Originally posted by: Ashley_mBeautiful take on the current track. Padhke maza aa gaya.
Ash🤗
Thanks! Dear. Happy that you enjoyed reading it..
All the stress of what will happen made me come up with one of my own😆
Originally posted by: Ashley_mBeautiful take on the current track. Padhke maza aa gaya.
Ash🤗
Thanks! Dear. Happy that you enjoyed reading it..
All the stress of what will happen made me come up with one of my own😆
Originally posted by: Doc.loveAbsolutely beautiful!!! ❤️❤️ I loved it so much. You described so amazingly all Bondu's feelings, her innocent jealousy of which she herself is not aware!
🤗👍🏼 Extremely well written buddy!
Thank you!! Ayesha... 🤗
Glad you liked it..
Originally posted by: Mayurrana1299gAwesome Buddy👍🏼
This is beautiful work❤️
Love the way you poyraid Bondita's barrel of thoughts❤️
Want to say more but will talking in next part
Till then
RES😅😅
Thanks, Mayu🤗
I Will be waiting to read your 'more'😆
Originally posted by: Sakshi_04Wow amazing 🤩 loved it!!!
Seriously I'm new to this forum aur yaha kitne talented writer hai👏🥳
Thankyou ❣️
Thank you!! And welcome to the forum🤗
I don't know about talent but I do try😃
Originally posted by: Malika1993.06My Dear Partner 🤗
This is so beautiful and you have written everything si perfectly 👍🏼 I just loved it❤️👏
You have written Bondita's inner feeling so beautifully that I have imagined it in front of my eyes while reading and I loved Anirudh's guilt for not spending much time with Bondita is❤️
I really want to see same to same scenes in the show as well lots of love my dear 🤗
I will be waiting for you to continue it very soon ❤️ keep it up dear 👍🏼 It's really amazing work 👏
My lovely Partner🤗
Thank you!! I am glad you liked it.❤️
Hope the rest of the story makes you feel the same...
Originally posted by: CherryroseSo beautifully written. Pl update soon👍🏼
Thank you!! I will try to complete it as soon as I can❤️
This is just awesome...❤️
The way you have shown the inner turmoil of Bondita is really heart touching. Rally have no words to say. Eagerly waiting for next part👏🤗
Beautiful dear!
I loved how you captured the first crush and jealousy wala feeling! It was so so good.
Your Bon should be careful. Volcano ki tarha phutegi uske Pati Babu ke saamne.
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