This is my first Short Story in this forum. So, if you like what you are reading please leave a comment and if you don’t like what you are reading, please leave a comment without throwing any chappals.
This story is my take on the current track. I wrote in a rush. Please be generous about any typos or mistakes you find. Thank you!🙏
Same events unfolding in Anirudh's Life
PS: Hi! I came across this writing format called hyper-link a while back and always wanted to try that. So, please bear with me as I make an attempt. From the next chapter, you will see the same events/days unfold in Anirudh's life(i.e. Story narrative from his side). And you will see both their narratives coming together towards the end.
Edited by Hope - 2 days ago
First of all thanks for finally posting this wonderful story !! How come you thought of skipping it?🙄
Anyways I am glad you posted it
It’s a beautiful piece of work yaar. From Bon’s childish possessiveness to her want to do something which could make her patibabu feels proud of her!! Your description of Bon’s emotions is very apt you described Bon very beautifully.. it’s a tendency for kids to attach someone very quickly and here too Bon did that .. for attached with krantikari didi .. but later the praises she heard from her patibabu for didi didn’t go well with her. Poor soul.. what must have she gone through thinking her patibabu can’t be proud of her!! Your description showed every emotions Bon must have felt !!
Ani unintentionally hurt Bon’s feelings .. he didn’t know but he did and the funny thing is he didn’t know he hurt Bon he asked Bon to set her life goal .. not to follow others .. that was a best advice he gave Bon!!
Bon baby is smart and lovable.. she couldn’t see other girl getting tortured like she did ! How smartly she made the girl understand about education!! You have put a base of Bon’s future women empowerment activities here minnu.. you showed this Bon is not only smart but intelligent too .. she smartly started teaching that girl under pretense of taking cooking classes from her that’s a good excuse you used here minnu
Bon’s feelings of not liking krantikari didi or patibabu staying late outside or spending more time with this didi- everything shows her teenage possessiveness for her patibabu .. and made her determined to do something !! And when ani heard her sharing her future plans and for shock of his life that her little wifey not only thought about being a social worker who will work for women empowerment but she has already started acting on it by teaching that girl!! Ani was proud and did was shocked and impressed .. and finally Bon breathe in relief that her patibabu is proud of her and all her worries went out of the window !! Such a beautiful soul you have described here minnu
Love this story..
is there any chance of getting a next part or it is only two shots ?
Waiting to read more stories from you minnuEdited by nims23 - 1 months ago
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