Hello DarshNians!
My name is Dinaz and I'm back on India Forums after a very long time, since I started watching this show.
Written below is an OS on DarshNi.
I hope you'll find it apt and good, given the fact that my Hindi Fanfic writing style is a bit rusty as I haven't written for a series in a long long time!
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Title: An Evening in Paris.
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"Darsh ji! Yeh Kitna khoobsurat hai! Aisi jagah maine pehle kabhi nahi dekhi!"
She said bubbling with energy her sight reaching as far as this blissful land stretched.
"Janta hu, isliye tumhara yaha laya hu."
He could sense the curiosity and happiness in her voice which filled his heart with content and joy. He was with the love of his life in the city of love. He couldn't have been happier.
"5 meters to your right for Eiffel Tower."
His AI voiced.
"Apna haath do."
He stretched his hand out which she held.
With him is where she found herself safest even if she was hundreds of miles away from her country, in a city unknown to her.
She was safest at the place called home. He was her home.
"He turned towards his right and asked his AI to guide him while she towed behind him.
A couple minutes of walking later, they had reached their destination.
"Hey Kanhuda! Hum to yeh tower ke bilkul paas hai! Konsa tower kaha aapne?"
"Eiffel Tower."
He reiterated smiling at her forgetfulness as their fingers entwined.
"Haaa, Eiffel Tower. Kitna khoobsurat hai. Itni badi banavat maine aaj tak nahi dekhi!"
He smiled in the direction of her voice.
She held his hand but looked around to take in the wonderful surroundings.
Moments later, a little tug at her hand got her attention back to him. She looked around to find him on one knee holding a very priceless Cartier ring.
A look of surprise graced her face as her hand reached to cover her mouth before a gasp escaped her lips.
"Darsh ji, yeh.."
Her voice trailed off for the lack of words.
"Hamari shaadi toh ho gayi lekin mujhe tumhe propose karne ka kabhi mauka nahi mila. Toh, kya tum mujhe tumhara soulmate ban ne ka saubhagya dogi?"
He looked at her expectantly, although he knew her answer.
"Darsh ji, khush naseebi toh meri hai ki main aapki patni hu. Ab uth Jaiye, chaliye."
She was furiously blushing as she helped him up. She had felt his love before at multiple instances, but this was unexpected and felt very special.
"Ab pehnaiye."
She put her hand forward as he navigated through her fingers to slip the ring onto the right one.
A sudden weigh was felt on his chest when he realised that Nandini, his love, had hugged him, under the Eiffel tower located in his favorite city. He put his arms around her tightly trying to savour this moment between them.
There it is!
I'm looking forward to your valuable feedback!! π
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