laid his head down on her lap and closed his eyes as his Aai started stroking his head. This feels like heaven, he thought.

“Vaha khadi dekh rhi thi”, Aai commented.

“Kya dekh rhi thi?”

“Yhi ki tu kisi ke yaad mein ghum tha.” She replied, coyly,”Kisi aise ki yaad mein, jo tere munh par sirf apne khayalon se hi muskaan le aaye.”

Virat could feel himself blushing. He remained quiet. But his Aai continued.

“Aakhir le hi aaya na tu usko mana ke vaapas.”

“Vo to laana hi tha, uske bina ye ghar itna soona jo lagtah. Lekin itna aasaan nhi tha. Aapki beti ko manane ke liye itne papad belne pade ki kya batau. Duniya bhar ke nakhre dikhaye h usne.”

“Haan to nakhre to dikhayegi hi. Biwi h tumhari. Hak h uska nakhre dikhaane ka.”

Virat’s heart skip a beat listening to her being called his wife with such certainty. Get a hold of yourself Virat. Biwi ko biwi nhi bulayenge to aur kya bulayenge?

Aai continued,”Lekin mujhe pura yakeen tha vo maan jayegi.”

At this Virat frowned. “Kaise?” He asked, “Itna yakeen kaisetha aapko?”

Aai smiled looking at him. “Kyuki sirf tu hi nhi h jo iss ghar paggalon ki tarah pyaar kiya baitha h. Agar tu uske bina baichaan tha, to uska bhi tere bina man thodi na lag rha hoga vaha.”

Virat smiled, ruefully. His Aai can believe all she wants,but he knew that Sai didn’t love him as much he did.

“Vo mujhse pyaar nhi krti, Aai.”

“Aur tu?”

He looked at her and replied, “Bahut”. The certainty in his voice was easily noticeable. This was a man who was sure what, or who, his heart wanted.

He smiled, almost mischievously, “Jaisa aapne abhi kaha.Pagalon  ki tarah. “

His Aai clutched his hair, tightly and asked, in feigned anger, “ To godu, tujhe ye kyu lagta h ki vo nhi krti?” She gently patted his cheeks. “Vo bhi to tera kitna khayaal rakhti h. Jab tu Amravati gya than na, to vo bhi tere yaad mein udaas ghumti thi.”

Virat sat up, getting a bit irritated now. “Nhi aai, vo nhi krti.Vo sab to sirf Devi Tai aur Pulkit ke tension ke karan tha. Agar krti hoti to uske liye bhi main utna hi zaroori hota jitna vo mere liye h.”

“Aur kitni zaroori h vo tere liye?”

He smiled. This was a question he was expert in answering.

“Aap soch bhi nhi skti itni.” He remembered all his moments with her. “Vo meri saansein h aai. Uske bina kahi man hi nhi lagta. Aisa lagtah ki jaise kuch adhoora sa ho. Jaise maano zindagi adhoori ho.”

He turned towards Aai, and started speaking. “Aapko pata haai, uske saath rehta hu to aisa lagta h ki main main hu. Jaise maano baaki duniya exist hi na krti ho. Vo meri zimmedari h, lekin uske saath aisa lagta hki main iss duniya ki saari zimmerdariyon se mukt hu. Har expectations, her duties se free hu. Sirf Virat hu. Uska Pati.” He wiped the tears from his aai,and smiled, as he continued, “ Mujhe to aisa lagta h Aai, ki use shaadi krne ke baad, vo Sai Virat Chavan nhi, main hi Virat Sai Joshi ban gya.”

Aai smiled as she looked at his son. How proud she was today.How badly she wanted him to fall in love with Sai. To make everything work between them, and to leave past all those nonsense about vaada and zimmedari,and live life just as a navra baiko should, unlike hers, filled with love. All isn’t well now, but it will be. Because love is the one think which cherishes amid all chaos and disasters. And theirs will, oh surely! Theirs will.

There you go! The first chapter. I hope you guys like it. The next one is going to be about Sai. Please do comment what you thought about this story.

-Love, Anu

Posted: 1 months ago

Loved and so beautifully written 

Posted: 1 months ago

Awesome dear😍

Beautifully written😍

He has expressed all his feeling to his  Aai and Aai was emotional thats the most beautiful thingsmiley42

Waiting for next chapter🤗

Posted: 1 months ago

Originally posted by notaquitter


Loved and so beautifully written 

Thnx🥰

Posted: 1 months ago

Originally posted by Tasu06


Awesome dear😍

Beautifully written😍

He has expressed all his feeling to his  Aai and Aai was emotional thats the most beautiful thingsmiley42

Waiting for next chapter🤗

Thnx. I personally find mother son relationship really beautiful. And i wanted to show that in my story.

Posted: 1 months ago

Originally posted by ShipIsSailing


Hey, everyone! I am new to this forum, so, this is my first ever fanfiction. I wanted to write an OS regarding the feelings that Sai and Virat have for each other, reasons behind Sai’s reluctance and of course, how they end up together. So, this story will take place shortly after the separation track. I think that this is going to take three shots, but it might take more.

Virat lie down on his bed with a sigh. It has been an exhausting day at work. Though certainly not as exhausting as these last couple of days were. At least now he can finally breathe. Virat smiled as he thought just how much his wife affects him. Her every move, every word and every expression has a direct influence to his heart. Every time they fight, every time she is taunted by his family and every time she is in pain, he remains anxious all through the day until he is sure that she is fine. These last few days, without her, felt like eternity. It was as if someone was slowly, painfully and ruthlessly ripping his heart out. He never felt as helpless as he did when all he could do was rely on her kindness and hope for her forgiveness. Of course,she did forgive him. It was Sai he was talking about, though at that time he wasn’t sure she would. She might have, but he doesn’t think he can ever forgive himself. Even now, just thinking about it makes his blood boil. How can he? How dare he?! Was she wrong to help his Tai elope? Yes. He knows that she realizes it too. But throwing her out of his house, knowing that she had nowhere else to go, that was taking it way too far. He always thought that because she was younger than him, it was her who needed him the most. But now, he realizes, it was he who was the weak one between them. He needed her, like his lungs needed air, like his mind needed thoughts. But God help if she realizes it.  

He breathed deeply, inhaling her scent around him. Even this room feels like it belongs to her more than me, just like my heart. He wouldn’t have it any other way though.

Why can’t this girl ever understand just how deeply he loves her? Sometimes he thinks that she does it deliberately. After all, who can be so clueless regarding the feelings of someone with whom one lives? But then again, he thinks, almost laughing, she  can be.

But where was she? Shouldn’t she be back by now? All the household chores must be completed by now. His chain of thoughts was broken by a knock on the door. He looked to see his Aai standing there with a smile on her face.

“Arey, Aai. Waha kyu khadi ho, andar aao na. Basa.”

Aai came and sat beside him. He laid his head down on her lap and closed his eyes as his Aai started stroking his head. This feels like heaven, he thought.

“Vaha khadi dekh rhi thi”, Aai commented.

“Kya dekh rhi thi?”

“Yhi ki tu kisi ke yaad mein ghum tha.” She replied, coyly,”Kisi aise ki yaad mein, jo tere munh par sirf apne khayalon se hi muskaan le aaye.”

Virat could feel himself blushing. He remained quiet. But his Aai continued.

“Aakhir le hi aaya na tu usko mana ke vaapas.”

“Vo to laana hi tha, uske bina ye ghar itna soona jo lagtah. Lekin itna aasaan nhi tha. Aapki beti ko manane ke liye itne papad belne pade ki kya batau. Duniya bhar ke nakhre dikhaye h usne.”

“Haan to nakhre to dikhayegi hi. Biwi h tumhari. Hak h uska nakhre dikhaane ka.”

Virat’s heart skip a beat listening to her being called his wife with such certainty. Get a hold of yourself Virat. Biwi ko biwi nhi bulayenge to aur kya bulayenge?

Aai continued,”Lekin mujhe pura yakeen tha vo maan jayegi.”

At this Virat frowned. “Kaise?” He asked, “Itna yakeen kaisetha aapko?”

Aai smiled looking at him. “Kyuki sirf tu hi nhi h jo iss ghar paggalon ki tarah pyaar kiya baitha h. Agar tu uske bina baichaan tha, to uska bhi tere bina man thodi na lag rha hoga vaha.”

Virat smiled, ruefully. His Aai can believe all she wants,but he knew that Sai didn’t love him as much he did.

“Vo mujhse pyaar nhi krti, Aai.”

“Aur tu?”

He looked at her and replied, “Bahut”. The certainty in his voice was easily noticeable. This was a man who was sure what, or who, his heart wanted.

He smiled, almost mischievously, “Jaisa aapne abhi kaha.Pagalon  ki tarah. “

His Aai clutched his hair, tightly and asked, in feigned anger, “ To godu, tujhe ye kyu lagta h ki vo nhi krti?” She gently patted his cheeks. “Vo bhi to tera kitna khayaal rakhti h. Jab tu Amravati gya than na, to vo bhi tere yaad mein udaas ghumti thi.”

Virat sat up, getting a bit irritated now. “Nhi aai, vo nhi krti.Vo sab to sirf Devi Tai aur Pulkit ke tension ke karan tha. Agar krti hoti to uske liye bhi main utna hi zaroori hota jitna vo mere liye h.”

“Aur kitni zaroori h vo tere liye?”

He smiled. This was a question he was expert in answering.

“Aap soch bhi nhi skti itni.” He remembered all his moments with her. “Vo meri saansein h aai. Uske bina kahi man hi nhi lagta. Aisa lagtah ki jaise kuch adhoora sa ho. Jaise maano zindagi adhoori ho.”

He turned towards Aai, and started speaking. “Aapko pata haai, uske saath rehta hu to aisa lagta h ki main main hu. Jaise maano baaki duniya exist hi na krti ho. Vo meri zimmedari h, lekin uske saath aisa lagta hki main iss duniya ki saari zimmerdariyon se mukt hu. Har expectations, her duties se free hu. Sirf Virat hu. Uska Pati.” He wiped the tears from his aai,and smiled, as he continued, “ Mujhe to aisa lagta h Aai, ki use shaadi krne ke baad, vo Sai Virat Chavan nhi, main hi Virat Sai Joshi ban gya.”

Aai smiled as she looked at his son. How proud she was today.How badly she wanted him to fall in love with Sai. To make everything work between them, and to leave past all those nonsense about vaada and zimmedari,and live life just as a navra baiko should, unlike hers, filled with love. All isn’t well now, but it will be. Because love is the one think which cherishes amid all chaos and disasters. And theirs will, oh surely! Theirs will.

There you go! The first chapter. I hope you guys like it. The next one is going to be about Sai. Please do comment what you thought about this story.

-Love, Anu


totally in love with this hope u write sai kar version bhi 

Posted: 1 months ago

Wow......👏 excellent......very beautifully written..😍 

Loved the bonding between Mother and Son..... he so close to his mother....

I liked the way how Virat explicitly expressed his feelings regarding Sai to his aai.....smiley31

Very eagerly waiting for next one....Please give really soon...

Posted: 1 months ago

Wow this is really beautiful

Loved it very much

Waiting for next update


Ghum Hai Kisikey Pyaar Meiin 


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