Posted: 3 years ago

Janam Janam



"Cmon, cut this cake, sweetheart!" Even Vansh's sweet words didnt calm Riddhima's racing heart. What if Vansh is planning to kill her in the cruelest way possible? Worse, he already planned. Suddenly she felt a cold metallic  sharp object touch her palm. Jerking off, she realised it was a knife. 


"Kya soch rahi ho?" 


"K-K-kuch nahi" she hated how her voice sounded so weak


Vansh made her hold the knife. Cutting a slice, he brought it near her mouth. Trembling, she opened her mouth. Riddhima was going to plop the entire piece in, but Vansh stopped her and broke it in half


"A-a-a! Jhoota khane se pyaar barta hai." He smirked, and he ate the other half.


Chocolate cake was her favourite, but Riddhima wasn't in the state to enjoy it. She was so scared, that the smallest piece of cake got stuck in her throat and she started coughing. 


Vansh immediately made her drink water. For a nanosecond there was concern in his eyes,  but he masked it


Taking the remote from the table, he turned on the music and took her up on the edge of the stairs


Janam Janam Janam saath chalna yunhi

Qasam tumhe Qasam, aake milna yahi

Ek jaan hai bhale, do badan ho juda

Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna 

kabhi na kehna

Alvida..



Coming near Riddhima, he looked at her intensely as he walked around her. Vansh took her hand in his and he brought her closer.


Meri subha ho tumhi aur tumhi shaam ho

Tum dard ho, Tumhi aaram ho

Meri duaoon se aati hai bas yeh sadaa

Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna kabhi na kehna 

Alvida...



 Twirling, Vansh dipped her in such a position that, if Vansh lets go of his hold, Riddhima will fall down the stairs, and probably....die. What if..thats what his plan is...There is no one in the house..Nobody will know if Vansh kills her throws her body in some river.. Having all these wild thoughts, Riddhima suddenly saw a rifle being pointed at them. Precisely, at Vansh. 


A loud gunshot was heard and without thinking anything Riddhima pushed Vansh and took the bullet on her..


Vansh blinked his eyes. Just a minute ago they were dancing and now, she is in his arms,  blood oozing out of her chest. He still couldnt digest what just happened.


"Vansh...." It was a faint whisper, but audible enough for him to hear.


Vansh kept staring at her wounded form with disbelieving eyes, until she closed her eyes and passed out


"RIDDHIMAAAA!"


 Vansh's voice echoeed through the mansion


***********************


Vansh looked through the transparent glass of the ICU. There she was.. in ventilation, surrounded by machines and pipes.. The doctor already said, her condition is critical. If she doesn't wake up in the next 5 hours, they have to remove the ventilator


How can someone be so selfless? She hated him to the core.. But still, she took his danger upon herself. He tried to scare her to spit out the truth, but the exact opposite happened.. He is scared.. All of his life, he kept taking everyone's danger upon himself... he kept on protecting his family since his teenage years.. Today, for the first time..someone saved him.. Riddhima saved him


He looked down at his sleeves.. there were blood stains on it.. Riddhima's blood..


With trembling legs, he entered the room.. it was chilly.. probably because of the AC. He sat beside the bed.. The bullet was out, but she looked pale..he took her hand in his.. The same soft and warm hands that he danced, holding,, were now cold and dry. 


"That bullet, was meant for me! Its been 3 hours! for some goddamn reason, wakeup!" 


This time, Vansh hated how weak he sounded..


He couldn't hold back his tears anymore..he brought her hand near his lips. 


"please riddhima....wake up...I won't scare you anymore..I won't say anything when you will move around the mansion like a drone, searching for evidence against me... I won't shout on you even if you go to the backyard... please..open ypur eyes.." He cried against her hand. 




Not being able to control his emotions anymore, he finally confessed..



"I love you, Riddhima.......please, come back to me sweetheart

he felt Riddhima's fingers gently wrap around his hand as if she heard it.  He was above the cloud in joy, but it was short-lived.. 



In the heart rating monitor, the last wave of pulse was replaced by a straight line..

Posted: 3 years ago

That is so beautiful...and the ending line is bang on. πŸ‘ Tugs at the heart strings with the right impact.


Please write more...😊

Posted: 3 years ago

This was damn emotional..

Please continue if possible.

Posted: 3 years ago

😭😭😭 so emotional!!

Posted: 3 years ago

This is emotional😭

Please keep writing moreπŸ€—

Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome dear. But plz update next part soon.

Posted: 3 years ago

very beautiful & emotional 😭


please continue writing more stories ❀️


take care πŸ€—

Posted: 2 years ago

Sorry for late reply..πŸ˜’


Originally posted by Krazzy_Tintin11


Omg please continue soon.


Originally posted by Navdeep_08


Amazing 


Originally posted by Anika_PreRish


This was damn emotional..

Please continue if possible.



Thank you so much!!πŸ€—



Originally posted by amritat


That is so beautiful...and the ending line is bang on. smiley32 Tugs at the heart strings with the right impact.

Please write more...smiley1


Thanks alot!!β€οΈπŸ€—


Originally posted by Milalal27


very beautiful & emotional smiley19

please continue writing more stories smiley27

take care smiley31


Thank you!!πŸ€—

Will surely do, you tc too!❀️

Posted: 2 years ago

Your stories are amazing, keep writing πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ



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