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Posted: 3 years ago

FF Authors  -  Scene Request


ATBA will not give us, so asking you all to insert such scenes in your FF

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Posted: 3 years ago

Rani-Birju - Dosti -  Veer Pati


Theme Birju comforts Rani, Veer tells off Birju

 Rani says  to Veer  "Dosti ke beech mein do not bring our marriage"

"In my friendship with Birju do not bring our marriage"


Please put in your fan fiction guys.   Need a scene like that


I just put my visualization but would like all of you do your best.


As Rani starts off on Veer and RaniSa  when Veer accuses her

She stands between Veer and RaniSa   (closer to RaniSa side)

As she turns and gives back at Veer

She sees behind Birju at the main door entrance

She is shocked seeing Birju,  and she is overwhelmed

She runs towards the door, Veer is shocked at her behaviour

unconsciously  Veer extends his arm, but Rani crosses over and goes towards the door

Seeing Birju she just dashes on him

Birju is shocked does not encircle her

Rani asks what happened are you still angry, we are still friends I need to be consoled 

Edited by Shimmer_sault - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Shimmer_sault


Rani-Birju - Dosti -  Veer Pati


Theme Birju comforts Rani, Veer tells off Birju

 Rani says  to Veer as  "Dosti ke beech mein do not bring our marriage"

"In my friendship with Birju do not bring our marriage"


Please put in your fan fiction guys.   Need a scene like that


I just put my visualization but would like all of you do your best.


As Rani starts off on Veer and RaniSa  when Veer accuses her

She stands between Veer and RaniSa   (closer to RaniSa side)

As she turns and gives back at Veer

She sees behind Birju at the main door entrance

She is shocked seeing Birju,  and she is overwhelmed

She runs towards the door, Veer is shocked at her behaviour

unconsciously  Veer extends his arm, but Rani crosses over and goes towards the door

Seeing Birju she just dashes on him

Birju is shocked does not encircle her

Rani asks what happened are you still angry, we still friends I need to be consoled 


This will be awesome to watch. 🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Shimmer_sault


Rani-Birju - Dosti -  Veer Pati


Theme Birju comforts Rani, Veer tells off Birju

 Rani says  to Veer as  "Dosti ke beech mein do not bring our marriage"

"In my friendship with Birju do not bring our marriage"


Please put in your fan fiction guys.   Need a scene like that


I just put my visualization but would like all of you do your best.


As Rani starts off on Veer and RaniSa  when Veer accuses her

She stands between Veer and RaniSa   (closer to RaniSa side)

As she turns and gives back at Veer

She sees behind Birju at the main door entrance

She is shocked seeing Birju,  and she is overwhelmed

She runs towards the door, Veer is shocked at her behaviour

unconsciously  Veer extends his arm, but Rani crosses over and goes towards the door

Seeing Birju she just dashes on him

Birju is shocked does not encircle her

Rani asks what happened are you still angry, we still friends I need to be consoled 

Someone pls turn this to FF

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Shimmer_sault

Rani-Birju - Dosti -  Veer Pati


Theme Birju comforts Rani, Veer tells off Birju

 Rani says  to Veer  "Dosti ke beech mein do not bring our marriage"

"In my friendship with Birju do not bring our marriage"


Please put in your fan fiction guys.   Need a scene like that


I just put my visualization but would like all of you do your best.


As Rani starts off on Veer and RaniSa  when Veer accuses her

She stands between Veer and RaniSa   (closer to RaniSa side)

As she turns and gives back at Veer

She sees behind Birju at the main door entrance

She is shocked seeing Birju,  and she is overwhelmed

She runs towards the door, Veer is shocked at her behaviour

unconsciously  Veer extends his arm, but Rani crosses over and goes towards the door

Seeing Birju she just dashes on him

Birju is shocked does not encircle her

Rani asks what happened are you still angry, we are still friends I need to be consoled 

A jealous veer basically! I am up to write up something😁

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Posted: 3 years ago

Request in FF

Short term memory loss or BLANK OUT  

-  with no memories between VeeRani

-  later bitter memories where he yells and rants and leaves her 


It should first start with no memories

Support from Ramadheer and Birju

Would love to see Birju who loves her selflessly, how he tries to help her remember Veer  -  it would be devastating for Birju too.  Nilesh will do wonders


Rani calling Doc saab  now doctor jee

When he comes near for anything, she needs to comment I do not recollect you coming so close, nor a peck on the cheek or kiss on the forehead

Do kiss and will see if I still remember you as my husband.  Did we have a complete relationship ?          

I want her to be her upright asking clear cut on their relationship


Later would like her to remember the bitter part   and really  yank at Veer.  I am sure when Rani is in her proper self she will never yell at Veer.  Why not take some chance here


Would love to see Veer  devastated that  regarding him her memory is  only what her Bauji said  nothing else of their first meet or last connect via dance


The cake eating by Birju and he walks backwards  and before he goes upstairs  his interaction with Birju  is  foreshadowing some BLANK OUT by  Rani

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Posted: 3 years ago

need a special FF writers  

- first time they separate for days and then unite under ONE ROOF


would request  Megha-Fahmaan to do a  off-screen BTS, if there is no special in the show for the first time separation and then unite


First time they have separated physically after their marriage  that too 2 days and more


If they separated within the day they met back. so end of day or withing 24 hours they were under ONE ROOF


So they need to show the meet (MILAN)  with actually Veer this time rushing towards her


They need to keep it special as it was their FIRST EVER physical SEPERATION and they unite under one roof after many days

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Shimmer_sault

Request in FF

Short term memory loss or BLANK OUT  

-  with no memories between VeeRani

-  later bitter memories where he yells and rants and leaves her 


It should first start with no memories

Support from Ramadheer and Birju

Would love to see Birju who loves her selflessly, how he tries to help her remember Veer  -  it would be devastating for Birju too.  Nilesh will do wonders


Rani calling Doc saab  now doctor jee

When he comes near for anything, she needs to comment I do not recollect you coming so close, nor a peck on the cheek or kiss on the forehead

Do kiss and will see if I still remember you as my husband.  Did we have a complete relationship ?          

I want her to be her upright asking clear cut on their relationship


Later would like her to remember the bitter part   and really  yank at Veer.  I am sure when Rani is in her proper self she will never yell at Veer.  Why not take some chance here


Would love to see Veer  devastated that  regarding him her memory is  only what her Bauji said  nothing else of their first meet or last connect via dance


The cake eating by Birju and he walks backwards  and before he goes upstairs  his interaction with Birju  is  foreshadowing some BLANK OUT by  Rani


I want to see this. Someone write this please. I would like it if ramu is still in jail and the first memory that comes back about veer is that he did the accident. 😆

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Posted: 2 years ago

FF request


Payal with Veer

Bangles with Veer

Bauji's watch with Veer  (the most important one)


A Date  "out for Repair" of the above 


hope they complete it in the serial if not,  FF demand :)


Vikram in Catch 33 with  VeeRani hide-seek dating


Will he feel bad for  VeeRani, for Kiara or for himself




https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5199793

Edited by Shimmer_sault - 2 years ago