HIS PRECIOUS POSSESSION - HIS WIFE | PART 14 to 24 UPDATED @ P.N.4 - Page 2

Posted: 3 years ago

Geet is saved. Finally Maan marries Geet.

Chapter 2 and 3. What happened to Geet. Keen to know the reason of Geet behavior is she sick. 

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 1 


A Warm and Lovely Start


Maan just adores his Jaan 

while she is so cute and just so innocent telling him about her

blouse 

well that is it the moment Maan sees her back his possessiveness

is back  but then its his Jaan that calms him down and he instantly

starts touching her back 

I loved the fact that her giggles is something that truly makes him happy


Edited by taahir004 - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

thank you for the pm


Part 2

nice update. greatly written

feeling for Geet

will this fear ever go away?

liked that Maan is there for her

admire his efforts

of cos he knows her well

she is awed seeing everything

at least he assures her

her question is reasonable

hate his mom! 

sad that she thinks Geet is pretending

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 3

Dynamic update. nicely written

can understand Maan's anger

glad that dadi assures him

but he has a good point

of cos the doc is dismayed with what happened

sad that Geet's condition has worsened

liked his advice to Maan

at least dadima feels ashamed with her family's actions

hate seeing Geet like that

only Geet wants his love

Maan's decision is reasonable

Maan's concern for dadima is justified

hope Geet will get better soon

wow Maan is taking Geet on HM

Maan admires his sleeping jaan

finally she awakens

oh the ringing temple bells affect Geet

update soon

Posted: 3 years ago

Chapters 2 & 3 


Fabulous  


Wow Maan takes Geet on their first Date 

but she was filled with fear 

and when she sees that its only them in the garden of the restaurant 

Geet has tears as she feels that Maan or her Saheb knows her so well while

she does not know anything about him 

but Maan convinces her that she too knows him in her heart 

Sumitra angry at the fact that Maan is carrying Geet in his arms 

and she makes the mistake to use the word servant 

which Maan stops her 

he gets angry that his family has not accepted Geet

and she in fear is getting more ill 

the doctor suggest that Maan takes Geet away to the Country side 

and he also tells Dadima not to stress as he will take Geet away

so that she can heal and get strong 

Maan stops the car where both he and Geet hears the Temple bells

and Geet in her sleep fears these bells as she perhaps recalls 

when her  so called family forced her to marry and Brij's cheap behavior towards 


waiting to see how Maan make Geet strong and well 

Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for updating


Part 4

sad update.... feeling for Geet

the temple bells make her recall what happened in the past

she is shocked, angry, emotional and in pain

she has suffered so much 

upset seeing a vulnerable Geet

Maan is worried

oh no she faints

of cos Maan is tensed

not surprised that Maan takes her to see a doc

well he blasts the doc 

gosh Geet can go into a coma

liked that Maan refuses to accept this

he knows his jaan will come back to him

he implores her to wake up for him

gosh he kisses her

at least there was some movement in her

Posted: 3 years ago

Read all the parts. Geet is sick and Annie and her mother are not letting her get alright. Now both trying to harm Geet thru words. Waiting what happens next.

Posted: 3 years ago

Geet started is getting vulnerable day by day... 

She easily got scared... 

Maan's family is not accepting her... 

BTW, where is Rajeev...? 

How will he react after seeing his Sleeping Beauty is married to his bro

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 4 


Worrisome Update


As Geet has been thinking about all day that what happened to her

and the fact that her so called mother and brother were actually nothing to her 

and that is the reason they kept torturing her 

while her Saheb though has always been there for her and stood like a firm pillar in her life 

at the hospital the doctor was angry at Maan but this time he did not let the doctor say 

anything towards him instead when the doctor said if Geet does not awake then she will slip into a coma

and Maan was in panic state as he certainly does not want his love his Jaan to slip into a coma




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